[Report This]Date: November 12 2023 6:12 AM Title: The Devil in Carmen
Sad to see how little tinies' lives are valued in this universe.
But I must admit it's kind of hot at the same time😏
[Report This]Date: November 12 2023 6:09 AM Title: Sophia's Last Day
Underrated Gem. Love the fact she's pregnant as well. Usually, pregnant women are expected to become softer and gentler throughout pregnancy but it looks like the opposite is happening here 😏
[Report This]Date: January 12 2021 4:19 AM Title: A Really Bad Day At Work
Another great chapter! A great mix of motivation, suspense and action. I think the suspense element of your writing is your strongest suit. My only criticism is that I think you could actually build out these scenes a bit more. Like I think an extra para on the bagel scene would have been perfect.
Author's Response:
Really good point, thanks for mentioning that! And thank you for reviewing the story, glad you liked it :)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2020 8:02 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
This is absolutely delightful, thank you very much for writing this story~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That means alot coming from someone who also has so many great stories I've enjoyed over the years.
Date: October 03 2020 8:47 AM Title: Sophia's Last Day
Intesting concept for a giantess story. Also, I'm kinda surprised she doesn't just use any of the tinys for butt pleaseure to sate any cravings outside of food, if you get my drift. Even if she's pregnant, I'm sure she's horny as hell from all this.
Author's Response:
I suppose that would be true... ha! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2020 9:58 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
Wow, this is the best writing I've seen in a while! I'm looking forward to seeing what she's gonna do to the other tinies. Keep up the good work, friend.
Although I wish she had swallowed Kevin whole and not chewed him first. But that's just me...
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks a lot! I appreciate the kind words. The other tinies are definetely in for a world of hurt, haha! Also, I enjoy both kinds of vore, but the next chapter will have soft vore in it. Hope you enjoy!
Date: September 28 2020 2:27 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
I really like it ! She thinks of herself as a queen gradually, when she is just a casual housewife. Sad that the tiny died at the end, maybe that an interesting relationship would have emerge ^^
Also I really like the fact that the tiny is here to serve, like cleaning the floor, when cleary this will take forever, and that the housewife could have do it in a matters of minutes. This kind of inequality before work is very fun.
Hope to see more !
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for leaving a comment about what you enjoyed. I appreciate that! I really like that inequality factor as well, it's part of the power/subjection interaction that I like with size change stories. And here's a little piece of advice: don't get too attached to any of the tinies in this story. ha!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2020 3:07 AM Title: Sophia's Last Day
I don't like pregnant women either, but this is really goog writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it, even if she is pregnant.
Date: September 27 2020 7:42 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
Look forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. More coming soon!
[Report This]Date: September 27 2020 6:05 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
Cool start to the story. I enjoy that Carmen isn't reflexively cruel, more so just flippant. She cares about what other people might think but not that highly on the life of tinies.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's my favorite personality of a giantess, so I'm glad it came across well. Thank you for reading!
Date: September 27 2020 4:24 PM Title: Sophia's Last Day
I don't like fantasizing about pregnant women, but this story is so well-written that I will follow it. I was just a little sad about Sophie dying so soon, but at least I didn't have the time to grow affectionate to her XD or I would have felt bad
Author's Response:
I'm usually the same way, haha. But I kept thinking that it would be an interesting plot device, but it's not something I'm going to overly focus on. Regarding Sohpia, I knew the "tiny" from the first chapter was going to die. But as I wrote Sohpia's character and fleshed out her personality, I felt a little bad when she died too. Thank you for you comments about the writing. If you're willing to read through something you're not particularily fond of because the writing is good, well then, that makes me feel good about the quality of it.