Date: April 24 2021 5:54 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Amazing! Best chapter yet......having him submitt (almost totally) to their feet,and be treated and labeled as a pet.....great stuff.....Can't wait to see that progression!
Oh and as far as I am concerned, you can't overdo the foot stuff....
Well done, as always!
Author's Response:
i know there are loyal foot fans but i also wanna make sure i do stuff for other people too :P but yeah dont worry i know the foot fandom here is big so i usually have lots of that to go around for u guys haha. thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2021 9:53 PM Title: Day 23: Presentation
Day 23 has been incredible so far (including the dream/ nightmare too). Those feet scenarios are getting better with every read :) I wonder if he will get more intimate with Veronica's clean feet *fingers crossed*. Your writing is excellent! Can't wait to read what else the girls have in store for him.
Author's Response:
there's some foot stuff coming up in a couple chapters but it'll be with paris and jessie, i just didnt wanna go overboard with foot stuff and given the context and personalities of the characters its just a lot easier and makes more sense to write like future butt stuff with veronica for example. but maybe in version 2!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2021 6:50 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
LOVED every single word of this! Specially the ending, when she said that was her pet. It was not forced, felt really nice! Congrats!
Also cant wait for version 2! Are you still planning on that? Reaaaaally wanted to see him smaller, and maybe that scene where she gives him a massage that we talked about.
10/10 as always
Author's Response:
yep, still planning that! i liked the ending too, these last 3 chapters i think have had pretty great endings but this whole final day in particular is just the culmination of everything worked up between the two of them for so many months of writing so im glad its coming together well
Date: April 17 2021 3:51 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I LOVE how she got him to serve her feet in front of her friends, the fact that he had to smell them and rub them. He may start to associate doing this with pleasing her, and find it satisfies him to be literally at her feet when she demends it.
All in all, he is sllowly falling into submission.... love it :)
Author's Response:
glad you liked it :)
Date: April 16 2021 1:59 PM Title: Day 23: Initiation
Plz plz tell me we r gonna have some breasts fun with Veronica and finally Marcus gets caught with a little erection plz
Author's Response:
lol im sorry i just dont like writing about guys getting boners and stuff but yes there will be boob stuff coming up. u can imagine him doing that if u want tho
Date: April 09 2021 3:45 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
I seriously didn't think it was the ending, I mean why would you end it on a dream? lol.... its just his fears of how he may end up.
Will he serve he more and more, increasingly? Will he shrink even more? Become more dependant on her? Will he need to be at her mercy? Living to please her and her feet as he becomes smaller possibly, or more under her spell?
We will find out!
Always looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you're enjoying!
Date: April 09 2021 6:48 AM Title: Night
You have somehow made one of the most depressing endings (?) I've seen for a story on this site holy shit. For all intents and purposes, he's really a toy. The kids even laugh at the concept he isn't and doesn't even ask him for permission. They never even really address him. Just eeriely dark due to the subtlety and that's why it's so fucked up.
Author's Response:
LMAO wait omg i literally laughed out loud when i read this im so sorry, that wasnt supposed to be the ending holy shit im practically wheezing here at 1 in the morning shkshkss. this was just a dream he had and theres still a few chapters left, i PROMISE the ending is very amicable and its a happy ending omg again im sorry i feel so bad now lmao
Author's Response:
lol i just remembered that youtube video where someone edited toy story 3 to cut to the credits right after all the toys slide down the trash compactor, and the guy's family freaked out cuz they were like wtf how is that the ending LOL yeah thats what this review reminded me of
Date: April 02 2021 1:17 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love this chapter, she is getting a little more demanding, insisting that he tell her all he heard the boys say about her.
He is clearly becoming more attached to her feet, the instrument she may use to further subjucate him perhaps?? She seems to sense this.
Well done :)
Author's Response:
thank you! and thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 10:55 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Loved the last chapter!! Since she is already washed up and clean, maybe she would return the favor from her dad and massage him just like he did to her? This includes some massage with her feet of course 🙃🙃. It would be nice to see her doing this, speacially because he conforted her too. He seens to like her smell now that she took a shower. So maybe is in character to him liking the Idea.
Another suggestion that I have is, if this happens, it would be really cool to see him enjoing a little bit. He's always so tense and all, maybe this massage would make him open up a bit more, just like Jessie REALLY opened up when he was doing her massage
Just an suggestion anyway! 😊 thanks again for this amazing work
Author's Response:
her massaging him is a good idea! i think someone suggested that at one point but idk why i never went thru with it. theres not really enough time for me to add it to this version tho since there's only one "day" left and its halfway written and fully mapped out, but i can add it for v2!
thanks for the review :)
Date: March 13 2021 2:52 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Another awesome chapter! Love how she is subjucating him to her feet, and then using them to slowly take him over. Seems he is aquiring a taste for her feet as well while he falls more and more under their spell, and hers. Her emerging dominance is subtle, but progressing nicely. Well done!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, glad you liked it :)
Date: March 12 2021 3:08 AM Title: Day 20: Toes and a Nose
This:
" Reese could tell she was feeling especially vulnerable opening up to him like this. He obviously couldn’t have foreseen this as being a side effect of his shrinking."
You mean:
Marcus could tell she was feeling especially vulnerable opening up to him like this. He obviously couldn’t have foreseen this as being a side effect of his shrinking.
Author's Response:
oh woops! lol i accidentally make those mistakes all the time but normally catch myself, my bad. thanks for letting me know!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2021 7:24 AM Title: Day 19: Day at the Mall
Wow he cooked her food and then took her shopping after his humiliating defeet! She practically owns him now. Got a feeling she will remind him of his place under her soles again :) Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
he's definitely getting pretty submissive towards her, there will be a few more foot interactions in the last few days of the story but v2 will definitely have a LOT more for sure
[Report This]Date: March 04 2021 10:17 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Simply loved the last chapter. So caring, so sweet and intimate. Can't wait to see the version of this scene when he's smaller tho ^^
But yeah, your writting is really good, specially for the pace you take to do another chapter. And the fact you take your readers considerations and wishes is just sweet.
And like someone already said here, I would Love to see a "How to Train Your Son" story. Unfortunally there is a lack of intimate and gentle ish stories like you write between family members on this community. If you ever gonna do a how to train your son, there is an SUPERB story here called "Origins of a foot fetish". I may have said on another comment. Sadly it is unfinished, but could be an really cool inspiration since it is really similar to your content here.
Well, thats it. 10/10 as Always!
Author's Response:
ive thought about it but i also wanna branch out a lil bit more. other stories aside from this series and format and other subjects besides a family member. so yeah i have an idea for one but i cant say i'd be getting to it anytime soon. but thanks you for all the kind words :)
Date: March 03 2021 3:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Love the lastest chapter...... I love how she is starting to seemingly take care of him more and steer him to do things to satisfy her needs. I also love that he is still obsessed with remembering his time at her feet, she certainly knew how to use them to subjucate him, and I think he may be starting to like it. Thanks again for sharing!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: March 02 2021 11:34 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
So, I finally got caught up with this one. You write at an incredible rate for the quality shown.
Wasn't expecting to love this story as much as I do. Daughter/dad dynamic isn't one seen too often but you pull it off very well!
All the foot content so far has been golden, with the sock smelling and the wrestling being a real highlight for sure.
Also, I was wondering, will we see Jessie getting tickling revenge on her dad at any point? He's tickled her a few times and she's shown remarkable restraint in not getting payback haha. He'd be unable to stop her at his size, and she could tickle him until he's willing to do just about anything. ;)
Excited to read more, honestly curious to see how this one is going to end. I'll be keeping an eye out for the Roommate installment of this serious for sure, and I hope to see a 'How to Train your Son' one day!
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you liked it! yeah it helps that i havent been like super busy this past year so ive been able to write pretty regularly.
tickling isnt something i think i even thought of lol. i dont even remember him tickling her but if you say i did then i guess i did shkshshksh but yeah i pretty much already have everything written except for the last day so maybe i'll squeeze it into those chapters but if not i've written it down to add for version 2!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2021 8:37 AM Title: Day 19: Pinned
I think this might be my fav chapter. Loving how she dominates with her bare feet :) this story is great can't wait to see whats next!
Author's Response:
thank you!
Date: February 23 2021 2:41 PM Title: Day 19: Pinned
Love this..... I have been hoping for her to finally put him in his place. No better way to subjucate a person than keeping them under foot :) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks, glad you enjoyed :)
[Report This]Date: February 23 2021 2:23 AM Title: Day 19: Pinned
Lucky guy..er well yeah
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2021 1:24 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Wow, that is really Nice of you. Can't wait to see this next story then! Hope the daughter has more or less the same personality and relation with her dad as this version tho. But that is great news, thanks in advance! Looking forward to see the conclusion for this one too. Your stories are one of the best on this site imo.
Cheers
Author's Response:
thank you so much for the kind words! and yes she will be mostly the same... a bit more daring and mischievous i guess but i definitely want her to keep her like giddy joyful attitude about things and ultimately want the best for her dad. she might have some small "outbursts" but she'll never be fully cruel
[Report This]Date: February 12 2021 11:37 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Been away for a while but oh boy, what a Nice surprise to see these wonderful new chapters!
And if I may ask/sugest, it would be really nice if he continues to slowly shrink. It would be a great parallel with him becoming more and more submisse to his daughter. The smaller he gets, the more he gets to obey his daughter and try to please her. Specially if they fight again, would love to see this again when he is smaller!
If this is kind of the path you're going, one cool scene I think is to make the dad do his daughters nails. Imagine him at the size of her feet doing this for her! yummi! And would add to the submission part too!
With my wishfull thinking out of the way, I really loved the dream sequence where Jessie is a giant angel/goddess. Usually I don't like DS very much, but this one was on point for me! Really well done!
Great writting as always friend! Anxious to see next chapters : )
Author's Response:
ive got the story mapped out for a good while ahead so unfortunately there wont be any active shrinking, but this version of the story is almost up and then i'll be starting up the second, where he'll be a little under a foot tall. so people will get their different size preferences, itll just be differently than normal. but thanks for reading and the review! :)