Yes, it’s been a long and bumpy ride, but we finally made to the end. I’m glad you like this new ending: not exactly what I had in mind initially, but a fitting ending nonetheless....if I do say so myself.

Yes, on the whole, I DO think this ending feels like a better fit; I just hope that my readers don’t give me the third degree on how similar it is to the ending of my last novel.

As far as Babysitter Trouble goes, I think the alternate ending is going to be the last alternate chapter I’m going to do for it, but don’t worry, there’ll still be lots of good stuff for everyone.

I’ll certainly have to check out your discord server soon, but for now, thanks for reading!

Yes, sometimes we don’t exactly revisit our old stories as much as we should. Usually, it’s just: “Ah, I’m finally done with this story; now, on to the next.” I usually try to revisit my stories page whenever I visit this site to see the read count and if anyone’s posted a new review.

Obviously, there are some chapters in “Exerpts from John’s Life” that I liked better than others, and a few things I wished you’d expanded upon, but overall, one of my many favorites on this site. Besides, I usually just read the chapters that I like in my favorites and leave it at that.

Thanks for sharing your work, and for getting in touch.

     So, my biggest stumbling block with this story is that the ending of this story is different from what I had initially outlined. In retrospect, I agree the story needed to have a far different ending, and had I known that, I would’ve taken the time to truly plan out the story better. I do have a new ending planned and thought out, but I needed certain plot points to happen in order to get there.

     As far as Cassie’s character is concerned, I hadn’t initially planned on her character turning out the way it did: she’s starting to turn into another version of Shannon, from “Babysitter Trouble”, and that’s really not how I envisioned her.

     Initially, I wanted to portray Cassie as a somewhat good person overall, but that we discover throughout the story that her marriage to Nick is based on what’s known as “conditional love”: Basically, she loves Nick when things between them and their overall lives are good, but when things get bad or tough, she tends to show disrespect and disdain for him. What I was trying to show, in this latest chapter, is how manipulative and devious she can be, revealing that she was just using Nick for sex before she disposes of him; I also wanted to provide a little bit of fan service as well, but I think the problem was I made her character act a bit too sweet and believable, so that’s my fault.

     In this new direction I was taking the ending, I was trying to portray her as someone who was normal at first, but driven to madness with the evolution of Nick’s powers. Obviously, worrying that every step she takes in her own apartment could squash her tiny husband is certainly a frightening experience and takes an unthinkable emotional toll, and it was only a matter of time before she snapped.

     As for Nick, I wanted him to be someone who is blinded by his love for Cassie, but more blinded by his sexual fantasies, and desperate to fulfill them. Despite everything she’s done to him, he still has feelings for her, and needed a wake-up call to come to his senses. You see a little of that in chapter 22 when Nick sheds his meekness and finally stands up to Cassie for the first time. But then Cassie reveals all the emotional struggles she’s going through, and Nick feels sorry for her and guilty about it and reverts back to his old, meek self.

     What I’m trying to set up now is an ending where every character gets an ending that they deserve—good or bad. All in all, I’ve obviously made some mistakes along the way, so it will probably be a while before I do a story like this again. I’m still going to write, but try my hand at different shrinking tropes. 

     Please forgive any mistakes I’ve made at the end of this story, but know that I do appreciate your honest reviews and constructive criticism. I do hope you enjoy the ending when it comes.

     Thanks for reading!

Well, as I said in an earlier review response, Nick does tend to be very gullible, but Cassie is also very persuasive, and knows she can use her body to get Nick to do whatever she wants him to.

Also, yes, my giant plus-sized woman tend to become rather domineering as my stories progress. I don’t necessarily mean for them to turn out that way, they just sorta evolve into it.

     Well, yes, that certainly is a lot to ask for, but I’ll certainly try to appease you where I can. I’m guessing, based on your reviews, you probably enjoyed the end of Chapter 9 and Chapter 10, when Cassie did her workout with Nick stuck in her ass.

     In all honesty, while I do like feet, I’m also an ass man. Some of my favorite fantasies involve crawling up a woman’s juicy, bare ass—aware and unaware—and bouncing up and down like I’m on a trampoline. I’ve definitely envisioned scenarios for my stories involving the main character crawling up a young woman’s ass, and jumping up and down, desperately vying for her attention. Then, he accidentally slips and falls into her crack and gets stuck in her asshole. I haven’t been able to explore this scenario too much in my current stories, but they’re definitely in my bag of tricks for future stories.

     If you’ve got some time, I invite you to check out one of my other stories, Babysitter Trouble. There’s a lot of ass encounters in it that I think you’ll enjoy. If you don’t want to read the whole thing skip over to Chapters 24-25 for some things I think you’ll enjoy.

Well, at the very least, THIS time around, I’M REALLY scrutinizing my next chapter to make sure things make sense and as the events unfold, they head in a direction that feels appropriate. Obviously, this chapter was an appeasement to the erotica fans, but I also felt that it really sets up the end of the story (an ending I hope everyone likes).

Well, obviously I don’t want to spoil anything for you or the other readers, but Cassie’s butt is something that Nick loves to ogle when he’s normal sized....and loves to explore when he’s tiny. The next chapter, A Little Afternoon Delight, is going to follow Nick and Cassie through one last sexual escapade, so it’s certainly possible people will find something that they like.

Honestly, that’s a path I hadn’t really considered. Certainly some food for thought.

Yes, I think this makes for a good 2nd climax for the story. I’ve pretty much got the next chapter figured out and outlined; I just need to get it written now.