[Report This]Date: September 27 2021 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try
I'm late to the party, but just wanted to say I like where this story was going and hope you continue it some day. I read some of your other MAJOR/minor stories too and will share some thoughts below:
It seems you already had an old MAJOR woman/minor young man couple in your prequel story with Summer Ray and Randalf. Wonder if they would make a cameo appearence in this like Mabel did (who was also in your older stories), since they are probably a few steps ahead of where Hilda and Elliot appear to be heading by now. Summer at least, seems like someone Hilda would know from her business dealings.
Mille not being into minors is pretty unique, since the other stories made it seem like minors were coveted by MAJORS as romantic partners, or at the very least, sex objects, based on how they acted around Izzy for instance. On the other hand, it is ood from that sense that Elliot remained a virgin (up to a point) since he's attending a college full of young, stunning looking, hormone addled MAJORS. It must be like being at the Olympic Village.
I wonder what Munalune is planning to do with Elliot. She's already spoiled and well off through family association, and appears to have MAJORS at her beck and call, so it doesn't seem like she has much to gain from attempting to blackmail him.
The Hilda/Elliot relationship stuff is great. I got the impression of Hilda being this composed, collected, in control, matracich and busineeswoman, so it pretty funny to read about her tripping over herself to be with someone like Elliot. The sex must have been that good. Aside from the very sudden and wlid way Eliot had his first sexual experience, Elloit still seems reluctant to fully embrace her advances becuase his brain is prob still trying to process that this is actually happening. In the span of a few days, he went from being an awkward virgin that people paid no mind, to having a towering, wealthy, superhuman MAJOR gilf sex goddess eagerly chasing after him. He probably thought she would just move on to the next conquest and write off the encounter, not expecting her to go out of her way to court him.
Anyway sorry if that was long, if you are still reading this. It's an interesting start so far.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2021 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try
She fucking pulled a kabedon on Elliot and the fact that it didn’t have its desired effect is fucking hilarious. Everything about that encounter was just hilarious, from Hilda fumbling over her own feet in trying to woo a minor to her not expecting Riley to follow up with a punch, you know what I just love seeing MAJORS getting taken down a peg or three and doubly so if it’s a minor doing it.
I don’t know how but I Kinda feel a bit bad for Minnesota, she still a bitch tho
Was hoping for a bit more dialog between Elliot and Hilda before they fucked again but I guess things move fast with MAJORS.
I'm liking this going from the perspective of one character to another, it most definitely shed some light on how they tick.
Overall this was a great fucking chapter, good fucking job
Date: March 12 2021 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try
You're welcome, thanks for writing
[Report This]Date: March 12 2021 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 Second Try
Truly enjoying the evolution of these characters. Elliot's timidness and Hilda's regret, all at odds with their base instincts. Thanks for taking the time to share this stellar work with all of us - for free! 'Til next time.