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Reviewer: worls tallest dwarf Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

You totally nailed one of my best fantasies. I love the pace and premise of this story. It's been dominating my thoughts for days, and each time I think of it I get a thrill.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, man :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2008 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

So, basically, Mableton made this girl just as ruthless and vindictive as him. Sort of making him Darth Palpatine to her Darth Vader?

Proof, once again, that the line between poetic justice and self-destructive revenge is anorexically thin.

Author's Response: Well said indeed CC! sorry for late response, i haven't visited here for a while. Thanks for reading !!

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2008 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Teh aw3sum.

Author's Response: wow sorry for this late response, DX! And thanks for the comment!!

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