Date: October 25 2020 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I actually really loved this story for two reasons.
1) I HAD THE EXACT SAME THING. I went so far through the MSQ before attempting to progress in the Grand Company
2) There are some very intersting height differences between the races in the game. I'd love to see you continue this and include some interaction with other races. At a height of 16 feet, a 3 foot Lalafell would hardly come up to her knees.
Author's Response:
Firstly happy to hear you liked it!
Secondly, yes and then you have to go back and unlock some side dungeons that you never knew existed to advance in the company. Oh well, useful for leveling Dark Knight on the side haha.
Yeah, Elezen being one of the tallest races was definitely a draw for me there. Its so funny watching a cutscene and she has to loom over Alphinaud. That and also elves. I dunno if I'll write another one of these but if I do I'll definitely have some height differences there.
Date: October 25 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
A very nice read! A good show of power indulgence and disparity despite the overall size difference not being too much. It's a very fun and well-written story and definitely far from dumb I'd say!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it, yeah mostly power fantasy with some size dashed in there but seems like it worked well!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2020 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Honestly this was more of an empowerment story than strictly a size story, though obviously the two are related. And aside from that it was almost more of a comedy, but I don't think that necessarily makes it dumb, so much as clearly a FF14 Fanfic.
The descriptions of exactly how Kazuma was disintigrating her enemies really let the reader imagine what kind of power trip she was going through. On the flip side, the way she just waded through enemies was also effective. The idea that her ring was stronger than the boss was actually probably my favorite scene.
Overall, good work Private.
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you enjoyed! And yeah, way more of an empowerment story but me being me I was like hey lets throw in some size.
Also its Sergeant Kazuma now thank you very much! Backtracking was totally worth.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2020 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another wonderful story, this time delving into the world of MMOs! I really enjoyed reading it and had a lot of laughs along the way, mixed in with the usual wonderful lewdness. I had something quite similar happen way back when, so seeing Kazuma go through the same trials and have to re-slog through everything was incredibly amusing.
It was a neat concept seeing the sizeplay woven in with the already-wonderful concept of being incredibly overpowered, and was a pretty wonderful one-shot all around. Thanks again for writing it!
-Jess
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you enjoyed it! It was quite fun to write. I could have just ignored it but ugh, being called Private in later game cutscenes is like okay no need to figure out how to fix that. Hey, it lead to good things at least haha