[Report This]Date: October 13 2021 1:57 AM Title: Changes
This is a great story overall. The characters are memorable and play off of one another really well. Although, Natalie definitely steals the show for the most part. Amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much 😊 and I agree, Natalie is such a fun character to write for!
[Report This]Date: October 12 2021 10:34 PM Title: Changes
I don’t know how this story passed under my radar. It’s the type I love – character driven, with great feet scenes - and I just wasn’t aware!
Reading the reviews, I think I am a minority When I say I hope Natalie Beaumont SHRINKS AND DIE!!! Ok. Sorry, lost control there, but I am back. Yes, you wrote a very despisable villainess.
But I am most stuned with Aubreigh character and it’s changes! First clearly enjoying the power trip and now, grieving and feeling angry because of the guilty she now bears. She has broken, like Natalie (that bitch!) noticed.
Since the beggining Aubreigh is clearly insecure about how others perceive her and right now she is more emotionally dependant of her family ties than ever, this idea that her family and friends are perfectly fine and have to stay within her grasp is proving to be her undoing.
It costed her friends life, but that obviously wasn’t enough. which is why I believe Aubreigh will only wake up, will only come back to being something like the sister Thomas once knew... when Thomas dies... and by her hand. Yes, I am saying that, if things don’t change course, Aubreigh will destroy exactly what she so hardly tried to protect... her fragile ego.
I might be way off, but that is the feeling I am getting.
Thank you for sharing this story, I already favorited it. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Author's Response:
Hey man, thanks! I did take the summer off, so the story has been buried for a while.
And yes, haha, I'm afraid you're in the minority for sure! Natalie Beaumont is a guilty pleasure of mine. She's great fun to write for, especially if you like cruel giants, which I do. I have the next few chapters mapped out... but I'm unsure of how it will end for sure... but don't expect Natalie to shrink and die, lol. (I did have an idea for that type of ending, but I tossed it out pretty quickly.) I admit, the writer side of me wants to see a proper ending complete with justice... but the fetishbside of me says "nah, she has to win".
Aubreigh's character has also been very fun and satisfying to write for. Although see will never be on the same level of apathetic cruelty like her mom, she will do some pretty unforgivable things.
As for who else dies, and by whose hands (or feet, lol), well, that's anybody's guess! Thanks for reading and thanks for the thoughtful comment. I hope you enjoy what's coming up!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2021 12:19 PM Title: Changes
So excited you continued! I can't wait to see what Aubreigh does with them, and I really hope they all make it to the shrunken city only to have Natalie and Aubreigh break in and play with the whole city as real giantesses towering over buildings and playing car and mouse looking for their tiny family!
Author's Response:
That's awesome! I'm glad you like it. And yes, that has remained in the outline. Is coming up in a couple chapters or so.
Date: October 11 2021 4:26 AM Title: Changes
I like this direction! Natalie HAS to come out on top at the end of this story!
Author's Response:
I like this direction too, so I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it. Natalie's character is definitely a guilty pleasure of mine.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2021 10:38 PM Title: Changes
Brilliant!!
Simply brilliant.
I am loving this darker turn, it feels like a natural progression for Natalie and finally Aubreigh has been swayed to Natalie's side, mother and daughter are now on the same page (though Aubreigh has a long way to go)
The content in this chapter was again top notch, love Natalie dealing with her husband (that finger domination XD And how she got him to shut up with such a casual display of physicality)
And Aubreigh using her feet (and the spatula) on Nate like that.
The Aubreigh and Natalie conversation over breakfast was great too, it was funny, serious, but also a bit heartfelt having them re-establish their familial bond and Aubreigh showing solidarity with her mother.
(Also Aubreigh really getting ticked off by her siblings and the others, great stuff :D)
Cannot wait for more, especially now that things are finally taking shape and the law is being laid down in the Beumont household.
Keep up the great work. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback. Aubreigh does have a ways to go for sure but she's already in a great position to deal out some serious pain and misery on the tinies. I just love it darker too, I was afraid to take the story any darker... but I'm going with my gut and I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2021 9:13 PM Title: Changes
Hey, I liked it! Nice return to form. I loved Natalie tormenting her husband with her finger and Aubrey teasing the tiny with the spatula, reminds me of an earlier chapter where Natalie did that with her hand lol
I take it you're not going with Aubrey turning good route?
Author's Response:
Thanks. And no... it was somethng I considered. The writer part of me wants to see the bad guys get whats coming and for good to win... the fetish side of me likes the depressing endings where no justice is served. So we'll see. I've still got some scenarios I want to explore with this family. Haha.