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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2021 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Nice to see you writing again NotSirk. Great to see a Minor knowing she can have power over Majors which is probably a secret held my the oldest of Majors. Thinking things wont go to well for Hilda since she had her way with a Minor but she doesnt seem like a bad person so hoping things get resolved even more intimate between her and Elliot.

Elliot needs to keep Ridley at arms lenght since shes not a good friend from what we have seen maybe have her realize Elliots needs and not be selfish.

Hope to see more soon, keep up the great work.

 



Author's Response:

Hrrmmm. I wonder what you think of the most recent chapter now? Hrmm. 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Sirk Please,

I beg you to write more, it's an incredible pleasure to read your work as always. From your lovely story Tales, to your Major/minor writings, and even your especially brutal but delightful futa work with Rembrandt. I really enjoy your stories, they always have such wonderful characters and great dynamics between them. The interactions feel geniune, the world building feels fleshed out, and many times I feel myself swooning at the romantic intrigue and dynamics you bring to your characters.

I'm estatic to read this chapter, it was both an intro and a conclusion I didn't see coming. I'll reread your works for years to come because of how gooey they make me feel.



Author's Response:

No need to beg. I'm not that big a deal or that competent a writer to be worthy of begging! I'm writing again. I hope you enjoy this story as much as you appear to have enjoyed my others! 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Morning Afterglow

Great to see you back and writing again. This is a fantastic story you've cooked up. Eager to see more of Hilda, Elliot, and Riley.



Author's Response:

Glad to see you back and commenting again? Uhhh...Thanks for real! Well this story is about Elliot and Hilda and to a lesser extent Riley so I too hope to see more of them! 

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