Haha in a way I suppose there is a hierarchy of tinies. Would definitely agree that Ryatt is number one on that list. I would say that Josephine is (was) second on that list. Then the men are sort of just there, trying not to do something that would justify a death, acting as Rachel and Shawn’s tiny toys. 

Bowyn was definitely a one-off character. She was really just in the story to build up Mrs. Hulme’s character a little. She’s also sort of there to tease the idea of “what if young girls were gifted their own personal tiny man that they could grow up with”. Inevitably there would be some sexual discovery at some point, but I think a story like that would be pretty interesting in terms of coming of age, self discovery, and friendship. Obviously a story like that would have to be carefully planned so not to overstep any bounds.

Mrs. Hulme is really everything that Ms. Johnson isn’t. She’s got a family, married, and is brutally sadistic with tiny people. Tiny people to her are merely little objects to play with. Ms. Johnson on the other hand generally respects tiny people and allows herself to bond with more than one. Now we’ve seen that she can let loose, but even when she does, she does so in her own Ms. Johnson way. The difference between the two women really shows when they’re interacting with tinies they know, or sort of know.

The gas chamber jar idea probably wasn’t all that new or inventive but at least the chastity cage idea was :) 

This review was a bit shorter since the next chapter had already been released but I’m still glad to hear that these chapters have been resonating with you!

I’m glad you enjoyed it! :D The boys certainly got lucky this time. Quite a few moments to learn from and see that being tiny has its dangers if you’re with someone who’s not out to protect you. I love stories that keep you on the edge of your seat and keep you guessing as to whether or not the main character is actually unkillable. There may be a few battle scars that the boys can carry forward from their time in the changeroom lol.

I did spend a lot of time reading and thinking about what all would happen if a tiny man were to find his way past her teeth and into her stomach. There are some horrible gases in there that would not treat a tiny person kindly. The conclusion I came to is he would be very screwed, very quickly lol. So there’s a bit of twisting and imagination being used here for sure. The justification I sort of used was, well maybe there would be just enough breathable air down there that could sustain him for a few minutes (until Allison left for gym class), and then he slowly starts to fade away into unconsciousness (up to when Alexis is saving him), and then they can attempt to salvage what’s left from there. A bit of a stretch (like every science-based thing in these stories lol) but I picture Trevor as being a pretty scrappy kid who might be able to muster enough willpower to hang on until help arrives haha. So trying to figure out if he could’ve survived or not is part of the fun :)

Allison’s character is certainly an interesting one to look into. I like her because she’s sort of like a typical girl who first comes across a disposable and doesn’t have any experience with them (she has a little, but not much). When she’s in the changeroom, she and the other girls are in a sort of “honeymoon” phase where they feel like they can do whatever they want to the tinies because they think they’re just meaningless disposables. Sort of like if you were to squish a bug in your home. You don’t feel anything for it because you basically view it as nothing more than an object. But if you were to learn that that bug actually belonged to someone, you might start to panic because now there’s suddenly meaning behind that little thing. Allison is quickly learning that not all tiny people are completely without meaning and the realization is rushing in. It’s all fun and games until someone gets hurt lol. We haven’t really seen it yet, but Ms. Johnson cares very deeply for her students and the girls all know this. So when Allison learns about who she swallowed, there’s a huge “oh crap, Ms. Johnson is gonna kill me” moment. As sweet and kind as Ms. Johnson is, she can lay down the law when she needs to. I’ve been toying around with how Ms. Johnson is gonna react and I think I have a pretty interesting idea in mind.

I may not outright explain it in the story, but I picture Calvin’s plan basically being a self preservation / revenge move. We learn that Calvin didn’t know Allison swallowed his brother until Allison is playing with Gatlin. So while the girls were playing with the other boys, Calvin took the opportunity to try and befriend giant Allison in an attempt to stay alive (he already had one close call). Calvin already had a hate on for Noah and his friends after almost being squashed by Sadie earlier. Then once he learns that Allison swallowed Trevor, things turn dark and he doesn’t offer any help to Gatlin. So now that Allison has Calvin but knows Trevor was actually Ms. Johnson’s student, the dots are gonna be a lot easier for her to connect, if she hasn’t already. I am also looking forward to the moment the boys will see the girls again at school. It’ll certainly be interesting and very awkward for sure. The boys saw a lot and the girls did a lot lol.

I’ve actually never heard of that ketchup packet prank before but that’s pretty much exactly how I had pictured it lol. Basically just instantly squished flat. Bit different than just sitting on him normally with nothing in between since instead of just getting some of her weight while the rest of her cheek engulfed him, he’d get half of her full weight pressing right down on him. At least it would be very quick.

Haha I definitely could’ve split it up into Parts 3 and 4. 11,000+ words is a lot for a single chapter. It’s almost like a mini story on its own. The most logical spot that I considered breaking it up at was just after the boys were hidden in the bathroom and the girls left. But by that point the suspense was pretty high and I really didn’t want to say “sorry, you gotta wait another few weeks!” lol. I love that scene where Noah, Gatlin, and the disposable are either in the toilet or hidden under the seat. That’s the scene that I ended up building all of Chapter 10 around. When I was initially planning the story, I actually had Trevor in the disposable’s place (and dying) and had Calvin being swallowed by Allison (and dying) lol. It was meant to be a gruesome chapter that would’ve really shook up the story. But then as the story started to move along and I’ve been working out how I want the next 30 chapters to go and then how I want the ending to go down, I actually need at least one of them alive lol. Plus the story gets really tricky and even more far fetched than it already is cause then it’s like, two of the boys just got murdered… That’s a pretty massive plot point that I didn’t want to be that big. Overall, I like how Chapter 10 turned out though. The boys saw a lot, learned a lot, and we met a lot of interesting characters. Starts to expand the school too. Now we’ve seen the classroom, the changeroom, a hallway, the sporting field, and a lot more of the students. 

I sort of thought the same thing too as I was looking back at my chapters and what I have planned. The start was a pretty slow burn and we only really saw one set, the boys, Ms. Johnson, and Alexis. We’ve come a long way since then just from the last few parts. As much as the story is still about Ms. Johnson and her students, the “weeks” will start to tick by quite a bit slower now as the characters do more outside of the classroom. Noah and Gatlin are also far from the classroom, tiny, and with a pretty senior girl. That’s a pretty big step from Alexis just watching them from a distance. Now that the world is hopefully becoming a bit clearer and we’re seeing who the main characters are, the story will start to build up some of those developing relationships.

I definitely knew there would be a risk of confusion by having so many different characters interacting in one room (and I mentioned this to my peer reviewer too) but I don’t think I would do it any differently. If this were a movie, I think it would be a lot clearer and mean a lot more. But I really wanted to capture the busy room and just how many girls the boys had available to spy on. The chapter also really needed to be fast paced since the girls still have class to go to so they can’t spend all day playing with the tiny people. There were definitely a few girls who were in this chapter just to fill out the scene and won’t really play much of a part in the story.

Basically the main cast that will be recurring throughout the story is something like this:

• Ms. Johnson

• Main group of friends: Noah, Gatlin, Brayden, Brody, Ryan

• Main girls: Alexis, Allison, Sadie

• Supporting: Candice, Rachel W (not Mrs. Rachel Hulme)

• Other: Calvin, Trevor (maybe), Liam, Noelle (haven’t really met), Jaimey, Shelby

• Plus a few others who will show up here and there (secrets)

But yeah, your summary is exactly right. Noah and Gatlin are with Alexis. Brayden just got dropped off with Mrs. Hulme. Brody is with Shelby. Ryan is still in Ms. Johnson’s classroom but wasn’t part of the changeroom sequence. Calvin is still with Allison. Trevor is now with Ms. Johnson.

The dynamic between Gatlin, Calvin, and Trevor is certainly an interesting one. No matter what happens to Trevor, it is going to leave a mark on the boys moving forward. I tried to set it up so that even if he dies or lives, it reminds us of the danger all tinies face. Even if he lives, he’s likely not going to come out as the same pristine, young man that he once was. The stomach is a pretty cruel place and he was in there for quite a while (left this time unspecified since it was only a short period of time but we’re not meant to know exactly how short). I like it because it sort of sets up a major death later in the story but we don’t know who it could be. As for Gatlin and Calvin, that’s sort of where an interesting character-to-character conflict begins. Calvin was almost killed by Sadie and his brother was swallowed by Allison. Who’s he going to blame for all that? The girls? Well they honestly didn’t know who the boys were. Themselves? Young boys are good at throwing around blame so long as it never ends up on them. Who was the one who had the brilliant idea of sneaking into the changeroom? Hmm. So by this point Calvin is furious and in survival mode. Poor Gatlin is caught up in the middle of things and is trying to deal with his own anger and disorientation (he was nearly flushed away). So when he’s talking to Alexis he’s just trying to spit out whatever is on his mind first, which unfortunately for Calvin doesn’t include him.

Yeah I guess I did describe Alexis as having pretty large hips in this chapter. In a way that’s not necessarily wrong but I definitely picture her as having that tall, slim supermodel-like figure. So you could say that her butt is bigger than average but not massive. I wish I could share the pictures I have of each character that inspire their descriptions but I don’t want to ruin anyone’s mental pictures.

I thought that scene where Ms. Johnson takes Trevor and later texts Alexis was pretty clever in hinting that Ms. Johnson knows a lot of important, smart people. We haven’t really got a good feeling yet, but Ms. Johnson played a fairly large role in where the shrinking tech is at today. Along the way she made a lot of big named connections. I’d love to write a spinoff story about just Ms. Johnson in the early days of the tech and her first encounters with tiny men. She’s definitely seen her fair share of injured tiny people and knows a thing or two about how to treat them and when they can’t be saved.

That’s awesome that you already have a connection with the name “Rachel” haha. I think you’ll like what’s coming then because I actually have two Rachel’s planned for this story. Rachel Hulme who we’re on the verge of taking a dive into and Rachel W who will be introduced during midterms in about 10 chapters or so. Next chapter is going to be pretty scary I think. I don’t picture the girls in Chapter 10 to be sadistic (other than maybe Shelby a little). I wrote that chapter as if they were just having fun as a bunch of horny teenage girls who were playing off of each other’s excitement haha. Ms. Johnson had that one chapter where she was a bit cruel to her disposables but I pictured that as being more of a show of dominance than cruelness. I think we’re going to see that Mrs. Hulme has much different morals than Ms. Johnson. When you’re reading the next chapter, remember how Ms. Johnson lets her disposables roam her house when she’s not there and has her entire house rigged specially for tiny people. Rachel does not lol. I have a line coming up from Rachel W later on that’s something like, “I’m the nice Rachel, or so I’ve heard.” I suspect the next chapter is going to be a divided one since there’s a reason Rachel is Mrs. Hulme and not Ms. Hulme. All the focus is gonna be on pleasing Mrs. Hulme though. Alexis is certainly going to have her hands full in trying to save Brayden. There will be a cost for what the boys have set up.

I’m very glad that everyone still seems to be enjoying this story. It’s continuing to be a lot of fun to write. I usually have to take a few days off from writing after each chapter just because each one takes a lot of effort to do well haha. There are some huge chapters that I really want to get to though. I suspect that now that I know there is some flexibility in splitting chapters into parts I’ll do this again in the future. That changeroom sequence will probably be the biggest single continuous sequence in the story but there are a few that might be able to rival it. I’m very curious to know what my Chapter 40-50 will read like. I feel like each chapter is getting better and better. I just need to make sure I keep one-upping my ideas haha. I think I have quite a few golden ideas in store though. I suspect some scenarios will feel a little bit repetitive over time but I’m definitely striving to have each chapter feel totally fresh and new (I think we’ve done that so far). This world just offers so much content, it’s crazy.

Thanks for your support as always!

The best advice that I can give is to just start writing whatever comes to mind. I’ve said it before, but I am certainly not a professional writer. This is the first story I’ve ever written before and I find that once you start writing, you start to figure out what works and what doesn’t. So even if what you write doesn’t turn out well or you don’t like it, that’s okay because you can take that and learn from it. It’s not like you get a failing grade and can never write ever again. I have quite a few “deleted scenes” that I’ve written but ended up not liking so I didn’t publish it. There’s even a lot of what I have published that I would rewrite and change if I ever go back. I’m not in the writing game for money or fame, I do it because I thoroughly enjoy it and it seems like other people do too. One thing that I find helps a lot is to picture the scene or chapter as a movie and play it over and over in your mind. Eventually the characters and scene can almost feel real and alive. Then you can take that “movie” and write about everything you see and everything the characters do. Essentially all I’m doing when I’m writing is trying to put into words what I’m seeing in my imagination. I don’t worry about grammar or spelling or any of that until after I’m all finished, because then I can go back and edit everything. 

That’d be really cool if you started to write a spinoff story from this one! Like I said, I’m not in this writing game for the fame, I’m in it for the fun. So feel free to take the world and the concepts that I’ve started and expand on it. My world “playbook” is still pretty small in terms of what I’ve actually published but I’ve got a lot of ideas written down for how I think the world operates. I find this world especially interesting because I think you could look at it from various points in time. So you could look at it just as the shrinking tech is being developed. You could look at the time this story is based in where the tech is still somewhat fresh but people are starting to know more about it. Or you could look further into the future where we’ve learned from trial and error what works, what doesn’t, and what kind of laws have been introduced to help moderate things. I like to think this world is constantly evolving through time and it’s not simply “this is how it is and how it always will be.” I recommend being careful if you end up using some of the characters from this story since I think there will be a fair bit of change by the end of the story. You can definitely reach out to me if you have ideas you want to share. My email is LittleLearningGTS@gmail.com and my discord is AprilMJ#7988. I’ve actually been using Discord a lot lately and that’s where I met my peer reviewer. So Discord might be best.

The relationship between normal sized men and women and what happens when a tiny person gets involved is definitely something I want to explore a bit. Your thinking is very similar to what I had in mind though. I’ve sort of pictured that for most couples, a tiny person almost becomes a “tool” for spicing things up at home. They already have each other so a tiny man is basically just a little toy. Single people are interesting because do they have an interest in normal people, tiny people, or both? And what do they think of tiny people? In my mind I think I have an answer to this that I’m going to try and show through the story but it’s not all brutal and cruel games. That is definitely out there since people do crazy things when they’re aroused, but there are also a lot of really nice people too. For a tiny man, it’s so critically important that you find someone who you can build a deep bond with (both for safety and for love). We’ve spent a lot of time focusing on disposables and how fun they are, but we’re about to start seeing what happens when an owner and a tiny person bond (aka a personal tiny). We got a few hints that Jaimey has one. Perhaps Ms. Johnson has one. Alexis? Maybe, maybe not. Ms. Johnson has started to show signs of bonding with her students. And maybe there’s a lovely couple out there who wants to buy a personal tiny for themselves but simply don’t have the money to do so and instead want a trial run… So getting back to your comment, yes, human desire is probably a huge problem for tinies in this near (for now) lawless world (regarding tiny people), but there are a lot of good people in the world who just want a companion (and if you can build trust with a tiny person, that’s pretty huge, amazing, and can lead to a lot of interesting things). Like imagine you’re tiny with your spouse, girlfriend, best friend, etc. To me at least, I don’t know how they could ever hurt you if the bond between you two is actually true. In my mind they would do everything they could to protect you. Another interesting spinoff story would be what happens if your giant partner decided she was bored with tiny you and wanted to pursue a normal sized man again (a fool she would be to leave a tiny man who loves her lol).

Poland? The Googleable fact helped quite a bit lol. Can’t say I know too much about Poland. I had a coworker who grew up in Poland and she had some pretty interesting stories. I do know that Poland has a really cool landscape and some interesting architecture that kind of takes you back in time to WW2. I’d love to visit Europe someday just because there’s so much history there.

As for little Trevor, his story hasn’t quite come to an end :) I can’t give away all my secrets before you read it though! Take care!

Indeed we did! It's amazing what a little peer pressure and peer reassurance can do to someone :) As excited as the girls are, they're definitely thinking in the present and not exactly planning for the future. It's sort of an interesting dynamic I have pictured between disposables and personals. Disposables are kinda like bugs. They're cool to look at and maybe keep for a little while, but because there is no personal bond there, they don't really serve a purpose other than being some temporary fun.

Lol yeah that is a pretty glaring void isn't it. In my mind I was totally picturing the boys just being silenced by the girls whenever they would even think about speaking and/or the girls just not believing a word they say since they've dealt with disposables in the past who have tried to talk their way out of... interesting scenarios. I added a few extra lines to point this out. Sometimes it's hard to remember it all lol. Thanks :)

Happy is an interesting word. I tweaked that scene just a little wee bit since I wasn't really picturing her as being particularly happy. Desperate would be a better word I think. Happy in a way because Brayden doesn't seem like a bad dude and they're just in it together at that point but disappointed because she doesn't really have a choice. Thought that was an interesting scene though and makes you think. Raises the question of, "if you were in that situation, would you do it or would you accept death?" It's an intriguing scenario considering she's a pretty beautiful woman and Brayden (like most/all teen boys) have spent the last few years of his life dreaming of being a situation like that. Candice will return.

Ms. Johnson is definitely in for a surprise. I haven't completely decided how I want the post changeroom scenes to play out but I have a lot of different ideas that eventually come back to the same place. We'll see if I can pay everything off :) It's a tricky thing because on one hand the girls are just playing with disposables like they've done before. Like Ms. Johnson has done before. But at the same time, exactly, those are her students and there are people who have put a lot of trust in her. Ms. Johnson has her ways of fixing things though. She's very resourceful and has a lot of friends in high places. How the boys can help each other is also an interesting question that I spent a lot of time thinking about. Cause sure they ate Trevor and nearly crushed Calvin, but they don't really seem all that violent and sadistic. So I've pictured that the boys have a constant push and pull between wanting to jump in and help (like Trevor did) and flee. A lot of it is also just panic and not being able to think straight since things have gone so far down hill. All they wanted to do initially was take a few pictures.

Mrs. Hulme is gonna be quite the woman. We haven't met her yet though. Similar to Ms. Johnson yet much different. I have high hopes for her too. Brayden will truly need all the luck he can get. I'm fully expecting her chapter to get some mixed reviews but the idea I've based that chapter on will probably be isolated to just that chapter (maybe one other). Who knows, maybe it'll be a hit haha. She may or may not have a long term future in the story. I actually have it in my notes that she may be a candidate for a future spinoff story. I have so many ideas for spinoff stories based on people and things we've already seen haha.

Glad you're enjoying this chapter! There's a lot going on and it's a big scene so I hope I'm doing it justice. There are a few things I might do differently if I were to rewrite everything but all my core ideas are taking shape :) Still a whole lot more to go though. Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks very much for your comments! And thank you! If very curious to see how the chapters ends as well hehe. I think it should leave the boys in a pretty interesting place. They've certainly felt the consequences of doing the wrong thing already but they're far from being out of the woods. Ms. Johnson's reaction is gonna be an interesting one. Who's to blame... Herself? The boys? The girls? It's a complicated thing the world has thrown on them. This chapter should definitely be felt throughout the rest of the story. Even though it may not be directly stated way down the road, I think it'll offer a few major life lessons for the boys and stick with them. If only Ms. Johnson would swoop in and save the day... The boys could only wish. They won't get out completely unpunished though :) Losing their classmate is a pretty big punishment in itself, but Ms. Johnson needs to make sure it never happens again... After all, can't have a bunch of tiny pervy boys roaming about spying on whoever they want lol. Love your ideas! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review! Still got a lot more left to go. Nobody is every truly "safe" in the world of tinies!

All is well here! Hope you're doing the same! It's been ridiculous how much has been happenig all at once. Nothing bad really, just a lot to get figured out in a short amount of time. There definitely won't be a new release this weekend but I'm really aiming to have one out by next weekend (April 17th or 18th). Good suggestion! I have quite the panty scene in mind that will probably be included in the next chapter but I may end up saving it for a future chapter. I'm thinking this next chapter is really gonna rock the ship... but hopefully in a good way if I can write it well. Thanks for checking in!!

You all need to pay attention to the chapters that come before the new ones hahaha. But yeah, I've heard a few times that I should've been clearer about what they were playing. I figured that between the tight black short shorts, the number of players, and the net between the two sides it would've been enough lol. Anyways, I'll tweak that before I release the next chapter. The next chapter is gonna drop a few big bombs for sure. I'm really hoping that I can do this next chapter justice. I can not confirm or deny whether or not someone will die though. You're gonna have to wait and tune in!

Sounds like a cool game! I figured in just the way you word things and what you seem most interested in you're someone who might be working in the law and ethics field (hence why I guessed lawyer or law student!). I've heard so many people talk about Death Note and now you're another. I'm really gonna have to check that out.

I love that one comment you made and it's had me really thinking over the last few weeks. I've been trying to think of how I wanted to reply to that. I think you're definitely right, even though I wasn't originally intending on the world being a dystopia (to be honest I'm not even sure what I was originally intending in terms of world type), that seems to be exactly where it's heading (or has already become). And that's really had my mind working as I've been thinking of new ideas and tweaking others. It raises an interesting question of, well who is the dystopia for? Cause I don't picture the government having an iron grip on society and everyone fearing to step outside their doors. It's almost a mini-dystopia for men since they're now being punished for their actions (women too, but to a lesser extent). But at the same time I'm picturing it being more of a "hawk waiting on the branch" type world where the hawk is waiting for just the right animal to pick off even though there could be a thousand pass by. People can still do bad things to one another without being shrunken and handed off to be disposed of, but every once and a while someone will do something bad enough to justify someone stepping in and putting a complete stop to it. Cause we've heard Ms. Johnson explain a little bit about the world to the disposables and she makes the point of "the government is willing to consider even the smallest of crimes." But the interesting part about that line is we're listening to her from Troy's perspective and not seeing inside Ms. Johnson's mind. Cause besides Troy, so far we've only met really bad people who were turned into disposables. So it begs the questions again, what justifies being turned into a disposable and why was Troy shrunk? Is Ms. Johnson being serious when she says that even the pettiest of crimes will justify shrinking, or could it be something else? Sometimes it's well deserved. Sometimes examples need to be made. Sometimes there's a little more beneath the surface.

And yes, I'm definitely seeing criminals being more "disposed of" than "resocialized". Which comes back to the motive of at first they were shrunken and given a second chance, but then they saw just how badly the rich and famous wanted the tiny people. So who gets a second chance now? The origin of this world would definitely be a complex one and I'm not even sure if I have the answer to it haha. I definitely have a lot of rough ideas and a blurry picture, but I'm not even sure if I would be capable of writing a convincing origin of "this is how shrinking criminals started and grew into what it is now." There would be sooo much to unpack. We're sort of seeing shards of that origin story inside this one though.

I also love your other question about Ms. Johnson. This is absolutely something I've thought of for a long time (even before I started writing chapter 1 and was just starting to outline the characters and the story). The end of Chapter 1 (before we see her in present day) was a pivotal moment in her life but it was like the tv was shut off just before we got to fully see what Ms. Johnson's reaction was to the death of Todd. We only got to see a split second glimpse. That was the first (and perhaps only time) Ms. Johnson has ever actually lost someone she cared for. Since then they've just been meaningless disposables and test subjects. This question does not require another story to answer (lol) and you will get an answer to this in a future chapter. Lets just say that Noah (or maybe Alexis) is going to be speaking with someone who knows a lot more about Ms. Johnson than he and Alexis do.

Girls are fun though! And they just wanna have fun :) I can totally see why you would be feeling this way and you won't be the only one to be feeling this way for long. I've purposefully started the story off by introducing disposables first before we get into any major personal stuff though. We'll see if you can be convinced otherwise before the story is finished hehe. Who knows, it might be a back and forth pulling though and maybe that's what the author will be going for :)

I totally agree with the number of possibilities this world has to offer though! I know you said that you had an idea that you wanted to share with my privately and you still can. I'd love to hear it! Not sure if you saw, but in one of my other chapters I posted some contact methods. This review section works for me too though! Instagram: LittleLearningGTS, Discord: AprilMJ#7988, Email: LittleLearningGTS@gmail.com.

Thanks for your interest and support! Nighty night from Canada :)

Yep, you're right! They were playing volleyball (indoors) tonight. Naming them the Lakers did make me wonder if that would cause some confusion (and apparently it did lol) but there are sooo many lakes around where I live in real life so it was a pretty fitting name haha. I don't watch much (if any) basketball so for me the name didn't really throw me off but for those who watch it as much as I watch hockey, I could see that being a little confusing lol. Thanks for being quick with the keyboard :)

Hehe yeah I was originally intending for this chapter to be a lot shorter but about a month ago I had the idea of Ms. Johnson recruiting students to serve as tiny cheerleaders and then from there I thought it would be pretty great to have them stand on the bench, sandwiched between the girls haha. After all, I'm pretty sure no man could resist something like that, especially if the girls were all wearing short volleyball shorts who could potentially squash them at any second (as Noah points out lol). And as fun as that scenerio is, there was actually some purpose behind this chapter. Mostly to set the scene for some future stuff and to introduce Noah to the team. Sort of builds up the school a little bit too since all we've seen so far is the one classroom, the soccer field/track, one hallway, and a blurry changeroom. Slowly building up the world (rather than just a house or a room) is pretty fun for me. And options for the future is a good thing :)

I seriously considered letting the girls manhandle the two boys like they do with Little-T but at the same time, Ms. Johnson likes to feel in control of things. Especially when it comes to the boys' safety. So if she lets the girls drop them down their shorts, things could go wrong pretty quickly lol. It's also meant to build up the disposable vs personal tiny man contrast a little too by showing that taking risks with someone like Little-T is way easier than it is to take risks with someone like Noah or Brayden. Gonna be interesting to see who Little-T is! It does seem like he's a fan favourite with the girls though :)

I definitely wanted Allison to come in with a bang. We're gonna be seeing her again for sure. I'm very glad to hear that you've got a good mental image of what she looks like. In every good book I've read, I always have a crystal clear picture of what the characters look like. So I really wanted that feeling again here. I've got pictures saved of the real life people each character is based on (whether it be people I know, people I've seen in person, or people I don't know personally) so I'm curious to know how close I've been able to describe them all. It's reassuring I've been able to paint at least a partial picture though!

We're getting pretty close to some interesting conversations between the characters so I think a few of your questions are going to be answered soon. I sort of blame Noah's ignorance on being in a foggy headspace (he was surrounded by giant, beautiful, senior high school girls), he'd never seen a real girl orgasm before (they're usually fake online) so he'd be quick to deny, and just being caught up in the worry that Allison was actually injured (he's a pretty nice dude). Plus he's just an innocent grade 9 boy, as one of the girls so cleverly pointed out haha. And rest assured that Little-T eventually made it home to Ms. Johnson. He might have a little wear and tear but nothing too serious. He'll be back :)

Hehe, yeah I figured Alexis' tease about Gatlin would be a winner (it certainly was for me) haha. Just the idea of your best friend being trapped inside a pretty girl's thong with no way to help them. I loved Noah's "What?!" and Alexis' "Do you really think I'm that mean?" lol. One side is freaking out while the other is basking in the glory of her harmless joke haha. Poor Noah, that's what happen's when you befriend a fiesty young lady. And at this point (even after this chapter) Alexis is still really the only one who could actually recognize the boys. So they'd take whoever Ms. Johnson is handing to them without much of a second thought haha. They might be able to spot Noah or Brayden but it's pretty unlikely. Allison would've had other things on her mind (like enjoying Little-T's company and then recovering from it), and the rest of the girls only took passing glances at Noah and Brayden. Hint hint.

Those are certainly interesting theories about the hole in the wall! The boys did also make the comment that they had to do some digging (both figuratively and literally). Meaning that they probably had to search high and low for any sign of a weak spot and then they actually had to work on busting through to get it wide enough to even think about crawling through it. The next chapter is gonna comment on the size in more detail but think of it as being just big enough that you could poke your finger into it. There is a little bit more reasoning behind the meaning of the weak spot but we'll visit that in the next chapter :) You're pretty close! And remember that it's still an "if Ms. Johnson teaches us about dildos" hehe. The boys have spent a good while daydreaming about what they hope Ms. Johnson is gonna teach them. That lesson may not be for another few weeks though :)

Love the dildo mini story hahaha! There will definitely be some unaware stuff coming up somewhat soon. Still working on those details though. I've had my mind on this next chapter for quite a while and what the aftermath of it is gonna look like. I think we've got a lot of really fun stuff coming up soon (a lot of super sweet and gentle stuff and some... not)! Accepted your discord request. Thanks!