Date: October 05 2020 9:35 PM Title: The Beginning
Damn. I only read the first three or four chapters and I ended up feeling guilty all day. You did a great job of showing how insane and casually cruel the four girls are, and something about how you wrote Anabelle made me feel like a monster for not doing something to help this fictional character.
Awesome work... though I can’t promise I’ll keep reading. The horror-story style of writing and the fact that I felt like a heel after reading doesn’t make me feel... good, and that’s usually what I want out of reading. Still, just because it’s not my style doesn’t mean I don’t appreciate the great job you did.
I know they aren’t very common on this site, but I hope our leading lady gets a happy ending, away from her tormentors.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I definitely know horror isn't everyone's cup of tea (especially the way I write it). I plan on publishing other stories that fall on the more "gentle" side of things, which might be more your speed. Also, I can't speak to the ending, but I do plan on making it feel earned.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2020 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Gotta say, I really hope the little thing imprints on Harper. Even when she was full-size, Harper wanted to possess her - and now she actually can!
Author's Response:
I have a special place in my heart for Harper. She's the only one of the Four who noticed Annabelle before she shrunk. She really does love her...in her own demented way.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jesus Christ...
After years of Jacksmith and gtswburg and countless others since like 2003/4, I've never felt more sympathy for a tinies plight than possibly right now.
If people aren't rooting for Ann they might not be human.
Author's Response:
Ha! I always enjoy your reviews, Adam. Annabelle definitely has some difficult times ahead of her.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 2:44 AM Title: The Beginning
Great story, loving the interaction between poppy and her owners. Look forward to seeing more :).
[Report This]Date: October 03 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is absolutely phenomenal. My favourite story on here!
Can't wait to see her get weaker, more of a pet - so powerless in their presence. Want to see Leah become her God.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there definitely will be more of a struggle for Annabelle to maintain her "self" as the chapters progress. Though I can't say if Leah will "win" Annabelle in the end, there will be a lot of moments when Annabelle may have to do certain unsavory things for her tormentor.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
She was sooooooooo close too.
The introduction of the whole MIB thing ups the ante but they did mention one if the daughter of the Governor so it makes sense. Annabelle's cunning however does give her a fighting a chance.
Date: September 26 2020 10:09 PM Title: The Beginning
Love this, brilliant story!
Date: September 20 2020 7:53 PM Title: The Beginning
exceptional. pls. continue.
Date: September 20 2020 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is really really good! The casual dehumanization is top-notch, I'm looking forward to every new chapter now c: Thank you for writing this!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
The more I read off this, the more I want to read more of it.
I can sense Harper as a potential ally but much too early to tell.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2020 11:37 PM Title: The Beginning
I'm dying to see the story continue, please don't stop. Can't wait to read chapter 4.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is seriously amazing. Chapter 3 took it to new heights, I'm so excited for where this is going, thank you for writing it~!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy hell, you've crafted a masterpiece here.
You really feel for Annabelle in her strife and the four girls are perfect antagonists in this fetish.
Date: September 06 2020 4:44 AM Title: The Beginning
I love it so far but there's a bunch of weird spots where the words and dialogue become weird scribbles like "x335;x688,x376" for some reason
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! I think I got them all, but when I copied and pasted my story from another word document, it turned all my italicized words into some weird code. I had to manually go back and type it into this site's word document.
I'm glad you're liking the story!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2020 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more
Date: September 01 2020 5:56 AM Title: The Beginning
Lots of promise shown so far, really excited to see where the story goes. Great work!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 3:31 AM Title: The Beginning
Incredible start and delicious trickery by our hosts.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 2:25 AM Title: The Beginning
ok but like... after reading the summary then the story, where's the logic in that? (other than a crush and vore fetish?) they wouldn't have to fight if they could just rein it in for ten seconds and realize there are more than enough shrinkees to go around.