Date: August 05 2021 3:09 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
ok understood........ he is still certainly small enuff to be underfoot :) and subserviant...... love seeing the porcess :)
- Bree
Author's Response:
yep! and he will be underfoot in a few more chapters. like i said this verison's a lot quicker than the other one cuz it also will have a lot more
Date: August 04 2021 4:51 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
I see we are still on a buildup to his submission to her...... and possibly shrinking more? Glad you are pursuing this story line :)
Author's Response:
sorry lol he wont be shrinking any more in this version but there's still plenty of fun stuff ahead!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2021 12:25 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
Ohhhh can't believe its already being written! What a Nice surprise! You're on fire! I thought it would be an hiatus between those versions, and you're even talking about a third! So excited! Really liked the start, can't wait to things to get more interesting and see Jessies more maternal side kick in ^^
Author's Response:
yeah its off to a good start, thanks for the review!
Date: July 17 2021 8:57 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
I know this is the preliminary nbuild-up.....can't wait for the fun to begin :)
Author's Response:
next chapter's pretty exciting!
Date: July 08 2021 1:57 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus, Version 2!
My fave is 6 inches to 2ft so this is perfect...u know I love tits from lil guys pov....hope her friends r a little more promiscuous this time around....one of them must wanna see a mans naked lil body lol.
Great work
Author's Response:
i think the Brother story is a little better for boob stuff but im glad you're still reading! there IS stuff later on but not a ton (neither of them get naked not really my thing tbh) but yeah thanks for the review :)
Date: June 30 2021 10:19 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
For simplicity sake, jessajess your are my favorite author on this page. This story was so much fun, and I'm so glad your doing the same layout you did with httyb.
Please don't leave us hanging, keep writing!
Author's Response:
thank you very much for the kind words! im glad you've liked my work :)
Date: June 29 2021 3:23 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
Ok, I like this as a buildup chapter....makes me wonder whats going to happen next...SO glad you are continuing!
Author's Response:
im glad too! the story's been a lotta fun :)
Date: June 29 2021 2:16 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
So version 2 is gonna be more r rated ?
Author's Response:
yeah basically it's not gonna be x-rated like some of my other stories and their commissions where there's explicit sex scenes and stuff, but it's gonna have more action than version 1
[Report This]Date: June 21 2021 8:52 AM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Yeah you know, I think even tho this is a kinky story on a kinky site there is Always space for support and confort. Covid is there claiming countless lives, many social and economic issues... so its nice to have such a cozy and inviting story, even if it is fetish related. I even think it adds to the overall enjoiment lol. Hopefully it wasn't too weird what I said kkkkkkkk. But as always very nice work 💚
Author's Response:
no i totally get what you mean, i always like the chapters i write sometimes that make me smile and i know some people need something to help them "get away"
[Report This]Date: June 19 2021 7:07 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
What an adventure this has been. I'm glad I found this story so early and could follow it through as you write. This final chapter was really lovely! Can't believe its finished (for now). BUT Im even more excited for the version 2!! Thanks for this great reading, specially on these dificult times we're living!
Author's Response:
lol weirdly heartwarming at the end there but you're welcome!
Date: June 19 2021 12:50 PM Title: Day 23: Infatuation
Another awesome chapter...... We are hoping for a sequel :)
Author's Response:
yep, its coming :)
[Report This]Date: June 18 2021 4:28 AM Title: Day 23: Infatuation
Incredible story! Wasn't expecting it to end right there. Was hoping that Veronica needed a teddy bear to fall asleep with. Really looking forward to any future chapters
Author's Response:
i mean maybe a little rushed im obviously far from the best writer but i tried to tie up loose ends and make the ending nice and peaceful :) but yes there will be a version 2
[Report This]Date: June 12 2021 3:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
And the king/queen returns! And the last chapter was... intense! What a blast! I particulary love when you give little hints (at least I think they are) forshadowing Marcus further shrink on version 2, like when Jessie says shes not an giant next to him, or on another one when she says he was not THAT small to tackle her, etc. Not sure if it is on purpose but I Love it and caaaaan't wait for him to get smaller next to her!
Now for this chap, intense like I said. Though liking her feet was something we see on almost every story, for me that felt more fullfiling because we had a build up for it. Marcus from chapter one would never do this IMO, but accomponyng this story since the begining, it felt pretty natural. Also would like to say that generally I don't like multiple giantesses on these stories. BUT Jessies friends all have such distinct personalites and interactions with Marcus and with each other and for once I enjoyed a story like this with other giantesses. Your character development is top notch. And I'm a big fan since the first chapter. Can't wait to see how this version of the story ends S2
Author's Response:
thank you for the very thorough review. yeah that kind of foreshadowy type of writing is definitely intentional. and i know what you mean about multiple giants sometimes blending in so yeah making sure they had distinct personalities was definitely important for me, and hopefully i'll be able to build on the personalities of some of the side characters like harper and camila next version.
Date: June 09 2021 7:46 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
"its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too"
We are dying to read it already! The anticipation between chapters kills us! :)
Author's Response:
glad you're excited! you might be the story's biggest fan lol
Date: June 09 2021 2:36 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
"well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!"
Is version 2 an alternate story line, or a continuation? We are totally sucked into this story, and several others from you. Thank you for sharing
Author's Response:
its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too
Date: June 09 2021 1:11 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
As you promised! Another amazing chapter..... Hate even thinking the story is almost over! Love to see how it plays out now that she has photos of him kissing, licking and sucking their toes!
Author's Response:
well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!
Date: June 06 2021 9:03 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha
OMG we can't wait!
Author's Response:
soon!
Date: June 05 2021 12:51 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
PLEASE update this soon! Suspense is killing us! :)
Author's Response:
i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha
Date: May 17 2021 3:15 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Seems like she is manipulating him more and more towards total submission to her, her feet, and that of her friends. Still loving it...can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: April 25 2021 2:55 PM Title: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus
Also.... meant to add....LOVE how she held his mouth shut and told him to listen!
and yes I do understand you are catering to differnt tastes..... not a problem, we love the foot stuff..... but no wrroes, you are doing great.....
Author's Response:
i loved that bit too! subtle lil display of power