Date: November 18 2020 11:09 AM Title: Entry 18: November 17th
Chapter End Notes:
So about Trevor's size. I would like to maybe make him a bit bigger so that he can participate in the story as more than someone the size of child. I'm open to opinions as to how much bigger (between 4'2" and 5'1"), or if a lot of people are opposed to him growing back some and want him to stay the same or get even smaller I'm up for that too if that's what y'all really want. Let me know if there's no strong feeling either way I'll just go with my gut.
If you want the MC to participate, then I think he has to be at least 5". If you want him to just watch, then he can be at any size below that because at the size the two futas will be at they will barely feel him.
Date: November 18 2020 10:54 AM Title: Entry 1: October 31st
Normally I wouldn't comment on these. But I definitely don't agree with raising his size after having read along with it up to this point. Personally, I would like to the shrinking happen almost indefinitely as I find there to be far more interesting interactions that can happen the smaller a character gets. However, while I would like to see him continue to shrink, I would rather him stay as written rather than suddenly get larger again. Normally I'd draw the line at around 1-2 inches in size for micro. But since they're also amazonian ladys. I wouldn't mind ending around half a foot in size by the end of the story.
And while my enjoyment comes from seeing the male character shrink and be compared or otherwise used in things of a more sexual nature, it's still you're story. I'll just suck it up and be sad with the changes, should they come about.
The exception to the change I suppose would be seeing as a lower review mentions with your commentary. That limit being broken. If the girls get much bigger, there's no real reason for him to get much smaller.
Date: November 18 2020 10:16 AM Title: Entry 1: October 31st
I'd say, he should become a good shota size, so around 4 foot 8
Date: November 18 2020 7:30 AM Title: Entry 18: November 17th
Keep him baby sized
Date: November 17 2020 8:09 PM Title: Entry 17: November 16th
You can keep them around the mini area for sure. I dont really care for the 50ft giantess stuff, but the readers may outweigh me on that. That said, they gotta cum at some point, right?
Date: November 17 2020 4:18 PM Title: Entry 17: November 16th
I love that you use so many fan suggestions for these entries and am honored you've picked mine.
Max's dick is now longer than most basketball players are tall. How is she not passing out when it gets erect?
Now this begs a question - Trevor comes into contact with the precum, he shrinks. Jenna got covered in it from Max, gallons according to you, is that going to make her have a bigger growth spurt? If so, could it be when they go to visit the parents? Like she gets all aroused seeing how tiny her parents look and now she's surging up even higher and her dick breaks through whatever pants she's in?
And if so, is this how Max keeps growing like she wants? Finding other Futas and having them cum on her?
Author's Response:
You know, I haven't actually considered what happens when a growing futa comes in contact with anothe growing futa's fluids. I've been trying to regualte Max and Jenna's growth a bit to keep them within the Amazon to small mini giantess range but if enough people want to see them break through that limit I might change that.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 4:09 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
Just wanted to say that I absolutely love what you have created here with your current story. I adore the dynamic between the 3 main characters, especially Max and Jenna "arguing" over Trevor and resulting in his double seat was extremely cute.
I just hope that we won't see more of characters like Carly, her 2nd part felt somewhat weird with the overall feeling of the story.
The dream sequences are until now pretty nice as a break and I guess we will soon have a dream with Trevor inside of the bean bags.
BTW does Trevor participate in NNN?
Suggestion: (possibly not Dream)
How about having Trevor tag along while Max is training, she could keep him in her cleavage while she runs on a treadmill or trains with weights.
Max doing push ups while Trevor lies under her (unorthodox Titfuck) and he slowly shrinks further and further or she grows.
Anyway,
Thank you for your work and please keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! I actually kinda agree about Carly. The serious writer in me felt that was the ultimate progression of her arc but yeah, it was akward to write and I was really nervous about the reception. As for Trevor and NNN, he was participating but the dreams he's been having lost it for him ;) if you're asking becasue you want him to take part in some action with other charachters I can say he probably will do so at some point.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 4:08 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
I'm honored that you used one of my ideas, and you executed it perfectly. Bot of my other ideas are free for you to use, but I'm also excited to see what yourself and others come up with. I'm looking forward to being surprised. I'm also glad that Max has gotten out of her shrinking funk. Now that she's officially the biggest human in the world, I wonder how long she'll choose to keep going. Still the whole month? Or will she stop before she gets too much bigger than Trevor?
I'm also hoping something hot happens with Jenna at some point. I know we have that confrontation with their father coming up, but so far she's had relatively little kink action going on with her. Maybe have her star in one of the dreams? It's up to you, honestly.
it was a great chapter all around. Can't wait for the next one tonight
Author's Response:
You ask all kinds of questions that I have to stop myself from answering, I don't want to give too much away. I will say that I have a plan for Max's growth through the rest of the month. Whether she stops or keeps growing I'll leave up in the air for now. There's defo gonna be an interaction with Jenna and her Father soon too. I do intend to get her more actively involed and now that Max's crisis is over hopefully that can be done.
Date: November 16 2020 3:25 PM Title: Entry 16: November 15th
Max is officially the biggest human on the planet with the world's largest dick. Surprised she has't torn through her clothes yet.
Jenna visiting her father should happen semi soon before she gets too big to fit in the house. Then again, her squeezing through that door and putting some cracks in the ceiling and such would make her father far less adversarial about the whole giantess thing.
Loving this so far.
Dream Sequence Idea:
Trevor is watching Max and Jenna work out. They're both only around the 6ft mark, but he watches them swell bigger and bigger as their muscles grow. Clothes tearing off of them; their cocks stretching further and further out. Their growth making them start jacking themselves off because at 9ft tall, they're just too horny.
And when he wakes up, its because he felt the heat coming off of Max and now he's watching her grow again as well as Jenna because they fell asleep on the couch while watching a movie. Poor couch never stood a chance. Trevor can be on Max's shoulder or something to avoid the torrent of precum making him shrink even further.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions! Depending on how many more I get in the future there's a good chance that everything that's been suggested so far will be included. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: November 15 2020 3:56 PM Title: Entry 15: November 14th
I love that Jenna is gonna try to get really huge before going to see her Dad, but I sure hope Trevor tags along for the meeting. I want to see how his parents react to her possibly 8ft Futa Daughter. Also might be a good scene to show some giantess rage on her. Or her boner rips through her pants. Or both.
I'd also love to see Max have a huge growth spurt as she's waiting for a little while. Maybe even while she's awake and Jenna and Trevor get to watch.
The thing I loved most about this entry is that Max and Jenna are having playful giantess arguments about who gets to hold Trevor while Trevor is just like "do I want giant tits on the left, or giant tits on the right? Why not both?"
I envy Trevor's position very much. Not the being barely over 3ft tall, but two giantesses pressing their boobs against him.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2020 4:35 AM Title: Entry 15: November 14th
Dream sequence, I love it! Now I said I wasn't going to make any more suggestions, but since you asked for input, I hope you don't mind, lol. One scenario I've always loved is the classic giantess-in-the-city type vibe. Maybe add in the military, but keep the giantess playful. Like Max is just doing whatever she wants, maybe she's crushing some cars, maybe she's just looking into a building to say hi, it could be whatever you feel like. But the entire time she's doing it the military is trying to stop her, and she barely notices their best efforts. She's just going along and having a pleasent day, maybe waving to the helicopters that are firing at her, and doesn't even feel them. I'd also like to see her flood a building, or maybe even a city, with her cum. That would be hot.
Another idea? Have her or Jenna be a giantess queen sitting naked on a throne, with dozens of tiny people around tending to her body. Some could be licking her feet, others could be massaging her nipples, and finally a good portion are servicing her cock, and she's giving orders about which person should be doing what for her body.
One final idea that I've had, which I've wanted to see done with an Amazon specifically is this: have the military try and keep Trevor apart from Max. Max, meanwhile is still just an amazon, and she's looking for Trevor because she needs him to help her get off. And she's just casually walking through whatever is thrown at her. Bullets don't hurt her, reinforced steel doors are like paper to her, no amount of men can hold her back. She's just unstoppable, and it's all so easy for her. Finally she get's to Trevor and sets him to work.
Use all of them or none of them. Whatever appeals to you for writing, it's cool with me. Keep it up, dude.
Author's Response:
There's definitly some good stuff in there! I'm not gonna say what if any comments I plan to use or why, just to keep things interesting and to avoid stepping on any toes. But as always, thanks for the feedback and suggestions! We've still got half the month to get through they really help to keep me motivated.
Date: November 13 2020 11:43 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Loving it so far.
The comparison to bean bag chairs makes me want to see a scene where Trevor sits on Max's balls.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2020 9:10 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Great addition! It's awesome to get to see a bit more of this world's futa community, hopefully we'll get to see these characters again and more :)
I did want to point out though, I think your weight calculations are a bit off. Max was listed as 450+ pounds a few days ago, and now she's 350? I figure you're already aware, but a doubling in height would mean an eight-fold increase in weight, or even more if she's getting buffer or better endowed.
The best way to do it would probably be (base/prior weight)*(percentage increase in height)^3, and tag on a dozen or so extra pounds for the additional appendage growth :P
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks for pointing that out. I have all of this in one big document an sometimes I accendentally referance the wrong chapters when looking for her current stats. I'll fix that right away.
Date: November 13 2020 5:30 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
Haha. I love that you added the growth part. Would love to see one with Jenna!
If Max's dick gets any bigger, it'll have to apply for citizenship. Surprised she's lasting so long. Will there be any rage on her part? Or Jenna's? That's a lot of testosterone going through them. I find it hard to believe that Carly is much of an outlier.
Would love to see Trevor's parents interact with a growing Jenna as well. Gonna be hard to be the man of the house when your daughter has a dick measured in feet.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2020 5:04 AM Title: Entry 13: November 12th
A nice little bit of world building. I like it. It's nice to see the better side of the futa community. It's easy to have one encounter, like Carly or that drunk asshat, paint one particular side as trashy, and only have the protagonists be the exception. But, at least from the futas side, we get to see the better half of the community. I very much liked both women, and I wouldn't mind at all seeing them interacting with our two friends again. That's just the gentle giantess lover in me speaking. I've always loved friendly and jovious interactions between those with immense power and those without. And if they get a feature with some sexy action? Well both scenarios are up to you in the first place. All in all it was an enjoyable piece of world building, and the beginning was a nice bit of tease. It's obvious most of your readers here are waiting for the big climaxe (haha), and it's those little reminders that let us know 'hey, eventually Max is gonna burst'. I look forward to when that happens. I actually hope you continue this a little bit passed NNN. Only because there's so much potential for material once Max no longer has to worry about holding her orgasms back. I'd like to see what she does once that weight's off her shoulders.
Date: November 12 2020 8:01 PM Title: Entry 12: November 11th
I have been reading this story every single time it gets updated and I am never disappointed. I hope to see a scene with the girls growing. Like Trevor or his dad walk in on Jenna while she is asleep and watch her grow a few inches and her dick break out of her pants or Max tears through something because she's so huge.
I like buff girls growing, if you can't tell.
Date: November 12 2020 8:01 PM Title: Entry 12: November 11th
I have been reading this story every single time it gets updated and I am never disappointed. I hope to see a scene with the girls growing. Like Trevor or his dad walk in on Jenna while she is asleep and watch her grow a few inches and her dick break out of her pants or Max tears through something because she's so huge.
I like buff girls growing, if you can't tell.
Author's Response:
Oooooh, that is a good idea!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2020 7:28 AM Title: Entry 12: November 11th
I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter why she'd only grown six inches, I guess I know now! Hopefully Max can break out of her slump, she's only a couple of inches from beating out the biggest futa on record!
I gotta say too, Jenna is growing REALLY fast. It's been two days and she's 6' already. If she keeps that up, she's really gonna give Max some competition for the tallest human.
Also, definitely love the longer chapters. I wasn't expecting this much plot from this, but it is definitely appreciated :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! There's big things comming, we got new charachters new confessions and maybe even some real action before the month is up ;)
[Report This]Date: November 10 2020 2:36 PM Title: Entry 10: November 9th
Well now things are getting even more interesting, what with the introduction of a new futa. I'm sensing some potential conflict, but anything could happen so that's not entirely certain. But you've now got me curious for the future. I do wonder what the size difference between the two will end up being, now that Trevor is shrinking while Max grows. Also the foot action was nicely done. Nothing really too crazy, but if you're not a foot fetishist then I can't fault you for only including small doses. In fact if you're not into feet at all then I'm flattered you included any kind of content. Things like that don't go unnoticed or unappreciated by an audience.
One last thing I wanted to mention, and I promise this will be the last suggestion I make, I really don't want it to seem like I'm telling you how to write your own story. But I noticed you've got your main characters set up in quite a tight corner. It's clear that you'd like to explore and experiment with them, but you have to limit yourself because Max can't cum for the rest of the month. If at any point you want to do any kind of sexual exploration (not saying you have to, but just in case you want to) you could always make use of Max and Trevor's weird dreams and do a dream segment chapter. It would give you free range to do anything you want, without jeporedizing Max's NNN commitment.
Anyway keep up what you're doing. I liked your last two Growing Closer stories and I'm sure as hell loving this one, so don't do anything you don't want to do yourself. It'll be much better that way.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2020 2:28 PM Title: Entry 9: November 8th
Well either you wrote that chapter especially for me, or we're just on similar wavelength's. Either way I loved it, and I'm honestly surprised I don't see more stories like that on this site. Despite how everyone talks about their fetish, and the particulars they like, I think a common unspoken fantasy most of us share is the fantasy of having a giant girlfriend (in real life just a girl out of our leagues) who would care deeply about us. So when I see that written about, I just think it's the coolest thing. So yeah, five stars on this. And the expressions they used towards each other were beautiful.
Now I'm left curious as to where the story is going to go. Is Max going to make it the whole month? How big is she going to get? What will take place while she's growing? I could speculate but at this point I kind of want to keep things a surprise. I doubt we're going to get to see her turn into a full fledged giantess (unless it's in another dream), so anything else at this point is on the table. So long as I get to see them keep being an awesome couple, I'm here for it.
Though I wish them luck with their sex life. They've long (haha) since missed the window where Max could fit inside Trevor without killing him. They'll have to get creative.
Author's Response:
Definitly similar wavelengths though I'm not gonna lie your last comment did help me focus in on the engery I wanted to bring for this entry. As for the rest, yeah, no spoilers ;).