Reviews For Property of Lily
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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2021 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 5: Sucked, fucked, and squeezed part 2

Enjoyed this chapter. I liked her talking to her mom on the phone while abusing he brother.  Looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review. We're trying to stick to weekly updates and we're both fans of the casual domination aspect. -Jsm109

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2021 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: Sucked, fucked, and squeezed part 2

Woah! This feels like a total nightmare but I'm loving it. I really didn't expect that second half though. That was so perfect. And John finally came! He's really broken now, isn't he?

 

Anyway thank you for this chapter. Would love to read more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. There's a lot more to come, pun intended haha. Including some foot stuff, as well as a whole bunch of other things. We also are cooking up some larger plot-focused arcs with an ending in mind. That won't be for awhile though as there's a lot more to explore. 

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