[Report This]Date: April 12 2023 6:13 PM Title: Quality Assurance
Pretty good story and novel idea. Of course Vortex would be the type of company and have the type of leadership which would look for scapegoats when issues arise. This was well written and executed, giving the different perspectives. Also, the story of poor Lars as he tries to desperately get the attention of his likely savior, only for her not to hear him over the conversation with her friend as she casually vores the tinys without giving them much thought. Pretty good.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I remember having a lot of fun writing this one. I always wanted to get back to Sabrina, only haven't gotten around to that yet.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2021 1:53 AM Title: Quality Assurance
“Quality Assurance” is another thought-provoking fiction. Your plot is well created. Ms. Thiele is a very wicked antagonist, the way that she cleverly manipulated Sabrina to do her heinous task is a reflection of your creativity and originality.
From an anatomy perspective, it could be a change for the better, if you would consider the usual food and drink of the protagonist. For example, if she is a vegetarian, the digestive progression would be awkward as the biological system isn’t accustomed to the meat proteins.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I also think Ms. Thiele makes for a good antagonist and was thinking about bringing her back at some point, though so far she only has a very short cameo appearance in the garage scene of "An American Nightmare". But the future is wide open ;-)
I do have plans for a story with a normally vegetarian/vegan pred as well, so that will also be something I'll write further along the line.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2021 6:10 PM Title: Quality Assurance
Wow! I am so happy I found your work, dude! All of your stories are great. "Quality Assurance" must be my favourite. It has everything in it that I love in a vore story. A Sweet and beautiful girl who eats lucky shrunken people with no remorse.
I love how you fluently exapnd the story into her relationship with her boyfriend. Not too detailed, but just enough to add to the insignificance of what fate awaits her lucky unwilling victims. Just a meal to be had to extract energy from to go about her daily life :)
The contrast between Sabrina being so remoresless and not sparing so much of a thought about the fact the she is eating alive human beings, albeit tiny, and her being a loving and caring girlfriend is so hot.
I love how you go in details of what is happening to Lars and the rest of his fellow colleagues inside her, while they slowly digest in the murky depths of her belly, and having to be tossed around in her stomach while she goes about her routine tasks or when she has sex with her boyfriend.Just perfect!
And at the end, once her body has mercilessy and painfully destroyed her tiny snacks, and extracted all useful nutrients from them, then follows the natural process of Sabrina unceremoniusly expelling their mangled and unrecognisable remains in her toilet.
I can't hype up enough how great this story is! :)
I'd really like to read many more stories from you! Please don't get doscouraged by the absence of reviews. IMO, this type of vore and explicit digestion stories are not everyones cup of tea, but I can assure you, your stories are among the best in the genre.
Thanks for making my day, dude!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words! I don't know what to say! :D
Yes, that contrast is what I'm aiming for in these stories. I always really like it when the preds don't give too much thought about their prey and just treat them like any other food. Glad to see my stories are being received so well. Story 6 is already finished, but I still need to translate it into English before publishing it! :)
The lack of reviews so far doesn't really bother me! I know these stories are fairly graphic even by vore standards and in fact, I've received quite a lot of positive feedback via DM and email. Given that the stories have only been online for about three months now, I'm actually quite happy with all the views they're getting!