Date: November 09 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: ZZ-World
What an awesome story! I love the concept!
There so few good stories with a shrunken city... which is the reason I wrote one myself.
Can't wait to read more from you!
I loved the way you described the terror of the shrunken people.
Thank you so much for your work!
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! Glad to hear you enjoyed the terror aspects of the small people! I typically lean towards macro characters in stories rather than just some micro beings, but I do have some more ideas for micro/nano size scenarios. We'll see what the future holds!
Date: November 09 2020 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: ZZ-World
So glad to have stumbled on this last night, and followed through reading the rest of your work! It's so good!
I loved the subtle and horrifying hint that these cities are pulled from our universe. We're the ones living in the terrariums for these giant aliens!
Super hot. The scene with the loogie was especially good and you're VERY good at describing foot related scenes. I'm impressed because all this time in the fetish I've read just about every foot scene imaginable and yet yours in this story and others manage to still be rather captivating.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I always appreciate comments since they can help show me what people like and what works/doesn't etc.
I'm pleased you liked the loogie scene. I'm a fan of some more conventionally "gross" stuff like that. For that scene in particular, I wanted to show just how pathetic the cities were in comparison etc.
I'm also happy you enjoyed the scene descriptions with feet and all that. At times I can worry I describe things too much, so it's nice to see some people enjoying the details and all that.
Thanks again for reading!
Date: November 09 2020 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 5: Starrborough
That was really good. I like the scenario and Eryn is a great giantesses.
It might have been nice to see her take her time with the cities a bit more, but I liked the fact that she was primarily interested in just killing them and getting on with it - it showed just how irrelevant she thought they were.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!
Yeah I was planning to imply more at the start that Eryn's original plan was to just dump bleach in the vivarium (e.g. by mentioning something swishing in her backpack) However, I wanted that bit to be as much a surprise as possible, so I neglected to do so. Even while having fun with it, their signifiance to Eryn was mostly a means to get back at the sororities.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: ZZ-World
I love this! Wouldn't mind seeing the universe again
Author's Response:
Hi thanks so much for reading! I must emphasize this story was loosely inspired by an image that is not my own (though I got their blessing to write a micro-civ story in a similar setting)
This was a very fun story to write though! I can see myself writing about more micro civilizations in this world. We'll see what the future holds!