Date: July 30 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice. I love full tour. Though I would also enjoy alternate chapters like your vore chapter 1 alternate end you posted. Specifically four. 1)where Sonoko swallowed sumi when she entered her mouth in the capsule. 2) when Sonoko was smaller then a villi that they or at least she gets absorbed into the bloodstream for more time in the body. And 3) when Sumi got stuck in Gins butt wrinkle, that she never found her way out, and her and Sonoko ended there permanently. And 4) Sonoko and Sumi get stuck in poop, and end up in a toilet that is flushed by accident. Also, I know they just got out of Gin's body, but is it bad that I hope that She ends up accidentally swallowing them again in a future chapter. For some reason my favorite part of this story is inside Gin's body. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2020 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story ! I love it !
[Report This]Date: November 12 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't often see stories that hint at full tour and the embarrassment it would cause the pred. Really like the setup so far, can't wait to see the conclusion!
Author's Response:
I'm all for various types of vore, but combine a not quite willing pred with it and it makes for a situation almost as embarrassing for the pred as the prey. Seen it rarely, but the trip and exiting is usually glossed over and I hope to avoid that. They won't have the easiest time escaping Gin's large ass, that's for sure though. Hope it'll satisfy when I get to it.
Date: October 13 2020 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing multi-size story. I'm not familiar with the source material, but that's absolutely not a barrier to enjoying this. The details are incredible, and the differences in scale really emphasize the hammer's power. The idea of being so small you're not even sure where you are is one of my favorites, and it's used to great effect here. Excited to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying! Properly emphasizing a scale difference and the sheer power disparity is part of the appeal for size stories. I try to ensure my stories can be enjoyed even without knowing the source material, so good to hear I succeeded. Look forward to more, it won't be the last time such an extreme scale is used.
Date: July 31 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start! Multiscale has always been a favorite of mine, and not a lot of stories pull it off this well. Looking forward to seeing more.
Author's Response:
Glad it's impressing! Multi-size is really a fun thing to play around with but certainly not fully taken advantage of often. Might be a while till I can get out the next part, though. But, I'll make sure it doesn't disappoint.