[Report This]Date: August 18 2020 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Freedom
Keeps getting intresting. Couples are getting better.
Amy and Phil are still in cold water...
I squealed when I read Ian. I'm so excited!!!!
Looking forward to more!
Date: August 16 2020 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 Freedom
Aerin not aaron.
And I hope there will be tons of sex and naughty stuff in store for Ian and ana. Sweet and sexy stuff. No mean bullying or forced sex like eve does.
Sorry I'm getting a bit pushy. It's your story not mine.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 Freedom
She looks like shion from the time I was reincarnated as a slime. Look her up and that's what she looks like. Not in the purple suit tho. Just a maid costume and regular clothes.
Oh and I made a mistake. He only rides around on her horn(yes she has one like shion from ttiwraas.) When he is small. But he hasn't been shrunk yet. You decide how he gets shrunk as long as it's not permanent.
I dont know where they should go. Maybe my kingdom station for shelter? Aarons family are old friends with Ian's family? They are all humans on the station so you could do the girls trying to fit into human colony. And go to a regular school? Where ian and ana are starting as well?
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 Freedom
Oh I'm excited! I'm really looking forward to this! I hope we get a ton of romantic fun!
Phil and amy have a ways to go tho...
Description for my characters?
Ian. A human prince of a space station orbiting over the planet Oninor. He is a kind,shy andfun young man who is in love with Ana but is too shy to tell her. He likes to ride on her horn. He loves to tease her and give her secret compliments.
Ana. A Onin.(like an oni but alien) she was born a runt of her people not huge and muscular but Beautiful and slightly curvy and smart. She was sold as a slave to the royal human family when she was only 10 and she was given to the royal human family's only child as a maid/bodyguard. So they have grown up together and they are both deeply in love with each other but she dosent think she isnt good enough for him so she keeps her love a secret. She loves compliments and being teased by Ian but pretends to not like it. But she blushes and it makes her very happy.
Ian would be good friends with Aerin and josh.
Sorry if I went a little overboard. I dont know if they are just going to be minor characters or full fledge characters. (Hoping it's the last one😁)
But I am very happy and excited that you are adding my characters. Thank you so much!😊
Looking forward to another amazing story from you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And Glad you have liked it so far!
And yes they do.
And Oni like the Yokai legend? If so, just leave another review with a Yes or No. Just want to be sure thats correct before I write (even if make the review for another chapter of my other stories if you can't review twice, you can delete it later or something).
And excellent description of what you want, you are 100% going to be full fledged characters and will do my best to intrigrate your characters to the story.
Also did you have a preference on where the story would be set, as I mentioned at the end. Just curious, just add if you have a preference in the same review for the Oni question (I would get you to msg this but the msg system seems busted on this site)
Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review, I will start writing up an outline for your characters and they will be introduced as soon as its possible.