[Report This]Date: December 24 2022 5:58 AM Title: Passion
Yea Sarah is pushing it. That line where Carley said she'd have to be bigger to take her on, was she just teasing or was she implying a potential limit? I'd assume not. Also, does she have a limited amount of magic?
Author's Response:
I think, in my mind, Carley is sort of akin to Saitama in One Punch Man. The story is less about the potential for someone stopping her and more about all of the people who fall victim to her magic. Carley has no reason to be legitimately threatened in any way, but that doesnt mean that Sarah shouldn't pay attention to the dynamic of her friendship of someone so dangerously unbalanced and powerful.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2022 2:11 AM Title: Clubbing
Sorry I keep asking about Derrick. He's such an enigma to me rn lol. Love seeing twerking scenes in this type of content btw it's still pretty rare unfortunately. And for some reason, I can't help but feel like Sarah is finished in one way or another. Like, she's getting TOO comfortable with Carley.
Author's Response:
No worries, I'm happy you've taken an interest. Derrick was added a bit late in my story planning, because initially this story was going to be lite on the story and heavy on the fetish content. However, I'm enjoying building out the narrative a bit more so I'm trying to build some background for our main character. We'll learn more about Carley's history as we move forward.
And Sarah is definitely playing a risky game. Carley is using her as a conduit for the sake of fighting her ever growing boredom. But she is a fickle and emotionally unstable powerhouse who wouldn't hesitate to do terrible things if you take just one step too far. Thanks for the continued interest!!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2022 12:16 AM Title: A Night on the Town
Who knew evil was so cute?
Author's Response:
Adorable...yet terrifying :)
[Report This]Date: December 07 2022 4:07 AM Title: A Night on the Town
Wait if Carley can go outside the flow of time to manipulate causality, then whatever the fuck Derrick has for magical defense must be op lol. I'm imagining he maybe became an archaeologist or something (since he should be in his late 20s too) and found an artifact or some kind of item that allowed him to be immune to magic overall.
Nice chapter 👍🏼
Author's Response:
We'll shed some light on derrick here soon. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
[Report This]Date: December 05 2022 4:14 AM Title: Getting Ready
Ah blossoming love, Sarah and Carly are gonna be alright!
Author's Response:
We'll certainly see about that. Be careful not to fall in love with a witch. No good can come of it!
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2022 8:38 PM Title: Memories
I went back to the beginning to really understand the world building and I'm assuming the reason why Carley can't just essentially make herself President and do a nationwide look for her brother is because the government has witches that may be more powerful than her?
Centuries of witches working for the government had to make for extremely powerful counters besides just the mystic nullification that parents get.
I wonder will Amanda's perception be manipulated and will she stay unaware throughout the whole series.
Also, crackhead theory but I'm gonna just say I think this story is gonna end with her becoming some sort of deity that allows for witches to be on top and for her to make people witches(like Sarah).
Author's Response:
There will is some context coming down the line that will shed some line on Carley's relationship with the BSA. What good would the story be without some sort of antagonist? There isn't a tremendous amount of story building in the earlier chapters, simply because this story was meant to just include an excessive amount of giantess content. However, as I'm progressing with the story, I'm building up the world a bit more. Glad you're enjoying it so far.
Thanks for reading!
Date: December 02 2022 1:20 PM Title: Fetch
Seems like her powers def have limitations other than the sacrificing of one's own lifespan to increase another's. She can't just teleport anyone in front of her. She needs to see them or seems to need a conduit (like the Bermuda Triangle). Wonder if she could do a clairvoyance thing that makes a trail to him but simply sees this as "hide and seek".
Ngl I also think the whole cursing thing comes from the whole family I never had mindset too where she is essentially acting like a kid but acts much older with her peers at college.
Also, how old was she in that flashback?
Author's Response:
I think the extent of Carley's powers will become more clear as the story progresses, but for now I will say that Carley not being able to locate Derrick is very strange to her. If she wanted to teleport anyone else to her location, there's no reason that she couldn't, so the fact that she seems to be unable to do so with Derrick is part of what is fueling her desire to finally locate him.
And in the short flashback, Carley was very much still a child, just one with reality bending abilities. So at that point she was acting childish because she was very much a child. In the present, she's not necessarily trying to act childish around her parents. But rather, she is putting on a show to amuse herself. She calls Jason 'daddy', even though both of them know that she doesn't respect him like a father and feels nothing but disdain for him. She acts more normal with Sarah and Amanda because she has, seemingly arbitrarily, chosen them to be her friends and treats them as such.
Hopefully that clears up some confusion. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2022 11:48 PM Title: Fetch
Love this story! Carley is awesome. Jason should consider himself lucky to have the privilege of being his daughters couch cushion.
Author's Response: Truly his good fortune is wasted on him! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2022 10:50 PM Title: Fetch
Witches are truly unstoppable, Salem was full of shit.
Author's Response:
Thats the thing about witches. If you're going to kill them, you had better kill them all. A vengeful demigod with limitless power is not the sort of enemy that you want, as Victor learned in chapter 9. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2022 1:35 PM Title: Dinner time
Interesting implications for her character here. I wonder if it's a "I want the family I never had" situation. I'm assuming her brother snitched in the first place so she's gonna get him back.
Author's Response:
There will be some more clarification in the next few chapters that will give a bit more context, but the full background probably won’t be revealed for some time.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2022 7:22 AM Title: Dinner time
Always great to see this.
Author's Response:
Much appreciated, I began to read back through it a week or two ago and realized how much I liked the characters. Some of the chapters coming up are rife with giantess content and I’m excited for the community to read them! Thanks for reading!!
Date: June 13 2021 8:01 AM Title: A Fresh Start
Love this, and hope you pick it back up eventually! Carley is quite the bitch, and I wouldn't have it any other way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, it’s a been a while but I’ve got several chapters that will be going up in the coming weeks. Hopefully they’re worth the wait. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2020 4:25 PM Title: Testing the Waters
Super story ♥♥♥
Author's Response:
Much appreciated, thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: December 11 2020 4:13 PM Title: Showing Off
This is definitely my favourite chapter so far. I love it.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2020 4:11 PM Title: Testing the Waters
I wasn't into the snot stuff at all this chapter. The butt stuff was nice, but there really wasn't enough of it. I hope to see more soon.
I also have a request - it was teased in Losing Control that a tiny person could survive travelling through someone's entire digestive system. I was so disappointed when that never ended up happening. I'd love to see it in this story.
Author's Response:
Check out my other story, Losing Control. I've got a few full tour chapters coming up in the next couple days. I think you'll enjoy it
[Report This]Date: December 11 2020 4:08 PM Title: The Grass is Always Greener
I gotta say, I'm not into Carley threatening her tiny victims with non-sexual punishments. It's kind of hard to stay into a story when a woman is describing teleporting someone into a volcano.
I prefer it when each of a vicims' punishments, and every threat made by the victimizer, are tied to specific fetishes. I can't imagine anyone has a fetish for being teleported into a volcano. Sure, people are into the feeling of being dominated and unable to control the situation - but this feeling can be achieved in far more interesting ways.
I'm glad someone was finally turned into an ass freckle, but not much was done with it afterwards. I'm not into feet, so I can't really comment on the rest of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Ehhh, sometimes Carley is just going to be cruel for the sake of being cruel. When she's in a good mood or being playful, the torments will be primarily sexual. But with the people she really hates there is going to be more sinister and cruel torture purely for the sake of being cruel.
Honestly this whole story is a bit experimental for me. Im not accustomed to writing just purely fetish chapters so I'm gonna end up trying to work in some character building, in whatever form that might take. We'll see how it turns out and hopefully you enjoy what's to come!
thanks for reading!!
Date: November 26 2020 5:21 AM Title: Exploring Campus
This chapter made me wonder if you read the novel "Freeze Tag" by Caroline B. Cooney as a kid.
Author's Response:
I can't say that I ever did. I wasn't much of a reader growing up.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2020 11:34 AM Title: A Fresh Start
That chapter was done beautifully. Using poor Amanda as a torturer. With that much nuance. Truely evil.
Author's Response:
Much appreciated!!! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2020 5:26 AM Title: Testing the Waters
Carley is delightfully evil.
Author's Response:
Yea she's a real bitch haha
[Report This]Date: November 19 2020 12:49 PM Title: The Grass is Always Greener
Omg that was an amazing chapter! I'm glad to see you continuing this story. The possibilities are endless and Carley is so evil. Hope you continue!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, hope it was worth the wait!