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Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 2:51 AM Title: The Beginning

Another intoxicating chapter. Yours is the only story I keep coming back to.



Author's Response:

Thanks Elliot! Sorry for the long wait times though!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2021 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Another masterpiece of a chapter - thank you.

I'm not usually into giant content, but enjoyed the dynamic of Poppy being in the hands of an uncaring giant whose power over her was really emphasised. The idea that she would turn to the very individuals who murdered her friends and put her in this situation shows how desperate her situation is and perhaps hints that she's beginning to see the giantesses more and more as divine protectors. Perhaps beings worthy of true worship?

"Absolute physical domination over another person" - loving this side of Harper and hope we see more.

My ultimate hope for this story is that we get to see more of giantess Zoey - I really enjoy her character, she is incredibly powerful and your descriptive writing give us a fascinating window into the complex relationship between her and Annabel. The idea of her imprinting on Zoey is absolutely terrifying for poor Annabel, but as we can see with Poppy's inner musings it's something they're starting to consider. I would love Zoey to become the ultimate Goddess :)



Author's Response:

Thanks redfoot! I know giant content can be hit or miss on this site, but I was hinting at it in a lot of chapters leading up to this, so I hope it wasn't too jarring for the readers. Harper's physicality will be explored in further chapters, as we really delve into the FF's personal backgrounds.

I'm glad so many of you guys are liking Zoey! I had only mentioned her a few times before we got that interlude she stared in, so I was worried you guys wouldn't take to her. Zoey is a huge part of Annabelle's past, so as we learn more about Annabelle's trauma, we'll see just what their relationship dynamic was.

Thanks again for commenting!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2021 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Part 1: The catsuit fits perfectly in this living nightmare, like another way for them and the universe to drive home the point to Anna that she is nothing more than a pet to these vile girls no matter how much she wished otherwise.

I am shocked they teased eating her again so soon after the last time nearly cost them their precious ""Poppy". I know they're evil incarnate but I would have thought they'd care just a bit about her PTSD on the matter.

I am rooting for Anna's triumphant win when this is all over...however you've dangled the Zoey carrot in front of us. A horrible girl through and through but damn if the big jock bully fan in me is not kind of rooting for it now...I'm horrible, I've made peace with this.

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Part 2:

 

Jesus Christ...you just can't let poor Anna have a bit of peace can you? First she gets scared by the thunderstorm without her trusty and noble bun bun and then she gets a chance at escape but gets shanghi'd by a massive pervert with an obbession for the very people who took her life away. If I didn't know any better I'd think this was a fetish website or something.

I will say though I am rooting for them to fuck up his life proper though. Smite somebody who actually deserves it for once instead of the poor souls they usually ruin.

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Part 3: Even when her life was in mortal peril the giantesses still found time to gain immense pleasure from her suffering, she really is fucked if a hail mary doesn't come soon. The way they systematically broke him down while being a simp/not in his right mind due to booze shows how truly powerful they are alone or as a united front which shows what Anna is really up against here.

 

The ending while light hearted still seems like a punch to the guy for Anna knowing they'll get off scot free with the only real comeuppance coming to anyone being the perv possibly and the poor soldiers trying their best to do their jobs.



Author's Response:

Hey Adam, as always you pick up on some interesting details. Yeah, the FF's response to trauma is not recommended by the American Psychiatric Association. And Don't worry, I'm also a Zoey stan. So far she's only been a few chapters, but damn it if it isn't fun to write her. She'll definitely be making a reappearance.  

Thanks for reviewing Adam, your comments are always fun to read.

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2021 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love the long chapters. And can't wait for the next one top drop.

My ONE criticism is the overuse of the word "cooing" which I notice among many authors. Other than that, this could be 1000 chapters and I'd keep coming back.



Author's Response:

Thanks Elliot! I actually agree! I cntrl "F" the other day and saw how much I was using it lol. Thanks, I'm always trying to improve my writing. Hope you keep enjoying it.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wasn’t fully satisfied with my first comment, so I deleted and changed it a bit. Now it’s good. Sorry for any confusion.

I don’t usually write about the sex scenes... but boy the depiction of Anna and Molly having sex was HOT!! And that’s because you prepared the mood so well, making a perfect transiction of a sentimental part (Molly genuinely opening up to Anna) to a sexy (Anna tickling and turning Molly on). Perfect. Just perfect.

In a past comment  I said didn’t like Molly Much... I FULLY TAKE IT BACK! The depiction of her room as lacking personality and seeking approval and carnal attachment from HER TINY! So much emotions in only one chapter.

I think this story is especial because you are playing with appearances and expectations, and it all culminated in this two chapters, with a Molly full of lust and adoration saying “ I don't think I really understood what being your Goddess meant until recently” (great dialogues by the way), with Harper and Naomi expressly saying Poppy deserves to be WORSHIPPED!

They started as cinics, answering the espectations of society, while internaly fancing themselves as goddess allowed “breaking” in ocasional sprees of violence disdain and hatred for tinies, But see them now. They still think They are superior? Yes but they are showing outside signs of turmoil, to and for a tiny nonethelss. That, i see as the irony of the story, as well as kind of the tragedy of it’s antagonists.

You can theorize the giantesses inprinted on Anna, but I think it’s too early to draw conclusions about what imprinting really is and about the feelings of each character. It’s twisted relations all over since the beginning, with Harper “crush” and Leah’s amusement of Anna wits, and that’s what is so good about writing: you can portray any relation in all it’s complex contradictions (also why I don’t like Anna x Oliver. Too predictable kkk).

The giantesses are opening up to her, they love her. What about Poppy? She has to open up about Zoey, but not before coming clean about her fears about the 4 themselves. As I see it, Zoey and the mighty families are the true villains here... and will be instrumental for bounding Poppy to the giantesses even more than imprinting.

Sorry for any mispeals. I can’t imagine how much work you put into these long chapters and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Been waiting all week to read this. You always manages to surprise me!  

About your question, I like long chapters - you can work more than one storyline at once, mixing many elements without rush - and think the length of this last chapter was good, it ended right were it needed... I ended already wishing for more Kkkkkkkk.

 

On a side note: any chance of a scene where Anna willingly ends up under a giantess sole and tickling her feet? Than, as pay back, Anna has her own feet worshipped... kkk



Author's Response:

Thanks Mr. In A Suit! I'm glad you're warming up to Molly. I may be a little biased, but I firmly believe that all of the giantesses have something special to offer Annabelle. Now whether she'll end up accepting it or not is another story. 

As always, I love your analysis. I can't say much but both Annabelle and the giantesses are going to be forced to open up and get vulnerable in order to achieve the things they want. How each character will react to one another's' past? Who can say? 

 

As for your side note: we'll just have to see, won't we ;)

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2021 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Another amazing chapter. So as for the length I'll reference literotica.com and say stories like Curious Girls or Sorority pledge are the best on the site and they have pretty long chapters so always the longer the better. Another plus to long stories is you can further the plot and add some smut without causing a conflict. Speaking of smut idk if you just arent a fan but we haven't seen any buttstuff yet with Naomi the last we haven't seen use Anna for pleasure maybe she could be into butt stuff? Or as I'm sure Zoey will get her hands on Anna at some point maybe her. Could be about her pleasure and Anna's torture with Zoey.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I actually checked out Curious Girls after reading this review. I see what you mean about the long chapters and the butt stuff lol. I will say that I was planning a very specific scene for that tag, but reading that story has given me a few other ideas so thanks!

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2021 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter. I'm glad we're back to the giantesses interacting with Annabelle directly. The necklace chapters were certainly well-written and enjoyable nonetheless, but in my opinion nothing beats having them interact with her openly. Love all the teasing and adoring they do, seriously the best part of this story for me is the unique relationship where the goddesses truly love Annabelle in a unique way that is honestly hard to describe. 

 

I'm surprised it's been awhile since we've seen the alter-ego of Poppy show up. With how things were going here I thought for sure she would pop up near the end bit with Molly. Have to wonder how much playing along is pushing her psyche more and more towards that of "Poppy." 

Cannot wait until the next chapter, honestly this is the best ongoing story on the site for me, the other ones I was interested in seem to not be getting anymore updates unfortunately. I have absolutely no issue on how long the chapters are, genuinely there is no such thing as "too long" in my book. That being said, I can only hope the fact that this chapter being broken up leads to a quicker release of the next installment!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Huggler! I have to say, I'm glad you like the dynamic between the giantesses and Annabelle (their interactions are also my favorite part to write). We're slowly going to be finding out a bit more about "Poppy" in the upcoming chapters.  Stay tunned! 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

You win some and lose some, Anna won the mission the of finding the chef's daughter and even managed to possibly find a weak link in the terror chain with Molly's new found self esteem thanks to her.

 

That said she kind of lost the war of not ending up as a sex toy yet again but at least it was the closest to a heartwarming moment as we may ever get with a giant person in this story and anything naughty coming from them.

 

As for the chapter length they are long yes but with things like this, Endless, The Fire story(forget the name but the one with Isobelle and Sabrina etc) the read is more than worth it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Adam! Annabelle has these little moments that give her motivation to keep keeping on. Whether it'll lead to freedom, we'll just have to see. 

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Another wonderful chapter - thank you!

Wonder what the giantesses will do if they find out what Poppy really thinks about Zoey. Will they see the fear she instils in her stepsister and crave dominance over rather than love for Poppy?

 Just love this story, and am so pleased whenever I see an update. My personal preference therefore would be for chapters to be as long and detailed as possible :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, and I'm also really excited to showcase the giantesses' "discovery" of Annabelle's past life. A lot of fun things are coming up. :)

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

First, let me start by saying I can’t remember any story discribing a vore experience like yours. Anna’s awe when confronted with the noises of Naomi’s organs was magnific.

Also, the size comparisons When Zoe is presente are a good touch. Leah and cia. are scary and powerfull from Anna’s perspective. But Zoey is a monster, a mountain, a force of nature... a titan like you put it.

Poppy can come out and play with the giantesses because Anna is still able to make the distinction and see them as humans, really big, really messed up human beings. Zoey is different, she is a monster, a demon to her sister.

Now, for the meat of this chapter.

If you ask me, we witnessed some really deep bounding time between Naomi and Anna. Why? Well, because Anna was inside of her! You can’t get much closer on a physical level... but then she is bathed on Naomi’s puke!  I am curious to see if this experience will have some after effect on either of the two.

Fingers crossed to see more Naomi x Anna momments.

Anna is a special existence to Leah and cia. They probably never had so much interaction with someone outside their circle and a tiny nonetheless. But it will all come down to how each one will react once their respective families act, because to their fathers and mothers, Anna is just a special type of tiny, a precious lab experiment.

About Oliver... I think he should die. Seriouslly. He Always ends up being a light of hope, a good memory to Anna... what if he ends up dying without ever fiding out she was alive? Just a tought... I don't want him and Annabelle to just end up together like a happy couple kkkk

 

 

Your story is always worth the wait. Thanks for sharing it with us! 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I had never written vore before so I was a little nervous. I'm glad you noticed the difference between how Annabelle perceives the FF vs. Zoey. As for Naomi X Annabelle...well there will be a lot of one-on-one moments with each giantess in the future. 

 

Again, thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to know someone's reading

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

Awww I actually feel so bad for Anna. The whole bit with her mother and sister Beth really had me emotional. I hope after all this is over she has an adoring owner that loves and spoils her! 

I really do like that the giantesses act with compassion and concern when it comes to Anna. It's just so crazy considering how they would kill hundreds of other shrinkees without a second thought, yet they are all head-over-heels for their precious Poppy. 

I will say I'm glad that Zoey failed to get her hands on Anna, I much prefer her being in the possession of people who actually care for her even if it is in their own twisted ways. I had no idea where you were going with the story after the dog took the necklace, I thought for sure Anna was going to end up getting found by Zoey but again I'm glad that wasn't the case. 

I keep checking everyday for updates on this, so please keep it going! Absolutely love it so far.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Annabelle's family trauma will definitely be making a reappearance in the coming chapters. One of my favorite things about writing this story is emphasizing the difference in how the giantesses treat Annabelle vs. any other Shrinkee. Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2021 4:32 PM Title: The Beginning

An extraordinarily good story - absolutely love it when there's an update and I truly appreciate you writing such long and descriptive chapters. It's undoubtedly not easy to do so, so thank you for making the time!

This was one of the best chapters yet. So close to Zoey's clutches yet so far, and what a conclusion. My favourite giantesses are Leah and Zoey - both are powerful with people their own size let alone a tiny little bug like Poppy. Would love to see Zoey get her hands on her sister, perhaps even get her to imprint on her - that would be the ultimate horror to Annabelle. I might be the only one on here rooting for an 'unhappy' ending in this sense ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Can't say what's coming up, but this definitely isn't the last we've seen of Zoey.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

That was fucking incredible!

 

Maggie should've ran out of the room but damn good dog.

 

I feel bad cause I really want the main four big bads to get theirs but I also kind of want Zoey to find Anna at the same time down the road.

Not sure where this goes next but I hope the rich girls have found their worthiest advisary in mighty Zoey.



Author's Response:

Maggie is definitely a good dog! Also, I can't say much, but the giantesses will find that getting Annabelle to imprint won't come as easily as so many other things in their lives do. 

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Another fantastic chapter, really appreciate the work. Out of the possible pairings of girls I'd have to say I have two duos that I'd be interested in mainly, though all of them are intriguing and unique. 

1) Molly/Harper - I adore Harper and she's up and away my favorite character so far, other than our protagonist Anna. I don't have much of a love for Molly's personality or anything but I have a soft spot for giantesses with a little extra weight on them, turns me on a little bit more and I know with Harper things would be going down an already sexy path. 

2) Harper/Leah - This right here is potentially the most dangerous combo in terms of Anna imprinting. I feel Harper's raw attraction to her appeals directly to the core of Poppy's being. That desire to worship and be adored. However Leah seems to be quite good and dismissing whatever humanity Anna tries to cling to. She knows exactly what to say to crush her spirit while still showering the shrinkee with her own form of love. 

Gotta say I still have my fingers crossed they go after Anna's father or someone else close to her, would really destroy Anna but would be very fun for us readers. On a side note, I was really happy to see the way they defended Anna from that Luke guy. They really do love her, even if it's in the way a pet is loved. It seems more than just your average pet though, like Anna holds a special place in all their hearts. I can't wait to see who gets imprinted assuming that day does come. I also hope maybe some more mouthplay is introduced, that cereal scene with Molly is low key one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

The reasons for your pairings are really interesting. I can't say too much, but I think you'll be pleasntly surprised in future chapters. Also, I look forward to adding more direct scenes with the giantesses (both mouthplay and others) as they "play" with Annabelle. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

I also think some Leah/Naomi or Leah/Harper interactions would be interesting... But what I really want to see is Harper, Naomi and Harper dealing with crazy Zoey while Poppy is lost at their feet XDD... yeah, I like all characters, but Molly is not my favorite. 



Author's Response:

Ha! I also enjoy those pairings, but curious to see in the next coming chapters if you (and others) will have a change in rankings.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

More and more the story portrays Anabelle as special for all four giantesses... As for what they represent for Anna... it’s complicated.

 

This line about Naomi picked my interest:  “She'd actually preferred it if Naomi dialed back on the affection, but she didn't understand why she was so insistent on maintaining her bad-ass persona.”

 

That line reminds of the interactions Annabelle had with Naomi in ch. 11 – “All of the giantesses treated her with cloying affection, but Naomi seemed to up it to 110% when they were alone. Annabelle figured it was because her public persona of bad-ass, cold, aloof punk-rock princess didn't allow her to show her girlier, more affectionate side. Unfortunately for Annabelle, that meant she received the full brunt of it whenever they were alone.”

 

With that in mind, I think more interactions with Naomi would be interesting – for example: Molly mockers Naomi sense of style and true behavior, but Anna later sooths her, saying she prefers that side of Naomi over her public persona.

 

Also, the part Where Zoey’s size is highlighted and Anna cant help but imagine how it would be  “to be down on the ground near a gigantic Zoey”.... marvelous! I too want to see these reactions - of Anna, of Zoey... and of Poppy!

 

Thanks for all the hard work, answering comments and continuing the story. Right now, this is my favorite on-going story on the whole site.



Author's Response:

Your comments are always so dangerous, Mr. Suit, because I am always tempted to give some things away. I love how you notice the little lines I leave behind for the future development of the plot. I had hopeed that future chapters (and the ending) would spur people to re-read the story, so they could pick up on all the clues I dropped, but you seem to be ahead of the crowd. Thanks again for commenting! 

Reviewer: Elliot Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2021 6:32 PM Title: The Beginning

Yeh man. Pls. write more. My favourite story at the moment. I check every two days for an update.



Author's Response:

Wait no longer, it's up!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2021 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

I enjoyed the Fearsome Four shitting on the jocks, for once they were able to use their evil for good instead of well...

The Daniel section was masterfully written, you really showcased their ability to turn on a dime in any given situation. Though I kind of expected him going home with them to eventually lead to their demise but that thread seems snipped.

I'm ready for Zoey to take on the Governer, The Dean, The Chief, The Corporation and any other other Buffy or Walking Dead villains they have to get through.

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As for your question, I'm kind of partial to Leah/Naomi. Bad ass punk girls and/or asian are kind of high on my list etc. They both seem like they would destroy Harper/Molly if given the chance. Like they would be the Lord Zedd/Goldar to the other two's Rito and Finster.



Author's Response:

Ha! This comment made me laugh so hard. Yeah, while I'd agree that Leah and Naomi are formidable in their own right, Harper and Molly may just surprise you.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Still enjoying, hopeful for a little action in the next chapter but I understand the need to build the story. As for combos doesnt really matter to me as long as Harper is one, easily my favorite giantess.



Author's Response:

Yeah, although I think the giantesses hidding Annabelle in plain sight within the locket/necklace is fun, my I love to write their direct interactions with each other. 

Reviewer: Huggler Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2021 6:01 PM Title: The Beginning

Man this is so good! There's something about the dynamic between shrinkee and captor where the captor wants to break the shrinkee down to submission but still cares for them, that REALLY gets me going. So far Harper is definitely my favorite with probably Leah behind her. I love how openly attracted to Anna Harper is, the line where she says it'd be inevitable they end up dating made me swoon! I love the thought of Harper spoiling and pampering her reluctant pet, I think that's my favorite potential angle going forward.

 

I'll be honest, this is pretty fucked up of me, but I REALLY want to see the foursome get their clutches on Anna's family. That would be so insanely hot and I know the four girls would agree, I can already imagine Harper getting aroused at the thought. 

Definitely watching this for any and all future updates.



Author's Response:

Ha! Thanks for reading! I think Harper's...enthusiasm, is one of the main elements that caused me to write this story in the first place. 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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