Date: October 20 2020 5:34 PM Title: A simple misunderstanding [intro]
Is it dropped? Please continue it
Date: September 22 2020 6:59 PM Title: A simple misunderstanding [intro]
This is shaping up to be an all time classic! Hopefully it doesn't stall out like so many other micro stories on here
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I know it's been a while since the last post, life has been quite difficult recently due to coronavirus. But I can promise there will be another chapter soon!
Date: September 06 2020 5:34 PM Title: The ride home [ft. feet, insertion]
very good story, I would like to see hazel in the future changing roles with kathy, and that she can take revenge, or give it an unexpected turn in the future
Date: September 04 2020 12:09 PM Title: The ride home [ft. feet, insertion]
Amazing update really excited for more
[Report This]Date: August 29 2020 5:54 PM Title: Making the best of bad situation [ft. feet, crush, insertion, mouth play]
Both wife and husband shrinking and getting abused by another “tiny” is certainly different... From what we know, Hazel was willing to let her husband get the short stick for her sake (don’t know how the daughter stand on the matter), so I am interested to see how she will cope with the situation, specially because they now have a master (Kathy) to please to avoid unpleasant situations.
As you can see, I don’t like Hazel attitude. She seems bossy and the kind of person that would sacrifice just about anyone to get what she wants, specially if it meant turning back to normal size or avoiding pain. If she was bigger, I am sure Alex wouldn’t enjoy the experince of being in her hands.
About Kathy, it is implied she is going to be caried by someone else. I presume it’s going to be another Family, maybe she ends up as a pet for someone’s daughter or son. This offers many possibilities for unaware scenarios since Hazel and Alex are being smuggled.
Good story. Thanks for sharing! Five stars so far :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the great review!
I was interested to read your assessment of Hazel's character. While I haven't had much opportunity to show this yet, Hazel is driven by overwhelming concern for her daughter.
Hazel's justification for letting Alex take the bullet is something I'd like to explore more later, but there's no harm in letting you know what my own thoughts were when writing the first chapter. In frank terms, Hazel believes that she is better equipped to care for their daughter than Alex is. As you've already pointed out, she is a prideful character who doesn't usually take much shit, and in this instance, there was no way she was prepared to let go of her position as Melissa's primary caretaker.
It's interesting to imagine how similar Hazel would be to Kathy were the roles reversed. Personally, I think she would be equally bossy, but maybe a bit more moderate in her approach.
I hope you enjoy the latest chapter :)
Date: August 28 2020 7:36 PM Title: A simple misunderstanding [intro]
Very interesting world building a great start please keep it up the anticipation of meeting his regular sized daughter is amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, Anastasia! I'm afraid they may not be reunited until quite a bit later in the story, but I promise it will be worth the wait :)
Date: August 28 2020 11:43 AM Title: A simple misunderstanding [intro]
Will wait for the next couple chapters to give a rating
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Date: August 27 2020 11:12 PM Title: A simple misunderstanding [intro]
Interesting premise. And I am a sucker for stories with complicated family dynamics. Will wait for the next couple chapters to give a rating ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I look forward to reading your thoughts, though I'm afraid that we won't be seeing much of Melissa for a little while...