Date: February 01 2021 8:18 PM Title: The Beginning
Next chapter can't get here quick enough.
Author's Response:
Ha! Wait no more!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seeing her have even a shred of hope fills me with good vibes for her future, it is a mountain to climb but people climb those all the time.
She kind of lost her cool at the end but it was completely understandable to see with what and who she is dealing with daily. I'm rooting for her but it'll be a fight for sure.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Anna has a lot of challanges ahead of her, but she still has a lot of fight left in her!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story is awesome and you know it.
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks a lot! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just wow... Your story is really great ! The charactaers, the psycholgy and the evenments are amazing. I don't post any review usally, but I love your story, so I support you.
And I'm team Harper. And I really would like that the story continue like this... Give freedom to Poppy will be too simple... You should continue to explore her relationship with the girls.
Thanks for you story !
Author's Response:
Thanks! I most certainly will be developing Annabelle's relationships with the giantesses. In a couple of chapters we will really begin to see why the giantesses are they way they are.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2020 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have to apologise first for withholding my review for a considerable amount of time. It was not my intent to delay for so long, rather to let the story grow a bit to see its potential. And then, as per usual, time became a scarcity.
The review will be quick. I could (maybe) go on and on about what I like/love about the story; it will be more efficient, though, to simply call it exquisite. It has been an amazing ride from the beginning and I am looking forward towards future installments, wherever they may take us.
I will refrain from suggesting the course the action should in my opinion take; the story is yours to tell and fan suggestions are usually detrimental to the quality of the tale the Author waeves. As long as quality does not drop I am on board with any resolution that may come.
Obvious 11/10. Beyond expectations.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much Curvograph! I really appreciate your encouraging words. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the story so far! Made an account just to review this and pledge my support for #TeamLeah!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! And Leah definitely seems to be one of the more popular choices.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
That a girl Anna!
Not sure how this will help her in the long run but currying favor with one of the big four certainly helps her.
Author's Response:
I felt like Annabelle needed a win—no matter how small (pun-intended) .Thanks for the support, as always!
[Report This]Date: December 21 2020 7:58 PM Title: The Beginning
Definitely Naomi or Leah. Harper is a maybe, and Molly is too dumb for me to root for her. It would be cool to have several alternate endings where she ends up with a different girl to explore all posibilities but for me is definitely Leah or Naomi.
Also I think Leah was upset because Anabelle was being all excited with the other girls during her episode and she felt jealous maybe?
Author's Response:
I'm definitely open to a "What-If" series if people are interested. Both the story's outline and ending are already solidified, but I'm always imagining other endings in my head for fun.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2020 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Gotta be Harper or Leah, just depends. If Poppy wins Harper wins. However Leah is more interested in forcing Anabelle to do stuff against her will more than having Poppy it seems so if Anabelle happens to keep control then Leah all the way.
Author's Response:
They seem to be the more popular choices. Ha, I also like the dynamic between Leah and Annabelle. Though in the chapters coming up, she'll get to really see the other giantesses' layers too.
Date: December 21 2020 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love the new chapter about Leah! Excellent work as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I enjoy writing Leah's chapters a lot. Her dialogue is always so sharp and cruel.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2020 1:47 AM Title: The Beginning
I am quite literally checking this multiple times a day to see if there's a new chapter. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Check no more, it's up!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well hell, that was a rather mean thing to do to Anna.
That said I now wonder if someone from the outside getting even -that- close could open up a bigger hole. She seems fairly knowledgable at playing them off on another so who knows.
Author's Response:
Ha! I do find myself being a lot meaner to Annabelle than my outline calls for. I will say that Annabelle is on the constant lookout for every and any opportunity to escape. Depending on how shrewd the giantesses are, she may find a sliver of hope soon.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.
Another brilliant chapter. It gave marvellous interactions betwen Anabelle, Harper and Naomi.
More and more we get glimpses of individual traits of each giantess through Anabelle eyes. And if they all seem in control, Naomi dialogues let it clear they are not as powerfull and as free as they want their "Poppy" to believe they are.
The "goddesses" have social and family expectations and if you ask me, it's preety clear this entire shrinkee torture is the result of each individual need to feel in control.
Harper is sexually and emotionally frustrated - she wanted to date Anabelle but never worked up the courage to even know her, so she planned to make her crush helpless and vulnerable. All in all, she is a coward, too afraid to get close on an emmotional level.
Than there is Naomi, who keeps a facade of punk-rock girl because others think that is cool, but really likes girly stuff and just want to let herself out. Being a coward as well, she is only able to do that with a shrinkee and as part of the sadistic group of Leah.
The problem is most shrinkees don't get to survive long enough. Even Harper was planning, at the begginig, to just get one off and kill Anabelle. But that is not the case anymore, Anabelle can survive and become their own permanently, wich means one of them will get to live her fantasy even away from the group. Someone gets to be Anabelle goddess for life, even at home and day to day life.
This chance is bound to bring competition, distrust and trouble as each individual desire and plans start to arise. It's what we have been seeing on these chapters but with no escalation.
So far their wasn't too much presure to crack the group because everyone would lose, but I am very curious to see how each giantess will react to a new Poppy, submissive and devoid of personality. Will everyone like? Will their atttude change and why?
As the story is, I think there are plenty of ways and plots that can be explored.
The giantess will meet Anabelle parents once more, and I am guessing she will still be in that sorry slave state of mind (Poppy in control). I wonder if learning more about how Anabelle life was before all this will raise some simpathy from some as well as annoy others.
Maybe not everyone will want to meet with Anabelle parents, but for apearances sake Leah, Harper and Naomi go, while Molly stays to keep Poppy company (they are not taking any risks after this phone test or maybe Poppy strange behavior will worry them... I don't know! Too many possibilities here LOL).
I believe this is a turning point, but there is still plenty of story to tell. As it stands, the protagonist has no chance of escaping without the help of at least one captor. The question is how to humanize the giantesses as well as humanize Anabelle to them.
All this is just me guessing and making assumptions. You, my good sir, have made a very compelling group of villainess. But I believe no one is 100% evil and now I am curious to see how you will develop each one on individual level. Now seems to be the perfect time - Anabelle is out of the picture with a mental breackdown, the group will obtain what it wanted all along - Poppy - so... what about what each captor had in mind?
Again, sorry for the long review and any misspelling. Your story and characters are just too compelling and I wrote this in a hurry.
Marvelous work! Thanks for sharing and, please, more!!
Author's Response:
Well Mr in A Suit, you definitely are an observant one. You've made some great observations and very entertaining predictions. Of course, I can't speak to their accuracy, but nonetheless they are very interesting to read. I love your in-depth analysis. It makes me feel great that there's someone out there paying attention to the little clues and details I insert into the text. Thanks for the review!
Date: December 04 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, I’m back. Genuinely couldn’t stay away. This story is the weirdest source of simultaneous morbid fascination and wild fantasy to me. I have some predictions I would like to make from a chapter 7 and what I’ve read so far, and this is based on my best guesses of story/most fervent wishes that these four pieces of human waste are destroyed in every way that matters.
Keep in mind, these are guesses and assumptions.
1–Type 0 ‘imprinting’ is the opposite of what most think—rather than become addicted to a single person, people become addicted to them. Easily explainable that the ‘facts’ on them are editorialized by said type 0s that exist. My reason for this is every one of Annabelle’s torturers being immediately enraptured upon seeing her new form/the ‘peacocking’ explanation, and that it makes more sense that she releases addictive pheremones now rather than getting addicted to a normal size person’s, as she is the one that changed to be ‘desirable’ and desiring others doesn’t make you desirable inherently. Admittedly more than a bit wishful thinking—I want to see Annabelle BREAK these bitches.
2–Annabelle’s sister is also a Type 0 and still alive. Seeing as they’re twins, I think it’s feasible, though admittedly without more info on exactly what happened to her/her funeral, whether or not it was empty casket or not, impossible to truly call. The rarity of Type 0s though, the focus on the rich and powerful covering them, and Leah’s dad’s mild interest in Annabelle make me think he may own her. Again, nothing to base this on but best guess.
3–things get violent between her captors. This is almost 100% wishful thinking—I just want them to destroy each other, or for Annabelle to destroy them.
WriteofPassage, you are a great writer. The fact that this makes me so uncomfortable, while still making me feel compelled to read, is incredible to me. Awesome work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! Your predictions are fascinating! I can't speak on them specifically, but I will say the giantesses' families will make an appearance in the upcoming chapters—and they will definitely reveal a great deal of things.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2020 7:12 PM Title: The Beginning
This has such a great potential for a series....And I never thought I'd get to hate antagonists as badly as these 4...If they are to be punished,I wish it to be by Annabelle's hand,not anyone else
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.
It is so rare to find some personality building in erotic stories and you managed to create some twisted dynamics between Annabelle and her four captors.
Some smut scenes as well as some dialogues, at least for me, highlights how twisted and confused the giantess train of thought and their view of what they are doing can be. Sure, now that she is shrunk they, as a group, treat her as a cute puppy, but alone the story can be very different.
Harper already stated (in a very dellusional way) that, if not shrunk, she would eventually date Annabelle. And that bath scene with Leah... that question of what if Annabelle imprint on anyone that isn't her... and that reaction...
These scenes and dialogues are obviously no accident and they make the reader wonder: what does each giantess really want from "their" Poppy? Do they just want to exercise power over the helpless or some are trying to prove a point to themselves?
Bottom line, the psycko and kinky group relation built aroud the tiny and her captors makes you question why each monster is a monster right now... Or maybe I am just overthinking the main cast. Who knows? I certainly don't.
What I do know is that, as of right now, this is my favorite ongoing story on the site.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Date: November 22 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Quickly becoming one of the best stories on the site. It's hard enough to write one compelling villain, let alone FOUR of them in one story. There are of course some well-known tropes mixed in among our four Giantesses, but the execution is done so well with them and everywhere else in the story that I'm sure any reader would be willing to forgive.
You have got me hating the bigs and rooting for the small in a way that I can't really remember. They are just... so fucking evil. And Poppy-er, Anabelle is so easy to root for. From her determination, to the way she views the world, to how she cares about others.
And on top of that the smut is all high-tier. From the massacre to the sex scenes to the casual domination, to the smells and foot related stuff. There's literally something for everyone here.
Ten chapters in and I'm already confident in calling this a masterpiece in the making. Thank you for sharing.
Date: November 22 2020 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chaptor, really love the inshoe content as well! Always look forward to reading your work
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 8:50 AM Title: The Beginning
Fantastic story, it's got me hooked and invested to a painful degree, and I'm not sure my heart can take the possibility of a sad ending to this tragic tale. Great job all around.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
You've crafted such hatred in a fetish story, beautiful in the way to get across how terrible these four really are.
The Chloe/Oliver thread gives me and Belle a little hope for the future but it seems a tough hill to climb all the same.