Your book is amazing, and the suspense is killing me! I pray to God you are done with whatever it is you are going through and give us the next chapter!

Sorry for taking so long!I forgot to check for a while hahahaha

Okaaaay so you were right in telling me to watch out for Nell. Her having the same desires as Naomi, but hiding them so Anabelle wont dislike her is...interesting, I have to say is a lot more than I gave her credit for, though I still like Naomi more. 

And talking about Naomi, things got tense with chef Dufort, poor Camilla and Naomi being incredibly petty. I'm really happy that Anabelle managed to get a win, finally, and save her, at the cost of...giving hell toa child molester??I seriously dont get Anabelle sometimes. If I was her, and had been so horriblu bullied, no one would ever get me to shut up, I would be bringing hellfire to Zoey and all the bullies. But oh well, I guess she has her reasons. And oh my god Zoey keeps getting worse and worse and more abusive, obsessed and deranged. And Naomi is not far behind, though Naomi is better because she would never beat Anabelle.

Im still kinda starving from Naomi content, too much Nell, more Naomi hahahaha enjoyed the chapter!

(First of all, I don't speak English, and my knowledge of it is low, so if something is wrong, or is not understood, there is the reason)

This is without a doubt one of the stories, not just about giants, that has hooked me the most. So much so that I fear for Annebell, with everything that has happened before and during the story, I genuinely wanted SHE to have a happy ending, or at least a healthy one 😢, but I don't know, the more I read, the more I get the feeling that the writer is going to give us an average ending between good and bad at best (and yes, the bad part at the end would be taken by Ann).

The interactions between Nell and Anna are the most wholesome in the story, the dynamic they have really shows against the madness of the rest of the people Anna is forced to interact with any given day. The splinter scene was the most genuinely kind moment Anna has seemingly had since entering the Fearsome Foursome's homes.

Nell leaving her foot on Anna does leave me pause but I do also sort of hope if Anna can't escape this nightmare scenario she ends up with Nell. Poppy is definitely a monkey wrench but the extended foot smother while worrisome for Anna seems like something they could both come to enjoy together in life. Like maybe we've lowkey discovered a lifelong friendship/pairing of two people shit on by life who finally have somebody else to make their own better.

The music scene was also rather touching since it was something FOR Anna to enjoy versus something for Anna for the FOURSOME to enjoy. It also helps Nell learn a new skill that she might be good at and increase her self esteem with Naomi and the others routinely knocking it down whenever they can.

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Byte is fearless like a tiny Batman.

Ready to face danger at the drop of a hat to help the cause of the tinies in this tragic laden world they find themselves in. He definitely cut it a little close with Naomi waking up but his exit skills are to be commended. 

I do hope they manage to free Daria and her people though, the more allies they can muster for the cause is surely beneficial to the mission when fighting literal titanic killing machines with no moral compass.

As for the big day I am sure it will be onmious and another moment of terror for poor Anna's memory banks if the Foursome or their families are involved. Whatever it is they have planned for tomorrow hopefully Nell will be there to brighten her mode after the ordeal that is surely to come.

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Well fuck there seems to be a lot to unpack here...

The dinner scene was as gruesome as I was expecting highlighted by Naomi piercing the guys skull Jason Voorhees style with her fork. I do hope Tessa's work does find its way into the world at some point so her death was not in total vain. Something like that could have really saved Anna from this hellish nightmare world.

Naomi getting one over slightly on Anna is kind of expected given their power and ability but sadly used for completely petty reasoning. It was wonderful to see Anna get a win even if took all her resolve and gumption to achieve it. I truly hope the Dufronts are at least allowed to be happy together from now on so her win doesn't get undone by the whims of her captors.

things heat up even more.

Anna really needs a hug right now...

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I think Nell would be the best case scenario for Anna if she is never able to escape the BSA or return to her friends/family. She has been the one bright spot in the bleak existence she's had so far and a calming influence. She also seems to be helping Nell grow as a human being by encouraging her instead of belittling her at every turn.

I think Naomi would be a fiercely protective owner over Anna and likely even out pantshittingly terrifying Leah. Her dedication to keeping Poppy -safe- would definitely eliminate a lot of her dangers in life...and other tinies/people along the way likely.

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Hope you get well soon or are recovering/recovered from your illness.

     First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened.  I am glad your health is getting better.  

     So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot.  Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her.  So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.

    Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary.  She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the  daughter in front of the father, damn that cold.  Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold.  Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on.  I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.  

    Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.

     SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do  that to students deserve what ever happens.  Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.

      I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish.     But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.

Please, try and finish this book. It's amazing. I love it

So first off I hope you had a good new year.  

    I really liked this chapter it had a couple of surprises. I really liked the Naomi and Poppy scene, it was hot.  I also loved to see more Naomi, she is so interesting, I am still trying to get in her head, so I am still looking for ward to her next chapter, and I am really looking forward to seeing The Poppy/Naomi scene, ( though i do have two request since you do ask for them, can u do more with Poppy and being around butts, and could you do a scene with Poppy as a sponge when the girls are showering or bathing, the idea of using tinies as a sponge or rag to clean yourself is hot,( mind this is your story, so if you don't want to I am ok, I like most things you have written in this story, even the stuff I normally don't like.

     So you surprised me with Nell, I wasn't expecting for Poppy to be interested in her, but you pulled it off.  So this will be an interesting direction to go in, and honestly if she is going to really imprint on anyone short of Cloe, ( yes i am still rooting for Cloe), Nell is probably for the best, ( i do still think Nell isn't the solution, but if she is stuck with the BSA, then Nell would at least take her wants into consideration, and might actually help out other shrunken in time). 

     So of course this will cause even more fracture between Naomi and Nell, and might even completely destroy that relationship, though mind it probably was headed that way anyway in time.  Also I do wonder how it will affect Naomi, if it will cause her to double down or actually take a step back and reconsider her approach to Poppy. At first glance I think it would cause her to double down, but there is a slight chance that it might cause her to take a step back, after all the other girls haven't been any different in there approach, so the others haven't been forced to change, but Nell does act different, and They have scene how Poppy responds to Nell, ( and they know poppy is going through the motions of loyalty).  So it does make me wonder, and honestly I would really like to see one of the girls actually change a little at least and maybe become a better person, at least a little, ( honestly I think Molly has the best shot at this, but I am rooting for Naomi a little to.  So this is turning out to be even a better arc than I anticipated.  

     I am interested to see where that think with Lucky Days ( such a wierd saying), and the cherry tomatoes thing goes, you brought it up a few times.  Mind I still think Naomi will be involved in Zoey coming back into play and I am so ready for it.  THere is alot to this story I am still looking forward to.

Also I am like the others have said ok with the parents taking a break this arc.  I can really only take so much of them before I want to strangle each of them.  

awesome chapter

It is nice to see Anna getting some reprieve from her constant torture at the hands of the foursome. Getting to honestly express her genuine feelings with somebody who will listen is refreshing for both her and fans of her eventually regaining her freedom at the end of this. Nell is a tremendous influence and ally for her thus far in their time together.

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Putting Anna right back to work I see.

At-least there was a bright spot in she might have achieved something helpful for somebody without it leading to more bloodshed or mangling from the BSA. A small victory for our perilous heroine as she fights the good fight against the insurmountable odds she's up against right now.

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A really touching scene unfolding here.

Nell seems like the best friend Anna has right now outside of Stephen and Bite...and in the same way Anna might be the only friend Nell in her own struggles with the foursome. This is a breath of fresh air for us in Anna's corner and maybe putting even more in Nell's the more time she spends with Anna and their relationship grows.

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Something tells me if Anna wasn't against the entire fucking world that she could play the foursome off one another to formulate a plan of escape from them. Much more difficult with the BSA behind them but the cracks seem to be definitely there in terms of each wanting Anna for themselves.

Perhaps maybe even Nell could give the powder keg a little nudge to set the explosion in motion.

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Well well well...a lot to unpack here.

1. If Nell is somehow friends with or indirectly via another party somehow connected to Zoey this will be a game changer in many ways. Even more so if the foursome or Zoey learn about the others -true- natures involving Anna.

2. That was incredible!

The way you described Nell destroying the mantis underfoot and Anna's reaction was tremendous. I never suspected Nell saving her life would have the next time Anna had to watch a life snuffed out underfoot or the person snuffing it out.

3. What a twist...

General human kindness might be the one thing that gets Anna to imprint on anyone after a lifetime of getting shit on by just about everyone in her life. Not sure the outcome of the story but if Nell wins I look forward to the nuclear winter it will no doubt cause.

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The Sano parents have gotten their time to shine by poking and prodding Anna like a lab rat,

They are also the only family with a dynamic like Nell to play off of Naomi and her ferocity.

Idk if my comment got the spicy scene with Naomi or if it was already planned but either way I'm happy it happened. Great scene and great chapter. Honestly I miss the chapters that were more ff and poppy focused and less BSA.