



[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Just the best story out there. I look forward to each update so much, and this latest chapter was a brilliant one.
Wasn't a massive Harper fan, but she's leapt in my estimations here - just so powerful - I couldn't have loved the first true inkling of imprinting any more.
Harper would certainly be the most loving of owners, but I can't help but my 2 absolute favourites are Leah and . . . Zoey! For me it's all about the dominance; they are the most sure of themselves, confident in the knowledge that they deserve to be worshipped. Whether or not Annabel imprints on Zoe, I can't wait til Zoe has her first knowing interaction with shrunken Annabel. Your descriptions at her unaware dominance (mountainous, glorious godly being) mean as soon as she *knows* she'll be impossibly powerful.
Patreon - I love this idea. Think you write wonderfully and would be 100% up for reading everything you write (as long as it's not too pricey).
Author's Response:
Thanks redfoot, I try!
Zoey is also one of my favorites. I'm glad that although I only spent a chapter on her, so many people are impacted by her character. I mean, I was banking on that because she's a pretty important character for this story.
So don't worry, she'll be coming up in upcoming chapters.




[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
So you were right. This was amazing, truly amazing, really, I loved every second of it, I'm SO happy that my girl Harper got time to shine!!I'm so excited about this I could cry lol
Anabelle having an imprinting episode that wasn't an imprinting episode was amazing. Like, all the other times it was because Poppy possessed her, but this time it was Anabelle, being herself and utterly adoring Harper. It was a pity that the revelation took off from the fact that Harper was trying on her own way to build Anabelle's self esteem up. Harper has the capacity to being a loving woman, caring, thoughtful. She clearly cares about Anabelle and even enjoys talking to her more than she enjoys having sex with her! She also has insecurities, fears, she is a human being.
Anabelle is clearly struggling. She keeps reminding herself of the shrinkees Harper has killed, how she treats those she considers lower than herself, she is constantly reminding herself of those facts, because if she doesn't all she will be able to see are Harper's good traits and that would be terrible for her because then she would fall for Harper and her own values make her feel that is a bad thing to do, not to mention her not feeling deserving of love. Is a constant struggle and it was wonderfully represented.
My scales changed indeed. Now Anabelle and Leah are tight for spot 1, like, side to side. I do legit think Harper is the one Poppy would be the happiest with considering not only her but also her parents and home environment. But then again Goddess Leah is still strong in my heart.
I think next will be...Molly, probably. Step up the difficulty on emotional problems and whatnot I guess?I don't think it will be Leah because she is supreme and will most likely be last to have the last word as she usually likes to do. Naomi would be nicee too, though I'm not a Nell enthusiast like most others. She is nice and cute but not particularly unique to me.
Keep up the good work, I love it!!
Author's Response:
Ha! I'm glad you liked it Naoru.
I'm glad you commented on the "self-help game" Harper put together. I mean, I thought it was cute ¯_(ツ)_/¯
I'm happy you appreciate the little characterizations I gave Harper, and I like that you're noticing Annabelle's mental state (you should keep track of that...it may be important :) )
I'm excited to see what you think of the most recent chapter. It's basically a direct contrast to this chapter, so I'm very intrigued as to what your thoughts could be.
Thanks for commenting again Naoru!




[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ok first love this chapter Thankyou for it.
annabelle/poppy is in very much danger here, this was the first time she really lost herself ( yay for subconscious belle, go girl) but it did seem as if annabelle was still annabelle even lost so some of my concerns for the imprinting have been lessened if not out right gotten rid off.
By the way great job on humanizing Harper, u actually made me really like her even when she was being a bitch to the staff. She had a right to scold the staff she just went to far.
I mean Harper has been my least favorite of the girls until this chapter cause yea I honestly thought she was dumb, but congratz on making me realize she does have a brain and that she honestly does love annabelle and I think she may actually love her past being a pet still not equal, but far more then a thing or pet, not sure how to classify that.
If u can do that to Harper I can’t wait to see the others.
Yea poppy is so love starved that this will be a very difficult fight for her.
I’m still team Leah by the way but damn if u didn’t just make a very strong argument for team Harper.
I am indifferent to the patreon thing if u do make one I will prob subscribe and it would be nice to have a more direct communication between us and u ( I love that u comment on each review). But if u choose to not that’s ok. To
I will prob leave another review later cause I am still thinking about her losing herself to the feet and smell which to be honest I loved that scene, u write such good smut that I almost forget it’s smut. But yea I have more thoughts on that I just need to make them make sense.
I do have a question ( don’t expect an answer to this except maybe much later) I am trying to figure out what ploys criteria is for defining who is worthy of worship, why the 4 and maybe zoey, why not cloe or the parents I mean the parents could most certainly protect her if it was just that, so what is the criteria here that poppy is looking for.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the kind words, Ralgar. I also can't wait for you to see the next giantess.
I will say that your question definitely will get answered in the upcoming chapters. It's a great question and I can't speak on it, but I can also say that I have been thinking about the criteria a lot in the most recent chapters (it's exhausting and tedious, but when the reveal is...well revealed, I want to make sure the criteria holds up) and I have had to be very careful in how Annabelle interacts with giants in each scene (that's kind of a hint, but not really).




[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Zoey will have her day, mousie hasn't gotten permission to escape just yet. Harper's athleticism does add a level of hotness too her beyond the lusty blonde tropes, her being able to fuck you up legit is pretty great.
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Harper is definitely a monster but I kind of agree with Anna here, there is really no need to be rude on Twitter or whatever it is. It does make me route for her more though knowing she's still keeping her morales despite all she's going through with the Fearsome Four. Seeing Harper's human side is warming much like seeing Molly's at times, still definite monsters but you can see there might be SOME good there if the upbringings were not so horrific.
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I'm actually shocked Harper given being the blonde rich girl Goddess HASN'T made Anna kiss her feet more often, it really seems like it'd be one of her go-to's to cement her status as above everyone else sans her fellow nightmare sisters. I do admit Poppy hyping Harper's feet is amazingly hot, I hope Anna does get herself some help one day but still hot.
For a moment there I thought Anna might actually be imprinting on Harper and all thanks to her tootsies but it appears she has came to her senses. Not sure where this goes for Anna but that's some dangerous waters she was treading there, a new side to her that she hasn't really shown before outside of Poppy taking over.
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Holy fucking hell the first part of the wedding nightmare was chefs kiss beautiful, basically a scenario I've thought of happening for years in one of these type stories or some variation of it. Anna might not be able to come back from this hole she's digging for herself, Harper may have finally won the psychopath lottery.
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There's the horrifying nightmare of a woman we're used to seeing!
Though quick thinking by Anna to at least save somebody some great pain and suffering. Not sure it would've worked if the other three had been together but luckily they weren't for poor Kate.
Who knew enslaving a tiny person against her will was good for one's self confidence? Harper seems genuinely human here and Anna seems almost like she is learning towards her over the others a little. I can understand that as Harper seems like she's one of the lesser evils along with Molly at times but Harps has the hotness to carry her through the rough patches.
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Well damn, wasn't expecting all that from Anna but completely justified and if she had to pop off to one of them she picked possibly the safest one of the quartet to do so. Harper if she had even a bit of a less insane upbringing really seems like she'd be a quality person, her reasoning for doing what she's done to Anna is way off base of love but the more you learn about her the more you really feel she's never really felt actual love without being a pawn for somebody or something.
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All the feels here...
It seems Anna's resolve is easily broken by our blonde titaness, the rage and vigor is still there but Harper seems the best at defusing it with her terrifyingly wholesome charms. Not sure how much it will matter later but if Anna's not careful Poppy just got her leg up in getting her point across so to speak.
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As for who is next...
I'll say either Lea or Naomi, somebody more forceful and strict to counterbalance all the sugary sweetness of Harper's visit.
Author's Response:
I love how you're still hung up on Zoey (don't worry, I am too). She's 100% coming back.
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You'll see especially in the upcoming chapters that Annabelle's morals are pretty solid. She's gonna stick by her beliefs (to the frustration to many a ready no doubt)
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I won't say anything about the feet/imprinting scene, but I do think it is hilarious how you are sympathetic to Annabelle's plight, and in the same sentence noting the spiciness of the scene. You make laugh every time.
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I'm glad you liked the dream sequence. It was 100% of the reason it took so long to upload this chapter. It was a scene I added in, because I wanted to convey Annabelle's psychological struggles (like you said)
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" Harps has the hotness to carry her through the rough patches" is my favorite part of this comment.
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Based on your sympathy for Harper, I'm interested to see how you respond to the most recent giantess within this arc.
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As always, thanks for the comment AdamX. I always like to know what you're thinking.
Date: March 07 2022 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh boy, it's happening, the imprinting. The usage of nouns was brilliant in your depiction of Annabelle truly losing control, replacing "Harper" with "Goddess". The description of the imprinting incidence, where Harper literally becomes a goddess, reminds me of another story on this site, "We help each other get on" by Greenanon, where the giantess' scent makes the tiny guy lose himself and worship her. It's played in a less frightening context, since the giantess character is actually gentle, but it's fun to compare and contrast these similar scenes. Heck, because those scenes were played with a wholesome perspective, it makes your tale by contrast, all the more harrowing.
Harper was probably going to be the "easiest" for Annabelle to handle, simply because she's obssessed with her the most. The other girls appear to be tempered with a sense of pragmatism that Harper simply doesn't possess, especially Leah. How Annaabelle will confront them one on one will be interesting. I suspect before the end, happy or sad, Poppy will inevitably have her day. You might be heading for a role reversal where Poppy is in control, and Annabelle is the voice of discontent, making Poppy's goddesses "bleed" in a figurative sense, before her eyes.
P.S: Happy secret ending where Annabelle imprints on Oliver and commandeers his fully armed and operational submarine plz.
Author's Response:
Hee hee,
That's really cool that you caught that, Divediveburners. I haven't read the story you're referencing but I'll definitely check it out. Harper most definitely is the most willing to bend to Annabelle's will when it comes to certain things.
I can't say much about how Annabelle will interact with the most recent giantess in the upcoming chapters because it's still developing, but I will say that it will more than likely surprise you.
Also I laughed loudly at your proposed happy secret ending. Funnily enough, a lot of people don't see Annabelle + Oliver as a happy ending.
Anyway, thanks for commenting, Divediveburners




[Report This]Date: March 07 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I SO want Poppy to end up with Harper! Their interactions are as sweet as they are wrong. Plus they are so hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks IamtheWalrus!
I'm glad you're liking the story! Harper is one of my favorites, and her and Annabelle's relationship is still developing, so I can't wait for you to see how their story unfolds.




[Report This]Date: February 28 2022 5:32 PM Title: The Beginning
Just wondering if there will be an update soon
Author's Response:
I'm aiming for some time this week (hopefully). I wrote a huge chunk yesterday. I keep adding scenes haha. Like I just wrote this dream sequence that I may or may not keep. I just want to make sure I squeeze all I can from Harper before I move onto the next giantess.
Sorry for the wait!




[Report This]Date: February 14 2022 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
I was unsure how to approach this chapter because it is so touching. Annabelle reminiscing not only the hard stuff of her past, but also her mother’s touch at the end... God, you said the bound part would come next chapter, but, for me, the bounding already started there.
Once again, everything is very twisted When it comes to the relationships... to the point Harper’s parentes make no sense – They say and do all those things to Anna... and decide to give her their Family name. Is it because of imprinting or they are really just not all there when it come to shrinkees?
Changing topics, we saw how Anna desires attention and protection. Naomi is really the one I remember most when thinking about showing some real concern for Annabelle, but my gut teels me you have something big prepared for queen Leah and the governor (who is taking the stage as the most dangerous foul in the story). My gut tells me they have a lot in common (Leah and Anna) in terms of Family and the desire for a mother figure, a figure who won’t ever abbandon them.
I am even more curious about how will you develop each one’s feelings and desires... That’s it for now. I will not try to guess more than I already did, I want to wait and see what will happen now.
Thanks for the quick update and for always answering. It’s good to have this channel to Interact with the writers.
Author's Response:
Reading the comment makes me excited to see your reaction to the most recent chapter, Mr in A suit.
I know the relationship between Annabelle and the parents (and the FF) can be difficult to grasp (because it is so twisted like you said), but I guess it comes down to them sincerely liking Annabelle, but their lust surpasses whatever feelings of happiness they would like to provide for Annabelle. Like, "This thing is so cute and amazing, and I want it to be happy, but the faces it makes when it's in pain are too fun to ignore." I mean that's a dark interpretation of what I'm talking about, but it's similar.
As always, I can't comment on your theories because I just know that I'll spoil something. But just remember this comment when you read Leah's chapter.
I will say about developing their feelings for each other...this is 100% the most difficult part of writing these sections. Part of the reason the most recent chapter took so long to write is because I kept swapping out scenes. Finding the balance of push and pull is really difficult. I didn't want Annabelle to fall too quickly, but I wanted to make it known that she's not immune to the giantesses' charms.
Thanks again for your comment! You always make me analyze this story a bit differently.




[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
I see Harper naturally got her first, seems very trusting of the other three to agree to let her go first but it does seem safer than letting her be the last one to have ownership of the little one. Anna is hanging in there for all she's been put through and if she manages to make it out of this in one piece she deserves a nice piece of cake or something. We are also slowly learning how sneaky athletic Harper is, we saw some of it during the fight with the creeper who broke in but the swimming grace shows off a bit more.
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It's weird seeing somebody be assertive with the foursome even if it is their parents. I would've definitely figured they would've kept funding her lifestyle for years to come without her really needing to work or achieve anything beyond what she is now. Her attachment to Anna will certainly bring up headaches later when her time is up with her.
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Kudos to Anna for finding her inner peace enough to stop harming herself, sucks things ended up like that have thus far but small bright spots and all. She also helped brighten Harper's day even if it ended badly for her so her heart is still in the right place...even if she didn't want to be a sprinkle later on. Harper's mom using the middle name then mentioning her prior -activities- is only the kind of you could get away with in a fetish story or HBOMax show.
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Dear god that was something wasn't it? I knew the parents of the foursome were truly heinous but that was just...wow. Anna deserves a medal for that performance even more than the times with the main four. We haven't seen her alone with the other families yet but it would be hard to top the horror show of what she experienced here.
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A nice tended moment for Anna late in the day is rather nice, still trapped in hell but nice all the same. I also feel for Nell who doesn't deserve the crap she gets for being part of the nightmare collective that was born into.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Yeah Annabelle definitely deserves some cake. As I'm rereading this comment, I think I may have subconsciously taken your description of Harper and used it in the most recent chapter, which is hilarious to me--so I guess thank you?
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Harper's parents--and all of the FF's parents for that matter--hold their children to a certain standard (at least when it comes to certain things). You'll especially see this soon.
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The middle name dialogue is one of the reasons that I love writing fetish stories. I think the juxtaposition of Harper being in trouble and scolded in such a juvenile way, with the reason her being in trouble is so funny to me. I love writing scenes like that.
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I can't wait for the Naomi chapter, because I know Nell is a popular character, so I'm excited to see how you react to her and Annabelle's scenes together.
Thanks for always commenting Adam, you're appreciated.




[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
After reading Ragar's reviews I do have to add some more on Harper's parents. I still think they are the best of the lot even if they are not my favorites. They are horny motherfuckers, who love their daughter and have teached her to be strong which is like, really good, considering the others are abusive towards their own daughters so yeah, they probably treated Anabelle sort of good by the parent's standards...in a sense. Also again, that scene was really hot.
Author's Response:
I mean the Abbots, especially compared to some other parents (you'll see), definitely are more willing to display affection. Which I really like, because they are the most physically formidable. I really like that contrast.
Thanks again for commenting, Naoru!




[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 27
I have to say, I never commented about it for some reason or the other but I always thought that from the parents there were two possibilities for parents using Anabelle as a sex toy: Leah's father as a way to somehow have a pissing match with his own daughter and Harper's parents because they are horny motherfuckers. And there you go! The sex scene was actually kind of hot but also kind of horrible. I feel like Poppy probably feels that Anabelle should be with the girls and not their parents. Is interesting that Poppy didn't appeared at all. No mentions of worshipping her betters or whatever. There is a criteria here, and not everyone meets it, just saying.
Is good that next chapter will be focused on bonding because while the Abbots are my second favorite parents with Warren on number one and the other ones being a meh on my book, I'm looking forward to tons of Harper. Harper's backstory, and a deeper look on who she is. I can only hope for Anabelle to appreciate her more but alas I will happy with whatever I get.
Author's Response:
Ugh, I can't wait for you to read Leah's chapter Naoru. I'm interested to see what you'll think.
And without spoiling too much, I'm very happy that you're paying attention to when Poppy shows up and what the surrounding circumstances are.
Also, I hope you like the Harper chapter. I think there are some moments that you'll really appreciate.




[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
So another thing I noticed and was surprised by was the parents actually willing to give a choice ( granted pic your poison type choice), still that is far beyond what I expected from any of the parents. And they were willing to have a conversation even if only a little, they treated her with far more agency and respect than I expected( which says a lot considering about where that particular bar is). They even said to relax which is an actual consideration and an attempt to help make what happened easier. Wow they actually may have treated her better then Harper does.
I don’t expect that from any of the other parents at all. I expect full indefference to actual distain from from naomis parents to Molly’s respectively. Leahs dad I expect full on mental and emotional manipulation from him.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's an important thing to notice. The BSA's relationship with Annabelle is really unique. They definitely don't view her as a person, but they want her to be happy while still being obedient. However, their wants and desires will always be more important than Annabelle's happiness.
And super astute point about the other parents Ralgar! I can't wait for you to read the upcoming chapters.
As always, thanks for commenting.




[Report This]Date: February 10 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ok I have thoughts for later but first off that was hot as hell, ummm I really liked that spicy scene and hot damn I felt for Anna but damn did I ( honestly if I was in generals position there would be no way I could resist doing that( does that make me a bad person to)?) find that hot.
The bear scene is very worring for Anna. Also yes just like Anna I found Harper to be the most immature of the lot prob followed by Naomi ( really u attack your sister, and then call her immature and dramatic) Also yes I was right about her being drawn to the whole working out thing ( swimming in this case) just not as strong of a pull as I at first thought.
So we have started to learn about their back story and some of Anna’s ( what’s up with the mom) so this should be good.
Author's Response:
Hey Ralgar,
Glad you liked the adult Abbot's scene. It was definitely fun to write, I love writing characters in those spicy situations because you can find out a lot about them when they are...enthusiastic with each other.
The swimming was a good introduction to the working out, but the scene I was thinking of was in the most recent chapter. You'll see how Annabelle's reaction is maybe a little different than one might expect.
And yeah, I promise Annabelle's backstory is still coming up!
Date: February 09 2022 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
This is insane, I read this chapter (chapter 26) when you posted it but forgot to post a review. I just remembered and when I went to refresh this site to log in so that I could post a review, I saw that you had updated the story with a new chapter. The timing! Lol.
Anyways, this story is incredible. I really wish we could’ve seen the giants and giantesses actually feast on the tinies and was disappointed when it didn’t fully happen. That being said though, your writing is absolutely insane. This legitimately feels like reading a published novel rather than a story on a fetish site. Even though super cruel giants/giantesses are my only interest when it comes to these stories, your ability to put us directly in the mind of the protagonist makes even me feel sick at the absolute lack of souls and callousness of the giants/giantesses and the hopelessness feeling that she has of going against such undefeatable opponents is truly addicting. Love love love this story even tho we don’t get much cruel torture and disposal of tinies (which is one of the only reasons I read this stories). This story is still a joy to read regardless.
And never hesitate to write a chapter that long again because long chapters are my favorite lol
Author's Response:
Thanks GhostWriter!
Ha! I love that you actually are disappointed over the lack of carnage lol, but don't worry, the violence in this story is nowhere close from being over. I hoped you liked this most recent chapter because for some reason it was longer than I anticipated.
Thanks for the kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!




[Report This]Date: February 07 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
This chapter was certainly a game-changer, in that it changed the understanding of the world within the story. Once again, I enjoyed reading this due to exciting twists and advancement of the plot, not necessarily for the giant/giantess action. You've really been adept at evoking strong emotions, whether it's positive or negative towards certain characters.
SPOILERS
There's a lot that could be discussed and unpacked at the prospect of a foundation to help shrinkees ends up being absolute horror and destruction for those they claim to help. This parallel society of shrinkees is a major reveal, and appears to be the path to salvation for Annabelle. It appears we're going to get backstory on her four tormentors, I don't know if that's going to soften the blow for when Poppy takes over, or if that's setting up a betrayal. I do hope we get some closure on Annabelle's friends, and her crush. I may or may not have a ship going.
It was cathartic to see Annabelle turn the tables on her captors. Quite a Sideous-esque schemer she has become, but only a sith deals in absolutes. I hope there are more moments such as this, but I'm a sucker for triumph after so many chapters of torment and missed opportunities.
An unserious thought, if Annabelle can speak Portuguese, does that mean, in addition to self-regeneration, she has the power of BRAZIL on her side?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Divediveburners,
That's a huge compliment. I try to keep it spicy, but the plot is super important to me.
Ha! Please tell me who your ship is! Annabelle's friends will be making a reappearance.
Jajaja, and if she had Brazil on her side, then that would make it an unfair match. Though on a serious note, Annabelle's relationship with those countries (on her mother's side) is definitely impacted by her relationship with her mother. I can't wait to explore it later.
Thanks again for commenting!




[Report This]Date: February 05 2022 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hello! Me again. These are my thoughts on what I think is most likely to happen in the next few chapters... so yes, another theory of mine. Just somethings I wanted to add after writing my first comment and reading some others here.
I think a good order would be Harper, Molly, Naomi and Nell, leaving Leah as the end game. Why? Because Harper and Molly can soft Anna’s heart, she will be surprised she is actually able to bond with those gigantic beings, at least when they are alone.
With Harper she might be surprised the co-ed has some tastes they share, some series and foods both like and actually talk about. Anna might come to the realisation Harper could actually be a good girlfriend... you know if she wasn’t so cling and sex crazy... like her parentes.
With Molly, she might find an inteligent Woman, with ideas and maybe ideals for her own life, as well as a fragile ego. Someone too much aware of her body and her parents expectations. She will find someone whose soul and body could shine and be real friends with her... if she didn’t try so hard to be... what her parents want her to be (much like Nell situation maybe).
With Naomi and Nell, Anna will be the prize in their sibling rivalry, and while Anna will try to favor Nell (inviting Naomi’s jealousy), she will find a more “Sweet” side to her punk-rock overlord, while Nell is more and more affected to the imprinting effects, acting more and more like the F4 usually does. Ultimatelly the sisters bond for “Anna’s sake” (maybe a united front to protect the tiny from their insane mother´s experiments?) in a threesome, Nell obviously fully imprinted at this point – which doesn’t stop her from being embarassed and confused after everything (but more happy than she ever felt before).
After all this, becoming aware of the effect Poppy has on the giantesses and feeling, against all odds, really guilty about making the F4 even more crazy than they already where, comes Leah. Someone she can bond even deeper, on a psychological level, given both lost their mother figure and the Governor... well it’s a liar and a bastard who terrifies even our queen Leah.
Author's Response:
I can't say much to this without jumping into spoiler territory (other than, you are very analytical)...but I will say that I cannot wait for your reaction to these next several chapters.
Date: February 03 2022 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
This may be my first review in this story.
I have to congratulate you because this story is like a profesional book. It must be one of the best stories written in this website.
Regarding your questions, I have to say I really enjoyed Nell. She gives a different/new perspective. She also seems to be very human.
I suppose that Harper could be the next step. She is the only one that already had a crush on Anabelle. But Naomi would also include Nell, so it would also be a great choice. Leah fits better as the last choice, because her psychologic aproach.
Anyway, great job!!!
Author's Response:
Your review is much appreciated Zura--as are your compliments!
I gotta say, I'm thrilled everyone likes Nell. She's an interesting character. And your predictions of the order is...interesting ;)
Thanks again for the comment!




[Report This]Date: February 03 2022 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
God damn FANTASTIC chapter. Maybe my favorite of the whole story, plot-wise. It's been so much fun following along with this story from the start and to see it end up here, expanding on the world you've crafted makes it rewarding as hell.
As frustrated as I am with Anabelle for not taking the chance to escape, she's 100% right. The resistance couldn't have known how furious the search for her would've been. She would've put every single one of them in jeopardy.
And even though I'm sure security is going to be tighter than ever before, there will be other chances to escape for our little Blood-Blessed heroine.
Byte is amazing. I hope we haven't seen the last of him.
Author's Response:
Thank you JDO!
Annabelle is a variable the resistance did not expect, and later on you'll see how they restructure their plans. Also, I'm happy you like Byte, he's a fun character to write.
Date: February 03 2022 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
just awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks rubber! I try :)




[Report This]Date: February 03 2022 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
I really liked this chapter. The resistance seems really in depth. You're building a nice world. I'm interested in what their majors are. Why is Nell so different is she grew up with this, does byte make a return? Is there something more Annabelle can do to avoid imprinting. Does type 0 have a physical regenerative limit? So many questions, this chapter was so interesting. I don't mind the length, but can understand why you want to limit it. Story is great so far. Keep it up. Another thing? Did the giantess have something to do with the death of Annabelle real mother and sister?
Author's Response:
Thanks Senital!
You'll find out their majors in the next couple of chapters. And yes, Nell's position as the black sheep of the family will be explored and explained. I...am not going to answer the other questions 😁. You'll just have to wait and see. But I will say, more and more questions will be answered as the story progresses.