Date: February 18 2021 10:17 PM Title: Lyssa's Bargain
Hey! Glad to see you return to this story! I thought you abandoned it lol. I wanted to ask if you would be kind enough to provide a brief summary of what has previously happened in the story whenever you update it? Because when you began this story, you updated it on a daily basis so it was easy to read along and understand the plot. But your recent updates have been more spaced out like a few months so it's hard for readers to remember the general idea of where we left off unless we reread the whole story. It has been a while. I'm sure you are busy and that's completely fine, I'm not criticizing, I'm just curious if you could be interested in doing the summaries.
As for these chapters, I wasn't able to understand what's going on lol so there's only so much I can comment on regarding it but wow.. robyn has certainly let the power go to her head....
Date: December 16 2020 2:24 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
great few chapters!
Date: October 11 2020 12:09 PM Title: Cleo's Trial
Awesome series of chapters! really interesting dynamic you're creating with the daughters and it's great to see some of the old pantheon reuniting ^_^ Sarah and Cass were always my favs. So I take it Sarah has raised Hannah to be more compassionate towards mortals. Interesting to see how she'll get along with Cleo after a poor first impression.
Very interesting to see Cleo being chastised for her cruelty whilst Robyn now treats planets as stress balls. Curious to see where you'll take that. Seems like Sarah and Hannah want to rehabilitate Cleo somewhat but Robyn's enjoyment of destruction might hinder that.
Also I gotta say I love the whole concept of the Planet Nursery, Cass creating planets (would you call her a Planetsmith) for worshippers was one of my favourite concepts from your Pantheon series. Having that expand to something like factory production with workers judging and mundanely deleting prospective worlds is just awesome.
As always awesome work!
Date: October 05 2020 10:49 PM Title: Cleo's Lust
Woo! Awesome to see you continue this series! Can't wait to see where you go with that Sarah tease :D Also hope we get to see some of that tour Joyce will be giving Robyn, got my fingers crossed for some mega/giga action ^_^
either way great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Following this review I wrote a few chapters!
This site encoruages strange upload spacing to give people a chance to see it though, but I have written a few and will put them out over the next couple of days!
Your support gives me the motivation to write!
-JFT-
Date: September 18 2020 6:50 AM Title: Cleo's Lust
Wow, didn't think this story would come back from abandonment 😄. Sadly, it's been too long that I forgot what happened in the story 😭 so had a difficult time reading.
Author's Response:
I am not sure what you want me to say here, You want a summary chapter?
Date: September 17 2020 1:09 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
hey! did you abandon this story or are you just stumped? i was really enjoying it
Author's Response:
Well, this revived me! :)
I got busy and had totally forgotten.
This ones for you.
Date: May 31 2020 11:19 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
ya. i also find her reaction to the worship farm interesting. kinda wierd since she gets off at burning humans alive.
Author's Response:
I'll quote myself here,
"Cleo's perspective is still that of a superior being, She is viewing "casual abuse" as benevolent compared what she could(/should?) be doing to them. Or thats how im taking it."
She has never viewed them as much more than a resource.
Date: May 17 2020 7:45 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Awesome to see you writing again. Adore this setting you've made, it's so perfect! Turning human worship in to a tangilble resource is a great concept.
Love your characters of Cleo and Robyn. Cleo's really interesting considering she's really cold to humans but still gets upset at the concept of a Worship farm. I'd love to see you explore other Goddess' planets and how they've gone about solving their worshipping supply, it seems to be an extremely bleak Universe if Tiana's model is the most popular.
Something I'd like to see in future is Robyn trying to improve the situation for the humans but Cleo becoming jealous of the time she spends with the mortals. Robyn still having a bit of humanity in her could lead to some interesting conflict.
Keep up the great work, always checking in for new chapters! :D
Author's Response:
Awesome to get feedback from you again!
Apologies for the delays in updates, Covid kind of happened which made me busier than normal!
I will be developing Robyn further in future, Shes getting a bit detatched at the moment but there are plans to reconnect her with her roots.
Cleo's perspective is still that of a superior being, She is viewing "casual abuse" as benevolent compared what she could(/should?) be doing to them. Or thats how im taking it.
I am looking at bringing in others from Cleos circle.
Date: May 13 2020 10:03 PM Title: Cleo's Angels
Oh Cindy, the truth shall set you free... That's Goddess Cleo to you Tamara Kane! Cleo needs to work on her anger issues.
Robyn and Cleo boobs and legs focused sex chapter plz. With tiny mortals on top.
Glad you're back. I was getting concerned given all the craziness in the world these days.
Date: May 13 2020 10:06 AM Title: Cleo's Angels
Glad to see this story make a comeback! Got worried for a sec lol. Remind me again who kaylee was?
Author's Response:
The Barista Robbyn tried to burn, twice, In Robyn's Rifle.
Date: April 27 2020 9:17 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
so how technologically adavanced are these olympians?
Author's Response:
Technology is awkward when Magic is a thing.
So Standard of Living is higher, Industry is lower. Overall abilities are obviously higher as they have powerful magic.
JFT
Date: April 26 2020 8:43 PM Title: Cleo’s Authority
Well that was unnecessarily cruel on Cleo's part (though i guess Cleo determined how much punishment to give Leah on how much punishment she gave the mortals.). She better make it up to Leah super proper. With taking her to pick out some new 'toys' and snacks. Or however goddesses apologize for taking things to far. Especially if all Olympians besides Cleo have the mind control function in their brains so Cass can control them.
I imagine Leah and Robyn on Cleo's couch commiserating over their treatment by Cleo and Joyce while sharing a tub of ice cream with human sprinkles while Robyn introduces her to chick-flicks.
Robyn - "And then she stood on my back and expected me to visualize some red light. Then she told me even 6 year olds apply themselves with more effort."
Leah - "Yeah, well her High and mightyness had one of her servants lock me in a metal cage in the dark for 2 days."
Both - "Fucking Bitches..."
Cleo and Joyce - "We're in the room you know..."
Robyn and Leah - "Just wanted to make sure you knew how we feel."
But i vote next chapter is Cleo giving Cindy her toy and Cindy taking FULL advantage of it. Followed by Robyn training chapter. Followed by a boob and leg focused Cleo and Robyn sex chapter.
Author's Response:
Cleo & Joyce need more, Sorry its been so long, I fell out of inspiration completly, hoping to find my stride again!
Cindy Chapter is up, kind of, i got sidetracked again.
JFT
Date: April 26 2020 7:15 PM Title: Cleo’s Authority
Well Leah certainly regrets throwing Robyn under the bus lol. I was kinda confused as to what Vanessa Wayne’s purpose is she brought Leah and then granted powers to other people?
Also Robyn still seems to have hard feelings. She needs to chill out, if anything Leah indirectly made Robyn into a goddess by altering cleos mom of her existence
Author's Response:
Vanessa is one of Cleo's regional priestesses. She was the one chosen to watch over Melbourne. Her power is gifted from Cleo, She was following Cleo's orders that Olympians should be handed over to her should they be found. Cleo just used her as a way to make a point to Leah. - Vanessa is the main priestesses, there are lesser ones in the local temples for admin.
Robyn's frustrated atm, it will be in the next chapter about her, im torn right now between a Robyn Chapter or a Cindy Chapter!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 26 2020 2:58 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
maybe i should stop talking XD
Author's Response:
No need to stop! :D Even if you do Mortals are still disposable to these girls!
JFT
Date: April 25 2020 11:43 PM Title: Robyn’s Teacher
Uh oh. Robyn being a bitch again. She totally deserves having her power locked away. Being Cleo's girlfriend has inflated her head. Also fitting since she did the same to Sam.
Interesting that each generation of Olympians is less powerful than the last. Sounds like current gen is basically mortal. They should really do something about that. Sounds like Leah needs to join Robyn in lessons.
Is is weird that I'm imagining Joyce as an older woman even though you said she looks 30?
Now you've got to got to got to have Cleo and Leah do girly collegeagey stuff. 2 best friends who haven't seen each other in months screams that they would do stuff. Like dancing and shopping and going out to eat and getting into mischief, and laughing a lot. Cleo can introduce Leah to mortal things Robyn introduced her to. They could go out looking to get Leah a one use boy toy with Cleo as wing woman. Lots of flirting, some sexy times at mortal scale then with Leah big and the man tiny doing tiny toy stuff followed by our regularly scheduled untimely demise. Robyn and Joyce can join in the fun when Robyn's made satisfactory progress over x amount of time. Cleo and Leah, shrinking people on the dance floor? Drinking games with tiny people in their cups? 4 bikini clad goddesses at the beach?
Author's Response:
The Olypian thing is a later plot point-
"t I'm imagining Joyce as an older woman even though you said she looks 30" - Joyce is an Olympian, They are referred to as "immortals" so she is an older woman by human standards for sure.
"Cleo and Leah do girly collegeagey stuff" started like that? I Tried? Maybe?
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 25 2020 7:51 PM Title: Robyn’s Teacher
Interesting chapter. Looking forward to seeing Robyns training. She seems cocky but she still has a lot to learn if she’s to be a goddess and soon to be wife of cleo.
I’m guessing the story is gonna end with the wedding right? So we got the training, the outing of Robyn as co goddess of earth exploring more about the Olympians and then the wedding. I’m assuming that’s going to happen in cleos home away from earth, so Robyn sees what her new home is like.
Author's Response:
"I’m guessing the story is gonna end with the wedding right?" - this would be a natural end point although im not sure yet.
Robyn's training will be coming soon! :)
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 23 2020 1:14 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
Oh man this story is awesome, i found myself reading all of it in 2 days, you have a really great fantasy and telling the story from the point of view of the goddesses and the mortals gives a great insight. Thank you for this story
Author's Response:
This review means alot to me! Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!
More coming!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 23 2020 5:39 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
nice chapter. i guess now that robyn is a goddess i dont have to feel bade about hating her.
Author's Response:
You're free to hate them all! New Chapter sports lots of casual mortal death, just for you! :D
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 22 2020 10:52 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
Nice creative use of power here with the rifle. Kaylee's perspective of the events was a little confusing, but i guess that was intentional. Made sense reading the rest of the chapter. New toy or servant? Cindy no. 2 or newest member of the lobster tank? Or even s servant for Cindy...
It's good that Robyn still lacks control. More realistic (ha!) if she has to spend a good while practicing what Cleo has been doing her whole life.
Don't worry about speed. Better slow than burnout, I always say.
Author's Response:
Bringing in a new power to train Robyn properly! & Brought Leah in for some fun time with Cleo in upcoming chatpers!
Kaylee & Cindy will be getting a chatper soon too! Your comment here got me thinking!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 22 2020 5:01 PM Title: Robyn’s Rifle
I gotta admit I was kinda confused as to what happened in the beginning, so cleo and Robyn went to the coffee shop destroyed it and took and shrank the 3 baristas right?
As for the rest, god damn that was hot with the rifle scene. Very nice filler episode haha.
As for Robyns coming out, panzer thought of some interesting ideas, also in a very popular and diverse city, where the whole world can see all the giant Olympians along with robyns sisters. Giantess Robyn can also place her tits on the ground and form giant craters to mark her name on the world similar to the celebrity handprints in Hollywood, forming 2 more wonders of the world haha.
Then people will have to make a line to worship Robyns divine body.
Maybe like a Roman coliseum -esque type of ceremony where the mortals have to compete for Robyns amusement and those that fail get eaten. Those that pass get to please her.
All ending with an official Robyn and cleo goddess sex :)
Author's Response:
The perspective shift was intentional! two sides to the same coin! Thanks for reaching out on DA! I'll get back to you on there again next time im on.
The "Coming out" is still WIP! :D I am enjoying the ideas and sugestions for it though!
Kind regards
JFT