[Report This]Date: December 07 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well hell, that was a rather mean thing to do to Anna.
That said I now wonder if someone from the outside getting even -that- close could open up a bigger hole. She seems fairly knowledgable at playing them off on another so who knows.
Author's Response:
Ha! I do find myself being a lot meaner to Annabelle than my outline calls for. I will say that Annabelle is on the constant lookout for every and any opportunity to escape. Depending on how shrewd the giantesses are, she may find a sliver of hope soon.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.
Another brilliant chapter. It gave marvellous interactions betwen Anabelle, Harper and Naomi.
More and more we get glimpses of individual traits of each giantess through Anabelle eyes. And if they all seem in control, Naomi dialogues let it clear they are not as powerfull and as free as they want their "Poppy" to believe they are.
The "goddesses" have social and family expectations and if you ask me, it's preety clear this entire shrinkee torture is the result of each individual need to feel in control.
Harper is sexually and emotionally frustrated - she wanted to date Anabelle but never worked up the courage to even know her, so she planned to make her crush helpless and vulnerable. All in all, she is a coward, too afraid to get close on an emmotional level.
Than there is Naomi, who keeps a facade of punk-rock girl because others think that is cool, but really likes girly stuff and just want to let herself out. Being a coward as well, she is only able to do that with a shrinkee and as part of the sadistic group of Leah.
The problem is most shrinkees don't get to survive long enough. Even Harper was planning, at the begginig, to just get one off and kill Anabelle. But that is not the case anymore, Anabelle can survive and become their own permanently, wich means one of them will get to live her fantasy even away from the group. Someone gets to be Anabelle goddess for life, even at home and day to day life.
This chance is bound to bring competition, distrust and trouble as each individual desire and plans start to arise. It's what we have been seeing on these chapters but with no escalation.
So far their wasn't too much presure to crack the group because everyone would lose, but I am very curious to see how each giantess will react to a new Poppy, submissive and devoid of personality. Will everyone like? Will their atttude change and why?
As the story is, I think there are plenty of ways and plots that can be explored.
The giantess will meet Anabelle parents once more, and I am guessing she will still be in that sorry slave state of mind (Poppy in control). I wonder if learning more about how Anabelle life was before all this will raise some simpathy from some as well as annoy others.
Maybe not everyone will want to meet with Anabelle parents, but for apearances sake Leah, Harper and Naomi go, while Molly stays to keep Poppy company (they are not taking any risks after this phone test or maybe Poppy strange behavior will worry them... I don't know! Too many possibilities here LOL).
I believe this is a turning point, but there is still plenty of story to tell. As it stands, the protagonist has no chance of escaping without the help of at least one captor. The question is how to humanize the giantesses as well as humanize Anabelle to them.
All this is just me guessing and making assumptions. You, my good sir, have made a very compelling group of villainess. But I believe no one is 100% evil and now I am curious to see how you will develop each one on individual level. Now seems to be the perfect time - Anabelle is out of the picture with a mental breackdown, the group will obtain what it wanted all along - Poppy - so... what about what each captor had in mind?
Again, sorry for the long review and any misspelling. Your story and characters are just too compelling and I wrote this in a hurry.
Marvelous work! Thanks for sharing and, please, more!!
Author's Response:
Well Mr in A Suit, you definitely are an observant one. You've made some great observations and very entertaining predictions. Of course, I can't speak to their accuracy, but nonetheless they are very interesting to read. I love your in-depth analysis. It makes me feel great that there's someone out there paying attention to the little clues and details I insert into the text. Thanks for the review!
Date: December 04 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
So, I’m back. Genuinely couldn’t stay away. This story is the weirdest source of simultaneous morbid fascination and wild fantasy to me. I have some predictions I would like to make from a chapter 7 and what I’ve read so far, and this is based on my best guesses of story/most fervent wishes that these four pieces of human waste are destroyed in every way that matters.
Keep in mind, these are guesses and assumptions.
1–Type 0 ‘imprinting’ is the opposite of what most think—rather than become addicted to a single person, people become addicted to them. Easily explainable that the ‘facts’ on them are editorialized by said type 0s that exist. My reason for this is every one of Annabelle’s torturers being immediately enraptured upon seeing her new form/the ‘peacocking’ explanation, and that it makes more sense that she releases addictive pheremones now rather than getting addicted to a normal size person’s, as she is the one that changed to be ‘desirable’ and desiring others doesn’t make you desirable inherently. Admittedly more than a bit wishful thinking—I want to see Annabelle BREAK these bitches.
2–Annabelle’s sister is also a Type 0 and still alive. Seeing as they’re twins, I think it’s feasible, though admittedly without more info on exactly what happened to her/her funeral, whether or not it was empty casket or not, impossible to truly call. The rarity of Type 0s though, the focus on the rich and powerful covering them, and Leah’s dad’s mild interest in Annabelle make me think he may own her. Again, nothing to base this on but best guess.
3–things get violent between her captors. This is almost 100% wishful thinking—I just want them to destroy each other, or for Annabelle to destroy them.
WriteofPassage, you are a great writer. The fact that this makes me so uncomfortable, while still making me feel compelled to read, is incredible to me. Awesome work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! Your predictions are fascinating! I can't speak on them specifically, but I will say the giantesses' families will make an appearance in the upcoming chapters—and they will definitely reveal a great deal of things.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2020 7:12 PM Title: The Beginning
This has such a great potential for a series....And I never thought I'd get to hate antagonists as badly as these 4...If they are to be punished,I wish it to be by Annabelle's hand,not anyone else
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.
It is so rare to find some personality building in erotic stories and you managed to create some twisted dynamics between Annabelle and her four captors.
Some smut scenes as well as some dialogues, at least for me, highlights how twisted and confused the giantess train of thought and their view of what they are doing can be. Sure, now that she is shrunk they, as a group, treat her as a cute puppy, but alone the story can be very different.
Harper already stated (in a very dellusional way) that, if not shrunk, she would eventually date Annabelle. And that bath scene with Leah... that question of what if Annabelle imprint on anyone that isn't her... and that reaction...
These scenes and dialogues are obviously no accident and they make the reader wonder: what does each giantess really want from "their" Poppy? Do they just want to exercise power over the helpless or some are trying to prove a point to themselves?
Bottom line, the psycko and kinky group relation built aroud the tiny and her captors makes you question why each monster is a monster right now... Or maybe I am just overthinking the main cast. Who knows? I certainly don't.
What I do know is that, as of right now, this is my favorite ongoing story on the site.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.
Date: November 22 2020 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Quickly becoming one of the best stories on the site. It's hard enough to write one compelling villain, let alone FOUR of them in one story. There are of course some well-known tropes mixed in among our four Giantesses, but the execution is done so well with them and everywhere else in the story that I'm sure any reader would be willing to forgive.
You have got me hating the bigs and rooting for the small in a way that I can't really remember. They are just... so fucking evil. And Poppy-er, Anabelle is so easy to root for. From her determination, to the way she views the world, to how she cares about others.
And on top of that the smut is all high-tier. From the massacre to the sex scenes to the casual domination, to the smells and foot related stuff. There's literally something for everyone here.
Ten chapters in and I'm already confident in calling this a masterpiece in the making. Thank you for sharing.
Date: November 22 2020 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chaptor, really love the inshoe content as well! Always look forward to reading your work
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 8:50 AM Title: The Beginning
Fantastic story, it's got me hooked and invested to a painful degree, and I'm not sure my heart can take the possibility of a sad ending to this tragic tale. Great job all around.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
You've crafted such hatred in a fetish story, beautiful in the way to get across how terrible these four really are.
The Chloe/Oliver thread gives me and Belle a little hope for the future but it seems a tough hill to climb all the same.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2020 3:06 PM Title: The Beginning
Hoping you can find time to continue this story. It's one of my favourites on here and can't wait to see how it develops. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2020 8:44 PM Title: The Beginning
I don't know how I just discovered this story. But I've just made it through the first chapter and I am hooked! I can't remember the last time I read a story that gripped me so quickly. Please keep up the good writing. I'm really looking forward to the story ahead of me.
[Report This]Date: October 27 2020 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a brilliant story - I look forward to every update!
Unlike some of the others, I enjoy the power the girls have over Anna and really want her to imprint on one of them (hopefully Leah as I love her arrogance).
Can't wait to see her becoming more and more hopeless before giving in. Poppy I guess is the early set subconscious and resignation of defeat...
[Report This]Date: October 26 2020 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
A heartbreaking but oddly hopeful chapter.
If Anna can keep her wits about her she might be able to pull off her gambit after all.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
God damn.
You craft a beautiful story, you really feel for Anna here and now I'm curious more than ever if she'll somehow get one over in the end.
These are some of the best antognist I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2020 1:49 PM Title: The Beginning
Oh my! What an amazing story! The way you show everyone's personalities is so great that... It left me with some really complicated feelings. On one hand seeing our tiny little hero being dominated is hot, but on the other hand... I really hope poor Annabelle won't imprint on any of those four wannabe "goddesses".
They are nothing but spoiled brats only able to pick on weak and helpless. Everyone, probably except Leah is pretty dumb aswell. Pathetic, really... Unworthy of our little heroine's worshipful devotion.
She's both bright and talented. She's bright and courageous. She's humble and she deserves MORE! Either some gentle and caring lady who will truly recognize her or... The REAL monster. Predator in human flesh who can make her obey with a single word, subdue her with a single look, without resorting to some childish torture.
Like some powerful CEO who needs nothing more than few calm words to end someone's career or even life or a mighty politician who's decisions affect fates of thousands. Or perhaps some dreaded drug lord who doesn't care about the size of her prey and will put a bullet through normal sized human's skull as easily as she would squish a shrinkie.
Those are worthy of her loyalty. Spoiled co-eds with wealthy parents are not...
Date: October 18 2020 1:08 AM Title: The Beginning
Hi WofP. Thank you for a really exciting and very well written story. Your way of describing the feelings of the characters (Annabelle) is perfect... Chapter 4: "" but for Annabelle she would be airborne for several seconds, crash into the giantess' palm only to be lifted into the air again. This allows the reader to soak up and identify with the shrunken girl. And even makes you want to be in her place. LOL! Description is very important when there is no visual support. But I would like to ask you if it is possible to send some indication of the appearance of the characters through links to photos on the net for example. Know that I care a lot. I encourage you to continue writing this story with as many chapters as possible because one long story is better than several dozen short stories. And this is the opinion of most of the readers and writers I have contacted.P. S. I always have to translate into French. and your story goes very well in the translator. this is not the case for all the stories on this site; this is why I will be grateful if you continue to use literary language. While waiting for your answer I would have one or two proposals for the continuation if you allow it. Keep writing. Thank you
Date: October 14 2020 12:59 AM Title: The Beginning
You really are an excellent writer, you capture all the personalities really well. I love how demeaning the co-eds are to their little and how much of a desire they have to belittle and possess her. They never waste an opportunity to remind her of her place beneath them and I have to say I love Harper the most - she seems to know what's best for little Annabelle and feels like it's her right to keep her as a pet. Her jealous streak was really exciting and illustrates her drive to win ownership of little Polly. Another favorite moment: Leah scratching her under her chin... so humiliating :)
Date: October 11 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is ridiculously good.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Heeeeeeeell yes! Excellent chapter~ also, on the note of horror, I gotta go the exact opposite route as the other commentor, size fetish works best when it's nearly indistinguishable from horror.
That said, it's your story, and I have every confidence it will be satisfying no matter what. Oh, also hot as hell. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Anna is dealing with a lot but she's keeping her wits about her for the most part which is good. I could see a situation where Harper is the weak link in the chain of nightmares so she's trapped with.