great chapters! i didn't see this coming

I don't think we've ever seen the foursome interact with Anna WHILST she was dealing with her inner demon, I am shocked we haven't had an episode like this before given how they daunt over her. I'm still looking forward to Zoey saving the day at some point and reclaiming her property.

The BSA can't stop fate.

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Poppy's going full on Freddy these days tormenting our poor Anna in her dreams seemingly going in for the kill. Anna's fought off a megaton of crap since they've found her so I have no doubt she'll overcome this but this is the most forceful we've ever seen her inner kinkster since I've been reading the story.

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God damn you brought the father into this.

Poor Anna almost had a way out...well she still kind of does if she automatically ends herself whenever possible messing up their plans etc...but I can't see her risking her father or her friends to try such a scenario.

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If Anna accidentally started an uprising that would force the Foursome to help start something that would eat the BSA from the inside out then kudos to her. She's been under the eightball for so long it would nice to see her get such a win even if it was just enough to escape or at least stop the main Foursome branch.

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The seeds have been sown wether Anna gets the outcome she hoped for or not.

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I know the Foursome are evil and very, very violent...

But that being said I feel like I've never wanted to be Anna more than everything leading up to during the sock sorting scene. Just some incredibly cruel and humiliating treatment of a tiny whether she deserved it or not.

Hopefully Poppy doesn't mess up Anna's humanity too much whilst she loose.

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Well shit...

It seems Anna's slight victory is short lived and may have gotten poor Nell beaten by a vengeful sister but I think Nell would understand given the circumstances at play. I don't know how Anna will get out of this but she's a resourceful one especially after all she's been through.

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Poor Anna is slowly losing her grip on her sanity the more she stays with the Foursome. Steven is trying his best but it might take a lot more than he can offer to keep her from going off the deep end entirely.

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A definite curveball here but if anyone can figure out how to get her out of there it would be Byte. Not sure his views on Steven who seems to be nothing but helpful but who knows if he is either in it for his own survival or currently in the crosshairs of the Foursome without knowing it.

Bryan was a four eyed nazi rapist 

Been a while without any updates. I know it’s not much help for anything, but I hope everything is fine and you are alright.

Author's Response:

Hey Mr in A Suit,

Sorry for the long absence! I'll use your comment to update everyone. 

I'm so thankful for everyone's well wishes! It's much appreciated. I'll be finished drafting this most recent chapter either tonight or tomorrow night. I'm aiming to edit/upload this weekend. It'll probably be the longest chapter yet, I think. It's been so long since I've last uploaded, I didn't want to leave on a cliff hanger (at least that specific cliffhanger) as I didn't think it would be fair. As a reminder this isn't the "jumping the shark chapter" (despite what happens in this one, lol) that's the upcoming chapter. 

As always, I'm glad to see everyone is still enjoying this story after all this time--your comments truly do keep me going. 

Thanks again, people!

(also, if I ever write another story on this site, I'll make sure it's completely finished first, hahaha)

--WOP

Another incredible chapter. Thank you. And so pleased to see you're back.

Can't wait to read on, hoping for an 'aware' meeting of Zoey & Poppy - the latter to feel smaller than ever!

Poppy is coming hard for our young heroine, the fight is getting near the end it seems unless she has a last second hail mary in her playbook. I still think Neil might be that Hail Mary despite her missteps as she is the only one she's might bigger than her since that fateful night that seems to respect/care for her as more of a person and not just a pet.

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Woah an abrupt --- there...

Makes me wonder if somebody is kidnapping poor Bella against her will again but it seems rather risky given its in one of the Foursome's home and the person appears to be full sized.

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Well hell this turned terrifying fast..

Incredible work via Naomi to get this all set up for Bella to face her fears...well just this one not the several others since she met the foursome. I fully expect something really horrible to be in the lesson plan for Mr. Acker but at least Bella will get a little piece of mind...and likely more nightmares on top of it.

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A lot to unpack here...

For once Naomi WASN'T the true monster here, a rare showing for anyone from the Foursome with what we've learned about them. Bella got a little bit of justice in her bleak world so it was a minor win even if she had to witness somebody's flesh dripping off their face to achieve it. 

I'm not sure if she'll find closure from this but in this one instance horribleness actually benefited the world of the BSA instead of just them. It was brutal but removing him from the table brings a lot of people closure if they will never know it and saves a lot of people from falling into his trap.

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Now there's the haunting nightmares I was expecting!

At least it wasn't Naomi encouraging Chloe to eat her or Chloe outright eating her so a win for the subconscious of our heroine. I like to think if she ever escapes this she will never want to step foot in another classroom for as long as possible.

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A heartwarming moment with Naomi, I'm beginning to think with better parents the foursome might have ended up a lot better off.

Naomi's anger at least comes from a place of understanding as people were dicks to her and her mother long before they possibly started the BSA thus we understand why she is as frightening as she is to outsiders. Like the others this was a heartwarming look into the underside of the monsters Bella has been forced to bare witness to over the past few months.

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Her past becoming known?

Does this mean the Foursome will face their toughest task yet in taking all the all mighty Step Goddess?

Stay tuned!

So, first off welcome back, I have greatly missed this story.  Still is an awesome story and i really want to see how this ends ( I am so torn on which ending i want other then i dont want a full imprint, but do i want her to end with Cloe( good ending) or girls ( ranging from ok to bad to very bad (leah)).

   Yea any pity I had for the teacher went by by when He tried to shift the blame.  THat was bullshit and honestly I think he was lucky to die, I would rather die then live under Sanos oh so gentle and caring ( sarcasm) hands.  

    NOw that we are done with the individual chapters I rank as the Girls coming out ahead in this depraved race is Naomi, Molly, Harper, Leah, Nell.  Nell had them all beat right up until the end, Sorry girl but yea you really arent any better just better as pretending to be human.

    I am so ready for the back story of Anna, you have teased it now for years and I am so ready for it. 

See you next time.

Goddamit themore I hear about Annabelle’s one good relationship, that being her friendship with Chloe, the more I want them to be the ones who get together in the end, not romantically but ya know, as the person who takes care of Annabelle due to her size.

Nem sei por onde começar... sua história é incrível! simplesmente um dos melhores do site! Conheci ela depois de alguns capítulos já terem sido publicados e pude ver sua evolução com fluidez!

Eu realmente espero ver o resultado desta magnífica história. Não consigo imaginar qual das muitas possibilidades acontecerá com Annabelle, mas se posso expressar minhas opiniões; Eu realmente acredito que depois de tudo que ela passou, seria oportuno superar isso.

I mean, among the things that I think contributed to a good outcome is the fact that she should maintain her humanity and perhaps escape her captors. Punishing them is not a requirement, but if it happens it works... finally, although it is already defined, I think it would have been logical for Annabelle's sister to also be type 0, since they were twins... in any case , please don't abandon the story!

I can't help myself, though, your writing style reminds me a lot of kenny224. Even to such an extent, that I'm inclined to believe it's you, lol. If I could pick one correlation, it would be this "submit to your goddess" voice inside a head of the main protagonist.

You're an extremely talented writer in this genre. I'm absolutely loving this story, and I can't wait to see how it progresses and of course, its end. 

I'm also impatiently awaiting this long time coming encounter of Belle with Zoey. I do hope there's gonna be several chapters dedicated to this alone, as I can imagine with Zoey finding a shrunken "sister", especially in her indestructible stature, is her dream come true.

Should you be able to come up with your own patron or whatever account to post some of your other stories, I'll be the first in line.

Wish you all the best!