[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 14, Part 1: Detention
Happy Valentine’s Day to you too!
And I’m glad we got another update! Detention time. Giantess detention is usually when things get spicy and so far, it seems like the fun is just getting started!
There’s 2 things that made me excited this chapter. First was when Mrs. Johnson was circling the chairs where the students sat in.
Part of me thought maybe she would sit in one of the chairs, but a student would be between her legs on the chair and he would hope she doesn’t close her legs on him. Lol. Who knows, maybe one of the guys could share a story like that since they are grouped together now.
Second is the announcement for the girls and Mrs. Hulme to join the same classroom. If this is one big reunion, I’m so looking forward to it! Is Mrs. Johnson going to pair up the boys to the women?
So there’s 7 girls from the announcement, then add Mrs. Hulme and then Mrs. Johnson herself. That’s 9 women and there’s 5 boys in the classroom. Now we need 1 more woman. Ah. Alexis. Perfect. Maybe each boy gets shared between 2 women. Lol, a little too much, right? Sounds too crazy to be true. However, it does give me some ideas.
Imagine Mrs. Hulme reuniting with Brayden again. Or Calvin with Allison. That would be kinda funny.
I’m really interested in this whole “don’t be a disposable, be a personal tiny man”. Being a personal tiny sex toy also seems pretty close to what Mrs. Johnson is implying so part of me wonders if that’s in store for one of these guys, haha.
The thong exercise felt a bit random, but I guess it shows how weak they are compared to Mrs. Johnson’s muscular disposables.
Also, the teeth task right now seems kinda random too. I think Mrs. Johnson is stalling or something. There’s gotta be a catch. Maybe some mouth play is coming up. Idk, but I have a feeling that Mrs. Johnson’s tongue is going to have some fun.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I love how random keeps popping up in this review lol. It about sums it up too. To be honest, the actual tasks the boys are faced with don’t really have a lot of meaning. They’re really just meant to be fun, interesting things to break up the story. Ideas that when you really stop to think about and ask the question, “what if I were in their tiny shoes” you’d probably say “that would be wild”. To me, the idea of even just being tasked with having to try to remove your teacher’s thong at only an inch or two tall is quite the thought. A simple thing, but something that you would never get the chance to do in real life. I picture Ms. Johnson beating home the idea of “being a disposable equals a sure, probably cruel death. But being a person tiny man probably equals a life of purpose and love” with this detention. Hinting that had the boys not been discovered, they probably would’ve remained disposables and been wiped out. Ms. Johnson ultimately wants to build men worthy of being personals and not disposables.
Although a very fun idea, it may come as a bit of a disappointment that Ms. Johnson vs. the girls won’t be directly shown. I do have a few reasons for it… First being, after what Ms. Johnson is about to do to the girls, the girls will probably be pretty edgy. Second being the story is meant to focus more so on the boys. Third being, a meeting between the boys and the girls will eventually go down, but on an equal playing field. And actually, as I’m writing this, there’s sort of a fourth. Although Ms. Johnson is teaching the boys everything they need to know about women, she’s also building up the power that women hold in the world. So if she shows the boys what she does to punish the girls, it kind of takes away a bit of that. The boys will get to see some of the aftermath though.
I do have another Brayden/Mrs. Hulme interaction planned, though it may or may not be directly between them… perhaps through someone Mrs. Hulme values. Mrs. Hulme still has quite a few interesting moments left in the story.
It’s going to be very interesting to see how well I can pull everything together by the end of the story lol. It’s a personal pet peeve to read a story and then have unanswered questions besides just the theme questions designed by the author. Same goes for TV shows. So by the end I’m hoping to have everything pretty well wrapped up. I like to think I know how I’m going to do that :) I’ve got a running list of questions to answer but I suspect I’m going to need to go back through our review discussions someday and pick out everything that’s still outstanding. It’s a work in progress and you’re all my guinea pigs lol.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2022 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 13, Part 2
[I'm reposting this review (AGAIN) to phrase one thing better and to correct
some minor mistakes. These brackets are just in case that you looked at
the website, saw my review appear, and then disappear.]
Hello again! :)
Good to see the next chapter! :)
This chapter feels like another breather before another load of brutal stuff. I wonder if what we've seen in the story so far was the most detailed and long depiction of how harsh the reality in this world can be, or I if was just the tip of the iceberg and you have something even more intense in mind.
I hope than none of the main characters die, of course, but of I had to guess which character has the greatest potential to meet that kind of fate, I'd say that Brayden is the most "qualified" person for that. As mentioned in this chapter, he's not giving up on Candice, which means that there is potential for a tragic love story where an ending that is the closest to the happy one is when they die together. In my opition, this subplot has great potential to be a "horny tearjerker" (as in, a story that moves you but also happes to have a lot of horny stuff). I'm looking forward to see where this is going.
I still wonder what kind of detention it will be. The amout of suspense rose with just one sentence from Ms. Johnson and it wasn't mentioned at all how did her voice sound like. Was it stern, or rather said in a way that doesn't give off how she perceives the situation? In any case, this definitely sounds like a subtle reminder that she remembers what kind of situation the boys were in. I think she probably has a very good guess as to how and why the boys were in that dangerous situation and no one had to tell her that.
Characters based on reviewers, you say. I'm willing to entertain the idea as long as my character won't be involved in "sexy stuff" and it isn't an ACTUAL battle royale, where it is COMPLETELY IMPOSSIBLE for more than one participant to survive. From your Chapter End Notes, I guess this is probably quite a lot to ask, but these are my conditions for a character based on me. I hope I'm not too demanding.
As for possible role in the future of this story, I think I'll settle for being just briefly mentioned as a person who knows about tinies and has VERY negative opition on how they are treated. As a guy from the internet. I think this is the best option as not to make the story awkward, because my character is mentioned only on one or a few occasions and uses his internet nickname (because Ziku is obviously not my real name). The idea is very interesting as a whole and I can't wait to see how it will play out.
Looking forward to the next chapter of this story! :)
Author's Response:
I like your first point because if all goes according to plan, we’re sort of in the first of maybe three tiers of “knowing”. We’re about to encounter the second tier in the night club. That’ll be a monster of a chapter and will probably confirm your “breather before another load of brutal stuff” thought. It should be one entertaining part after another though. I’m hoping that it’ll be a really fun read and will start to point towards where the story could be heading. That part will almost be an entire mini-story of its own. Probably longer than a lot of stories on here too. Then we’ll probably spend the rest of the story building up to the third tier that I’m hoping will land with a big “what if”. As much as this is a fun giantess story, I’d like to try and add a little bit more to the end of the story. Something that really takes the craziness up a few notches but finishes with a somewhat deeper meaning besides just being “fun”.
I’m very interested to see where Brayden’s character goes as well. We’ve got a bunch of different ideas for him that all lead down very different paths. Still working out which one is the best, but it’ll hopefully be a satisfying one at the least.
That is a good point that I didn’t comment on her tone. To be honest, it was just overlooked. But now that I’m looking back at it, I kind of like the way it sets up the unknown. My favourite books are the ones that I can’t easily predict what’s going to happen, but can still make some educated guesses on what it might be. Although I’m not a reader on this one, I might keep the vagueness of that part and let Ms. Johnson show it in the next chapter.
Haha, noted. I didn’t think your name was actually Ziku but I kinda like it. It could be a very unique name. I kinda doubt that this side “reviewer story” will ever actually take place because I have so many spinoff stories and sequel ideas in mind. One thing that I have been considering doing is starting up a spinoff story to write as Little Learning is moving along. Not that I’m necessarily feeling burnt out, but I’ve been told that writing two different stories simultaneously can actually be a good way to keep generating fresh ideas. So we’ll see if a spinoff ever comes to be. The hard part will be choosing which story to tell first lol.
Always appreciate hearing your thoughts!
Date: January 18 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13, Part 2
Loved this chapter so much fun! can't wait and happy you uploaded. You know me more details on inside. But would have been cool to know what was happening.
Only really F/m guy tbh. But you are amazing. Just curious what your favorite stories are that you read here.
Author's Response:
I need a major company to pick up my story and make it into a movie haha. It’s so difficult to be able to capture every little detail (as amazing as that would be!). Really, there’s a lot of stuff that needs to be seen to believe. After all, a picture is worth a thousand words… and who knows how many words a video can deliver. So for now we have to settle for me trying to trigger your imagination into filling in the blanks. I love your motivation to keep me from skipping over the details though. Stops my laziness (or at least some of it) from cramming the show.
I assume the F/m comment is about the very last scene with Jaimey’s boyfriend? That short scene was mostly meant to drive home the fact that Brayden couldn’t save Candice. What’s the worst thing that could be done to the woman you love? Have another guy take over.
Oh man… favourite stories. To be honest, I haven’t read nearly as many as I should considering I’m trying to wiggle my way into this community. But the first one that comes to mind is Tom’s Story. That was the first giantess story I ever read and I followed it all the way from about when chapter 10 was posted. I can still remember laying in bed, staying up way later than I should’ve on school nights just to read the next chapter that had come out. I don’t even think some of these stories are still around, but I made a list a few years ago of some of my favourites at the time… Beach Girl, The Magic School Bus, Soccer Girls, Breaking Up is Hard to Do, Magic Soda!, A New Perspective, Day at the Pool, A Small Surprise, Spring Breakers, and A Love Story of Another Kind. But I think Doh Canada was another good one if that’s the right name. I know there are more and I can remember specific scenes but those are the ones that I have titles for. I’ll put some thought into it and see if I can come up with a few more names! But thanks for the kind words! Certainly much appreciated as always!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2022 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 13, Part 2
Whoa! This was amazing! This was a very erotic chapter, especially after the setup from the previous one.
When Mrs. Johnson said that the class would be divided into groups, I thought Alexis would take a few groups too. But I guess this makes sense so they wouldn’t lose or crush anyone by accident.
Also, I wasn’t expecting the groups to take turns and I imagined one group on each body part lol. But I actually liked the way you wrote it better. Each person gets their own one on one time with an intimate part of Mrs. Johnson. And lucky little Noah gets to match with her pussy right before Mrs. Johnson has her orgasm. Talk about hitting the lottery. Not only does his group make her cum, but he also gets the best seat in the house.
I loved the part where as Noah was pulling his head out of Mrs. Johnson’s vagina, her finger just pushed his body inside her. Now that’s super hot. She must’ve been in the zone and did it by accident. But if it was on purpose….that would be even more naughty.
Ahh detention. I’ve always loved the thought of detention with a hot teacher. Just imagining how you would get punished almost made me end up in detention a few times. Now in this story, I’m sure sure Noah probably had similar thoughts as myself, but with the locker room experience, he has conflicting feelings, and I love it. Seeing these boys in fear actually excites me. There’s a thrill to it that I can’t really explain, especially when there’s someone like Mrs. Johnson that’s going to be responsible for it.
Then we have the conversation with the boys. But the star of this scene was Liam. I think he may have fucked up. Lol. Mrs. Johnson told him to keep that between them, but now Liam told about his adventure to the boys. Now if one of this boys accidentally mentions this while Mrs. Johnson is around, she might go after Liam for spilling that secret. Oh boy, maybe Mrs. Johnson may actually take that original offer and take him home with her.
I loved how Noah described Liam as, well, Liam. That’s kinda how I perceived him too. Just a random guy who probably struggles with girls and to hear about his experience with Alexis would surprise me too lol. I hope Noah doesn’t let this go and maybe he is the one that brings it up accidentally. Man, this could be one crazy side plot.
In addition, Liam’s view on it also made sense. I like how he saw himself as an easy target for Alexis when she decided to use him. Probably wanted someone who was shy or obedient and someone that she could toy with.
This reminds me of Alexis’s personal toy that she actually doesn’t use sexually and had to trade him away. So hearing this story with Liam again makes me wonder how often Alexis has this sexual adventures. If it’s not often, then Liam is a lucky guy and it would be funny to see him back as a sex toy. I know Liam is trying to be helpful by sharing his past with Alexis, but the thought of having him regret this later sounds too good to pass up. Lol
Then we get Brayden seeing Jaimey. I totally forgot about the boys seeing the girls again. That surely has to frighten them and maybe some ptsd as they walk the same halls as their sexual tormentors.
Brayden’s idea of using his phone to record Jaimey’s crotch as she goes up the stairs sounds like the most brilliantly stupid thing to do. Sure, it actually worked and he figured out that Candice is stuck there, but I don’t think he could actually change anything. Maybe Brayden could offer himself and switch places with Candice. Now wouldn’t that be romantic. Idk. We shall see how far Brayden goes for Candice.
Hmm, a new side story involved characters based on the reviewers? Now that sounds promising. Also, I think earlier you told me it wasn’t possible to add me in the main story, but if there’s some new changes, I’m definitely interested, haha. I think you already know how to involved my character into one of your stories, so I’m not too worried about that. The details could be explained later anyway if needed. But yeah, I would love to see a Tom character in one of your stories and I could already imagine myself in his shoes.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
One thing that I want to do soon is get Alexis into the action. For now we’ve been pretty focused on Ms. Johnson and the group of boys. Alexis has really just been that quiet girl off in the corner who everyone wants to get to know. She’s going to be a major player in the second half of the story so she’ll be getting some more screen time soon.
Ms. Johnson does most things with a purpose, so I like to think that she pushed Noah inside on purpose too. Could be wrong though! After all, Ms. Johnson certainly has a mind of her own when she’s aroused. Just had to speed things along a little since she knew she was getting close :)
I love that the changeroom chapter continues to have implications on the story. I completely agree with your take surrounding detention. Although perhaps a fun idea given that it’s Ms. Johnson and she’s awesomely sexy, they did just do a very bad thing. So how does Ms. Johnson respond to that? One can only nervously speculate.
I picture Alexis having an interesting fact about herself that will be revealed a little later in the story. Because, like any teenager, she’s got needs raging through her body. So she’s gotta take care of those needs somehow. But she also has personal commitments that she doesn’t want to go against either so it places her in this awkward situation. I also like the idea of her being a “very fun” character. So we’ll see if she ends up coming across that way or not. I think she’ll have her moments like in the very first lesson.
Liam kinda makes me laugh lol. I picture him as being that kid who everyone knows but nobody knows anything about him. He can be a little much at times that makes it hard for him to make friends. He’s that creepily nice kid. I feel like there’s been one like him in every class I’ve ever been in haha.
The Brayden and Candice characters are certainly interesting ones. I’ve been working with one of my peer reviewers to try and nail down their character arcs. We’ve got a few interesting ideas for where we could take them. It’s hard to choose the right one!
Glad you’re still enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: January 10 2022 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 13, Part 1: Pleasure
Hello again and Happy New Year! :)
Good to know this story is still alive.
First of all, I'd like to express my personal thoughts on the matter of "punishment". I personally think that a real threat of death is a punshiment in and of itself, so if Ms. Johnson WILL do something like that while addressing this matter, I think that what the boys did is more of an excuse than the proper reason to punish them (not that I mind, of course). I am curious about how it will be resolved. Title of the next chapter present in the preview, "Detention", might suggest something, of course, but I think it's still open to interpretation.
Regarding the matter of Trevor, I think that I want to give a new meaning. He was so energetic and eager to try new things, but his near-death experience, he might have gone through the change so significant that he became pretty much completely different person. So the words "Rest in peace, Trevor!" could be addressed to his old self who dissappeared through this life-changing experience.
Regarding your idea about putting in the story characters that are real life persons, I am a little reluctant to support it. I like this story because it has original characters and I would be a little bit weird. I might like it if their appearences will be brief (one, max two chapters) and if you try to make something up using available informantion about their real personalities.
You also metioned jumping "5 years into the future" and it remined me that I am actually curious about this story's timeline. It would be very interesting, and also very helpful to get to know this.
Keep up the good work in the next chapters!
Have a nice week! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you’re still enjoying it! I totally get where you’re coming from in your first two points because they’re things that I’ve spent some time thinking about myself. About your first point, take a look at the reply I gave TomSpeedy just before your review. It sort of outlines my thought process. Really how I’m picturing it is that yes, the boys have been traumatized by their near death experiences, partly because they know it was entirely self inflicting and their trust in women has declined pretty steeply. So although Ms. Johnson knows that she needs to reinforce the idea that what they did was very wrong, she also needs to be the teacher who brings them out of their dark places and renews their young, free spirits. What better way than literally giving them free rein over her beautiful body that no man could ever resist. I’m pretty confident that would be a pretty good first step and give them all a little extra pep. So then how do you follow that up and both punish them for what they did and build up their trust at the same time. I’m hoping I’ve got a solution for that in detention :)
As for Trevor, he’s probably the most interesting character of all that will be coming out of the changeroom. I picture him as having a completely new outlook on life. Something he now treasures more than he ever did. And perhaps once he gets past the initial trauma of interacting with girls again, he’ll be all in on life. My inspiration for him is sort of taken from those crazy mountain climbers who thrive in the face of danger. Mountain almost killed me one? Let’s conquer it and then move onto something even crazier. So I’m not quite ready to let him fizzle away yet :) After all, what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger… sorry, that’s pretty cheesy haha. But the boys are also young and with that comes the ability to still shape yourself for the future. Teens are hard to keep down lol.
I completely get what you’re saying about the celebs and absolutely agree. I definitely wouldn’t make them main characters, or even supporting characters for that matter. It would be a very brief appearance just to reinforce the fact that, “oh man, this club really does serve the biggest and the best.” So we’ll see if it fits once I get that far. Weird is a good word.
So I’m going to try and answer this from memory (without going back through my notes) but from what I remember the timeline is something like this… 10 years ago the world encountered a vicious virus that wrecked the world. It damaged more than just economies, ie. killed many people. So the world spent a fews years working on a cure to this virus that was on route to cripping us. Naturally one was found… but it led to the discovery of the tech that Ms. Johnson uses every class. Flash forward to 5 years ago and we pick up Chapter 1 with Ms. Johnson and her research team experimenting with the research tech. Although maybe not stated, but Ms. Johnson is one of the leading ladies on developing the tech. Accident happen, Todd dies by the hands of Ms. Johnson, and she’s left hurting because of it. 5 more years go by and we pick up in present day with Ms. Johnson and the boys starting the first semester of high school (the boys first, not Ms. Johnson’s first year of teaching). All we know from about the 5 years that passed between the start of Chapter 1 and the end scene is that Ms. Johnson settled down and is no longer working with her research team. I have my ideas for what happened in between but those are stories for another time :) Perhaps you can even start to see some parallels beginning to appear in places.
What the story doesn’t specify is what year it’s set in. I have my own thoughts about that and it’s basically that we’re not that far from where we are today. The tech has certainly improved, but we’re not zipping around in flying cars yet. So my idea was to tighten up those 10 years and maybe say we’re only 5 years away from where we are right now (2022). That way the world and the people in the world are very similar to what we know. That’s the part I’m undecided on though… Do I want to tighten it up and specify the year or just leave it open ended. I like both for different reasons. Right now it’s still unspecified but can be estimated.
Thanks for your continued interest! It’s always fun to dive a little deeper and be able to explain my thoughts.
Date: January 10 2022 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 13, Part 1: Pleasure
Love the idea of the mini chapter with tweaking to present day. I cant wait for Noah and Alexis for move forward. All I ask for is alittle in depth on insertion and vore.
Author's Response:
Appreciate the feedback! Glad to hear that my celeb idea and tweaking of the timeline might not be the worst. Still debating, but we shall see. The cool thing about tweaking the timeline is that we could almost use Covid as the catalyst for the story lol. I can’t wait for Noah and Alexis to get things figured out as well! I’m still working on what would be the best way to finally convince them that they’re made for each other. It’s a tricky question and I’m still searching for the answer. We’ll find one if they’re meant to be :) We’ll see if I’m able to step up my insertion game in Part 2. There will be the potential for some vore in Detention but I’m not quite finished with that chapter yet :) Girls Night Out will definitely be the chapter you’ll be most excited for.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2022 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 13, Part 1: Pleasure
Happy New Year!
Yes! I’m so glad this story is back! I thought it may have been forgotten so I’m happy it’s back!
And wow, going straight into the next lesson. I should’ve known that a chapter called pleasure is literally about a woman’s pleasure. I think I’m going to like these next few chapters.
I’m surprised Mrs. Johnson didn’t address the whole incident from the previous chapters. It kinda felt like she acted as if it was already settled and part of me wants to hear her thoughts on the manner. Maybe she does comment on it later, idk. Either way, I’m excited for this lesson.
I love how Mrs. Johnson told Ryan that she might experiment with him being inserted into her vagina. I mean, if I was in this class, I would said “A woman could be pleasured by keeping a tiny tied to the crotch of her panties and have him lick her all day and night long.” And if Mrs. Johnson told me that she wants to try that…. well I think I’m going to heaven. Lol.
Haha! Mrs. Johnson loves teasing Liam. She actually attached him to her necklace and is now making him watch all the fun. And with his hands attached, he can’t even jerk off. It’s like watching porn and you can’t relive yourself. Mrs. Johnson is naughty.
Splitting into 4 groups, I would join the pussy group. I don’t think she said which group was which yet, but I would hope I get that activity.
As far as putting real people into the story, it’s usually a hit or miss with the concept. My issue is that I already have an idea of how certain actresses may act so if I read them in a story where they do activities that I find strange, then it would just seem off. The bright side is that I could easily picture who exactly you are talking about and sometimes I do imagine them as a giantess. In other words, it’s a risk. If it works, it’s awesome, if it doesn’t, it could be a turn off.
I think the key is dialogue. Seeing a celebrity crush simply step or eat a tiny might be pretty safe to write about. But if they start teasing and saying stuff, that’s the risky part since you gotta capture that celebrity’s character and that’s tricky.
So yeah, if there are celebrities, I think it’s best to have them in the background or something. That’s my opinion.
Anyway, fantastic chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Y’all of little faith lol. I know that I’ve been far too slow at pushing out each chapter but my thinking about it never really stops. I’m always poking at it here and there. It’s the long writing sessions that I need to do more of, otherwise it just doesn’t go anywhere meaningful (at least for you). If anyone is concerned that the story is lost and forgotten, just email me or message me on Discord. I keep tabs on both :)
Ms. Johnson certainly won’t let the boys’ and girls’ actions go unnoticed. But my thinking is this… if you did something really embarrassing and you knew that someone(s) knew about it, you’d be worried they’d spill that and let the whole world know about it (keep in mind that their classmates don’t know what they did). Something like this could be detrimental to the boys’ future if it ever got out. So Ms. Johnson, being the cool friend type of teacher, realizes this (and has maybe been through it before with other students in the past) and keeps it hush hush when others are around. But with the next chapter being titled “Detention”, it presents an interesting opportunity for Ms. Johnson to meet with the boys in private. The big question is obviously what kind of punishment is Ms. Johnson going to lay down? Is she going to treat the boys like criminals of war and sentence them to being disposables for as long as they live? Or will she let them off with a warning like a cool police officer? I’ve spent a bit of time thinking about a plausible answer and my thinking that maybe it’s a little of both, and a little of neither. The boys have clearly been traumatized by what they experienced. Their trust in women has probably fallen off a cliff. This is evident in Brayden’s eyes and Calvin’s quietness. With Ms. Johnson being a pretty smart gal, would she want to push the boys even closer to their breaking points? I’d like to think that she would recognize their subtle hints and try to help them at the same time as teach them. Hence this lesson and what happens in detention. What boy/man would be able to resist playing with a beautiful, nude teacher and being told to do whatever they want to her? None lol. So step one in Ms. Johnson’s plan is to get the boys back on the horse… or rather back onto/into her. I think we’ve all had at least one moment in our lives where we’ve been incredibly upset, but as soon as we start doing something enjoyable, we forget all about it. That’s really the feeling I’m going for with this lesson. Detention is a kinda sorta continuation with that, but hopefully also adding on a few “reality check” items as well. The other interesting side of the matter is what are the girls going to do… Some still won’t know about the boys’ identities, but some will. Ms. Johnson can be quite persuasive when it comes to convincing people to keep things to themselves.
I’m glad that you appreciated Liam being locked up on Ms. Johnson’s necklace. My thought was the exact same as yours. What is the cruelest thing Ms. Johnson could do as a form of punishment without just kicking him out of the classroom or hurting him? Force him to watch lol.
I’m definitely in the same celeb boat as you. I keep going back and forth on the idea but I think there are going to be a few more reasons why not to do it than to do it. Cause on one hand it’s cool to introduce the concept that you could potentially be the tiny man of anyone on Earth (in our time). But then there are the points of, what if you don’t like the celeb that’s introduced and, like you said, we already have our own mental pictures of them that can’t be rewritten by a fictional story. Plus it kind of takes away some of the authenticity of the story. Still debating about it, but I’m leaning towards the “pack it away for later” option. We shall see.
Date: December 29 2021 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Research Trip
cant wait for your return keep it up!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2021 3:54 PM Title: Story Teaser
Great story, any chapters gonna revolve around nose or ear content. I love tinies inside those areas
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to hear that you’re still enjoying it! Nose for sure. It won’t necessarily be the focal point of the chapter but it will certainly be a fun experience. Ears are a little bit tricky since my tinies aren’t as small compared to other stories, but I’ve been toying around with a few different ideas. I feel like I have one that will likely make it into the story though. Again, probably won’t be the focal point of the chapter but I think it will actually be an important one in building the world. Thanks for continuing to follow along!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2021 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12, Part 3
[NOTE: This is copy-paste of my deleted review, with a few new sentences and corrections of mistakes like misspells that appeared in it.]
Hello again! :)
That was quite a chapter (I mean all three parts). So much things happened, some were happy and some were sad, but in the end, everything was resolved without any major harm.
I've also learned one very important fact about this world that will turn out to be very helpful with creating my own story. I may not be able to create neutral narrator though.
You mentioned in response to one
of my review that you don't like when characters feel unkillable. I
other words, you don't like the plot armor (at least, the obvious one).
And yet, all of the boys made it out alive. When I reached the end of
this three-part chapter, I thought that my emotional experience was very
similar to what I felt when I played the visual novel called "Katawa
Shoujo". This one was created by a group of people based on the idea
inspired by sketch that appeared once on 4chan.
I've played only one route, and although I got a good ending, I was very worried that I'm getting to the bad ending 'till the very end.
So I assume that your goal was to put the boys through hell and make sure that it won't be obvious whether they make it out alive, right? If that's you were aiming for, then YOU'VE FREAKIN' SUCCEEDED.
I just hope that these boys will not go through any more life-threatening situations.
I have a feeling I might have mentioned it in my of my previous reviews, but I'll continue anyway. I've noticed that girls, in comparison to boys, are much more well informed when it comes to tiny people. I might be overinterpreting this, but I feel like I'm cathing glimpses of matriarchal society in this universe. This could prove quite interesting.
Last but not least, I don't like the obvious plot armor, but I'd also hate to see someone from the main cast die and that's the main reason why I avoid watching titles like "Akame ga Kill" (an anime title I know next to nothing about, but what I DO know is that apparently you never one when someone will die, and the main cast is not an exception). If there IS a death of a major character, then I think it should be meaningful, like when one person needs to sacrifice their life to accomplish something (ensuring safety of the other character or getting one step closer to defeating the mutual enemy).
Otherwise, it would be way too depressing, and in conclusion, something that's not for me.
I'm eagerly awaiting next chapters.
Have a nice week! :)
Author's Response:
Plot armor is actually a very interesting term that I’ve never heard until now (thanks for that). It totally fits and that’s definitely how I feel though. I prefer to strip the characters of their armor and then put everyone on an equal playing field. Now there is a complicated part to that where the author gets attached to a character lol. I would definitely say I have a favourite character so that one probably won’t die. In general though, I try to be unbiased.
With it being so early in the story, I didn’t really want anyone to die off quite yet. Back when I was first planning the story I had both Calvin and Trevor both dying in the changeroom. Calvin stepped on and crushed and Trevor swallowed and digested. So that’s probably a big reason why it seemed like they were both going to die… until they didn’t lol. But I would definitely say that once I said to myself that they were going to live and serve a purpose, it became a game of trying to conceal their survival until the very last second. Glad it worked haha. I’m hoping to spark that feeling throughout the rest of the story too so there’s always a sense of doubt. That way if/when someone does die, it’s even more shocking. For me, the size difference in the world just begs for danger and suspense and that’s really what fuels my writing. I love uncertainty and that sense of danger.
One of my long time friends actually pointed out that this story is taking on a matriarchal society feeling as well. I wouldn’t necessarily say that I went into the story with that in mind, but as I’ve been thinking about it more and more the last week or two, I would say it’s sort of a subconscious idea that’s always been there. So in a way, yes, I would say that we are building a matriarchal society even if it’s not outright stated. It’s more of a subtle change in the world that people don’t necessarily see playing out, but is in the air. I have always pictured that the women and girls in the world know more about the shrinking tech than the men and the boys though. My sort of loose, unofficial explanation to that is that girls have more to gain from it and simply enjoy it more. Plus men are more willing to be shrunk for their partners than women are. I think of it sort of like how people often want what they don’t have, even if what they have is good. Men have more power in the world because they’re bigger and stronger, but often desire to be submissive to their partners. Women have less power but find it arousing to exert dominance over their partners. Obviously this isn’t true in every circumstance, but it’s been my general life experience and is translating to this story.
I totally agree that a major death(s) need to be meaningful. For me it also needs to be a satisfying death and not just one to create shock and awe. Whether it be to create a teachable moment or like you said, to serve a higher purpose and benefit others. I’ve got quite a few ideas and one main one. I’ve run the main one past two of my peer reviewers and they’re onboard with it. Still have a few details to work out but I think it fits with the story and brings everything full circle.
I also accepted your Discord request :) (thanks for that!)
Thanks for the thoughtful review! (And for reposting)
Date: November 15 2021 12:38 PM Title: Story Teaser
I'm actually quite looking forward to the even more cruel scenarios and specifically, death of one or more of the tinies.
That's something I like about these longer giantess stories, watching it like Game of Thrones -- 'who's gonna get murked next??' in the back of my mind. I assumed Trevor was a complete goner! I like that suspense.
Author's Response:
I’m totally the same way. I love the idea of knowing someone isn't unkillable and being in suspense whenever I feel like they might finally kick the can. I’m not usually a fan of the stories that tease death and then never actually follow through with it on any of their characters. So for me, I don’t feel like this story could be completely satisfying without someone(s) meeting their end. I’m definitely picturing some pretty cruel stuff coming up soon. Maybe not so much directly to the boys, but definitely in front of them at the least. They’ll probably find a way to get mixed up in part of it though :) I picture so many of the scenes of this story as the tiny boys always being inches away from death. What if Ms. Johnson missed her step by a little, or if she got a little too excited and squished someone by reflex. All these hugely massive girls constantly threatening the tiny people even if they have no intent to harm. That’s just the beauty of the size difference. It’s a natural breeding ground for suspense since death can happen so quickly and easily lol. Thanks for the comment and for following along!
Date: November 15 2021 8:39 AM Title: Story Teaser
Hmm, not what I expected, but it is kinda cool to see the themes of each chapter. And I’m assuming each chapter might have multiple parts too, right?
I guess since this chapter might be replaced, I will simply say which chapters seem interesting to me. Since “Thank you Alexis” just happened, I guess I will start with “pleasure”.
Now “pleasure” sounds like it’s a back to school lesson with Mrs. Johnson and she’s going to discuss what parts of the body create pleasure. Sounds like a fun chapter.
“Detention” and “teacher’s pets” seem like they go hand in hand. I love detention ideas so much that it’s even in my very own story as well. Teacher’s pet is usually a negative, but with Mrs. Johnson, it might actually be amazing.
“Girls night out” sounds like the nightclub scene you were hinting at.
“Midterms” seems crazy. Interesting to have each character to have their own chapter. I’m guessing they will be facing either a woman, or a body part. My guess is a woman. Liam, Gatlin and Noah have that timid nature so I’m excited to see how they will handle these midterms.
“Tutoring” sounds great, especially for a sex Ed class. Haha!
Then finally, there’s “Take home lesson”, “sex” and “Mrs. Johnson’s home” grouped together. I don’t know about you, but I read this as Mrs. Johnson does a take home lesson with a student using sex. And that sounds awesome.
Well, that’s my brief thoughts of these titles. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh yes, these are just the main chapter titles. I’m picturing that each chapter will be split into various parts. Some will probably be just one part but there will probably be others that will have three or four parts (take the “Spy Time” chapter for example). That's more just to help me to be able to post consistently. There will probably be some pretty cliche stuff here and there, but I think I’ve got a fair bit of “fresh” stuff up my sleeves too. Stuff kinda like the chastity cage idea and hiding a tiny under a toilet seat. The little things to bring a chapter together.
I’d say you’ve got a pretty good idea of the general feeling I’ll be going for with each chapter. The middle of the story will hopefully have some good character development and suspense building as we gear up for the finale. I’m sort of trying to mimic the feelings around an actual high school semester. At first there’s a flurry of excitement and nervousness. Then we settle into a groove and actually learn some stuff. Then Christmas break hits and we have a short burst of craziness. Then when we come back it’s a mad sprint to the end of the semester. There are also quite a few questions left unanswered right now so I’d like to have all of those checked off by the end as well. My biggest pet peeve with stories is most never really “end”. The author goes, goes, goes and then suddenly runs out of ideas and it’s over. I’m really trying to avoid something like that.
I’m really hoping that I can build everything up so the last 5 chapters make for an adrenaline packed ending so you’re left with the feeling of “what just happened”. I think the ending will really launch us into a sequel as well. I’ve been thinking a lot about the ending and I can’t really think of one that would be satisfying enough to justify an “end”. There really needs to be a second story to cover what happens next.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2021 3:56 AM Title: Story Teaser
This is exciting! Especially looking forward to what you do with some teacher vore! d84;
Author's Response:
Glad you’re as excited as I am! Teacher vore is a tricky one because having Ms. Johnson swallow a student would be crazy exciting... but is it too crazy? Decisions decisions. I would expect to see Ms. Johnson swallow at least someone by the end of the story though. Will it be a student? We’ll have to wait and see :) Even I don’t know for certain yet lol. I think that’s part of what makes the story suspenseful though. There’s a fair bit of uncertainty still left to figure out. Thanks for the support!
Date: November 09 2021 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Research Trip
Glad you came back this weekend again. I wish there was more perspective from when inside panties With more detail.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I came back too :) The smaller chapters are definitely more manageable. I feel like I've read this suggestion before lol. Noted and will continue to work on more detail. I'll be able to sort of make up for it in the next chapter. I think part of deliberately skipping some detail is I don't want to repeat myself too many times throughout the story. Being trapped in panties is great, but I also want to keep the story moving and not get caught up in similar scenarios every chapter. In this case though... agreed; more detail would've been good!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2021 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 12: Part 2
Honestly, I think I prefer these shorter chapters while they are released more often. That way I could understand the story and retain it a little bit at a time.
Also, these “short” chapters aren’t even that short. Lol. It feels like the typical chapter length for me as the average story on this site. I think there is enough content to discuss for each week and to describe in each review. But that’s just my opinion.
Ah, Calvin. I remember when Alexis rescued Trevor from Allison, I was wondering if she was going to rescue Calvin too. But she didn’t. She just took Trevor and ran to Mrs. Johnson. I guess she didn’t have time to get Calvin then or maybe there was some miscommunication.
There was also that scene where Allison is revealed to be the sister of Alexis and Alexis asked if they met Allison. I was surprised that she asked this since she already rescued Trevor from her. I thought it was clear they all met so I was confused why it felt like Alexis had no idea of it. Even during the soccer match several chapters ago, wasn’t Allison the one who got a tiny in her shorts while Noah and Gaitlin watched from the bench while Alexis was teasing them about it.
Or maybe Alexis was asking if they met Allison’s naughty side. I guess that makes sense too.
Also, I completely forgot Allison and Alexis are sisters. When Alexis rescued Trevor, Allison says “what’s up sis?” toward Alexis when she approached her.
In addition, in my previous chapter, I mentioned that I thought Alexis was super horny until she kept a pet that she didn’t use sexually. Well, now I remember that scene with Liam where she literally kept him in her panties in all her classes. Turns out, she’s just as horny, but does it all at school, haha!
Looks like both Allison and Alexis are both hot and horny so this should be interesting to see what happens when they all meet together soon.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Your reviews always keep me on my toes lol. So there are a few things going on with Calvin/Trevor/Alexis/Gatlin that I think I’ve written correctly based on the ending of Chapter 10 (but I’m far from perfect so you never know if I missed something). So the sequence that I have pictured is this… Allison takes Calvin and Gatlin, messes up Gatlin, then Alexis saves Gatlin and Noah, but Gatlin doesn’t tell her about Allison having Calvin until they’re in her bedroom in Chapter 12 (cue the drama). Alexis also doesn’t learn about the boys’ adventures until the bedroom because she was so busy chasing down everyone else. At the end of Chapter 10 Noah made the comment like, “go and save Trevor, we’ll fill you in on the rest later.” So we’ve now entered the “later” stage.
I think you’re definitely right about the meeting Allison stuff but I think I can wiggle my way out lol. This definitely could’ve been much clearer, but I think what I was picturing when Alexis asked if they “knew her” is if they knew her beyond just seeing her in the distance (like at the volleyball game). So “met her” is sort of Alexis’ way of poking the boys to see if Allison could’ve taken Calvin and got more intimate with them (since she didn’t know until now but potentially suspected). But yeah, kinda glossed over the details a bit there. Point of that part is Gatlin is having to remember who took Calvin and then Alexis fills in the details on who she is. If I go back and edit that part, I’d probably approach it like Gatlin knows who the girl is but is struggling to put a name to her, even though he knows he should know.
Alexis is an interesting character. I feel like she’s a “I need to be perfect” kind of person but then succumbs to her desires in surprising ways. We’ll sort of see why but I do plan on expanding on the question of “why wouldn’t Alexis use her tiny man for that?” Her character is almost meant to be that one who knows that abusing tiny people is wrong, but finds it too fun to avoid it altogether. There’s a real grey area in there of how much is too much. I think Alexis is also a lot more conservative than we realize. Noah, Gatlin, Ms. Johnson, and Alexis are definitely going to be the main focus now that we’ve got a solid team of supporting characters. The others will always be around though.
Let’s just say Part 3 is meant to be the climax of the chapter lol. Then we return to class and Ms. Johnson :) The events from and post changeroom will sort of always hover around in the story but we’ve pretty much finished with this sequence. Planning for Part 3 next Saturday which wraps up “Week 6” and then we’ll be into “Week 7” the weekend after. There’s about 21 weeks in a school year (including Christmas break).
Appreciate your review as always. Glad to see that the smaller chapters are working. 3000 words is a pretty good number to aim for when it comes time to break up what I’ve written. We’ll keep going with them for the time being.
Date: October 30 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 12: Part 2
Love that you updated. Small snippets are better than nothing. Thanks!
Date: October 24 2021 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12, Week 6: Thank you, Alexis
Please continue!! Can't wait for this to move forward
Author's Response:
Continue we shall! Really hoping to get a 1500 to 3000 word chapter/part out every weekend this winter. I think consistency would be good for everybody. Thanks for sticking with it!
[Report This]Date: October 24 2021 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 12, Week 6: Thank you, Alexis
Yes!!! You are back!
I thought this was going to be another forgotten story, I can't even express how happy I am to see another update to this story!
Im actually glad nothing too complicated happened this chapter because I had to remember who each character was and luckily, there weren't that many this time.
I do remember Shelby was the last one to know that they have a student while the other 2 giantesses have already been dealt with.
So Alexis has a tiny guy, but doesn't actually use him sexually? Wow, I'm impressed. I thought she was actually hornier than Mrs. Johnson, but to have her own pet and restrict him to being a friend is kinda cool. It's like an added trait to her personality. Well, now he is with Shelby and it was quite the sacrifice.
Looks like now things will settle down and it looks like the boys will have to explain themselves. While, I expect it to be a sort of sad scene, part of me wants them to be punished sexually. Lol. Man, I feel sadistic.
Either way, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh a forgotten story it is certainly not lol. I haven't been able to stop thinking about it even though I haven't had time to write. I'm in the process of overhauling my plans for the middle of the story since I've got my ending 90% planned out. Alexis has her deep dark secrets but nobody learns about someone's past until they actually get to know them :) I feel like each chapter will feel quite a bit simpler moving forward since they will all be quite a bit shorter. An 8,000 word chapter is really long and a lot can happen in that time. 2000 word chapters moves things along a little slower even though the content is the same. We'll see how it goes :)
Date: August 26 2021 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Research Trip
Keep up the awesome work!!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2021 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: Part 2
Wow! This chapter was wicked!
It's just a nonstop action thrill ride and I like it. I also liked how fast paced it was. Lots of stuff happened in this chapter so there's a lot to experience. I could only imagine what Brayden must've thought.
I didn't expect a gas chamber lol. Part of me thought she would piss or shit on him. Lol. But since this was the first thing we saw, I'm glad the fart scene was first since it was kind of an appetizer for what happens next.
I actually don't remember who Candice and Josephine were. Were they also students, because Brayden recognizes them, but I can't.
Whoa, the part where Mrs. Hulme was debating on what to do with Brexton was great. Those are some sadistic ideas. Wow. But the cage idea, wow. I've seen giantess couples use a condom to trap a tiny before, but this is the first chastity cage trap I have seen for a tiny. That's creative. Nice.
Hmm, I didn't even realize there were only 2 tiny women until this scene with Rachel. Since they are so expendable, I'm very surprised how Rachel didn't even use caution with the 2 ladies. And one of them even cracked her rib. While, it was a hot sequence, I'm still not sure why Rachel used the only 2 ladies she had for that.
I liked the next scene where Shawn literally fucks a tiny guy deep into Rachel. That's one heck of a death. It might actually be mercy compared to what happens if he was indestructible. Then he would have to face their wrath forever.
Wow, that Josephine vore scene was incredible. Loved how Rachel compared to her a cream filled donut.
Damn, the way Shawn and Rachel flirt with each is awesome. Especially when they thought a delivery guy showed up. Part of me actually wanted to see what would happen if a delivery guy actually show up. Would they invite him in, would she shrink him? They seemed very exited and Rachel even wore that sexy thong. Rachel is naughty, and I love it. If she didn't kill tinies so often, I wouldn't mind being her sex toy, haha. She just seems so horny compared to all the other giantesses and I find that amazing.
I can't believe Brayden was actually used by Rachel like that. I thought maybe he would up next and survive, or maybe he didn't get used tonight and she tells him that he is going to have some fun with her tomorrow. But the fact that Brayden got used and Alexis showing up at the last minute was crazy! Very entertaining too. If Alexis had any delays, Brayden would have probably died.
Hmm, I wonder if Alexis rescued Brody from Shelby yet. Last time we saw him, he was stuck in Shelby's shorts. I'm curious about his predicament now.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha well I’m glad it came across as a fast paced action thrill ride! I only have so many truly sadistic chapters in this story so I need to jam them full with as many of my ideas as I can. You were pretty close with your initial jar guess! You at least had the general region correct lol. I agree though, it was pretty tame in comparison to what followed.
So Josephine was one of the first tinies Brayden met when he was brought into Mrs. Hulme’s home (Chapter 11, Part 1). She was the one who had spent quite a while inside her home and was able to explain to Brayden how her house worked. Candice was the tall (for a tiny) blonde woman who Brayden was forced to have sex with in Chapter 10 (Part 2 or 3). Originally she was one of Jaimey’s personal tinies (purchased by her mother) but Jaimey never really liked her. Technically Jaimey still has ownership of Candice even though Mrs. Hulme has her right now. We’ll be seeing more of Candice in the future so right now she’s still sort of in her origin story phase. (Now that we’re 100,000 words into this, it’s actually becoming a mental puzzle to remember everything I’ve written haha).
Glad you appreciate some of those ideas. The part where Mrs. Hulme was brainstorming ideas was sort of my hint that these are all ideas that I would’ve liked to have included, but simply don’t have the space to write it all haha. Perhaps we’ll see a few of these ideas show up in the future or in another story. The chastity cage idea though… I don’t think I’ve ever seen that in a story or in a picture so I thought it would be pretty original and unique :) I quite enjoyed that part and it was one of the central ideas that was used to build the rest of the chapter.
I wondered the same thing about the two tiny ladies when I was writing this chapter and the conclusion that I came to is that it’s an effective way to show just who Mrs. Hulme is. Perhaps long term she should’ve kept them alive and well, but she was in the moment and wanted to use them, so she did. I like to think she’s the type of person who lives for danger and hanging on the edge. So by putting the two women in those perilous positions, it’s just a really quick way for her to get hot and bothered. Plus we’ll see in a few chapters that it really wouldn’t have mattered if she kept them alive or not (at least it won’t matter for her).
And then we really dive into the sadistic stuff with Mrs. Hulme. Indeed, this was quite a sequence of fun. Poor Josephine, just a mere cream filled donut. Although it wasn’t included in this chapter, I found it interesting to imagine what Ryatt would’ve been thinking at the moment Mrs. Hulme bit down. He had literally just came inside her (she had basically been his personal plaything for quite a while) and then she’s swallowed by the woman he worships. I do really enjoy Rachel Hulme’s character though. She’s so unlike anyone else in the story. I tried writing that last sequence with the reference to a delivery man so we’d wonder why they were getting so excited and naughty (cause I mean there are probably very few women who would answer the door in a skimpy thong lol. Granted they did JUST finish having sex so she would’ve still be buzzing). My questions were: Have they played with delivery men in the past (normal or shrunken)? Were they expecting a delivery (perhaps new tinies)? Those questions probably won’t be answered in the story, but they’re things that are sort of better if they’re left to the imagination.
There is also the question that wasn’t answered of, did Mrs. Hulme know who Brayden was? Because she really didn’t object to Alexis taking him away. She just made that subtle threat to Alexis. That question is also meant to be left unanswered, but I think we’ll be able to interpret the answer by the end of the story. It was definitely a shred-fest between Rachel and Shawn lol. In Part 1, Josephine made the comment that she thought there were about 50-100 tiny people inside their home. Then there was also a reference to them shredding 90+% of them. Kinda puts it into perspective just how crazy those two got. Brayden was actually fortunate he was one of the last and that Shawn started to cum just as he was pushed inside.
Next chapter will definitely answer your last question. I’m not expecting the next chapter to be as fast paced and wild as the last couple have been, but I think it’ll be a nice debrief. Who knows, I have one kinda fun and wild idea in mind but I may save it for a future chapter. We shall see. All the characters have sort of veered down different roads lately, so the next chapter will see those roads curve and join back together again.
We’ve seen a few chapters now with misidentities so I kinda want to explore some other ideas now. There were some kinda-sorta unaware scenes in the last few, but I still want to try my hand at writing some true unaware scenes. Those are the hardest to write, but usually have some big rewards.
Glad you’re enjoying it! I am too!