[Report This]Date: December 03 2020 3:10 AM Title: Her appetite isn’t for debate
I really like Maris as a giantess. I like the exploration of her as a cruel giantess, the scene with her playing with a boat was perfect, but also friendly to a few people. She has boundaries and won't compromise on what she is allowed to do. I also like the idea of some tiny characters starting to synpatheize with Maris and support her. It's a neat narrative that you have.
Also, props for having mermaids with multiple stomachs. That's a fun plot device, especially since you take the time to write internal scenes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I am glad you have liked it so far.
Date: July 08 2020 8:19 AM Title: Cat and mouse
Glad to see this story continued, especially after GW went down temporarily.
For a moment, I thought Anna was going to sprout ears and a tail with the way she was behaving. Looking forward to the next chapter to see what you have planned for these characters.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked how the story continued. Thanks for the review.
Date: May 15 2020 5:56 AM Title: Her secret?
Anna's secret sounds interesting. Since mermaids were transported to the human world from another universe thousands of years ago, and Anna's secret involves a monster she cannot control, I have to wonder if her secret has something to do with the mermaids or the same phenomenon that led to them appearing in this universe to begin with (i.e. a future antagonist the characters have to battle against).
I disagree with one of the previous reviewers about Grant being too small to interact with Maris. That may be true if Maris were a human with human biology. But she's a mermaid, so as the author, it's possible to elevate her to an S-tier giantess with superior vision and other features. Fantasy races with their own biology allowing for more creative situations and scenarios is one of the reasons I seek out these sorts of stories.
D-tier GTS: "Oops, where'd he go? He's too small, I cannot see him. 'Tis the cruel fate of being a D-tier GTS. Woe is me!"
S-tier GTS: "Not only can I SEE you, I can tell by the bulge in your pants, you're also happy to SEE me~♥"
[Report This]Date: May 11 2020 10:16 AM Title: Guam
The worst part about Grant being shrunk is he js way too small to interact with Maris now and i was hoping for more fun and bonding beteen the two kf them. I hope it won't take her long to track him and Anna down!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2020 9:51 AM Title: Guam
Oof he gets shrunk? And I definitely dont trust this annie.
And I hope he gets turned back to normal and him and Maris stay best friends and actually become a couple. Because grant does seem to be the only human she cares about. So no him begging to become food for her or something. Cute Couple! Please get him to grow back to normal.
Great story! Keep it up!
Date: May 08 2020 5:22 AM Title: A girl’s gotta eat
I like stories with fantasy races, so I read this one. Though the mention of 'vore' made me wonder if this is yet another story based within Karbo's fantasy world, but I'm pleased to find you have your own modern setting with some background as to why your giant mermaids are becoming voracious enough to consume humanoid creatures out of desperation. Hoping to read more set in this world~.
>>"His parent's TV was blaring with news report's of yet another mass shrinking from downstairs."
Is this a reference to a plot point that's going to be explained later, or a call-back to something else you've done or read? For whatever reason, the idea of Grant getting caught in a mass shrinking incidence and still mainintaing a relationship with Maris while the size of a literal shrimp that she needs to protect from the world (and herself?) is an amusing and erotic image I admittedly would like to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you seemed to enjoy reading this so far. As for wondering about that line from the story it's going to be expanded on with the 3rd chapter I just added.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2020 1:11 AM Title: Guam
This was really cute. :> Hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it so far and thanks for the review.