Reviewer: lorange Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2020 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great addition to your collection of stories. You're one of the few author's on this site that just nail the unaware/hopeless aspect perfectly. Or maybe my tastes are just too stupidly specific. Either way, your stuff is really good, and this is no exception. Looking forward to the next Christmas short.

One thing to consider is these shorts may be a convenient excuse to write a short story with one of your pre-existing characters, without having to forward the rest of the story said character is in. The Christmas/holiday theme would probably put a fun spin on what shenanigans they get up to. Just a thought.

Author's Response:

That's a fantastic idea. I may just have to try it out :)