Date: April 10 2021 7:12 AM Title: The Final Showdown
Wow !!
That's an amazing finale full of twists and turns !
I knew Alexis was the true goddess all along, hope Cloe won't mind living and shrinking away inside what soon will be a smelly, sweaty solar system for her ^^
I wonder if Cloe will shrink so much so that she will enter a subatomic universe, at that point she may encounter another planet like Earth. If that's the case, she will temporarily feel like a giga goddess before shrinking down anew. I would love to be in her place ^^
Too bad i'm the only one who have been posting comments for suggestions for quite a time.
Date: March 11 2021 8:16 AM Title: Found!
Wow !!!
You were right when you said the last chapters were gonna filled with content !!
Now it seems like Jesse will not be the one shrunken forever at one of the girl's feet. At least, I had my wish granted because he eventually fell into the sauna-like boot of Alexis ^^
It also seems clear that either Cloe or Sam is gonna be shrinking forever at the other's feet but which one of them ? Cloe seems lke she have the upper hand but for me, she may have made a mistake by putting Tabatha out of her shoe. If Tabatha had stayed in the shoe, Cloe would have had a better leverage but that's just my personal point of view.
But what about Alexis ? Will she aroused by Cloe's deal or will she remain faithful to Sam and Jesse ?
It's odd Alexis doesn't clearly want someone to keep her company in her divine boots : if it was me i would not hesitate a second for the boots !!
Congrats for relasing this chapter rather quickly despite the full content and the other stories you have !!!
See you soon for the finale !
Date: February 16 2021 1:29 PM Title: Doom and gloom
You dit it !!
I think it was worth waiting for this chapter.
Now that Jesse has been found, maybe the plot will offer the choices hereunder :
Will Sam and/or Alexis manage to get out of the bathroom and handle Cloe in order to rescue Tabatha ?
Or will Cloe have her fun with Tabatha, take the last shrinking solution and go the bathroom ? If that's so, will either Sam or Alexis take care of Cloe and shrink her ? Or will Cloe handle one of them and shrink them so that she have a small committee shrinking away at her feet ?
In addition, Jesse might inadvertenly be tossed back at Cloe's feet during a potential fight between the 3 girls.
So many possibilities to wrap up this story !
By the way, thanks for your still amazing work !
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a few plans for the finale in mind as to what'll happen with Jesse and the girls. Not spoling anything but I hope everyone will enjoy it. We're nearing the end so anything can happen. Hope to see you along with the next chapters becuase I am planning on these next few to be the last but filled with content.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2021 3:25 AM Title: Doom and gloom
I'm supprised this hasn't had more reviews it's a great story, look forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you for the nice words! I try my best to write the very best stories that I can, especially with this one as a lot of people love this story. As for more chapters, we are nearing the end of this saga, maybe about two more chapters left? I'm hoping they'll be semi-long and full of content so be on the lookout for that ;)
Date: January 08 2021 8:44 PM Title: A Deep Dive
Yesss !!! Exactly the outcome i wanted , a microscopic Jesse finally heading into Alexis' shoes where he belongs ^^^
I presume when he will touch the insole, he might be so small that he's gonna struggle to not drown into the endless ocean-like wet insoles awesome !!
He still has a chance though because if Sam is clever enough, she may want to look into Alexis's boots and at that point, she may bring Tabatha in to seek Jesse. If that is not the case , Jesse will likely to be in BIG trouble.
If I may ask , Do you know what are Alexis's boots look like ? Are they knee-high or ankle-high boots ?
Honestly, i didn't expect you to come back so soon , amazing story anyway , i hope you're gonna keep a pace of less than a month if you can even though you don't have much free time.
Author's Response:
I tried my best with getting this one out as soon as I could and I succeded! In the next chapter (whenever that is) I want to have two storylines going on at the same time that will converge near the end. Jesse's struggles to get found as well as Cloe's intentions to toy with the tiny Tabatha who is searching for Jesse in all the wrong places.
As for Alexis' boots, think of them like Doc Martin style boots that are high heeled, black and ankle high boots. Either way, Jesse won't have any fun hanging around them. Or should I say in them?
Date: December 20 2020 4:53 PM Title: Getting Help
Finally !! Glad to see you back !!
Now I see you've taken account my suggestion regarding Tabatha ^^
What size is she exactly ? Is she already at Jesse's size or is she 2 inches tall like jesse at the beginning ?
Is she gonna tormented by her friends feet given that the other 3 girls have a tiny couple at their feet ? As you said at the end of the chapter , Jesse is likely to be stepped or tossed inside one of the girls' shoes ^^
Furthermore, if not indiscreet, have you already planned to issue the next chapter shortly (around 1 or 2 weeks) or are you gonna take your time like you did between chapters 6 and 7 ?(I know i'm demanding but this story is soooo good)
Thanks for your amazing work !!
Author's Response:
Good to be back! As for Tabatha's new size, she'll start out the same size Jesse was before he started shrinking even more. Same time limit, maybe a little bit less since she has to find him before he's too small even she can't find him. And for torturing her at that size, safest girl to be around is more than likely Sam with Cloe being the most....enthusiastic to have her be at her feet. She just wants a tiny person at her feet and if it's Jesse or Tabatha she doesn't care.
As for the time frame of when the next chapter will be out, my plan is to always have it out as soon as I can. I appreciate your enthusiasm to read more of this but things do take time. I hope to see you when the next chapter is out :)
Date: November 05 2020 12:14 PM Title: Friends
Awesome chapter ! Great to see you back !
Regarding some suggestions, i would love to see Jesse shrink even smaller but this time, why not at the mercy of Alexis's feet or even stranded in either one of the girls' shoes.
I'm also in favor of a F/f role, maybe a shrinking from Tabatha ?
Author's Response:
Alexis' time to rule over Jesse is coming in the next chapter, and he is slowly shrinking even smaller over time. Maybe he does get tossed in her or another girls shoe, anything can happen at that size. Who's shoe remains open for discussion.
As for shrinking for any of the girls, since a few people have asked already, I'll consider it. Maybe one of them gets curious in in being that size? Maybe Sam or Tabatha want to find him or perhaps one of the new girls find an extra bottle. I'll have to think about it.
Anyways, thanks for the review!
Date: October 09 2020 8:40 PM Title: Shrunk!
hello I am always attentive to your stories good progress, if I would like to see a little girl in your story
Date: September 05 2020 10:52 PM Title: Shrunk!
good story, I would like more interaction with soles and toes will you see F / f?
Author's Response:
The first part I can do without a shadow of a doubt. I do have plans to introduce Jesse's girlfriend Tabatha and few other new girls who would be more than happy to toy with him at his size, with their toes, soles, shoes and even an interaction I'm looking forward to writing if I can do it right. As for F/f, that might not be out of the question and something I can try to fit in the story. Anyways, thanks for the review!