[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 1:30 AM Title: 1
I remember reading this when it first came out and I loved it. Recently went through it again and fuck man it is so good.
Super well written and the dynamic between Koji and Rachel is top tier as far as gentle femdom goes and both characters are just really fun in terms of their personality. It's inspired me out of a bit of a rut so I appreciate it.
I know this came out a couple of years ago now, but it's so good I just had to drop a review upon my reread. Thanks for writing it!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2021 1:44 PM Title: 11
These were ****ing fantastic! Wish the story would continue but all great things must come to an end.
[Report This]Date: July 21 2020 11:45 AM Title: 1
Tremendously enjoyable read! In particular, I loved how the harrowing lucky socks part of the story called back to Koji's earlier close call. Rachel's inability to hear him shout the safe word was a powerful moment.
Shameless plug for myself, but I think you'll enjoy my story "Sushi in America." Has a lot of the same themes as yours. Not something I would normally bring up, but I feel like these types of stories are few and far between so thought I would alert you to it. Also FYI it's woefully unfinished... but you've inspired me!... so hopefully I can rush out a final chapter this weekend or something.
Thank you for the great read and hoping for more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you picked up on all the foreshadowing I peppered in.
No worries about plugging, I'll def check out your story when I've got some time. I'm excited to hear that I may have inspired some work on your part, that's a great thing for a creator to hear.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2020 5:30 PM Title: 1
Based on the description, I was expecting a shrink, kidnap, humiliate story (like oh so many others out there), but instead I got a well written gentle femdom story with likeable and believable characters. Well done!
Author's Response:
Ahaaa! You've fallen into my clever trap! No, seriously though, thanks for the thoughtful response. I'm also really glad you thought Koji was likeable, I was worried he'd come off as too whiny or something.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2020 4:08 PM Title: 3
I've only read up to chapter 3 so far, but this story is going really well. You've really done an awesome job with the interactions between Rachel and Koji. And I liked how you saved the actual size stuff until this chapter, because it really allowed the reader to slowly immerse themselves.
Looking forward to reading more when I can!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'd love to hear your thoughts once you've finished :)
Date: July 15 2020 11:10 AM Title: 11
Love this story. Not a lot of softball fics on this account. Which I find surprising since the sport is rising in popularity. It's a shame that you don't have many reviews. Loved it. I also have you added on Art. And you seem to have more reviews there. I think a lot of writers are moving there because of the site being broken all the time.
Author's Response:
Yeah, this site def has its problems, but I give asukafan a lot of credit for keeping it running (as far as I can tell) on his own with the amount of traffic it must get. In either case, thank you for the response. Softball is super cool, I'm glad its getting more popular, and I'm glad you could appreciate that aspect of the story. I imagine a lot of people probably just skimmed past the sports heavy parts, hahaha.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2020 4:03 AM Title: 1
I gotta hand it to you, Rachel feels very fleshed out and believable. Not all the content in this story is for me - In fact a lot of it isn't, but there's a good sense of flow and pacing and the key dynamic between the two is very good. Which is the most important thing.
Author's Response:
Aster McMaster, you are such a sweetheart. Thank you for the thoughtful response. I'm glad you could enjoy the story despite some of the fet content not being your thing. Hopefully the next one will have more stuff you're into.
Date: July 15 2020 4:03 AM Title: 1
Love the story, really wish you could do an alternate version focused more on her keeping him in her butt rather than feet. Just personally not a fan of feet but great story regardless.
Author's Response:
Prob not gonna do that with this, but I wouldn't mind writing a more butt focused story in the future.