Date: February 06 2021 4:17 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love how she handled him in the newest chapter....forcinh him to smell her foot sweat will certainly start to make him realize she is in control :)
Author's Response:
glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Date: January 27 2021 7:18 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
Yes yes I agree with last review....I'm in love with Veronica, tall busty, and Asian mix I think u said...my dream except I imagine her 18 lol....love to see her explore her power, explore burgeoning sexuality, curiousity to what an adult male might look like naked ..... funny to have his daughter realize her dad can't help reacting as even though he is a dad he is a man...be it so small..could the girls all have their own sex Ed class at her house under the daughters rules lol ..such an amzing story. Thanks again !
Author's Response:
the girls having a sex ed class is kinda interesting lol, but i dont think itll happen for this version, ive already mapped everything out and theres way too much stuff for the last day its gonna be like 5 or 6 parts lol. but yeah ideas ideas glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2021 9:19 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
Be fun to see Veronica overpower him..... not necessarily sexual...just to show she has poer over him. Maybe holding him down until he concedes or kisses her feet or some other humiliation.
Author's Response:
yeah, ive got something like that planned in an upcoming chapter :) thanks for the review!
Date: January 22 2021 3:30 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
I still love it...I'm not into feet I'm really into boobs esp from his view...his little hands trying to hold them...her curious n using his body as a learning tool etc but hey it's ur story n I do enjoy it
Author's Response:
ah well this story isnt the best for boob lovers, that one is definitely Brother. some good teasing last chapter and more being-stuck-in-her-clothes coming in a couple more!
Date: January 22 2021 2:06 PM Title: Day 17: Tricks
I love it but I really did want something to happen esp with her tall Asian mix with big tits oh man I want some breast action for Marcus....thought she be curious n use him as a training toy ...learn abt men's penis...test out her breast power over men etc etc but it's still great...thanks
Author's Response:
yeahhhhh i get that people would be disappointed but thats ok :P some pretty good foot stuff comin in next chapter or two for those who like that
[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 3:59 AM Title: Day 17: Tricks
What an interesting turn of events. I think this adds an interesting dynamic and relationship between Veronica and Marcus. Im.curious to see how it goes the next time Veroncis visits their house. I know you already used my idea once but if there was ever a character who would enjoy "innocently" teasing Marcus it would be Veronica. Maybe she shows off her thong and butt to him in some "innocent" way, maybe shes why Jessie even wanted a pair in the first place? Let me know what you think :D
Author's Response:
yeah thats pretty close to what i have planned haha, only a few more (story) days away!
Date: January 11 2021 8:00 PM Title: Day 17: Treats
Ok plz plz tell me u have written like 10 chapters and are gonna role them out every other day or so and ur holding back to drive us crazy 😝
it's been much to long
Author's Response:
sry i only have 1 chapter done! i'll post it soon but i dont get that many views if i post it late at night or in morning or afternoon and i keep forgetting to post when i normally post stuff ahhhh sorry
Date: December 22 2020 7:42 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Continues to be awesome....would love to see a total transfer of power....perhaps more size reduction, foot worship, or other servitude to her. Great job so far, can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
thank you for the kind words! my other story generally has more foot worship stuff atm but there will be some upcoming in a few chapters, and he's always getting a little more more servitude-y to her every day ;)
Date: December 22 2020 6:33 PM Title: Day 17: Treats
Loved how he was being treated like a child, and you set up a perfect cliffhanger at the end.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thanks! my favorite ending so far
Date: December 22 2020 3:39 AM Title: Day 17: Treats
Just love it ...wow she is really becoming the one with the power....cant get enuf of this story . Love her looming over him hands on hips...we need a rendering of that !!!!! Please keep it coming n thank u !
Author's Response:
yeah i loved the ending to this chapter >:) just had a super great idea for it all of a sudden to make the plot more interesting so hopefully it pans out well. and i'd love a rendering or drawing of it too!
Date: December 20 2020 3:40 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
So happy that you are continuing to update this regualrly! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping he may shrink more, or be subjected to her feet, since he seems to NOT want that :)
Author's Response:
im happy that im updating it regularly too :)
Date: December 16 2020 3:57 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
I was only teasing about writing more often. Just my way of saying I love the story
Author's Response:
no i know haha its fine
Date: December 16 2020 5:10 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Great chapter, I would loved to have seen her catch him in the laundry basket and I hope that is some foreshadowing lol. Would have missed that great conversation at the table though if he was still stuck in the basket. Can't wait to see how the night goes.
Author's Response:
glad you liked it!
Date: December 15 2020 8:43 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
I like seeing how she's so casual about her more mature clothes and how she dismisses her dad's concerns
Author's Response:
me too! thanks for the review
Date: December 15 2020 7:12 PM Title: Day 16: Thong
Oh the laundry basket was fantastic. Well done...thong mmmm...her starting to simply explain things and he has no response for..she is becoming the adult....just love this story....come on u r almost on Christmas break delight us with a chapter every other day please lol. Thanks ! I'm so excited when I see a new chapter !
Author's Response:
im already uploading twice a week when i used to do just once a week! but im glad ur excited
[Report This]Date: December 15 2020 5:41 AM Title: Day 16: Thong
Hey glad my idea helped out with this chapter. I liked how embarrased he was about it and yet how nonchalant she was about the whole thing. Their relationship is really well written. Him commenting on how hes lucky he isnt smaller when he fell in, I wonder if that might play a part in a future version Haha. He thinks hes okay with his daughter wearing them.now until he accidentally walks into a room.and sees her only wearing one from behind. Hes Gemma have to quickly hide and think about what he just saw and if he should say something to her.
Author's Response:
will definitely play a part in upcoming chapter, thanks for the review!
Date: December 11 2020 2:57 PM Title: Day 15: Teasing with Twister
Absolutely fantastic !!!!!!! Twister idea was great loved the butt n finally some more boobs hehehe. Still wish dad would get caught with a stiffy. More boobs plz......
ok so everyone loves loves loves this story so I think you have a duty now to update it every other day ! Hehehe. Thanks for the work !
Author's Response:
i dont have that much time! but boob stuffs comin in like 2 chapters maybe 3
Date: December 10 2020 3:25 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Definitely my favorite chapter so far. Loved twister. Would not be disappointed to see a rematch hahaha. Last couple foot massages had her with socks on, would personally like to see this with the socks off, maybe because Jessie complains she can't feel it as much with socks. Love the description of the shorts my absolutely favorite, Im always buying my wife cheeky shorts sexier than a thong to me any day of the week.
Author's Response:
yeah her socks are comin off eventually lol dw, also got one of your suggestions coming in next chapter
Date: December 10 2020 9:50 AM Title: Day 15: Teasing with Twister
Loved how Jess keeps "accidentally" dominating her father with games or falling asleep and smushing him.
And this is the most well researched story I've seen on twister ever haha
Author's Response:
i'd like to think all the super specific scenarios are what make it interesting! stuff i at least havent read before, thats what i like to read in others' work :)
Date: December 07 2020 12:11 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Hahaha, I guess what I mean by action is more physical content between them. When she hugged him and lifted him off the ground, I think that was the first time. Would love to see a bit more of that kind of stuff is all. Lol
Author's Response:
oh yeah dw its definitely coming