Date: April 24 2022 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: Finale
NANOMACHINES SON!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 3: Infused
I just reached chapter 4, and I gotto say that this reminds me of Akira and I love it for it
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
I've seen and enjoyed Akira, but believe it or not it wasn't something I actively thought of when writing this. It's a great movie for sure though!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
Great story. Maybe for a spin-off/sequel you could have Goddess Saki eons later after remaking and ruling the Universe. There Saki could reanimate Earth and string Erica along to think she succeeded in her plans. Now ready to expand beyond Earth, only to later be in for a big surprise.
Look forward to reading more of your work regardless if you do a squeal or not. Thanks
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for your review!
That's an interesting idea and I'll keep it in mind. I don't typically think of doing sequels, but we can see what the future holds!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
Friend of mine forwarded this to me and said this was the most Books story he'd read in terms of taste, moreso than the stuff I myself write so was enough to pique my curiosity. I can safely say he was correct, this is indeed very much in line with my tastes.
I'm quite impressed with the creative use of nanomachines as well as it honestly being less of a size story and more a power fantasy with size inside of it. The size is an aspect of the powers sure but its not so much the ultimate ability. That in itself is quite lewd in the context that this other being is on another level of evolution from the beings around them. Not a lot of things I read capture that which is quite nice. You've also jump started me into writing something in an attempt to capture a similar feeling, haven't had another story do that so that alone I think is great.
Heartily recommend to those reading reviews if you enjoy the above as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading my story and sharing your thoughts!
I've read a few of your stories: all great!
Your kind words are very appreciated, and yes, I was definitely going for a power focus. Size is kind of a very obvious form of it, but I tried to have Saki explore more aspects than just her bigness. I'm happy that seemed to work out!
Very pleased to hear you will be writing something with a similar feel. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: Finale
Wow, that was long for only a week of writing. The nanomachines and the ending remind me of "Working for the Smiths" mixed with "Not the One", but the story itself is the kind of rampage that got me started reading this sort of material. Rampages are criminally underrepresented in today's stories.
I do sort of feel like Eirica, shouldn't have been offed immediately. Saki hated her so she should have made her endure Saki's day out. It would have been nice to read her perspective as her hard work is stolen and utilized by someone else, or her trying desperately to regain control of the situation but coming up short.
Ideas:
Switching between multiple small perspectives and one growing perspective as a woman ascends.
A reluctant giantess who slowly loses it because of the world's treatment of her.
A a couple in a relationship try to make it work as the woman goes through some changes.
A technologically advanced humanity encounters a race of giant women, the goddess at the center of the milkyway galaxy, etc
Two women trying to reach larger size/ goddesshood with buildings, cities, countries, worlds in the crossfire.
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for the review. This was a long story, true, but this was also an interesting case since I had the idea for a nanomachine-based giantess for awhile now. So, when I finally had time to write it, I already thought of a few things she might do etc. Outlines also really help for writing a story since they can keep you on track and focused.
That's an interesting perspective regarding Eirica. The flip-side is that Saki was also pretty gleeful to move on from the mean boss she had, I feel. At least, that's partially what I was going for. You are right in that there could be more of the whole "stolen apotheosis schadenfreude" if Eirica sticked around a bit longer, but I feel as though that might be a little more petty than Saki might be personality wise.
Thanks for your ideas by the way. I will keep them in mind, but I typically go with my own ideas for stuff.
Date: September 08 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
I loved this story. The twist in the first chapter had me hooked throughout, and the ascendence to Godhood is so well done. I love that she still kept her personality throughout
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comment! I am delighted to hear the twist is well received, and that her personality seemed consistent. I'm especially pleased you enjoyed the first chapter, as I thought a slower buildup to the size content than in my other works might cause some to lose interest. So, thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2020 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginning
A really really really sadistic and destruction filled size story, it litterally has most of my unknown fetishes here. It's also really entertaining if you just want to go read a size fetish story without outlandishly plot, this one is really straightforward. And I adore it for that
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment! I wanted to make sure all the nanite-related things were understood, so I stayed away from anything too complicated plot wise.