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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2023 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I loved it. Just the right amount of buildup and suspense. I loved the girl’s bipolar personality and her casualness at the end. Very good writing with entertaining dialogue.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2021 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg!!! What a tremendously brilliant example of creative writing. Dam lucky guy! Why an't such a moment of Nirvana happen to me for real instead of my totally blind but boundless gift of imaginings.

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