Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 2:01 AM Title: The Beginning

Well after years of reading stories on this site, I have finally made an account to leave a review to this fantastic story you have written, i have gotten into this story and i  am very torn on how i want it to play out ( part of me wants her to bond with all 4 of them) another wants her to find some one who will properly help her and treat her as a person as much as possible ( considering the BIG handicap). 

THere was a line in a chapter (last line actually) that has made me wonder ( that being why doesnt she kill them all) and to be frank all the girls ( and there parents deserve death) deserve life permaneantly, but i really like this villanesses and i almost want them to come to actually see annabelle,  and really accept her ( still play with her of course, also where annabelle has learned to accept and even care for them, this wouldnt be a bad end i think.

This is one of the best stories on this site, and it is very interesting.  I really cant wait for more.

Author's Response:

I'm honored! As a chronic lurker I understand the lure of the lurk.

We share similar sentiments, Ralgar,  on one hand I have my outline solidified and I know how the story ends, but there's a part of me that is super attached to the hypotheticals. If people are interested, I might publish a few "What if" chapters at the end of Annabelle's journey.  

Thanks for your review, Ralgar!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Naoru's comment made me realize I left out a important thing/explanation. In my opinion, the feelings the people that imprint on Anna have are not fake. The fantastic four already proved beyond doubt that they holyheartedly care for her and would not be able to cary on without her – and that’s the catch. The imprint maxxes out everything – not only care and tenderness, but clyngness, lust and possessiviness – Annabelle herself questions if the 4 girls bound would be able to withstand a fight for the type 0 and I think the answer is pretty obvious (no, it would not).

When I commented the type 0 power is “a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not”, I meant if it’s true or not from Annabelle’s side. The adoration and love of an imprint are always the true, her true and only self after rhe imprint, They can’t imagine how meaninless their lives were before Poppy.

And I will take this chance to point out another thing: Poppy high healing abilities might mean that, on a celular level, Annabelle is not aging anymore since her cells heal and change all the time. Yes, I think she is unable to die unless someone blow her head or entire body in a quick swift.

Oh yes, I want to see Anna strugle. She might think Nell will help her... and she probably will... but only if it means she will be her friend from now on... after all, Anna is so smart and kind... They were made for each other... (that’s me imagining inner dialogues again... and kind of wishing to see Anna despair and love her situation at the same time... am I evil for that? Kkkkkkkkkk)

That said, I don’t think her powers are unlimited – I therize her powers are limited by gender – a male type 0 has power over giants and male tinies; a female type 0 has power over giantess and female tinies – there is also the time (it’s necessary one afternoon or Half a day of direct interactions for the imprint to start.

That would explain why Rachel’s sister and Bennet did not imprint.

Well, thats about it. I thought about some scenarios involving Nell x Annabelle and Molly x Annabelle (their selfconscious and inferiority complex really hits me on na emotional level), and I can’t wait to see were we will be going from here.

Thanks again for the kind responses, for all the effort you clearly put into writing and for sharing your story with us!

Author's Response:

I for one love the diversity in theories over the story. Sometimes when I'm looking over my outline, I think about the theories you guys create. Sometimes I'm shocked when they're right on the money, and other times I'm impressed with how creative they are. My outline is pretty much cemented (i.e. Annabelle & the FF's fate, several major plot points, etc) but I'm definitely taking notes if I ever do a "What if" series. 

Again, I can't seem to comment of your theories without giving anything away, so I will just say they are very fun to read, and I hope you will revisit your reviews after the final chapter has been published. 

 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22

Everything in this late chapter, from Rachel to Nell, is perfect. Many revelations, many possible implications. Perfect job creating the game and the gore-y part, it made Annabelle and Poppy’s character shine and colide, while foreshadowing the endless hopelessness of their situation and own nature.

First and foremost, we have confirmation about the type 0 true capabilities, and I LOVE how you did it! Rachel’s wanting to lick more of Anna’s blood, her instant adoration after tasting it is strange and - dare I say it? – cute. It isn’t exagerated, the scene isn’t dragged too long and Anna’s assumptions that the girl has a concussion or is just expressing gratitude feels natural given their situation.

We also have confirmation: Poppy is trully overpower, proving our greatest enemy is inside kkkkkk. No, really, for majority, the power of a type 0 would be a blessing. To be the most important thing in the world for a person is often people’s idea about a perfect love. Poppy literally makes it a reality for Anna, for the bullied girl that always felt unwanted and unatractive even inside her family.

It’s a blessing for her and for the giantesses – she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her. And it’s also a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not. Tiny Annabelle/Poppy is, quite simply, the one True Goddess of all goddess in the plot, what for someone like her, is quite a tragedy. She isn’t human anymore and she never will be. She can’t come back and neither can the ones that imprint on her.

From here on, it’a all my especulations. As far as I can tell, it’s not automatic, but every girl that has too much contact will imprint. First, by looking comes the urge to touch and hold. Than comes talking and breathing the same air as her. After this first contact, lust will eventually overcome the person.

Since Rachel came into direct contact with Anna’s blood, the effects were very strong and automatic, but we can also see these syntoms with Penellope (Nell) now that we know the real nature of Poppy/Annabelle imprint.

Nell lacks the lust and is resistente in helping Annabelle, but, since the beggining is fascinated by her figure and wants to hold her. Moreover, she doesn’t pay attention to Anna’s correction about her name not being Poppy, almost as if her brain was unnable to make the difference.

Annabelle doesn’t realize she is Poppy or a side of it. That is the true nature of the One that is Annabele but isn’t at the same time. The type 0, who has three sides and is able to control both giantess and tinies. We have Annabelle (the kind and lonely one), we have Poppy representing lust and insecurities, and we have a third side – the side of angry and control.

Back to Nell, when Naomi implies she won’t be meeting Poppy again. The shy girl gets aggitated, eloquent and curses at her sister and friends. I think this will only get worse, she will worry more and more that she let her friend Poppy down, she will want to talk more with her one friend... than she will want to play with the only friend she needs.

Yes... Poppy said herself Naomi doesn’t treat her well. And Naomi already have friends, she should be the one with Poppy, the one to hold Poppy... the one to have Poppy at her feet like Naomi has the world at hers. Maybe... maybe Poppy is her world?

Just some theories and na inner dialogue I imagined. I will stop here. This is probably the longest comment i have ever written, so its bound to have mistakes. Sorry T_T

I know this site is most about erotic fiction and I love the kinky parts, but you are managing to bring us a beautifully tragic story together with it. Thanks for writing and always repling, I am really happy if my reviews help you. Your storytelling sure helps me.

Author's Response:

Mr. In a Suit, as you know I always look forward to your reviews. I read them multiple times as I write. However, they're so dang dangerous because I just want to discuss theme and plot with you. There's still a lot of plot points I have to hit, so I have to refrain from typing something that may be a spoiler. 

That being said, your predictions are always fascinating to read. I like how you really analyze the characters. Very astute.

Thanks again for always commenting! 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow, i'm reading this just because of how good the story is. i don't even care about the gts stuff anymore.

Author's Response:

Thanks rubber! That's a hell of a compliment. I'll definitely have been lacking in the spicy stuff lately, but this new chapter has a bit of the traditional stuff. I'm glad you're liking the narrative.  

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

Took me a while but better late than never. I know exactly what you mean, writing takes courage and patience... I have none, so I thank the heavens for blessing the world with people like you XD

About the latest chapter, Leah’s father really steals the show, forcing a full honest reaction even from Anna. And, yes, they all have serious issues - treating a meeting with there daughter’s  as business trade is just sad.

But, we got to see the 4 once more stand up for Anna and even defend, in their own twisted sense, her status as a living being. Moreover, They proved They want her more than Money and that’s interesting because it got me curious about how far each one is willing to go to be with Poppy.

 I would like Anna to give the giantessess some credit. They clearly care for her, even turning down their parentes offers. Which brings me to the aftermatch of what happened in this chapter.

First things first, 3 giantessess will be angry at Poppy for reacting the way she did, all except Leah. As unlikely as it might be, I am betting she will empathise more with Anna’s angry towards her father nasty low blow of using her own mother as bait. Leah is probabily familiar with the governor ways and be more understanding because of some bound feeling, and will get the others off Anna’s back.

There is also the problem with the tinies. What will be Anna’s reaction after seeing yet another carnage? Will she finally break? Or will she try to reason with the 4 and convince them not to take part in the parents madness? After all, the feast is just another move to smooth them laid by the governor.

 But the most exciting is the file. It’s obvious the governor has information about all the hardships in Anna’s life, and the giantesses reaction to her past is another chance of bounding and being redeemed, at least a little, in her eyes.

Yes, I am gonna bet the 4 can be redeemed and trully love Anna... as warped as that might be it’s not impossible... I think... I hope... I don’t...know kkkkkk

Also, before I forget... DIE OLIVER! DIE! JUST DIE! WHAT A BORING CHARACTER!! Sorry, but I just find him infuriating as some sort of romantic end game for Anna, simply plain and annoying.

Sorry it’s not as detailed as some of my other theories, but it’s been a rough couple of weeks. Your chapter is one of the few good things that happened, loved Anna swearings. I didn’t realized before, but are you perhaps familiar with portuguese?

Author's Response:

Mr. In A suit, your hatred for Oliver will never not make me laugh. Though if I were in your shoes, I would probably view him as a hindrance also. 

I also love how you see the giantesses as defending Annabelle--something she has yet to acknowledge. I can't say too much, but I'm really excited for the next few chapters.

As always, your predictions are fascinating. Sometimes your ideas are honestly better than what I have outlined. And I am familiar with Portuguese, but not enough that didn't have to check with some friends and google translate, before I wrote the dialogue. 

That's the thing about making characters ethnically diverse, I end up having to double check everything. I'm not complaining though. When Annabelle's familial background is delved into a bit, it'll have (hopefully) all been worth it.

Thanks again for your review, they're always so interesting to read.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2021 7:36 PM Title: The Beginning

I can't really reply to people or edit my comments on this website which is weird, but I wanted to add that Adamx's comment made me realize the readers are probably divided between wanting Zoey to punish the Formidable Four and wanting the Formidable Four to punish Zoey.

 

I'm on the formidable four's side because to be honest I think Zoey is a lot more fucked up than they are, probably because her bullying feels more real than shrinking related stuff, but also because she went above and beyond to make Anabelle suffer, and she just seems to me like the one that should be punished. I don't know is probably my favoritism talking, because at the end of the day they are both making Anabelle suffer because they "love" her. At the end of the day I wouldn't say either is the good side, they are all equally selfish.

 

 

 

With that said, team Leah or Harper ftw

Author's Response:

Yeah, I mean personally I love them all, but I understand that everyone has their favorites. You raised some interesting and astute points about everyone's "love' for Annabelle. I honestly cannot wait to for you guys to see the story progress!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2021 5:07 PM Title: The Beginning

I'm a long time lurker. I have posted like, one or two reviews I think?but nothing as in depth as this wonderful story deserves, so I thought I wanted to give it a shot so you won't think no one is reading you. This is truly one of the best stories on this website. As in, is currently the only one I keep tabs on, and I try to recommend it to as many people as possible. I check on this a lot for new updates and get so excited when there is a new one!

So the parents appeared, finally. Molly's parents are stern, and strict so is not a wonder that Molly is actually deeply insecure. Naomi's are very formal and probably traditional, which probably is related to her being so punk, as a way to stablish her identity as an independent person. Leah's are just what I expected, specially her dad, who is a very hard case of like father like daughter. Ngl he ended up being my favorite of the parents, so if you don't mind I'm going to imagine he is hot, for my own personal enjoyment. Is a surprise that Harper seems to have the best relationship with her parents. They both seem to love her, her dad teached her self defense, and I don't see as much conflict with them as I see with the other girls and their parents. Harper has gone up on my favorite list so hard she is now very close to Leah as my favorite. 

 

At this point I kind of want for the girls to know Anabelle's past, so they can bond, probably?and be on the lookout for Zoey if that is even included in the information they have. But hey, I'm a firm vocal supporter of an ending where Anabelle stays a pet and imprints on one of the girls, so there you go xDDDD I would be so happy with a harem ending or where Anabelle ends up with Leah or Harper like so, so much.

I'll be looking forward to the next update!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Naoru! Your kind words mean a lot.

I love how you pegged all of the characters down cold. The parents are a lot of fun to write, and we'll be seeing some more of them since the FF have lost their bet to go away for the holidays (and ofc Warren is hot). I'm glad you like the characters so much! Based on the reviews I get, Leah and Harper tend to be at the top of the rankings. 

I wonder if their popularity will only get stronger or weaker when the future chapters come out...who can say :)

Thanks again Naoru, for the review.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Anna can't seem to catch a break even when the monsters are sleeping. If Poppy didn't cause that reaction than you've certainly created another hurdle for our fair heroin to overcome.

Author's Response:

Ha! Yeah more revealings to come...

Reviewer: Tigerchevy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2021 11:48 PM Title: The Beginning

Just saw you responded. I can honestly say that curious girls is easily one of my favorite stories I've read, kept me invested for literally years. To break in a pet has all of the elements that made curious girls such a wonderful story. Looking forward to the continued success of your story and glad I could lead you to more inspiration.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I definitely blew through it in like a day. I can't imagine waiting so long to see the progression and overall conclusion of such a dramatic story. (Then again, I guess that's what I'm doing right now with this story haha) Thanks again for recommendation!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

A lot to unpack here, so I just let my imagination run wild with theories a little. Sorry in advance for any confusion and/or mispealing.

First we have the inner dialogue of Annabelle but it’s different: the voice adresses giantesses, not as masters, but as passionate, fearsome protectors, a role we’ve seen the “goddesses” fully take on the last couple chapters - and this ch. 19 cements that.

While Bennet highlights the gentleness and care the four have - and that usually goes unseen by Annabelle – Leah getting aroused on such a tense situation just by having Anna betwen her toes (great scene by the way) shows how deep her lust for Poppy really is.

Also, this chapter leaves beyond any doubt the fact that the four have every move carefully surveilled to a suffocating degree (and I am not just talking about that huge ass security team) as well as the fact they straightout fear their own parents, highlighting the bubble they live in... maybe a bubble the four built around themselves to protect each other.

The story had already hinted sometimes that Leah, Naomi, Molly and Harper feel loonely and are forced to act roles they did not necessarily choose... but they choose to keep Annabelle close and have her inprint, they choose to take the role as her goddesses. And I think if the Type 0 is affecting them, it’s because they choose Anna... and now Anna has to choose them.

Anna has to choose, not Poppy (whatever she really is). But what does it means to choose? With the long awaited introduction of the four parents their is a window for Annabelle to see her powerfull goddesses in a fullblown vulnerable state, more in need of her worship than ever before... and so she will try to help and choose... choose to worship them! This will be the final twist for these twisted relations. What will happen after? I don’t know, but if the families are willing to spend billions on researchs about type 0, it’s damn important and incredible to them.

I am guessing we will see more of the giantesses alone with Poppy and their respective families as each one will be eager to see... their daughters? No! The most wanted type 0! Take that for guilty Anna kkkkkkk.

Last but not least, I would like to point out the sweetest scenes of the chapter are with Naomi... call me crazy, but Anna clutching her thumb with Naomi gennuinelly concerned for her safety is just too cute. Also Harper punching Bennet, even fighting John so she could finish the bastard. Beautiful, Harper at its best.

As always, I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story with us. I am loving every chapter and how you are developing things. Long or short, if there is an update I will read and review it until this story is over.

Author's Response:

I love reading your reviews Mr. in A suit! Your analyses are always so interesting to read. You're picking up on some characterization that will be explored in further chapters (part of the reason why the parent chapter is taking so long).

Like always, I can't speak too much on your theories, though I will say when this story is over, it will be fun to re-read your comments. 

Also, I'd like to mention that your little comment on Naomi and Annabelle's interaction was the catalyst for the little scene I just posted--so thank you!