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Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 10:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Miss you! Hope all well WoP :)

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2023 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

WRite I dont know if you are aware but this site does have aging issues, so U might look into other sites for you story, just in case this site ever does die.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2023 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 37

Life can throw us curve balls. Lately I ‘ve also had to deal with some problems, not even sleeping well for the last couple weeks, so I am glad to know you are safe and well and working through.

Speaking of working through, man… Anna can’t have nice things. Great gruesome depictions during the village destruction. For the short amount of time he had, the chief’s death was hard and even with the dream scene, I wasn’t expecting for it to turn out like it did.

In fact, I don’t know what to say. Yes, I thought Nell could be dangerous, but… man! Are all the bridges burn? I could say no, but I am not sure this wouldn’t just be me trying to force my views upon the characters.

Life isn't throwing curve balls at little Anna... It's trying to shove a gigantic fucking wrecking ball down her throat!

Great come back! Great to have you back! As always, thanks for writing and sharing. Stay safe!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2023 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

So I will be leaving a review for the latest chapter, but for now i am rereading this story, and i have a question. If at all possible can u plz kill the parents, ( particularly Mollies parents)? Also in a very gruesome manor, I don't usually ask that but i just got to Mollies chapter again, and every thing I said the last time still stands, but yea I want Mollies mother in particular to suffer a very bad end.  Believe it or not I am actually ok if the girls live, i actually like them, (as characters, they are still terrible people).

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2023 5:17 PM Title: The Beginning

Love this story, especially the scenes where the four are comforting Annabelle.

Honestly, I'm hoping Annabelle can actually get back to her best friend, Chloe, in the end, she's the only character I can see that would genuinely care for her even at her new size, her own family has all abandoned her at one point in her life and that includes her sister who even now is looking to use her sister more than help her from the looks of it. Genuinely speaking, if she could get the giantesses to start seeing her as a person then she'd be pretty set even if she imprints on them, but Chloe is literally the only person who stuck by Annabelle, even in her (fake) death.


So yeah, I'm hoping for an Annabelle-Chloe ending of some kind. When it comes to imprinting, not sure, I'd say Harper is best since she seems to be the 'closest' to Annabelle of all the giantesses, but honestly, if Annabelle doesn't imprint on herself or one of the girls, I can see her imprinting on multiple people or even end up doing something even more strange, like being able to imprint at will or something. I agree with Leah that she seems to have a habit of going above and beyond even if unintentionally.


But yeah, really like this story, rare to find any gts story with both, A. a tiny girl as the MC and B. an actual plot, rarer so for the story to have sexual content and to have that be the be all end all of the story.  So yeah, keep up the great work, fingers crossed for Chloe and Anna.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

Welcome back,


Another great chapter from easily the best story on giantessworld. So I know it isn't really your style but any chance we could get a mini chapter of the imprinting episode from Nell's POV? I would like to know what was going through her mind during this after we saw she has the potential to be darker than the FF when she stepped on Anna.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 37

great chapter. loved it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37

Quite a lot to take in there...

It's kind of nice to see the possible organic blossoming of Nell and Anna's relationship despite their situations and impending doom hanging over their hands on a daily basis. The shrinkee liberation idea seems wholesome and in good faith but I've read enough of this story so far to expect a little strife along the way for our heroines. I am kind of rooting for Nell if Anna doesn't escape and has to imprint upon somebody in the Four's gravitational pull, she seems the most genuinely kind and caring for her person Anna could end up with at the moment.

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You give Wes Craven a run for his money with the nightmare sequences.

Poor Anna finally allows herself to possibly love somebody and her own mind won't allow her to be happy. It could be Poppy rebelling against her not selecting one of the Fearsome Four but we've seen her suggest people like the Governor so I'm guessing it was not. Anna knows Nell isn't a monster but given her size as with everything else in her world its hard not to worry about what could go wrong with such arrangement.

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Anna can't have nice things it seems.

That was incredibly dark without needing one of the Foursome involved to make it so. This feels like something Nell might not be able to recover from with both the deaths and what happened to the survivors surely won't be pleasant given the BSA's track record. Though if she's able to get Byte some info then it wouldn't all for naught.

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Well fuck...

I feel like Anna really doesn't harbor any hatred for Nell just after the seeing more senseless bloodshed even whilst trying to help she finally had to let it all out. I still see Nell as her strongest ally when the push eventually comes to shove sometime down the road. Not sure what awaits her in the future but Anna at least has somebody looking out for her even if at the moment it might not seem like it.


Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2023 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Wells it’s been three years now since this amazing story was started.  I hope everything is going great for u. If/when u return I will be here.  


Ps really hope everything is going good. 

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2023 7:47 PM Title: The Beginning

Want to check in to see if you alright, it been a while since you posted a new chapter, hoping you not going through something horrible in life or something else worst then that, anyway please get better soon and stay safe.

Reviewer: Skull Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2023 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 36

Your book is amazing, and the suspense is killing me! I pray to God you are done with whatever it is you are going through and give us the next chapter!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2023 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 36

Missing this. Best story ever written on this site.

Hope you're safe and well WoP :)

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 36

Sorry for taking so long!I forgot to check for a while hahahaha

Okaaaay so you were right in telling me to watch out for Nell. Her having the same desires as Naomi, but hiding them so Anabelle wont dislike her is...interesting, I have to say is a lot more than I gave her credit for, though I still like Naomi more. 

And talking about Naomi, things got tense with chef Dufort, poor Camilla and Naomi being incredibly petty. I'm really happy that Anabelle managed to get a win, finally, and save her, at the cost of...giving hell toa child molester??I seriously dont get Anabelle sometimes. If I was her, and had been so horriblu bullied, no one would ever get me to shut up, I would be bringing hellfire to Zoey and all the bullies. But oh well, I guess she has her reasons. And oh my god Zoey keeps getting worse and worse and more abusive, obsessed and deranged. And Naomi is not far behind, though Naomi is better because she would never beat Anabelle.

Im still kinda starving from Naomi content, too much Nell, more Naomi hahahaha enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: zura98 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2023 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 36

I loved Nell here. Specially the foot part.

I loved that as the other giants she also has dark desires for dominance. It is a great twist that she has this side and not only the good girl one.

The way she stomped the insect.with her feet.

The way Annabelle got drawn to Nell's feet power.

The way Nell placed her soles in front of Annabelle, looming over her.

The way Poppy urged her to kiss the soles.

The way she firmly pinned her underfoot against the floor. And then kept her there, forced to endure.

The way she gave excused herself, with obvious lies.

And the way Poppy wanted to surrender herself so Nell would unleash her hidden desires.

I believe that all together made cheer for Nell. Some part of me wants Annabelle to imprint to Nell or at least end under her control.

At the end, the relationship between Nell and Annabelle it is the most different compared to the other girls.

Don't know what you have planned but I hope that we will see more Nell and her feet.

Anyway, great job with this story!

Reviewer: CromoAng Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2023 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

(First of all, I don't speak English, and my knowledge of it is low, so if something is wrong, or is not understood, there is the reason)




This is without a doubt one of the stories, not just about giants, that has hooked me the most. So much so that I fear for Annebell, with everything that has happened before and during the story, I genuinely wanted SHE to have a happy ending, or at least a healthy one 😢, but I don't know, the more I read, the more I get the feeling that the writer is going to give us an average ending between good and bad at best (and yes, the bad part at the end would be taken by Ann).

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2023 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 36

First and most important: good to know you are feeling better and hope you get fully recovered soon.

About the last two chapters, the ticklig was by far my favorite part! Often an playful act, it’s also a symbol of intimacy. It’s a touch that invade our space, causing a loss of control and at the same time undeniable… pleasure. That’s what I imagine Nell experienced when Anna pulled the splinter out. She liked it and actively searched excuses for more.

Repeating what others already said, Nell and Annabelle interactions are the most wholesome and intriguing. Did Anna enjoy it? She denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert, but I am inclined to believe all this denial is due to her situation – having seen so much suffering and death, having been abused and tortured herself, Anna is uncapable of allowing any sense of pleasure or happiness that is not through Poppy.

Both have problems. Nell can’t stand up to Naomi and be honest about how she fells towards her new friend. And Anna also denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert for something might very well be her own lust at work.

But wasn’t Anna the one first impressed with Nell feet to begin with? Only after that Poppy begun to have ideas of touching and cleaning her sole. At this point neither are being honest with each other. There is also the aditional problem that Nell is regarding her as Poppy like all the others. Why not use her true name?

Because as Poppy she can stay forever with her. Yes, I am a romantic and foolish foot lover, but what can I do? I hope Nell is able to prove and open herself to Anna. The problem is her family, especially Naomi.

Talking about Naomi, how woud the entiltled punk-rock giantess react if Anna ever said she liked Nell feet more? That she found them beautifull and Nell even more beautifull? Would she do it without Poppy’s help and aware Byte might be watching? Acknowledging one simple desires as her own might be the first step to start turning the tables.

There is more… a lot more. For Annabelle’s sake Nell is willing to go far and that might be the entire plan those monsters of a parents have. But I need to think more about all that happened.

Again, thanks for your dedication, even droping a chapter when you are recovering. But please take care of your health first.

Have a good easter and until the next chapter!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2023 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 36

The interactions between Nell and Anna are the most wholesome in the story, the dynamic they have really shows against the madness of the rest of the people Anna is forced to interact with any given day. The splinter scene was the most genuinely kind moment Anna has seemingly had since entering the Fearsome Foursome's homes.

Nell leaving her foot on Anna does leave me pause but I do also sort of hope if Anna can't escape this nightmare scenario she ends up with Nell. Poppy is definitely a monkey wrench but the extended foot smother while worrisome for Anna seems like something they could both come to enjoy together in life. Like maybe we've lowkey discovered a lifelong friendship/pairing of two people shit on by life who finally have somebody else to make their own better.

The music scene was also rather touching since it was something FOR Anna to enjoy versus something for Anna for the FOURSOME to enjoy. It also helps Nell learn a new skill that she might be good at and increase her self esteem with Naomi and the others routinely knocking it down whenever they can.

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Byte is fearless like a tiny Batman.

Ready to face danger at the drop of a hat to help the cause of the tinies in this tragic laden world they find themselves in. He definitely cut it a little close with Naomi waking up but his exit skills are to be commended. 

I do hope they manage to free Daria and her people though, the more allies they can muster for the cause is surely beneficial to the mission when fighting literal titanic killing machines with no moral compass.

As for the big day I am sure it will be onmious and another moment of terror for poor Anna's memory banks if the Foursome or their families are involved. Whatever it is they have planned for tomorrow hopefully Nell will be there to brighten her mode after the ordeal that is surely to come.

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Well fuck there seems to be a lot to unpack here...

The dinner scene was as gruesome as I was expecting highlighted by Naomi piercing the guys skull Jason Voorhees style with her fork. I do hope Tessa's work does find its way into the world at some point so her death was not in total vain. Something like that could have really saved Anna from this hellish nightmare world.

Naomi getting one over slightly on Anna is kind of expected given their power and ability but sadly used for completely petty reasoning. It was wonderful to see Anna get a win even if took all her resolve and gumption to achieve it. I truly hope the Dufronts are at least allowed to be happy together from now on so her win doesn't get undone by the whims of her captors.

things heat up even more.

Anna really needs a hug right now...

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I think Nell would be the best case scenario for Anna if she is never able to escape the BSA or return to her friends/family. She has been the one bright spot in the bleak existence she's had so far and a calming influence. She also seems to be helping Nell grow as a human being by encouraging her instead of belittling her at every turn.

I think Naomi would be a fiercely protective owner over Anna and likely even out pantshittingly terrifying Leah. Her dedication to keeping Poppy -safe- would definitely eliminate a lot of her dangers in life...and other tinies/people along the way likely.

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Hope you get well soon or are recovering/recovered from your illness.


Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2023 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 36

Man you keep teasing us with Camilla 😩 that end was legitimately gonna be my favorite scene of the whole story if Naomi swallowed her (or at least very very high on the list). But, I know story must come first so I don’t blame you lol. Always excited to see new chapters to this story!! Your writing continues to be great 



Author's Response:

Lol thanks GhostWriter. Unfortunately, Camilla and her father do get a happy ending (at least they do while in this story--afterwards?--who can say)


Thanks again for reading!



Author's Response:

Lol thanks GhostWriter. Unfortunately, Camilla and her father do get a happy ending (at least they do while in this story--afterwards?--who can say)


Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2023 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 36

     First off welcome back, I will admit I was starting to get worried that something happened.  I am glad your health is getting better.  

     So I noticed that Naomi's arc has been increased to 4 chapters then, which i am ok with, this arc is surpising me alot.  Honestly i didnt really like Nell at first but this chapter actually brought forth an aspect I didnt expect, that is that Nell and Annebell are very close to my ideal Giant Tiny relationship. ( where the Giant does genually care for her tiny, but the tiny is there to be played with, but she respects the tiny and wants good things for her.  So dang it this chapter just made me start rooting for Nell. Congrats.

    Now Naomi, you had hinted that she was perceptive, but damn all of that from one meating and one mention of Dufort, that girl is scary.  She is also far colder than i realized, damn to eat the  daughter in front of the father, damn that cold.  Also, im opinion very stupid in the long run, but any way yea that was cold.  Also, THat really jumped up Naomi, she will be the Girl to watch I think from now on.  I take back what i said about Maybe Naomi possibly changing for the better if she discovered Nell's relationship with Poppy, though honestly she has to suspect if not out right know.  

    Byte would u plz tell Annebell what is up, for the love of all that is holy stop blue balling the poor girl.

     SO the teacher, honestly I dont feel sorry for him, teachers who do  that to students deserve what ever happens.  Also dont think I didnt catch that implication that Zoey actually protected Annebell, (why, i havent decided yet) but yea, This Zoey arce continues to be super interesting and i am so ready to see where u are going with it.

      I am very interested in the next chapter and hope it can come soonish.     But plz take care of yourself in these crazy times.



Author's Response:

Hey Ralgar! 


Sorry for worrying you! I'm glad you found The Sano's arc interesting. I also agree that Nell is easy to root for (in some scenarios). Also despite what I'm currently writing, I also enjoy the Giant/tiny dynamic you described, and hope to write a story like that. 

And yeah, Naomi is something else. I guess you can't be the heir to a billion dollar conglomerate without being perceptive. Lol, and it's true that the she is impulsive and cruel enough to potentially destroy the monetary success of their magazine by eating their figurehead. But I guess love makes you do crazy things. 

Hahahaha, Byte (or someone) will reveal all to Annabelle in due time.

And good catch Ralgar about Zoey. Yes, their relationship was complex to say the least (particularly on Zoey's end). It will be delved into more in Chapter 41, so be prepared.


Also thanks for reading and all the well wishes!

Reviewer: Skull Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2023 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 35

Also, I would love it if you start writing on Wattpad. 



Author's Response: I might expand to other platforms for other stories, but I already have trouble regularly uploading to just this one lol.

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