Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 Night Pleasures

I love this chapter!

The shock mechanism was a nice twist since it basically forced Tom to please her all night. I love how she playfully stated that she forgot to turn it off. We know she purposely kept that on. 

Having Samantha show up was another cool surprise. I kinda forgot who she was so I had to go back and get a recap, but now I remember. With her abilities, anything is possible for her. She could literally enlarge his tongue while he is trapped there. 

Also, I wonder how will Samantha know when Ms. Eve returns. Maybe she will return at lunch? I'm not sure. Tom might be getting a bit thirsty by that time. Haha. Unless Samantha fills that role. 

You know, I didn't think much of reading your "super stories" story, but after that one review about "the boys" was mentioned, my mind went "whoa, now you got my attention". So it might be some time before I read all 20+ of those chapters, but you can bet a review will be there soon.

But I'm pretty sure I'm still picking this story as my favorite. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Glad the extra time helped in the end.

And yes, I wanted to make sure he kept serving, without Ms Eve cutting things short. The answer was a simple device to punish him while she slept.

And I have plans for Samantha, she will never overtake Ms Eve, her name is in the title for a reason, its her story. But I find Samantha like a mini Eve on drugs. A being of extrodinary power who's only goal is to mess or use Tom. Plus her powers make her fun to write.

A surprise for the next chapter.

And I hope you check it out. Its got alot of themes my other stories but in a new Super Hero setting. I look forward to your review!

And I expected as much, and I plan to continue it and have a new chapter up soon!

Thanks again for your continued reading and reviews and I look forward to the next review.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 Sleep Shenanigans

These last 2 chapters were amazing! 

Both Erica and Ms. Eve really had some bright moments with Tom.

First, I love how Ms. Eve just punished Tom for being used by Samantha and her. This whole system of Ms. Eve using Tom, but then punishing Tom for being a pervert or enjoying it or something is really funny and I love it. It's a never ending cycle which Tom can't escape which just adds to his complete helplessness. I also like the detail about making "after school" worse than "lunch" and finally we get the "bunking tonight" which we know lasts much longer than after school.

Then since Ms. Eve kept Tom late for drama class, he was forced to become the backside of the horse. Now that right there is creative. I've seen these costumes in person before, but only now I actually see how sexual this costume could be and now I'm going to look at that costume differently lol. I enjoyed how Erica uses the straps to really trap Tom and the cleverness on her part to do it during class while no one has any idea is kinda hot. I like how she turned around to get serviced on both sides. She truly wants to experience Tom from all angles. Lol

Then we have survival class again and we get to see the sleeping bag in action again! Samantha has this confident attitude that I'm kinda digging. I think she's my favorite girl of the 3. I think she is so dominant that even Ms. Eve has her eye on her. Which is probably why Ms. Eve interrupted her twice. Then again, Samantha seems to be the one that I see to work with Ms. Eve and together they can trap Tom in humiliating positions. Well in this case, we thought Ms. Eve was outside with Sally and Erica, but it looks like she crept back in and want a piece of Tom again. 

The moment when Tom thought Erica was the one entering the sleeping bag, but it was actually Ms. Eve was probably one of the smartest surprises I have seen in a while. That was good. I actually thought it was Erica at first because I trusted Tom's instincts, but as the dots connected and he was able to tell she tasted different, the a massive lightbulb went on in my end and together with this Tom, I realized it was Ms. Eve too. That was crazy. And then immediately we hear Ms. Eve's voice teasing Tom. That was perfect. 

Then for the cherry on top, Ms. Eve tells Tom that Samantha told her that Tom sneaked into the sleeping back without her knowing. Now I'm not sure if Samantha actually said that, or if Ms. Eve made that up so she could have a reason to punish him further lol. My mind wants to believe that Ms. Eve said that just to get Tom in trouble again. Haha. 

Hmm. Ideas for what happens when Tom sleeps over. I'm not sure if Ms. Eve knows how to shrink people in the prequel yet, but if she does, that could be arranged. If not, I think she could tie him, with rope, duct tape, or something, leaving just his head free. Then I think Ms. Eve could get her soiled panties and Tom is on the floor and he watches as she picks it up and it's just dripping in her juices. Then Ms. Eve could explain how horny and excited she was waiting for him and then tells him to clean her panties by shoving them into his mouth. He tries to spit it out, but instead she just sits on his face, and begins grinding her pussy on his face which also keeps Tom's mouth shut as he is now forced to inhale her scent as she rubs herself on him. She then has an orgasm on his face, almost drowning him. Ms. Eve gets up, removed her panties from his mouth and tells him that he is amazing and that him being trapped and helpless just gets her so aroused. Tom asks to be untied, but instead Ms. Eve just drags him from the floor to her bed. She uses his face and again and orders him to lick her and she does this multiple times for multiple orgasms and such. Then for the actual sleeping arrangements, Ms. Eve presses a button and her bed opens up in the middle and Tom's encased body falls into the hole. She then presses another button and the bed starts closing in on Tom and his whole body is trapped inside the bed, except his head which is facing up toward the ceiling and it's the only part of him sticking out of her bed. (Imagine a head sticking out in the middle of a mattress and his face is facing up if that makes sense.) So Ms. Eve inspects her work and is delighted to see Tom's fearful face trapped in the center of her bed. She then tells him this is how he would be sleeping with her tonight and he protests and wonders why this position and then Ms. Eve tells him that she will show him and she proceeds to climb onto the bed slowly, savoring the moment of Tom's fear as she approaches him. She places her knees on either side of Tom's face and she slowly spreads her knees apart which than makes her pussy descend slowly onto his face. Tom struggles to move away, but the bed holds him in place. She laughs in joy of his struggles and hope he wiggles like that throughout the night. Tom pleads that he will do anything and Ms. Eve states that he can start by licking her pussy all night. With that, her pussy makes contact with his face and she rocks her hips side to side to get comfortable. Tom protests by not licking, but then Ms. Eve presses her crotch firmly into his face, suffocating him. She holds this position for at least 30 seconds and tells him that he will learn to please her and that this is only the beginning. She tells him to lick or he would die to her pussy which she laughs. Finally she eases off him a bit and gives him a chance to breathe, but not completely, so he is forced to smell her aroma all night. Tom quickly begins licking worried about being smothered to death and soon Ms. Eve falls asleep, but her pussy is alive and moist, forcing Tom to swallow all her juices that flow out so he doesn't drown underneath her. Then in the morning, Tom hears an alarm clock go off and is relieved that this moment will be finally over, but to his dismay, Ms. Eve ignores the alarm and continues to rest on him. Tom didn't want to be late for class, so he decided he had to wake her up himself. So he did what he could only do. He began licking. Tom was licking for at least an hour before finally her body began to react and wake up. Ms. Eve got off Tom and sat up looking at the time. She realized she was late for home room, but then she looked at Tom and smiled. She tells Tom that he has been naughty and she needs an orgasm before going to class. She crawls back onto Tom and uses him again and afterward, she frees him and unties him from his bonds. 

Ok, I got carried away. Parts of that were ideas and the rest of that near the end was mostly fanfiction, haha. It's kinda fun to think about possible situations with these characters. 

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2020 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 Homeroom

 

Whoa! You are fast! I was expecting this soon, but not today. Haha! But I always enjoy seeing these updates so I appreciate each upload. I'm just amazed at how your brain can come up with stories just like this. I mean, this is incredible. I just love these kinds of stories. 

I kinda like how you explained all the species of aliens again. At the end of the other story, I kinda just went by their names and forgot who each kind of alien is. 

Hmm, 3 girls, 1 guy and 1 sexy teacher. That means a lot of attention will be on Tom, and I am already enjoying this. Looks like Tom will have some experience with each person, but I have no idea what each person wants. (Except maybe one person. Lol.) 

I really like what you did with Ms. Eve's character. While I'm used to her being controlling, I see how you mentioned that the school promised her she could play with Tom, whereas later on, she usually makes that decision himself. So basically this is just stage one of rise to dominance. I can't wait to see her become powerful!

I also like how the main character's name is Tom which makes it easier to put myself in his shoes. Thank you. :)

Ah. Sleeping arrangements. I wonder if Ms. Eve is part of the drawing. If she wins, then I'm not sure if the other girls would have a chance later on. We know how possessive Ms. Eve is. Hmm. As much as I want Ms. Eve to have Tom by herself all year, the story could get repetitive, so I'm guessing these other girls will add some variety to the mix.

Im going to guess Sally gets him first. She is bigger than Tom, but I think the other girls might be more challenging for Tom to deal with. Samantha with her magic has the potential to do anything with him, and Erica looks like she just wants to fuck him. Lol. 

Since this story is a prequel, I'm not 100% sure what Ms. Eve would do to Tom if she had him. In the future, she would use him as a sex toy, but here, she might toy with him in other ways and slowly become more sadistic over time. That's my guess. Unless, she already has these naughty ideas in her head and has been waiting a while to try them on a human. Whatever the case may be, I'm exited to find out. 

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the review!

I wanted to do your story first, since the original diverted to less Ms Eve themes later on. Plus I am still organizing the other spin-off and had ideas ready to go for this, thanks to your excellent suggestions. The single person story was actually something I took from your suggestion!

Ms Eve in this is the up and coming teacher, so she will get away with alot of things, this is why she was so powerful in the original story. I will also focus on not only her dominance of Tom but the other teachers also, but Tom is always the main focus.

I never had a draft that did not have a 'Tom' character and it was always going to be the main character regardless, its just now, its the only main character, twice the torment!

I will add this, Ms Eve is being floaty with Tom and will be for at least 2-3 chapters, however once she notices students abusing him (as teased in the latest chapter), she will force herself to interact with him. Tom's main 'partner' is Ms Eve in this. The other students are their to allow her to do what she does and make situations to force events. Magic being a new one that will help Ms Eve in the future. However, yes, to avoid repeating events, Ms Eve will share him with others, but Ms Eve is the focus (as per the title)

I am surprised you guessed that, but yes. The easiest character to 'accidently' use Tom, which will lead to lust for him and the other girls to try taking advantage of him.

Samantha will have ALOT of fun with Tom, including her and Ms Eve scenarios (Magic makes everything fun!)

Ms Eve will learn alot about Humans in this story, her character in the original is due to events in this story.

Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!