Reviewer: redfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2021 4:32 PM Title: The Beginning

An extraordinarily good story - absolutely love it when there's an update and I truly appreciate you writing such long and descriptive chapters. It's undoubtedly not easy to do so, so thank you for making the time!

This was one of the best chapters yet. So close to Zoey's clutches yet so far, and what a conclusion. My favourite giantesses are Leah and Zoey - both are powerful with people their own size let alone a tiny little bug like Poppy. Would love to see Zoey get her hands on her sister, perhaps even get her to imprint on her - that would be the ultimate horror to Annabelle. I might be the only one on here rooting for an 'unhappy' ending in this sense ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Can't say what's coming up, but this definitely isn't the last we've seen of Zoey.

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Another fantastic chapter, really appreciate the work. Out of the possible pairings of girls I'd have to say I have two duos that I'd be interested in mainly, though all of them are intriguing and unique. 

1) Molly/Harper - I adore Harper and she's up and away my favorite character so far, other than our protagonist Anna. I don't have much of a love for Molly's personality or anything but I have a soft spot for giantesses with a little extra weight on them, turns me on a little bit more and I know with Harper things would be going down an already sexy path. 

2) Harper/Leah - This right here is potentially the most dangerous combo in terms of Anna imprinting. I feel Harper's raw attraction to her appeals directly to the core of Poppy's being. That desire to worship and be adored. However Leah seems to be quite good and dismissing whatever humanity Anna tries to cling to. She knows exactly what to say to crush her spirit while still showering the shrinkee with her own form of love. 

Gotta say I still have my fingers crossed they go after Anna's father or someone else close to her, would really destroy Anna but would be very fun for us readers. On a side note, I was really happy to see the way they defended Anna from that Luke guy. They really do love her, even if it's in the way a pet is loved. It seems more than just your average pet though, like Anna holds a special place in all their hearts. I can't wait to see who gets imprinted assuming that day does come. I also hope maybe some more mouthplay is introduced, that cereal scene with Molly is low key one of my favorites.

Author's Response:

The reasons for your pairings are really interesting. I can't say too much, but I think you'll be pleasntly surprised in future chapters. Also, I look forward to adding more direct scenes with the giantesses (both mouthplay and others) as they "play" with Annabelle. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

More and more the story portrays Anabelle as special for all four giantesses... As for what they represent for Anna... it’s complicated.

 

This line about Naomi picked my interest:  “She'd actually preferred it if Naomi dialed back on the affection, but she didn't understand why she was so insistent on maintaining her bad-ass persona.”

 

That line reminds of the interactions Annabelle had with Naomi in ch. 11 – “All of the giantesses treated her with cloying affection, but Naomi seemed to up it to 110% when they were alone. Annabelle figured it was because her public persona of bad-ass, cold, aloof punk-rock princess didn't allow her to show her girlier, more affectionate side. Unfortunately for Annabelle, that meant she received the full brunt of it whenever they were alone.”

 

With that in mind, I think more interactions with Naomi would be interesting – for example: Molly mockers Naomi sense of style and true behavior, but Anna later sooths her, saying she prefers that side of Naomi over her public persona.

 

Also, the part Where Zoey’s size is highlighted and Anna cant help but imagine how it would be  “to be down on the ground near a gigantic Zoey”.... marvelous! I too want to see these reactions - of Anna, of Zoey... and of Poppy!

 

Thanks for all the hard work, answering comments and continuing the story. Right now, this is my favorite on-going story on the whole site.

Author's Response:

Your comments are always so dangerous, Mr. Suit, because I am always tempted to give some things away. I love how you notice the little lines I leave behind for the future development of the plot. I had hopeed that future chapters (and the ending) would spur people to re-read the story, so they could pick up on all the clues I dropped, but you seem to be ahead of the crowd. Thanks again for commenting! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

I enjoyed the Fearsome Four shitting on the jocks, for once they were able to use their evil for good instead of well...

The Daniel section was masterfully written, you really showcased their ability to turn on a dime in any given situation. Though I kind of expected him going home with them to eventually lead to their demise but that thread seems snipped.

I'm ready for Zoey to take on the Governer, The Dean, The Chief, The Corporation and any other other Buffy or Walking Dead villains they have to get through.

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As for your question, I'm kind of partial to Leah/Naomi. Bad ass punk girls and/or asian are kind of high on my list etc. They both seem like they would destroy Harper/Molly if given the chance. Like they would be the Lord Zedd/Goldar to the other two's Rito and Finster.

Author's Response:

Ha! This comment made me laugh so hard. Yeah, while I'd agree that Leah and Naomi are formidable in their own right, Harper and Molly may just surprise you.

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2021 6:01 PM Title: The Beginning

Man this is so good! There's something about the dynamic between shrinkee and captor where the captor wants to break the shrinkee down to submission but still cares for them, that REALLY gets me going. So far Harper is definitely my favorite with probably Leah behind her. I love how openly attracted to Anna Harper is, the line where she says it'd be inevitable they end up dating made me swoon! I love the thought of Harper spoiling and pampering her reluctant pet, I think that's my favorite potential angle going forward.

 

I'll be honest, this is pretty fucked up of me, but I REALLY want to see the foursome get their clutches on Anna's family. That would be so insanely hot and I know the four girls would agree, I can already imagine Harper getting aroused at the thought. 

Definitely watching this for any and all future updates.

Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for reading! I think Harper's...enthusiasm, is one of the main elements that caused me to write this story in the first place. 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

You’ve built such an interesting cast of villains, with such a complex relationship with the heroine that I simply can’t hate them, and that is proof of good writing.

 

It’s interesting to see the difference in the treatment the giantesses give Anna in comparisson to others, and how Anna is aware of the affection they have towards her. She became “a fixture in their lives”, so treating her with care and worry is now perceived as only natural by Anna and her captors. The shrunken girl even catches herself enjoying Leah’s caress.  

 

I saw some people wishing Harper or Leah whoped Zoey ass... I think the clash will happen, but it won’t be pleasant or easy for any of the parts involved. Much like themselves, Zoey’s feelings for Anna are twisted, and this is not just about making her unpredictable and dangerous, but also about looking into a mirror.

 

I am more interested in how each giantess will react upon seeing how traumatized Anna is because of her past. Some might not give it much thought and some might want to avenge Anna... and that will dictate the future of the story, because wanting to hurt Zoey for Anna’s sake changes the nature of the relationship – Anna will seize being just a slave and become something more precious, someone worth protecting from harm (past and future). Not Poppy anylonger.

 

Harper is the obvious choice, she will want to jump at Zoey, but more out of jealousy and spite than care. I picture Molly and Naomi going after Zoey only if their pride is hurt. But Leah, ice queen Leah, is another story. Her dialogues and interactions with Anna built up a kind of tension between the two that you just can’t put your finger on. 

 

And yet, you can tell is something more going on in Leah's mind when she is with her Poppy.

 

Yes, if I had to guess, I think it’s Leah the one who will want to step up against Zoey and find her match on a psychological level. They are the ones who really want Anna, they will try to hurt each other to the end. 

 

And what will make the difference for Anna in this traumatic reckoning with the past, ironically,  is the affection she knows Leah and the others hold towards her.

 

Least but not last, their is the type 0 theories and mysteries. Chapter 15 once more foreshadowed the four families deep interest in our heroine, while revealing type 0 is regarded a myth even among shrinkees. Her abilities and their extent (even the imprint) are, therefore, unknown. This is a really good plot device to push the story forward.

 

Two last questions:

1. I am not saying the 4 spoiled and cruel girls shouldn’t pay for what they did so far, but what you think? Is redemption for any of the giantessess possible? 

2. How many chapters do you estimate the story will have?

 

Well, that’s it for now. Hope some of my ideas can help you in the writing process. 

Sorry for the long comment and for any mispealling or mistakes.

 

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Already eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Okay, first of all thank you! Sometimes when I'm writing this story, I'll put it in the back burner because it is more of a way to get some creative juices flowing, but then I'll come back to this site after a week or two and see all the fantastic comments. It helps me remember that there's actual people who are reading this story and care about how it ends. 

Once again, I really like reading your comments, Mr. In A Suit. I can't get into the accuracy of your observations, but I like how you think. 

As for the questions:

1. I love all of my characters, so they'll never need to be redemed in my eyes, but as for the readers?  Who can say? I have an ending to the story already outlined, so you'll just have to see if the FF are "redemed" by the end.

2. Oh god. If you recall, I said that we would be going into the giantesses' backstories soon—I believe that was three months ago. Like I said, I have an outline, but often the chapters end up becoming too long, or I'll realize I want to include a scene that delays my time frame. For example, I thought the funeral scene and the (spoiler for chapter 16) visiting Annabelle's house scene was going to be in the same chapter—and you saw how that turned out. I'm not a fan of stories that are drawn out, so I'll tentatively say I want the story to be finished in under 30 chapters. 

Thanks again for your continued support!

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2021 4:44 AM Title: The Beginning

Okay, this is ridiculously good. RIDICULOUSLY.

Author's Response:

Ha! Thank you. THANK YOU.

But seriously, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2021 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Well here comes big bad Zoey to battle those evil rich bitches to get her step-sister back to safety and end her ordeal!

 

*keeps reading*

 

Ok she's a bit playful, nothing wrong with that honestly. I'm sure Danny enjoyed himself and he didn't die in the sewers so a win/win all around.

*keeps reading*

 

Alright she's kicking the bullies ass and making them pay for hurting Belle, up next is the big bads of the story and hells coming with her!

 

*finishes reading*

 

Holy...shit.

Author's Response:

Ha! I've mentioned Annabelle's reluctance to see Zoey, but up until now I'd never given any reasoning as to why she was so wary of her. I can see how Zoey's whole schtick is "creepy", but she actually reminds me a lot of the FF in how easily she's able to put on and remove her mask.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2021 6:51 PM Title: The Beginning

Looking forward to it, as much as I favor Harper and Leah I'm open to you changing my mind in favor of the others

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm really curious if people will maintain their favs, once we meet the giantesses' families. I have a feeling some rankings are going to be rearranged. 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2021 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

You really are an amazing writer, very creative. This is another amazing chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sometimes I worry that my chapters are too long, but what can I say? Anna's journey is a long one.