[Report This]Date: January 16 2023 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story!. Will you continue it?
Date: May 12 2021 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think it would be good if Matt gradually and eventually started liking her feet, to lamost the point of obession. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
There will definitely be a theme in later stories of shrunken characters having their desires warped. Thanks for reading
Date: March 18 2021 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
That he speaks and she hears different words is one of my favorite ideas EVER.
That being said, the story looked awesome even before you revealed that detail :D
Author's Response:
It gives this one a little bit of a spin. There's definitely intended to be a heavy theme of frustration for the protagonist and reader there
[Report This]Date: March 17 2021 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
One of the sweetest teenage overlords you've ever written.
Author's Response:
Thanks much
Date: March 16 2021 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm curious if he's been shrunk in his world or is trapped in another one. It is pretty strange that even at three inches, Sarah can'tunderstand him when he's shouting. I wonder if someone else that discovers him or Sarah reveals him to will have the same difficulty understanding him. Heck if he gets a chance with a loose pen or pencil could he maybe write a message? Sarah said she wants him to be happy, but all she's done is playfully torment him. Would him having a full breakdown; either sobbing uncontrollably or becoming still and unresponsive, convince Sarah or a friend that something's wrong and maybe he isn't happy or alright in his situation?
Author's Response:
This story or the sequels don't really answer what's real or not, but it's probably more likely another version of his world. It's actually not that Sarah can't understand what he's saying, but that she's literally hearing different words come out of him, again for reasons that don't really get answers. In future parts, there are other characters who might potentially "understand" differently, but mostly, the logic of this world is mean and designed to prevent escape.
Date: February 13 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow
Sarah is amazing with her footplay dominance of her little pet. Then again, I should expect the quality of footplay to be amazing when the story is written by you! ;)
I am still very curious about Nadia. I must say, as much as I love the idea of a tiny's sexuality being denied as they are reduced into a foot toy, my heart does break a little simultaneously. Part of me really hopes that Nadia finds some sort of closure on where her boyfriend went... (Plus, if she knows where he went and how he's living, then that would be so humiliating and frustrating in the BEST way... for both of them ;P )
I cannot wait to see how this story plays out!
It's just one of many classic, amazingly erotic yet genuinely well-written(in terms of both physical action and psychological character development) smut pieces from the best of the best! ^^
Date: February 13 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely love Sarah already! I wish she was my owner!! ;)
The way she is so sweet and bubbly, babying him with cuddles and kisses just makes me melt! ^^
The language barrier concept is fascinating. It allows her to cruelly strip this man of his life and make him her tiny foot toy while remaining innocent as a person.
I also love her conclusion about him wanting to be near her feet. It's so cute... and hot.
Can't wait for more!
Date: January 14 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I love how Sarah decided without question to make him her pet. She's got a great cheerful and bubbly personality too :)
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see a new story from you, and one such as this as well! I love these kinds of relationships, looking forward to where you go next and who else you introduce.
Author's Response:
Thanks. This first story is very focused on these two, but other characters are included in the sequels.
Date: December 15 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh man! A new, fresh story from Jacksmith??? Count me in!
You had me at "Major themes to expect in this and the rest of the series are feet, in-shoe, mouthplay, handplay, and lots of 'Mommy' talk." That's literally a checklist of everything I love!
Sarah already seems so perfect! And the fact that you mention Matt's girlfriend by name, Nadia, suggests that she may be mentioned in later chapters, if not make an appearance!
I honestly just really love when tinies have romantic/sexual lives that they become totally cut off from once they shrink and become another person's plaything and/or pet!
Like, I'm hoping that Matt mentions he has a girlfriend, and Sarah says something to the effect of "Well she must not be that good of a girlfriend if she LOST you like that! No, you should forget about her. You're MUCH safer with me!" Or maybe Nadia even makes an appearance, but when she insists on having her boyfriend back, Sarah simply insists that "he's MY pet now!"
But now I'm speculating, lol
I can't WAIT to read more of this! I may just have to cave in and subscribe to you on Patreon, my man! One question before I do, though: does anyt mention or appearance involving Nadia occur later?
No matter what the answer to that question is, you're still one of the best, and this story (and series) will be GREAT because of it!
Keep up the always AMAZING work, Jacksmith!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Nadia does make appearances/have a part in the sequels to this story. The scene you're theorizing wouldn't quite work out with these characters, though, as a mysterious language barrier with Sarah and her pets is another recurring element. But certainly the loss of past romantic/sexual lives is a big part of this series.