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Reviewer: hillman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2022 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'd love to see more of this story or something like it.

Reviewer: shadowguy015 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

really nice

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this. Would love to read about Kory enjoying her friends. Maybe the succubus could track them down for seconds, or the magic wears off of Matilda since she's nor human, or a new character when Kory searches for help.

Reviewer: jessebona Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2020 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I could see a second chapter. It definitely sets itself up well for one. Especially if you want to throw in some normal sized person on double shrunk shenanigans.

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