Date: December 13 2021 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
By the way can u do any more feet content, normally feet isn’t my thing but the way u wrote it early in the story was down right incredible and I kinda would like to see it again.
Date: December 13 2021 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
By the way yes I love the long chapters, I have always preferred long chapters to short, ( though only problem I have is even long chapters do eventually end).
I do want to know more about this worldd u have made though. It is very surprising to me that people in power would know about Steven and that he is with an apparent regular person (read peasant) and not arrange things so that something happed to Riley. (Not that I do want something happen rather the opposite really) honestly Steven really surprised me, I was not expecting a normal person to have a type-0.
The fact that u can apparently ward off the imprinting is so huge though. Poor Annabelle is going to have such a hard time with that.
Also at the very end of this story will Annabell sing?
Author's Response:
Lol, so dark Ralgar! Riley deserves better lol!
No, but like I said in a previous reply, the next chapter goes into the registration process a little. I'll probably expand in later chapters if you're still curious. It's funny, I've made up an entire world with rules and regulations, but you guys only see like 6% of it, because that's what relevant to the plot.
As for Steven, it's been surprisingly fun to write a normal character. His conversations with Annabelle are really interesting to write.
Regarding Annabelle's singing...I'm not telling :)
Date: December 12 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ok well now, I do retract my previous statement about imprinting on the 4, with no longer just being an absolute matter of time, hmm so now she needs to find some one who is absolutely in her corner, and has the strength to stand up to all who come after her if and when she escapes cause honestly if she doesn’t find some one like that she is better staying with one of the 4 ( Leah), it sucks and is really not fair, she and the ever many shrinkies and other they and those that support them have killed, but she has an unknowable number of people about wanting her( which doses raise the question about steve and his owner and how they have apparently been left mostly alone, though known about.
I do like the 4 but they do need a massive come to Jesus moment.
Also I do have questions about the spicy scenes mostly like she is 3 inches tall and like how is she able to do enough to send them so freaking crazy orgasms, is it the pure thought of domination they are doing in which case that proves the lie to leahs theory about them not being people. I certainly don’t get off to the thought of owning my animals and it doesn’t give me a sense of superiority. So huh interesting thought.
Author's Response:
Lol the imprinting game has changed, hasn't it? I think in the behemoth chapter, I address the Shrinkee-registration process with a bit more detail if I'm not mistaken. If I don't, I'll make sure to include it later. It should explain why Steven and Riley are left alone.
Ha! As for your spicy question, I think it's a combination of things. The domination mindset is for sure a factor. Also, Annabelle may be tiny, but she knows what they like (to her chagrin).
I think the FF perceive Annabelle differently then they would an animal (despite how much they would deny it). I won't go too much into their mindsets in this reply, but one, two, or all of them may be suffering from cognitive dissonance.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2021 7:53 PM Title: The Beginning
I have to say that this is all very moving and it hit close to home to me. Anabelle's journey through her trauma, all the abuse she has gone through, and all the coping mechanisms she has to deal with that pain and trauma are what truly sets this apart from other GTS stories out there and I'm happy to have a chapter dedicated to it. It opens a way to heal for her, and possible endings for this. Maybe one where she doesn't imprints buts ends up staying with one of the girls?I mean, Leah would love this since she has shown signs she likes Anabelle more when she is either unwilling or just...challenging perhaps?then again, I think instead of "choose one and imprint" the better advice should have been "Pretend to imprint" which would make things easier for Anabelle indeed.
I like the relationship Steven has with Riley. Of course Anabelle doesn't, but just like Steven can't understand her situation, she can't understand his. He hasn't been abused and Riley doesn't uses him to pleasure herself, she seems legit nice, so I'm okay with them being wholesome.
I think this chapter gave us a lot of insight on Anabelle too, like, she is scared of being close to people because she is scared of losing them probably after her sister and mother's deaths, she has trust issues, and she doesn't think she deserves love, which I think is VERY important as to why even when the FF clearly do love and care for her, she still thinks of every excuse as to why they don't love her and just want to use her, other than the having her kidnapped and stuff.
As a last bit I think Steven lied to her about hearing a voice. He is a good actor, clearly, so is no surprise he deceived Anabelle. I think Poppy is like...the voice of her...species??Like in elfen lied, where Lucy had the voice of her instincts to kill humanity. Idk I may be wrong on this one, but I think Poppy is not a normal shrinkie thing like Anabelle thinks. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter but this was great
Thanks for the birthday wishes!
Author's Response:
No problem Naoru, I hope you had a great birthday!
I will say that there will be a chapter where Annabelle's backstory is revealed (I hope that's not a spoiler--I wouldn't just foreshadow it and then never address it lol) and it is pretty heavy, so I'll try to put a disclaimer in the author's notes.
Steven and Annabelle's conversations are so cool to write. I like Annabelle having an actual person to bounce her thoughts off of.
I also loved all of the things you picked up on Annabelle's characterization. The contrast between Annabelle's refusal to believe she is worthy of love vs. the FF's love bombing is always interesting to write.
I can't speak to your predictions without spoiling anything, but I like hearing your thoughts.
I look forward to seeing what you think of the upcoming chapters.
Date: December 12 2021 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
great plot twist. i definitely didn't expect this.
Author's Response:
Thanks rubber, I'm always worried when I add a lil twist because I have an ending in sight and I don't want to lose you guys on the way there. The plot is only going to intensify as this story goes on, so I hope you don't lose your suspension of disbelief.
[Report This]Date: December 12 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
It seems you have roped Anna into some sort of kama sutra type thing here. She is already under enough stress without the added bonus of having to see others whose minds have melted away, although it is unclear at the moment if their bondings were as forced/bad intentioned as Anna's is trying to be.
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These are some hardcore cultists trying to break sweet Anna. She has been holding on for so long but I wonder what lengths they will go to try to finally break her willful spirit.
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Anna raises so solid questions about the mortality rates of Type 0 owners. Humans are big meatsacks filled with pokeable organs that are easily fallen thus leaving poor Bitsy alone with hell knows who or what. Maybe at the mercy of he Foursome's families knowing their reach and resources, she seems like she wouldn't deserve that.
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I see the Fearsome Foursome has employed their iron will once again upon the other Type O owners. Molly does seem to be the one who I -would- say might help Anna escape later due to her self image issues being something Anna could use in her favor. Shitty yes but Molly is not exactly innocent so karmic balancing out and what not.
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Well another wrench thrown into the gears, Steven does seem like a genuinely nice guy and thus far Riley seems to be the best of the owners I've seen by not trying to enslave or break her tiny. I'm not really sure where it all goes but Anna has been getting some legs up lately so this might finally give a little peace somewhere.
Author's Response:
Hey Adam, I love that you comment as you read, it makes looking at your reactions so fun!
Some of my own comments:
I really like the idea of the "after." Right now, the FF are so focused on making Annabelle imprint that they haven't considered what happens after they're gone. It's an interesting idea that really none of the characters has really discussed in detail yet.
Although this story is primarily about Annabelle and the FF, I really enjoy writing scenes where they interact with other characters. Even when they're being "hospitable" the FF are still consistently cruel and selfish.
Steven and Riley's relationship is really interesting and I plan on delving into it a little bit more.
Thanks for another great comment, Adam!
Date: December 12 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ok this changes things a lot. Hmmmmm I need to think on this, I do still think she will need to stay with the giantesses though, I mean there is no way she will be allowed to get away permeanently but hmmm I need to think on this.
that guy is really naive if he thinks he can compare to Annabelles situation at all.
sad thing is I really do like the 4, they are good villains but I do wish they would actually start to really care and reciprocate to Anna ( they do care but it is so twisted).
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're exactly right. The FF do care about Annabelle, but in a way that Annabelle (and most decent people) would classify as toxic. And as for Steven he has shown so far that he means well, it's just he has no clue about the greater evil that hides in the shadows of the FF's power.
Date: December 11 2021 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hello again, the only thing that i could think i would really like to see is a chapter for one of the fours pov, ( which might be spoilery territory, but u did say soon we would be getting in to there stories anyway,) . I have read this story twice now and getting rdy to read a third time ( it is just that good) and that i is the one think i miss, is seeing a chapter from pov of the villians, especially during a poppy episode.
Honestly the best outcome that i can think of for Anna is that she imprints on one of thie girls, (by the way I hope Rachel isnt an indicator of what Anna will be like when she imprints, that would take it out of bitter sweet to down right depression at least to me). I also cant see Anna sucessfully escaping and being able to stay gone, she is worth billions and the only reason she isnt in a lab or elsewhere with people worse than the 4 (ergo their parents) is becuase of the 4. IF she got away i see that becoming open season on her adn now everyone is going to come after her. People have done worse for millions let alone billions.
So inconclusion while i love a happy end ( which would be either her father or honesly Cloe,( Nell is to beat down to protect her) and i have suspions about Oliver, I think realistically she needs to imprint and really bond with one of the girls ( if not all 4:P.)
Also i am rooting for either Leah or Harper ( prefer Leah, I think she could really protect Anna in the long run, Harper would be the one i think would acutally care the most about her post imprinting, ( though really i am acoutally rooting for all 4 ( a little becasue I will not be surpised if harper went all if i cant have her no one can kinda thing if she imprinted on any of the others like seriously theyu are all monsters but there is something not right in that girls head. Also i do think that all 4 have bonded with her on a minor lvl like Rachel did, just that because they are so big compared to anna it takes alot more and is diluted alot compared to poor Rachel.
ALso plz spare Rachel.
Author's Response:
Hey again Ralgar!
Without going into spoiler territory too much, one of the FF will definitely be the pov of a pretty important chapter (probably my favorite chapter).
Anna is up a creek with her entire escaping plot. I think she's coming to terms that it may no longer be a viable option for her.
Lol and I'm glad you like Rachel, because that's who Annabelle ends up imprinting on. Haha, I'm just joking (or am I?)
Date: December 03 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Man this is really getting interesting. I honestly don't quite know how to feel with everything. Honestly things are getting pretty fucking depressing, especially after seeing Annabelle's friends giving up on her existence and poor Chloe...
I still am enjoying it but I don't know how much more misery I can take from my poor shrinkie girl. Even with the little moments with Nel, which were super heartwarming and a nice reprieve from all the emotional abuse, they only lasted so long. I really hope we get more of her, would be awesome if we got Annabelle imprinting on her of all people.
I already want these two new shrinkies to fuck off completely. Like they're clearly going to be showing "Poppy" how she "should" be behaving and respecting her captors. I think the hardest part is Annabelle not having a SINGLE person she can talk to. Like usually in these stories there's at least one character the protagonist can confide in.
Sad about Harper's probation also, out of all the giantesses she is the only one who does seem to genuinely care for her even if it's for superficial reasons on the surface.
Great story still, definitely going to keep reading but I do hope we get some nice things for Annabelle at some point soon, I don't know how much more my heart can take.
Author's Response:
Oh god Huggler, I'm right there with you. The thing is, I'm going based on my outline, so sometimes I can forget that you guys are reading this in real time. Your comment made me re-read the last ten chapters and, Jesus, it's dark sometimes lol. But I can promise that it won't be all bad in the upcoming chapters.
That being said, if you're reading my comment after you've read chapter 24, then you have to know how much I was grinning reading your comment about Annabelle not having a single person to confide in. Sometimes I swear I must've accidently published my outline as a chapter, because sometimes you guys are like a whole chapter ahead of me.
Thanks again for the astute comment, Huggler!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2021 4:27 PM Title: The Beginning
My birthday is this sunday 28 so if you don't mind i'll take this new chapter as my birthday present thank you very much!!
Not gonna lie I ended up frustrated that Anabelle hasn't spilled the beans about her past yet. I just really want the FF to know!Like, they want to help her and are concerned but they can't do much of anything if they don't know about the horrible things Zoey did to her. If this story has a climax where the FF avenge Anabelle I'll be a very happy woman. Seriously, I'm really looking forward to a lot of those revelations.
I'm starting to be annoyed at Oliver and Anabelle's crush for him. I hope she gets over it soon. Sorry, he is just kind of annoying to me.
I don't know what to think of the new type 0, or why are they there at all, maybe to make Anabelle confess about her past somehow...?I don't know, I may be thinking too much about it. It will be interesting for sure!
As for my ranking it has changed somewhat from when I started but not that much, My favorites are now Leah and Harper, followed by Naomi and then Molly in that exact order. Zoey now...I have mixed feelings about her, because I truly believe that what she did to Anabelle was worse than what anything the FF have done so far, like making her life miserable, bullying her and making her a target of bullying, beating her and so on. Even then I have to recognize that sick possessiveness is kind of appealing in it is own sick way...but nah. She can pound sand. Harper and Leah ftw, and if I had to choose between them, I would pick Leah.
Author's Response:
Happy (belated) Birthday!!!
Lol I understand the frustration with Annabelle keeping her past close to her chest, but you'll start to understand why pretty soon. I have to say, I think it's hilarious that the general assessment of Oliver is that he's trash. I wanna hear from my Oliver-stans! But seriously, we'll just have to see what's in store for Oliver in the upcoming chapters.
I love how everyone's rankings are so different. I think Leah is such a favorite because she appears so strategic in her domination of Annabelle. It truly is impressive in a sick way.
Zoey is probably one of the most fun characters I've ever written. She has done some truly heinous things and is responsible for a lot of Annabelle's trauma, but they have an interesting dynamic that is really fun to write. The next few chapters will be about the FF, but I can't wait for Zoey's return.
Anyway, thanks for your comment Naoru! I always like seeing what you think. And Happy (Belated) Birthday again!
[Report This]Date: November 22 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
If I am not mistaken, it was stated that there are only 200 type 0 in the world... so I’ve thought about it in the past, it was just a vague feeling, but this last 3 chapters made me more sure that Annabelle/Poppy IS NOT JUST A TYPE 0.
It’s cannon that people imprint on Annabelle/Poppy, but it’s the other way around with Cookie and Bitsy. They display the same unweavering happiness and loyalty Rachel displayed for Anna. Moreover, their owners are clearly uncaring, not displaying any concern if they get hurt or not, the exactly opposite of the FF towards Annabelle/Poppy.
It makes sense if you think about it. If there was 200 shrinkess who could do what Anna does, someone would have already noticed. Moreover, Anna’s mother is still shrouded in misteries. As I said, I think the story is progressing towards establishing Poppy as a true different being.
This different being will be seeing as the most precious thing on Earth by the imprinted ones... and as a vírus or a tool by those who haven’t imprinted. We can’t forget that Dr. Sano probably got the blood sample she wanted (which is why Annabelle was covered in blood When she meet Nell) and is analysing it.
Yes, she may share some common traits with those type 0, but it’s a new species, a mutation. A dangerous and powerfull one. I can see even Governor Windsor obsessing over it.
With that said, Cookie and Bitsy seem to be very narcisistic and proud of their... status. I don’t think they will help her, but will try to compete with Poppy... and I hope her darker side eat and chew them out. HOW DARE THAT INSECT ADRESS ANNA AS A SISTER? KILL HIM POPPY! KILL THE BASTARD!
Harper and Naomi steal the scene on this chapter. Harper’s over the top feelings make the sex parts even more tense and hot (you are a master teaser making Harper touch Anna’s foot!!).
Naomi, while intense and rough, her hesitation and fear of admitting she loves Poppy, evoke a shyness and cuteness I already felt on other chapters. I guess each one shows affection and desire in a different way, the imprinting maxing those especific traits.
I hope we see something like that with Molly and Nell, they are the most insecure about themselves and Annabelle could pump their self esteem, bonding with them in a steamy way... Like I said in my other comment, I fell Poppy will become like the world to Nell, and she would love to have the world at her feet just like her sister has 😉
About Oliver, most of what we see is Anna’s idealization of him. Well, now we saw a glimpse of how he really is and he is a coward, someone who, in fact, wouldn’t act much different from Nick if he knew what Annabelle became or if put in the same death game from ch. 22. Yeah, he isn’t worth of Annabelle/Poppy - I don’t think any man or shrinkee is.
My God, I might be tripping too Much but those 3 chapters were heavy on plot points and foreshadowing in regards to Poppy’s nature and abilities.
About favorites, I’d say my giantess ranking changed a lot these past months. From top to bottom: 1. Nell and Molly - 2. Harper - 3. Naomi - 4. Leah - 5. Zoey.
AAAHHH!! I too would love to talk more about the plot and characters! Curiosity is killing me! I can’t wait for more of the giantesses development and backstories! Maybe then Annabelle will open up a little to the FF... maybe Nell will appear again... maybe... maybe... too many ideas.
I will have to lay down after this. Maybe read some old chapters again and think.
Thanks for always reading and responding the comments and for sharing your wonderful imagination and characters with us!
Author's Response:
You and your theories, Mr. In a Suit. I remembered you said you haven't written in a while, but have some really innovative ideas.
Ha! I did mention the foot part because of your comment!
Don't worry, everyone is going to get a lot of individual time to shine in the chapters coming up--including Molly and Nell.
Your comments about Oliver always make me laugh--we'll just have to see what he's really made of, huh.
Lol, I love reading your comment about Annabelle's imprinting abilities after I've just published chapter 24. If you've read it you can see that you're not "tripping". Now I can't confirm or deny if you're right about her imprinting nature--only that it is a plot point.
Thanks for always commenting, Mr. in a Suit! Your reviews are so fun to read!
Date: November 22 2021 2:01 AM Title: The Beginning
Well after years of reading stories on this site, I have finally made an account to leave a review to this fantastic story you have written, i have gotten into this story and i am very torn on how i want it to play out ( part of me wants her to bond with all 4 of them) another wants her to find some one who will properly help her and treat her as a person as much as possible ( considering the BIG handicap).
THere was a line in a chapter (last line actually) that has made me wonder ( that being why doesnt she kill them all) and to be frank all the girls ( and there parents deserve death) deserve life permaneantly, but i really like this villanesses and i almost want them to come to actually see annabelle, and really accept her ( still play with her of course, also where annabelle has learned to accept and even care for them, this wouldnt be a bad end i think.
This is one of the best stories on this site, and it is very interesting. I really cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'm honored! As a chronic lurker I understand the lure of the lurk.
We share similar sentiments, Ralgar, on one hand I have my outline solidified and I know how the story ends, but there's a part of me that is super attached to the hypotheticals. If people are interested, I might publish a few "What if" chapters at the end of Annabelle's journey.
Thanks for your review, Ralgar!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2021 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Quite the dirty birdies we've got here, poor Anna was attacked by chemical warfare which is definitely illegal to use on POW'S. I am glad she was able to hold out long enough to be rescued by Harper, it was a nice victory for her in the face of overwhelming odds.
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I had forgotten about the friends with all the extra curriculars about but Chloe seems the ballsy type to challenge our Trustfund Titanesses. I'm sensing nothing good coming from Olier getting involved but perhaps there is a pleasant surprise at the end of this dark hallway.
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Naomi seems a bit more violence laden than the others...well maybe not Leah. That said I do fear for poor Oliver who just wanted to mourn a friend. Something tells me he won't deserve what is coming and neither will Anna.
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Well hot damn, you've thrown another curveball at us. Another sweet dream ruined for poor Anna but now she's waking up to being accosted by two strangers in a room full of people. I am not sure what to think about here but I do have a feeling the tiny lady might be a person of interests for Anna from a few chapters back.
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As for rankings Molly seems likable due to her parents shitting on her etc, like if you got her away from the group she might be a solid human.
Harper is just as lusty as ever and I can't help but love Leah/Naomi due to my own real life inklings into that side of the fence.
That said I would say Molly/Harper MIGHT be higher than the bossier/scarier two only due to family history and in Harper's case her being like an Elmyra Duff of fetish stories.
Author's Response:
Ha! Elymyra Duff is an amazing comparison. And I had to give Annabelle some kind of victory, or I'm pretty sure she'd go insane.
I can't help but wonder if your rankings will change when the giantesses' backstories/ chapters are revealed? Personally, my favorite of the FF is whoever I'm writing at the moment. They're all really fun to write, and I sympathize with them.
That being said, I'm interested to see how people will respond to Oliver's fate.
Thanks again Adam, I always like reading your reactions.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2021 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Naoru's comment made me realize I left out a important thing/explanation. In my opinion, the feelings the people that imprint on Anna have are not fake. The fantastic four already proved beyond doubt that they holyheartedly care for her and would not be able to cary on without her – and that’s the catch. The imprint maxxes out everything – not only care and tenderness, but clyngness, lust and possessiviness – Annabelle herself questions if the 4 girls bound would be able to withstand a fight for the type 0 and I think the answer is pretty obvious (no, it would not).
When I commented the type 0 power is “a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not”, I meant if it’s true or not from Annabelle’s side. The adoration and love of an imprint are always the true, her true and only self after rhe imprint, They can’t imagine how meaninless their lives were before Poppy.
And I will take this chance to point out another thing: Poppy high healing abilities might mean that, on a celular level, Annabelle is not aging anymore since her cells heal and change all the time. Yes, I think she is unable to die unless someone blow her head or entire body in a quick swift.
Oh yes, I want to see Anna strugle. She might think Nell will help her... and she probably will... but only if it means she will be her friend from now on... after all, Anna is so smart and kind... They were made for each other... (that’s me imagining inner dialogues again... and kind of wishing to see Anna despair and love her situation at the same time... am I evil for that? Kkkkkkkkkk)
That said, I don’t think her powers are unlimited – I therize her powers are limited by gender – a male type 0 has power over giants and male tinies; a female type 0 has power over giantess and female tinies – there is also the time (it’s necessary one afternoon or Half a day of direct interactions for the imprint to start.
That would explain why Rachel’s sister and Bennet did not imprint.
Well, thats about it. I thought about some scenarios involving Nell x Annabelle and Molly x Annabelle (their selfconscious and inferiority complex really hits me on na emotional level), and I can’t wait to see were we will be going from here.
Thanks again for the kind responses, for all the effort you clearly put into writing and for sharing your story with us!
Author's Response:
I for one love the diversity in theories over the story. Sometimes when I'm looking over my outline, I think about the theories you guys create. Sometimes I'm shocked when they're right on the money, and other times I'm impressed with how creative they are. My outline is pretty much cemented (i.e. Annabelle & the FF's fate, several major plot points, etc) but I'm definitely taking notes if I ever do a "What if" series.
Again, I can't seem to comment of your theories without giving anything away, so I will just say they are very fun to read, and I hope you will revisit your reviews after the final chapter has been published.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2021 3:37 AM Title: The Beginning
Yes, yes, yes!!!!This is all I have been wanting for, wishing for, ever since Anabelle's backstory was revealed, for her to tell the fantastic four about the abuse she went through, and their reactions are just what I hoped for, sadness over how much Zoey broke and abused her, setting the hypocrisy of that statement aside ofc. What matters is they are truly remorseful, they are truly sad, they truly care about her, no matter if Anabelle realizes or not.
Now I can't wait for them to fuck high and mighty Zoey. I want them to ruin her life, and show her that Anabelle will be forever out of her reach. Fuck her. Fuck her good.
Nell is a good girl, and Naomi a horrible sister. Is easy to see her as the girl that is trying really hard to be studious to please her parents, that keep more attention on the rebellious sister because really that's how it usually goes. Maybe I'm reading too much into it?
As for Anabelle's true nature, Mr in a suit covered all I wanted to say and some more, I only disagree on its effects on non shrunk humans. I think Poppy is a goddess to other shrinkies, but not to regular people if that makes any sense?I do admit it would be interesting if the girls are "imprinting" on her and if maybe that was what made Zoey so obsessed with Anabelle if she was able to influence people before shrinking. I'm so fascinated by this story, I truly am. I check on it every day and all.
I honestly really would love an imprinting ending when she imprints to Leah or Harper. I don't even feel guilty about it, it would be amazing.
Looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
Ha! I love your analysis Naoru. The giantesses truly are saddened by Annabelle's experiences. There's not too much that they aren't in control of, so the fact that something they love so much was hurt, really bothers them to an extent they maybe didn't expect. I won't say anymore, but I did laugh out loud at your last line.
I'd reckon that most readers are #TeamImprintOnSomeone rather than #TeamIndependentAnnabelle
Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Everything in this late chapter, from Rachel to Nell, is perfect. Many revelations, many possible implications. Perfect job creating the game and the gore-y part, it made Annabelle and Poppy’s character shine and colide, while foreshadowing the endless hopelessness of their situation and own nature.
First and foremost, we have confirmation about the type 0 true capabilities, and I LOVE how you did it! Rachel’s wanting to lick more of Anna’s blood, her instant adoration after tasting it is strange and - dare I say it? – cute. It isn’t exagerated, the scene isn’t dragged too long and Anna’s assumptions that the girl has a concussion or is just expressing gratitude feels natural given their situation.
We also have confirmation: Poppy is trully overpower, proving our greatest enemy is inside kkkkkk. No, really, for majority, the power of a type 0 would be a blessing. To be the most important thing in the world for a person is often people’s idea about a perfect love. Poppy literally makes it a reality for Anna, for the bullied girl that always felt unwanted and unatractive even inside her family.
It’s a blessing for her and for the giantesses – she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her. And it’s also a nightmare because she is desired by them and they also fell desired by her, either that is true or not. Tiny Annabelle/Poppy is, quite simply, the one True Goddess of all goddess in the plot, what for someone like her, is quite a tragedy. She isn’t human anymore and she never will be. She can’t come back and neither can the ones that imprint on her.
From here on, it’a all my especulations. As far as I can tell, it’s not automatic, but every girl that has too much contact will imprint. First, by looking comes the urge to touch and hold. Than comes talking and breathing the same air as her. After this first contact, lust will eventually overcome the person.
Since Rachel came into direct contact with Anna’s blood, the effects were very strong and automatic, but we can also see these syntoms with Penellope (Nell) now that we know the real nature of Poppy/Annabelle imprint.
Nell lacks the lust and is resistente in helping Annabelle, but, since the beggining is fascinated by her figure and wants to hold her. Moreover, she doesn’t pay attention to Anna’s correction about her name not being Poppy, almost as if her brain was unnable to make the difference.
Annabelle doesn’t realize she is Poppy or a side of it. That is the true nature of the One that is Annabele but isn’t at the same time. The type 0, who has three sides and is able to control both giantess and tinies. We have Annabelle (the kind and lonely one), we have Poppy representing lust and insecurities, and we have a third side – the side of angry and control.
Back to Nell, when Naomi implies she won’t be meeting Poppy again. The shy girl gets aggitated, eloquent and curses at her sister and friends. I think this will only get worse, she will worry more and more that she let her friend Poppy down, she will want to talk more with her one friend... than she will want to play with the only friend she needs.
Yes... Poppy said herself Naomi doesn’t treat her well. And Naomi already have friends, she should be the one with Poppy, the one to hold Poppy... the one to have Poppy at her feet like Naomi has the world at hers. Maybe... maybe Poppy is her world?
Just some theories and na inner dialogue I imagined. I will stop here. This is probably the longest comment i have ever written, so its bound to have mistakes. Sorry T_T
I know this site is most about erotic fiction and I love the kinky parts, but you are managing to bring us a beautifully tragic story together with it. Thanks for writing and always repling, I am really happy if my reviews help you. Your storytelling sure helps me.
Author's Response:
Mr. In a Suit, as you know I always look forward to your reviews. I read them multiple times as I write. However, they're so dang dangerous because I just want to discuss theme and plot with you. There's still a lot of plot points I have to hit, so I have to refrain from typing something that may be a spoiler.
That being said, your predictions are always fascinating to read. I like how you really analyze the characters. Very astute.
Thanks again for always commenting!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2021 5:36 AM Title: The Beginning
I love the story. It both sucks me and and is horrifying. As someone who was bullied extensively those scene were rough, but you've done it great so far. One of these days I'll pick up the pen again, bit for now, I lurk and enjoy. Keep up the amazing work
Author's Response:
Thanks Senital! I'm sorry about your experiences, it sucks that it's such a common and universal experience. I hint at Anna's bullied past in some chapters, but when the chapter comes up that delves into it, I'll be sure to warn readers before they jump in.
Writing is one of those things that will always be there waiting for you even if you go away for a while, so just take your time .
Thanks again for the comment!
Date: November 10 2021 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow, i'm reading this just because of how good the story is. i don't even care about the gts stuff anymore.
Author's Response:
Thanks rubber! That's a hell of a compliment. I'll definitely have been lacking in the spicy stuff lately, but this new chapter has a bit of the traditional stuff. I'm glad you're liking the narrative.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2021 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Well hot damn that was a read, I'm glad Poppy got a small victory in the midst of all the chaos. She might have condemned Nick but thanks to her quick thinking she saved the life of the sister of the woman who gave her fingers to try to help her.
I'd like to say I'm shocked at the gore but given my history in the community I'd be lying, I've definitely seen worse but very creative game there. You really feel the evil in the room even more when somebody is forced to crawl along a table as nothing but a one legged torso.
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Naughty little minx, talking advantage of our heroine in her weakened state. Anna has been fighting a war on two fronts and holding her own quite well but you wonder how long she'll be able to fight off Poppy with everything else going on.
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Well. well it seems Anna has found an ally even if one trapped in a seemingly equal hell to her own but an ally all the same. I'm not sure where Nell goes from here but she's surely going to be a better help than she thinks right now.
As for the ending, I have feeling they are going to try to retaliate on the ghosts of Anna's past once she spills the beans. May god help them when Zoey kicks that ass.
Author's Response:
Ha, yeah I try to let Poppy win at least sometimes, otherwise It'd be a pretty morbid story. And yeah the giantesses seem to have a strange fixation on her past. But I love how enthused you are about the idea of Zoey beating down the FF lol.
Your reviews always make me smile, Adam.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Took me a while but better late than never. I know exactly what you mean, writing takes courage and patience... I have none, so I thank the heavens for blessing the world with people like you XD
About the latest chapter, Leah’s father really steals the show, forcing a full honest reaction even from Anna. And, yes, they all have serious issues - treating a meeting with there daughter’s as business trade is just sad.
But, we got to see the 4 once more stand up for Anna and even defend, in their own twisted sense, her status as a living being. Moreover, They proved They want her more than Money and that’s interesting because it got me curious about how far each one is willing to go to be with Poppy.
I would like Anna to give the giantessess some credit. They clearly care for her, even turning down their parentes offers. Which brings me to the aftermatch of what happened in this chapter.
First things first, 3 giantessess will be angry at Poppy for reacting the way she did, all except Leah. As unlikely as it might be, I am betting she will empathise more with Anna’s angry towards her father nasty low blow of using her own mother as bait. Leah is probabily familiar with the governor ways and be more understanding because of some bound feeling, and will get the others off Anna’s back.
There is also the problem with the tinies. What will be Anna’s reaction after seeing yet another carnage? Will she finally break? Or will she try to reason with the 4 and convince them not to take part in the parents madness? After all, the feast is just another move to smooth them laid by the governor.
But the most exciting is the file. It’s obvious the governor has information about all the hardships in Anna’s life, and the giantesses reaction to her past is another chance of bounding and being redeemed, at least a little, in her eyes.
Yes, I am gonna bet the 4 can be redeemed and trully love Anna... as warped as that might be it’s not impossible... I think... I hope... I don’t...know kkkkkk
Also, before I forget... DIE OLIVER! DIE! JUST DIE! WHAT A BORING CHARACTER!! Sorry, but I just find him infuriating as some sort of romantic end game for Anna, simply plain and annoying.
Sorry it’s not as detailed as some of my other theories, but it’s been a rough couple of weeks. Your chapter is one of the few good things that happened, loved Anna swearings. I didn’t realized before, but are you perhaps familiar with portuguese?
Author's Response:
Mr. In A suit, your hatred for Oliver will never not make me laugh. Though if I were in your shoes, I would probably view him as a hindrance also.
I also love how you see the giantesses as defending Annabelle--something she has yet to acknowledge. I can't say too much, but I'm really excited for the next few chapters.
As always, your predictions are fascinating. Sometimes your ideas are honestly better than what I have outlined. And I am familiar with Portuguese, but not enough that didn't have to check with some friends and google translate, before I wrote the dialogue.
That's the thing about making characters ethnically diverse, I end up having to double check everything. I'm not complaining though. When Annabelle's familial background is delved into a bit, it'll have (hopefully) all been worth it.
Thanks again for your review, they're always so interesting to read.