[Report This]Date: January 25 2021 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Training
This is so...
Spiritual! Wow. You had a wonderful idea and you've made it real, I love it. This makes me feel like I want to reconnect to the wholeseness of the universe
I actually thought she would end up creating life on her body and become a female version of the Flat Earth, a Flat Reality, (I'm not saying she's flat, though, I don't want to offend the sole Goddess) but I get she finds her pleasure in being herself. And that's completely fine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words!
For the ending, I wanted something a bit ironic. A lot of talk about meditation mentions the self being an illusion and all that, so I figured Yun kind of absorbing the universe was a fun twist. Not a twist in that it might have been hard to see coming: more so trying to twist the themes of meditation a bit.
Anyways happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!