Date: December 28 2020 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Hey! just wanna say I'm still excited to see more from you!
hope things are going well, merry christmas, and don't feel the need to rush
just wanted to let you know we're still loving your stories <3
Date: December 09 2020 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 6: It's a small world
Big fan of the story so far, definitely hoping for some more (and maybe rougher) play with the drive itself. Maybe even while they're aware? Keep up the good work buddy :)
Date: December 07 2020 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 5: Miss Worldwide
While I'm not normally into these 'simulated/flashdrive' world style stories, this one has grabbed my attention.
I've read some of your previous works, and am hoping this one gets a final chapter.
Jen's total lack of shits given about the tiny digital people and there world does amuse me, especially ones who are trying to fight against her control or protest.
Like.....she could smash your entire existance with a hammer, or change your very biological/psychological makeup with a few keystrokes, and you're gonna act like you have any kind of authority or bargaining power with her.....seriously.
I kept thinking of her inserting the drive into one of her holes, and somehow remotely connecting the drive while inside (maybe through wireless connectivety/bluetooth) and she gets off while telling them exactly where they are.
Date: December 05 2020 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Miss Worldwide
I don't want to say everything I like here, because otherwise it would be a very long text, so I'll talk about my favorite aspect.
The idea of r03;r03;an omnipotent goddess is already well used, and as much as history makes you believe that the goddess is omnipotent and untouchable, you almost never end up believing 100%, the story can talk about how badass the goddess is, how she has a thousand powers, how she can do what she wants, but still, you always end up thinking that this goddess is not that omnipotent.
This is because, in the vast majority of stories, the goddess is on the same plane of existence as the tinys.
Confused? Basically, if a goddess or giantess is on the same plane of existence as her victims, she logically can be touched by them, and as she can be touched, her brain unconsciously thinks that she can be hurt, however much the story forces she is invincible, this is something that lodges unconsciously in your head and never leaves.
And this is where the concept of her story shines, because in her, the goddess is NOT on the same plane of existence as the tinys, they cannot even see her.
She's like an unpredictable force in nature, she just changes their world with the push of a button, and they can't fight it.
The story gives an excellent idea of r03;r03;how weak and helpless they are, they cannot see her, touch her, fight her, all they can do is accept it, while her, in her own plan of existence, plays with them.
Date: December 05 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Just dropping ideas, not a review this time
I keep imagining some milf accidentally finding the drive and not knowing what's on it,,
Maybe jenny accidentally loses it and her friend finds it and decides to hang onto it until she sees jenny again? could lead to a lot of physical fun with the drive since she decides to carry it wherever she goes in case she sees jen!
Jenny brings it to a gym and accidentally leaves it in a locker room bench, the friend finds it...
the friend has it in her back pocket,, or maybe her gym bag,,
it really gets a rough treatment under that friend's care,,,,
and the friend is unaware that it has millions of people on it, as it's pressed into sweat-soaked panties or jean-clad ass
ooo or even the friend could have it in a front pocket as she has some fun! the drive bouncing around as she reaches in her unbuttoned jeans and fingers herself
there could even be a dramatic close call for a bad ending (or a real bad ending if you wanna wrap up the story at some point!) where the mother almost leaves it in her pocket as she's about to put the jeans in a washing machine!
feel free to mix and mash these ideas!
Date: December 05 2020 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Been pretty obsessively checking your profile once a day for about a year waiting for your uploads. In regards to the current story I'd definitely like to see her put that flash drive up her ass and go jogging.
Date: December 05 2020 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Good stuff. I wonder if this is setup for someone else finding the laptop)drive for a bit
[Report This]Date: December 01 2020 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lily
ooo I really like Lilly Jenny 2, I feel like she can be a nice, corrupting influence on Jenny, pushing Jen to play with her toy in more intentionally demeaning ways irl~
(I do feel like it would be good just for reading purpouses if she does go back to being called Lilly though, but maybe that's just cause idc much about mindplay or whatever it's called, do what you want of course)
I feel like there were a couple moments you could have gone into more detail on this chapter, last one you said the drive was on her crotch, above her robe, and in this one you said she took the robe off but you didn't really descibe much about her or what that meant. was the computer and the drive on her lap? just the computer? was the drive touching her crotch? what does she look like at that moment? (fingers crossed she has a thick bush <3) etc.
Jenny keeps mentioning other women I wonder if they'll show up in the story eventually?
I really like how this story is coming out!!! love it! can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2020 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 3: Liz and New Saintsville
I keep checking GiantessWorld hoping to see an update, I really like what you've written so far!
Author's Response:
Appreciate the kind words! And I'm definitely working on it c:
Date: November 15 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Great idea, excited to read
[Report This]Date: November 14 2020 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3: Liz and New Saintsville
I really like what you're doing!! the extrention cord was a good idea!!! I can def see your writing skill is growing :D
Date: November 13 2020 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Original idea!
Im keen to see where this is going.
Date: November 13 2020 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Chat with Liz
i love it. cant wait to read more
Date: November 13 2020 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Thanks for the response.
I think it's okay to cut to the reality-controlling mind-warping eternal idle torture parts, since thats what makes these stories great, but I think spending a bit more time on describing what is happening, how it looks, how the people involved feel etc. goes a long way toward making it feel more concrete and engaging than "then A happened then B happened then...". Feel free to hit me up for ideas or proofreading etc.
Date: November 13 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
I love your stories! I'd be intrested to see more physical intreaction with the thumb drive in one of these stories, (maybe she carries it outside the house, keeping it in her purse or panties? I think her being careless with it would make things intresting!) but anyway I'm excited to see more!
Date: November 12 2020 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Love all your stories. Hope to see this one get continuation.
Author's Response:
Yeah I'm sorry to you guys for not continuing a lot of these. The truth is I've been learning as I go, and as I've made stories I've done a bad job pacing myself. Instead of taking things slow and building up something substantial, I've gone right to person playing with reality, which is no good
I hope to pace this story better ^^
[Report This]Date: November 12 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
Love it so far! Maybe she playfully bullied the little reality treating it kind of like a game?
Date: November 12 2020 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Exposition
So cool! A news story from you, you are one of my favorite author there. Hope it will continue^^