Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2021 12:25 AM Title: Fun time with Leanne

Wow, my only complaint is that I don't really like farts and I wish that Dave had been shrunk immediately! 

Other than that, though, I love this premise! It's so good and such an underrated concept in this fetish! The humiliation in one straight man being shrunk and owned as another man's toy, his old life of being his own man completely stripped away, is just too good in my opinion... 

I sincerely hope that we see a lot more foot content when he inevitably shrinks! 

 

When he does shrink, I absolutely cannot wait for Dave to look up in horror and see his former best friend's massive form towering over him as he is tiny and helpless at his owner's massive feet. As the giant's hand reaches for him, he'll realize that this whole "slavery" thing is gonna be a lot longer than he thought! He is now nothing more than another man's toy; no longer to have a career, hobbies, leisure time, friends, family, or a love/sex life... for the rest of his life! 

 

Also, if it hadn't been for Dave saying that he has a thing for Leanne, then I was gonna ask if you could please make it so that Dave has a girlfriend!!! (Though you could still tweak it to make it work) 

It would be so great if Danny casually remembers that his toy has a full-sized girlfriend, and muses what she would think of her man now? Dave would be horrified and beg to not let her see him like this, or even to let him go for her sake, making his owner laugh and get a better idea. 

I would absolutely LOVE the humiliation of Danny inviting Dave's girlfriend over to show him where her beloved boyfriend has been all this time, only to remove his sock and show her that her darling lover, due to his poor betting habits and a contract, is now his tiny slave and toy indefinitely, but that she can borrow him when he lets her~ ;) 

I wonder what the caring and fearful girlfriend would think, knowing that her love is now nothing but a toy to be played with by not just another man, but another woman too, and anyone else his owner lets play! It's so hot... 

But I'm getting ahead of myself! Oh, if you could please consider that, that would be amazing! 

 

In any case, I'm definitely intrigued to see this story progress!! 

Good work! 

Author's Response:

Hey man, thank you for the fantastic review!

 

I will admit the primary focus of the story will be ass related content but I'm working on the next chapter just now and it's mostly foot stuff which will feature throughout including once Dave shrinks. 

 

I had considerd the girlfriend angle or possibly or another girl he has a history of not getting along with but I'm thinking on saving that for another story at this stage and keeping this to Danny and Leanne with the main focus being on Danny as that's where the real humiliating relationship is. 

 

Again, thank you for the great review and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2020 7:29 AM Title: Chores and the life of furniture

Great stuff  

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2020 11:53 PM Title: The beginning of a new life

Can't wait for more.