Date: June 29 2020 5:20 AM Title: Chocolates
Yeah, I was in a big of a hurry yesterday and didn't explore all your site very well, but now I'm seeing it. I did read your recommended stories and liked most of them! Soon I'll enjoy reading your friend's stories too.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chocolates
Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh thanks Google I did find this text!!!
I always had this dream of swallowing people whole and alive and I spent my entire life up to now thinking that I had a mental problem, to the point of having already thought about seeing a psychiatrist (but I didn't, as I was too ashamed to confess my strange desires to someone else). Now I found this story that is the fulfillment of my wishes!!!
I absolutely NEVER did imagine that there are people with desires like mine and, just NOW, reading your story, I understand that there are!! Your story is excellent, by the way! How I wish I could do that in real life, but at least I already found out that I'm not alone here!!! Thank you for such an important story for me! Today, Jun 28 20, I discovered that I am not alone and I can stop thinking that I am crazy!
Again, thank you very much!
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I'm glad my story could help you feel less alone!
Want to know something really wild, though? I have a bunch of other stories here, and so do other authors. If you're interested in reading more by me, I suggest Dinner Delight, Small Side-Effect, Library Lunch, Bully for You, Snack Time with Li, and Fulda's Appetite, all of which have someone getting swallowed whole in first-person perspective.
Date: June 14 2020 10:21 AM Title: Chocolates
I love the concept but I was honestly a little dissapointed that it didn't end with chewing. I was excited as it was teased with each chocolate, knowing what would be done because it's what was done to each chocolate. Who swallows the center whole? It was unrealistic and disruptive to the immersion.
Author's Response:
I don't like writing gore, and Zoe tasting blood would have made her immediately aware she had eaten a person. This way it's more of a dark comedy with a farcical misunderstanding, rather than ending with two women screaming about a tiny, half-chewed man she had just spit out.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2020 1:35 PM Title: Chocolates
Omg didn't that story light a huge fire in my fantasy? Oh and in my reality I have to admit.
Thank you for writing my story.
That is to say... I started about 10 years ago... to wright the story behind exactly how my crazy secret desire of having the chance of a lifetime. To be granted my wish of trading my humanity for a day. Such to experience life in heaven.
My salvation and nirvana finally realised. When its my turn... to be placed helplessly captive inside a body of the best chocolate coating that would please any girl's craving for something sweet and yummy.
Feeling myself being relentlessly discovered by her loving buds of taste. As wave after wave of her salivating pleasure... melt away my protection demanding more flavour from my totally unconditional surrender to her body on her terms.
As I am ruthlessly swept away in waves of orgasmic bliss.
Do you suppose that Zoe could be interested in the idea of accommodating my suggestion?
I'll make it worth her wile for the rest of her life guaranteed.
Beginning with an all expenses paid holiday in Australia... with unlimited spending money to spend on what ever she desires at any given moment.
I didn't really feel a connection with Vera at all.
The twist in your story was a hammer right on the desire! Reminding one to never be unclear about every aspect of one's wish before submitting one's request. Lol
Well written and thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I didn't know this would line up exactly with someone's top fantasy, but hey, I guess you got lucky with this one :P
Personally, I think it being unaware adds to the appeal. If Zoe knew there was a man inside, I don't think she would've eaten it. That takes it from an accident towards her being a monster.
That is the overriding theme of this series of stories: let your partner know before shrinking! It'll help avoid a lot of difficulty later.
Keep reading my stories! You might find something else that resonates.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chocolates
I'm usually not one for unaware concepts. I feel like the interaction is the point of a story. But there's still domination in this story and having another woman allows for more interaction. Short story but very fun.
Author's Response:
Well then, thanks for taking a chance and I'm glad you liked it!