Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

You’ve built such an interesting cast of villains, with such a complex relationship with the heroine that I simply can’t hate them, and that is proof of good writing.

 

It’s interesting to see the difference in the treatment the giantesses give Anna in comparisson to others, and how Anna is aware of the affection they have towards her. She became “a fixture in their lives”, so treating her with care and worry is now perceived as only natural by Anna and her captors. The shrunken girl even catches herself enjoying Leah’s caress.  

 

I saw some people wishing Harper or Leah whoped Zoey ass... I think the clash will happen, but it won’t be pleasant or easy for any of the parts involved. Much like themselves, Zoey’s feelings for Anna are twisted, and this is not just about making her unpredictable and dangerous, but also about looking into a mirror.

 

I am more interested in how each giantess will react upon seeing how traumatized Anna is because of her past. Some might not give it much thought and some might want to avenge Anna... and that will dictate the future of the story, because wanting to hurt Zoey for Anna’s sake changes the nature of the relationship – Anna will seize being just a slave and become something more precious, someone worth protecting from harm (past and future). Not Poppy anylonger.

 

Harper is the obvious choice, she will want to jump at Zoey, but more out of jealousy and spite than care. I picture Molly and Naomi going after Zoey only if their pride is hurt. But Leah, ice queen Leah, is another story. Her dialogues and interactions with Anna built up a kind of tension between the two that you just can’t put your finger on. 

 

And yet, you can tell is something more going on in Leah's mind when she is with her Poppy.

 

Yes, if I had to guess, I think it’s Leah the one who will want to step up against Zoey and find her match on a psychological level. They are the ones who really want Anna, they will try to hurt each other to the end. 

 

And what will make the difference for Anna in this traumatic reckoning with the past, ironically,  is the affection she knows Leah and the others hold towards her.

 

Least but not last, their is the type 0 theories and mysteries. Chapter 15 once more foreshadowed the four families deep interest in our heroine, while revealing type 0 is regarded a myth even among shrinkees. Her abilities and their extent (even the imprint) are, therefore, unknown. This is a really good plot device to push the story forward.

 

Two last questions:

1. I am not saying the 4 spoiled and cruel girls shouldn’t pay for what they did so far, but what you think? Is redemption for any of the giantessess possible? 

2. How many chapters do you estimate the story will have?

 

Well, that’s it for now. Hope some of my ideas can help you in the writing process. 

Sorry for the long comment and for any mispealling or mistakes.

 

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Already eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Okay, first of all thank you! Sometimes when I'm writing this story, I'll put it in the back burner because it is more of a way to get some creative juices flowing, but then I'll come back to this site after a week or two and see all the fantastic comments. It helps me remember that there's actual people who are reading this story and care about how it ends. 

Once again, I really like reading your comments, Mr. In A Suit. I can't get into the accuracy of your observations, but I like how you think. 

As for the questions:

1. I love all of my characters, so they'll never need to be redemed in my eyes, but as for the readers?  Who can say? I have an ending to the story already outlined, so you'll just have to see if the FF are "redemed" by the end.

2. Oh god. If you recall, I said that we would be going into the giantesses' backstories soon—I believe that was three months ago. Like I said, I have an outline, but often the chapters end up becoming too long, or I'll realize I want to include a scene that delays my time frame. For example, I thought the funeral scene and the (spoiler for chapter 16) visiting Annabelle's house scene was going to be in the same chapter—and you saw how that turned out. I'm not a fan of stories that are drawn out, so I'll tentatively say I want the story to be finished in under 30 chapters. 

Thanks again for your continued support!

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2021 4:44 AM Title: The Beginning

Okay, this is ridiculously good. RIDICULOUSLY.

Author's Response:

Ha! Thank you. THANK YOU.

But seriously, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2021 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Well here comes big bad Zoey to battle those evil rich bitches to get her step-sister back to safety and end her ordeal!

 

*keeps reading*

 

Ok she's a bit playful, nothing wrong with that honestly. I'm sure Danny enjoyed himself and he didn't die in the sewers so a win/win all around.

*keeps reading*

 

Alright she's kicking the bullies ass and making them pay for hurting Belle, up next is the big bads of the story and hells coming with her!

 

*finishes reading*

 

Holy...shit.

Author's Response:

Ha! I've mentioned Annabelle's reluctance to see Zoey, but up until now I'd never given any reasoning as to why she was so wary of her. I can see how Zoey's whole schtick is "creepy", but she actually reminds me a lot of the FF in how easily she's able to put on and remove her mask.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2021 6:51 PM Title: The Beginning

Looking forward to it, as much as I favor Harper and Leah I'm open to you changing my mind in favor of the others

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm really curious if people will maintain their favs, once we meet the giantesses' families. I have a feeling some rankings are going to be rearranged. 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2021 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

You really are an amazing writer, very creative. This is another amazing chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sometimes I worry that my chapters are too long, but what can I say? Anna's journey is a long one.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Seeing her have even a shred of hope fills me with good vibes for her future, it is a mountain to climb but people climb those all the time.

 

She kind of lost her cool at the end but it was completely understandable to see with what and who she is dealing with daily. I'm rooting for her but it'll be a fight for sure.

Author's Response:

Yeah, Anna has a lot of challanges ahead of her, but she still has a lot of fight left in her!

Reviewer: Ant-Man and the Air Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

Just wow... Your story is really great ! The charactaers, the psycholgy and the evenments are amazing. I don't post any review usally, but I love your story, so I support you. 

And I'm team Harper. And I really would like that the story continue like this... Give freedom to Poppy will be too simple... You should continue to explore her relationship with the girls.

Thanks for you story ! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I most certainly will be developing Annabelle's relationships with the giantesses. In a couple of chapters we will really begin to see why the giantesses are they way they are. 

Reviewer: GrubbySto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love the story so far! Made an account just to review this and pledge my support for #TeamLeah! 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! And Leah definitely seems to be one of the more popular choices. 

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2020 7:58 PM Title: The Beginning

Definitely Naomi or Leah. Harper is a maybe, and Molly is too dumb for me to root for her. It would be cool to have several alternate endings where she ends up with a different girl to explore all posibilities but for me is definitely Leah or Naomi.

 

Also I think Leah was upset because Anabelle was being all excited with the other girls during her episode and she felt jealous maybe?

Author's Response:

I'm definitely open to a "What-If" series if people are interested. Both the story's outline and ending are already solidified, but I'm always imagining other endings in my head for fun.

Reviewer: Zingers Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2020 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love the new chapter about Leah! Excellent work as always!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I enjoy writing Leah's chapters a lot. Her dialogue is always so sharp and cruel.