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Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is interesting.   I don't know about the world lore thoough.  Women in the main story seem to be treating men pritty well dispite a few exceptions.  Plus in America (where I live) women out number men by quite a bit.  If it rare for men to recieve proper care by loved one and dozens of men are killed by a few women then your world is going to have a man shortage and that can affect the human race.   This is your story and it is a good one, but I would recomd putting some value to men's lives because realistically women still need men for some things.  But I am a nit picker for stories and series I really love.  Feel free to ignore this if you see fit.  Just trying to have a discussion.  Hope you find this interesting and not demanding. Like I said love your stories please make more you are doing really well.  The only problem you seem to have is invsoning what the characters look like.  I don't know how to visualize Allison in your main series for example.



Author's Response:

I should have clarified better in the intro. This isn't the same world as my other story. I got a request to write something like this, and I didn't think it would fit well in my established world so I made this one from scratch. On a side note, I did just start a second story in the itty bitty epidemic world, I hope to have the first chapter out this week. 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2020 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm... this is interesting. I prefer this style more than others that Breast Enlargement ( Sorry it's not really my taste). It feels like I want to explore more of this world. Like how are all shrunken men are living now while being a prey for some women. Or how would they now reproduce.

 

Anyway, I really love the cruelty of the giantesses here. They just really kill for LOLz. It's really my kind of gts.

 

I enjoyed it very much but was too short

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