Date: August 08 2024 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite stories, by one of my favorite authors. I really enjoy how the giantess slowly but surely becomes evil, as well as the way you capture Matt's increasing fear. Although I'm not a fan of protagonist deaths, in this case it almost felt... Inevitable. Really good, read.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2020 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like this story. This is one of my favourite devices - a giantess and tiny who are on gentle-ish terms but where cruelty is still involved outside the relationship. Very dominating dynamic. I like it.
Your characters have great dynamics. But I think your storytelling would improve if you extended your descriptions of events out. There's references to things that sound interesing but not a full description. I think this would help bring your story to life.
Date: August 29 2020 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic so far, but marrying her? Where will this lead?
Interested to read more.
BTW, nice writing style.