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Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 9:51 PM Title: Black Silver II

"The 60-meter tall woman slid her boot[...]" So the duo grew, even if it were merely six meters, since their city-smashing sex in (or rather upon?) Farcay?

Annalisa watched the impact and the castle fall. "You know we technically have to return the princess alive." I thought Jezebel is supposed to be the (occassional) voice of reason in their relationship?

Eating the Princess would've been more impactful if they couldn't ressurect her, but then Jez would probably have merely chewed her near death's door and healed her from that point of total agony.

"And we will return you to the King. Well, at least a copy of you. Its a simple enough task to wipe some peasant, change her appearance and graft a copy of your memories onto her. A copy will be back, safe and sound. Meanwhile you, get to service us for the rest of your natural life." - Wow that's soul-crushing, especially for someone as arrogant and convinced of her own irreplacebility as Princess Astrava. And it just got better until the end.

Given the Princess' rotten personality the replacement will probably rule Reston better than the original would've eventually. The chances to find somebody with just as little empathy seem slim. And neither Anna nor Jez talked about copying her personality into the random peasant girl.

 

I liked the first chapter but I liked this one more for two reasons:

These are:

1. Showing sheer dominance (Arsekaslyx |as I read his name I was certain he would get introduced to some giant's arse btw| and his troops) and mental torment (Astrava) > complete disregard for the others caught up in their imtimacy.

2. I felt a little "cheated" that they didn't leave for their mission of bandit removal, even if the fellowing porn was absolutely worth staying in the city.



Author's Response:

Anna and Jez tend to be pretty delightfully lewd to write whenever we do it. As a personal note, not enough stories do the whole giants fighting other giant creatures and put them in their place. So its always fun to do.

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