Although fatal vore is not my thing, I have to say, this has to be one of the best - if not the best - vore story I have ever read! The thing average vore stories lack most of the time is the realistic/authentic approach at describing what's going on inside the stomach. Most people describe an empty, dry, somewhat pleasant place, while for me, it's expecially the dirty, stale, tight, dark, wet part that excites me. It is a place of horror and fight for life for the tiny, or at least, in my fantasy, a place of inconvenience and anxiety - it has to be a contrast to the wonderful beloved lady the stomach belongs to. And secondly, it's a place of humiliation and domination, getting covered in the chewed up remains of the woman's food. And I think you executed it wonderfully in this story! The description of food and digestion, the description of smells, tastes, heat - just perfect. This is what I see as true vore content. It's not for many people, it's definitely a niche, but I have grown to be quite intrigued by the idea. And as I said, although I am not too fond of fatal vore, I still aprreciate in how much detail you've written the final part!