[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 3:06 PM Title: The Beginning
Hoping you can find time to continue this story. It's one of my favourites on here and can't wait to see how it develops. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2020 8:44 PM Title: The Beginning
I don't know how I just discovered this story. But I've just made it through the first chapter and I am hooked! I can't remember the last time I read a story that gripped me so quickly. Please keep up the good writing. I'm really looking forward to the story ahead of me.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2020 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a brilliant story - I look forward to every update!
Unlike some of the others, I enjoy the power the girls have over Anna and really want her to imprint on one of them (hopefully Leah as I love her arrogance).
Can't wait to see her becoming more and more hopeless before giving in. Poppy I guess is the early set subconscious and resignation of defeat...
[Report This]Date: October 26 2020 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
A heartbreaking but oddly hopeful chapter.
If Anna can keep her wits about her she might be able to pull off her gambit after all.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
God damn.
You craft a beautiful story, you really feel for Anna here and now I'm curious more than ever if she'll somehow get one over in the end.
These are some of the best antognist I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2020 1:49 PM Title: The Beginning
Oh my! What an amazing story! The way you show everyone's personalities is so great that... It left me with some really complicated feelings. On one hand seeing our tiny little hero being dominated is hot, but on the other hand... I really hope poor Annabelle won't imprint on any of those four wannabe "goddesses".
They are nothing but spoiled brats only able to pick on weak and helpless. Everyone, probably except Leah is pretty dumb aswell. Pathetic, really... Unworthy of our little heroine's worshipful devotion.
She's both bright and talented. She's bright and courageous. She's humble and she deserves MORE! Either some gentle and caring lady who will truly recognize her or... The REAL monster. Predator in human flesh who can make her obey with a single word, subdue her with a single look, without resorting to some childish torture.
Like some powerful CEO who needs nothing more than few calm words to end someone's career or even life or a mighty politician who's decisions affect fates of thousands. Or perhaps some dreaded drug lord who doesn't care about the size of her prey and will put a bullet through normal sized human's skull as easily as she would squish a shrinkie.
Those are worthy of her loyalty. Spoiled co-eds with wealthy parents are not...
Date: October 18 2020 1:08 AM Title: The Beginning
Hi WofP. Thank you for a really exciting and very well written story. Your way of describing the feelings of the characters (Annabelle) is perfect... Chapter 4: "" but for Annabelle she would be airborne for several seconds, crash into the giantess' palm only to be lifted into the air again. This allows the reader to soak up and identify with the shrunken girl. And even makes you want to be in her place. LOL! Description is very important when there is no visual support. But I would like to ask you if it is possible to send some indication of the appearance of the characters through links to photos on the net for example. Know that I care a lot. I encourage you to continue writing this story with as many chapters as possible because one long story is better than several dozen short stories. And this is the opinion of most of the readers and writers I have contacted.P. S. I always have to translate into French. and your story goes very well in the translator. this is not the case for all the stories on this site; this is why I will be grateful if you continue to use literary language. While waiting for your answer I would have one or two proposals for the continuation if you allow it. Keep writing. Thank you
Date: October 14 2020 12:59 AM Title: The Beginning
You really are an excellent writer, you capture all the personalities really well. I love how demeaning the co-eds are to their little and how much of a desire they have to belittle and possess her. They never waste an opportunity to remind her of her place beneath them and I have to say I love Harper the most - she seems to know what's best for little Annabelle and feels like it's her right to keep her as a pet. Her jealous streak was really exciting and illustrates her drive to win ownership of little Polly. Another favorite moment: Leah scratching her under her chin... so humiliating :)
Date: October 11 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is ridiculously good.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Heeeeeeeell yes! Excellent chapter~ also, on the note of horror, I gotta go the exact opposite route as the other commentor, size fetish works best when it's nearly indistinguishable from horror.
That said, it's your story, and I have every confidence it will be satisfying no matter what. Oh, also hot as hell. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Anna is dealing with a lot but she's keeping her wits about her for the most part which is good. I could see a situation where Harper is the weak link in the chain of nightmares so she's trapped with.
Date: October 05 2020 9:35 PM Title: The Beginning
Damn. I only read the first three or four chapters and I ended up feeling guilty all day. You did a great job of showing how insane and casually cruel the four girls are, and something about how you wrote Anabelle made me feel like a monster for not doing something to help this fictional character.
Awesome work... though I can’t promise I’ll keep reading. The horror-story style of writing and the fact that I felt like a heel after reading doesn’t make me feel... good, and that’s usually what I want out of reading. Still, just because it’s not my style doesn’t mean I don’t appreciate the great job you did.
I know they aren’t very common on this site, but I hope our leading lady gets a happy ending, away from her tormentors.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I definitely know horror isn't everyone's cup of tea (especially the way I write it). I plan on publishing other stories that fall on the more "gentle" side of things, which might be more your speed. Also, I can't speak to the ending, but I do plan on making it feel earned.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2020 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Gotta say, I really hope the little thing imprints on Harper. Even when she was full-size, Harper wanted to possess her - and now she actually can!
Author's Response:
I have a special place in my heart for Harper. She's the only one of the Four who noticed Annabelle before she shrunk. She really does love her...in her own demented way.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jesus Christ...
After years of Jacksmith and gtswburg and countless others since like 2003/4, I've never felt more sympathy for a tinies plight than possibly right now.
If people aren't rooting for Ann they might not be human.
Author's Response:
Ha! I always enjoy your reviews, Adam. Annabelle definitely has some difficult times ahead of her.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 2:44 AM Title: The Beginning
Great story, loving the interaction between poppy and her owners. Look forward to seeing more :).
[Report This]Date: October 03 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is absolutely phenomenal. My favourite story on here!
Can't wait to see her get weaker, more of a pet - so powerless in their presence. Want to see Leah become her God.
Author's Response:
Thanks, there definitely will be more of a struggle for Annabelle to maintain her "self" as the chapters progress. Though I can't say if Leah will "win" Annabelle in the end, there will be a lot of moments when Annabelle may have to do certain unsavory things for her tormentor.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
She was sooooooooo close too.
The introduction of the whole MIB thing ups the ante but they did mention one if the daughter of the Governor so it makes sense. Annabelle's cunning however does give her a fighting a chance.
Date: September 26 2020 10:09 PM Title: The Beginning
Love this, brilliant story!
Date: September 20 2020 7:53 PM Title: The Beginning
exceptional. pls. continue.
Date: September 20 2020 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is really really good! The casual dehumanization is top-notch, I'm looking forward to every new chapter now c: Thank you for writing this!