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Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2024 3:59 PM Title: The Beginning

Welcome back to writer of passage I was wondering what happened to you again, anyway thank for the lovely chapter still wondering from a previous chapter long ago if the shrink girl forgot her name who got infected with Annabelle blood going to make a  appearance and show up, I could see the infection blood make a shrinke have some benefits like obedience and complete loyal to the one they got infected by as well as improve resilience and durability similar to a type 0 but lesser being a type 2 aka a type 0 b for short that just My theory, anyway also has to ask why isn't Annabelle twin sister a type 0 as well seeing as they both are identical twins it just seems odd to me since they both are identical twins and should have the same blood type?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2024 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poppy is coming hard for our young heroine, the fight is getting near the end it seems unless she has a last second hail mary in her playbook. I still think Neil might be that Hail Mary despite her missteps as she is the only one she's might bigger than her since that fateful night that seems to respect/care for her as more of a person and not just a pet.

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Woah an abrupt --- there...

Makes me wonder if somebody is kidnapping poor Bella against her will again but it seems rather risky given its in one of the Foursome's home and the person appears to be full sized.

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Well hell this turned terrifying fast..

Incredible work via Naomi to get this all set up for Bella to face her fears...well just this one not the several others since she met the foursome. I fully expect something really horrible to be in the lesson plan for Mr. Acker but at least Bella will get a little piece of mind...and likely more nightmares on top of it.

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A lot to unpack here...

For once Naomi WASN'T the true monster here, a rare showing for anyone from the Foursome with what we've learned about them. Bella got a little bit of justice in her bleak world so it was a minor win even if she had to witness somebody's flesh dripping off their face to achieve it. 

I'm not sure if she'll find closure from this but in this one instance horribleness actually benefited the world of the BSA instead of just them. It was brutal but removing him from the table brings a lot of people closure if they will never know it and saves a lot of people from falling into his trap.

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Now there's the haunting nightmares I was expecting!

At least it wasn't Naomi encouraging Chloe to eat her or Chloe outright eating her so a win for the subconscious of our heroine. I like to think if she ever escapes this she will never want to step foot in another classroom for as long as possible.

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A heartwarming moment with Naomi, I'm beginning to think with better parents the foursome might have ended up a lot better off.

Naomi's anger at least comes from a place of understanding as people were dicks to her and her mother long before they possibly started the BSA thus we understand why she is as frightening as she is to outsiders. Like the others this was a heartwarming look into the underside of the monsters Bella has been forced to bare witness to over the past few months.

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Her past becoming known?

Does this mean the Foursome will face their toughest task yet in taking all the all mighty Step Goddess?

Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Type Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2024 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 38

I thought that I would lose interest because of how long an update took. But after reading it, I almost cried.


Memories 😭

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 38

So, first off welcome back, I have greatly missed this story.  Still is an awesome story and i really want to see how this ends ( I am so torn on which ending i want other then i dont want a full imprint, but do i want her to end with Cloe( good ending) or girls ( ranging from ok to bad to very bad (leah)).

   Yea any pity I had for the teacher went by by when He tried to shift the blame.  THat was bullshit and honestly I think he was lucky to die, I would rather die then live under Sanos oh so gentle and caring ( sarcasm) hands.  

    NOw that we are done with the individual chapters I rank as the Girls coming out ahead in this depraved race is Naomi, Molly, Harper, Leah, Nell.  Nell had them all beat right up until the end, Sorry girl but yea you really arent any better just better as pretending to be human.

    I am so ready for the back story of Anna, you have teased it now for years and I am so ready for it. 

See you next time.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 38

awesome, i can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 38

Goddamit themore I hear about Annabelle’s one good relationship, that being her friendship with Chloe, the more I want them to be the ones who get together in the end, not romantically but ya know, as the person who takes care of Annabelle due to her size.

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2024 5:42 AM Title: The Beginning

Just checking up on you, again you haven't posted a new chapter in five months, want to see you doing All right anyways Hopefully your account wasn't hacked as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks Nightwatch,


I'm all right, just super busy. I'll try to be more communicative in the future, sorry for going all MIA! I'm actually planning on uploading a new chapter today if everything goes well. (fingers crossed)

It means a lot that you guys are still looking forward to this series :)

Reviewer: Barbarizando Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2024 1:55 AM Title: The Beginning

Nem sei por onde começar... sua história é incrível! simplesmente um dos melhores do site! Conheci ela depois de alguns capítulos já terem sido publicados e pude ver sua evolução com fluidez!

Eu realmente espero ver o resultado desta magnífica história. Não consigo imaginar qual das muitas possibilidades acontecerá com Annabelle, mas se posso expressar minhas opiniões; Eu realmente acredito que depois de tudo que ela passou, seria oportuno superar isso.

I mean, among the things that I think contributed to a good outcome is the fact that she should maintain her humanity and perhaps escape her captors. Punishing them is not a requirement, but if it happens it works... finally, although it is already defined, I think it would have been logical for Annabelle's sister to also be type 0, since they were twins... in any case , please don't abandon the story!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2023 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 37

I long for you to return to complete this incredible story. Fingers crossed in 2024 :)

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2023 6:22 PM Title: The Beginning

I can't help myself, though, your writing style reminds me a lot of kenny224. Even to such an extent, that I'm inclined to believe it's you, lol. If I could pick one correlation, it would be this "submit to your goddess" voice inside a head of the main protagonist.

You're an extremely talented writer in this genre. I'm absolutely loving this story, and I can't wait to see how it progresses and of course, its end. 

I'm also impatiently awaiting this long time coming encounter of Belle with Zoey. I do hope there's gonna be several chapters dedicated to this alone, as I can imagine with Zoey finding a shrunken "sister", especially in her indestructible stature, is her dream come true.

Should you be able to come up with your own patron or whatever account to post some of your other stories, I'll be the first in line.

Wish you all the best!

Reviewer: redfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 10:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Miss you! Hope all well WoP :)

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2023 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

WRite I dont know if you are aware but this site does have aging issues, so U might look into other sites for you story, just in case this site ever does die.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2023 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 37

Life can throw us curve balls. Lately I ‘ve also had to deal with some problems, not even sleeping well for the last couple weeks, so I am glad to know you are safe and well and working through.

Speaking of working through, man… Anna can’t have nice things. Great gruesome depictions during the village destruction. For the short amount of time he had, the chief’s death was hard and even with the dream scene, I wasn’t expecting for it to turn out like it did.

In fact, I don’t know what to say. Yes, I thought Nell could be dangerous, but… man! Are all the bridges burn? I could say no, but I am not sure this wouldn’t just be me trying to force my views upon the characters.

Life isn't throwing curve balls at little Anna... It's trying to shove a gigantic fucking wrecking ball down her throat!

Great come back! Great to have you back! As always, thanks for writing and sharing. Stay safe!

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2023 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

So I will be leaving a review for the latest chapter, but for now i am rereading this story, and i have a question. If at all possible can u plz kill the parents, ( particularly Mollies parents)? Also in a very gruesome manor, I don't usually ask that but i just got to Mollies chapter again, and every thing I said the last time still stands, but yea I want Mollies mother in particular to suffer a very bad end.  Believe it or not I am actually ok if the girls live, i actually like them, (as characters, they are still terrible people).

Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2023 5:17 PM Title: The Beginning

Love this story, especially the scenes where the four are comforting Annabelle.

Honestly, I'm hoping Annabelle can actually get back to her best friend, Chloe, in the end, she's the only character I can see that would genuinely care for her even at her new size, her own family has all abandoned her at one point in her life and that includes her sister who even now is looking to use her sister more than help her from the looks of it. Genuinely speaking, if she could get the giantesses to start seeing her as a person then she'd be pretty set even if she imprints on them, but Chloe is literally the only person who stuck by Annabelle, even in her (fake) death.


So yeah, I'm hoping for an Annabelle-Chloe ending of some kind. When it comes to imprinting, not sure, I'd say Harper is best since she seems to be the 'closest' to Annabelle of all the giantesses, but honestly, if Annabelle doesn't imprint on herself or one of the girls, I can see her imprinting on multiple people or even end up doing something even more strange, like being able to imprint at will or something. I agree with Leah that she seems to have a habit of going above and beyond even if unintentionally.


But yeah, really like this story, rare to find any gts story with both, A. a tiny girl as the MC and B. an actual plot, rarer so for the story to have sexual content and to have that be the be all end all of the story.  So yeah, keep up the great work, fingers crossed for Chloe and Anna.

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

Welcome back,


Another great chapter from easily the best story on giantessworld. So I know it isn't really your style but any chance we could get a mini chapter of the imprinting episode from Nell's POV? I would like to know what was going through her mind during this after we saw she has the potential to be darker than the FF when she stepped on Anna.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 37

great chapter. loved it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37

Quite a lot to take in there...

It's kind of nice to see the possible organic blossoming of Nell and Anna's relationship despite their situations and impending doom hanging over their hands on a daily basis. The shrinkee liberation idea seems wholesome and in good faith but I've read enough of this story so far to expect a little strife along the way for our heroines. I am kind of rooting for Nell if Anna doesn't escape and has to imprint upon somebody in the Four's gravitational pull, she seems the most genuinely kind and caring for her person Anna could end up with at the moment.

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You give Wes Craven a run for his money with the nightmare sequences.

Poor Anna finally allows herself to possibly love somebody and her own mind won't allow her to be happy. It could be Poppy rebelling against her not selecting one of the Fearsome Four but we've seen her suggest people like the Governor so I'm guessing it was not. Anna knows Nell isn't a monster but given her size as with everything else in her world its hard not to worry about what could go wrong with such arrangement.

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Anna can't have nice things it seems.

That was incredibly dark without needing one of the Foursome involved to make it so. This feels like something Nell might not be able to recover from with both the deaths and what happened to the survivors surely won't be pleasant given the BSA's track record. Though if she's able to get Byte some info then it wouldn't all for naught.

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Well fuck...

I feel like Anna really doesn't harbor any hatred for Nell just after the seeing more senseless bloodshed even whilst trying to help she finally had to let it all out. I still see Nell as her strongest ally when the push eventually comes to shove sometime down the road. Not sure what awaits her in the future but Anna at least has somebody looking out for her even if at the moment it might not seem like it.


Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2023 6:56 PM Title: The Beginning

Wells it’s been three years now since this amazing story was started.  I hope everything is going great for u. If/when u return I will be here.  


Ps really hope everything is going good. 

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2023 7:47 PM Title: The Beginning

Want to check in to see if you alright, it been a while since you posted a new chapter, hoping you not going through something horrible in life or something else worst then that, anyway please get better soon and stay safe.

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