Date: April 16 2020 9:21 AM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Wooow, human farm! I've been playing with such a tought myself for a story for a long time, but maybe on a less industrial scale than this. I loooove it though! Keep going, I'm enjoying this story a lot.
Also, thanks for saying you liked my story in my previous review, it means a lot <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! If you have anything you would like to see let me know! I'd be happy to do a chapter for you.
Many thanks
JFT
Date: April 16 2020 1:29 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Amzing Story!
I love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks Matrix! Taking the time to leave a small reply is enough to keep me writing!
Date: April 15 2020 10:17 PM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Damn! All at once, you've created a much less sympathetic character in Tiana, created a pure nightmare fuel scenario showing that Earth got off lucky, shown that Cleo, a mass murderer has limits to her cruelty, and traumatized Robyn and Cleo.
Interesting that with all the 'efficiency' Tiana is claiming, she's apparently barely just started being able to store power for personal use. Shows how below Cleo the rest of the Gods are. I mean she's never even done anything powerful enough to do the eye thing.
Author's Response:
Hi again Panzer,
Yea Cleo is a powerful individual and her people are going to find that out soon!
Thanks again for your feedback!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 15 2020 9:50 PM Title: Cleo's Perspective
Jeez that was dark.. Tiana makes cleo seem like merciful goddess in comparison... I’d gladly prefer to be ruled by cleo if I had the option lol.
This chapter was very very interesting.. based on cleos disgust, we can see that cleo May in fact be the “hero” in this story.. or at least an antihero. Even though she’s done a lot of bad things, Tiana and the rest of her people are even more insane...
Robyn now is traumatized and afraid of cleo once again. Cleo is going to have to either treat robyn like the rest of the mortals or turn robyn into a goddess as well for protection and for love. There can’t rlly be a between anymore as cleo is now being watched.
Damn I’m speechless.. this was a crazy yet good chapter! Glad to see you updating again! Giantessworld wasn’t the same without ya haha.
Author's Response:
Hi Reclaimer,
Yes, I felt the dark perspective of how they think humans should be viewed as farm animals helped contrast Cleo's relativly benevolent nature.
Thanks for the kind words! It keeps me writing!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 15 2020 9:21 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
holy.fucking.shit...I...wow..im all fucked up after reading that. i was not expectig that. humans get treated like shit. i thought cleo was bad..jesus christ..its like this with other planets too? this is terrible
damn..actual cows get treated better then that..im actually kinda terrified now.
kids have to go through that hell too? ugh i gotta sleep this off. Amazing chapter. really makes me feel dread
Author's Response:
Yea, you inspired this chapter so you have only yourself to blame! :)
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 13 2020 1:23 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
welp robyn is a monster now. hate her too
Author's Response:
Reading this made me want to write something adding more story context.
Date: April 12 2020 11:52 PM Title: Cleo's Decree
I've gotta go with Cleo being in the right on this one. Wheelchair bound and flight phobic just isn't a good enough excuse to deny a god. At least the king got crushed by a nice set of boobs, even if they were his daughter's.
The interactive map was a fun idea. Reminds me of Grildrig's 'The Beach Blanket'. Remote control giantesses was also fun. Wish you'd spent a bit more time/detail on Robyn/Sophia solo fun and the 'fight'.
Cindy is becoming a regular fixture. Good pet.
I think you might have started going a bit fast on the updates. While I'm always excited to see them, I think they were starting to lose some of the detail of the earlier chapters.
Ideas:
Check in on Janna and Samantha and how becoming priestesses has changed their lives.
Show sex between Cleo and Robyn from the perspective of Robyn's parents/other tinys.
Shopping could be a source of fun modifying clothes to fit people or turning people into clothes and accessories. Hundreds of tiny people turned into candy pieces for edible bras and panties? Victoria's Secret with secret compartments. High heels with sky scrapers. Bras that double as stadiums. Oh and normal fancy dresses that women wear to parties and events to show off wealth and status. Obviously produced by terrified seamstresses to exacting specifications out of the finest Earthly fabrics.
Crushing resistance. Rag tag military makes its only stand against Cleo.
Mating Lobster boy and the princess as the Adam and Eve of people purpose bred for worhship and dying to Cleo and Robyn's whims.
Cleomas. Cleo makes her birthday replace Christmas and the very best offerings to her get some small gift from her. The vast majority get the knowledge that they don't get squished that day. And the worst.... squish or part of the breeding program.
Author's Response:
Hi Panzer
Thanks for the comprehensive review, Unfortunatly I was distracted by another review and felt the need to apply more context to Cleo's position.
There is little powerplay in the new chapter, Just things I wanted to say about the reality of this universe.
More sex coming soon if people want.
King regards
JFT
Date: April 11 2020 10:51 PM Title: Cleo's Decree
Sounds like another goddess sex is coming up ;)
Robyn and Cleo grow huge as they play around the people watching in awe as the two titans roar with pleasure causing windows to break and people to cover their ears.
Maybe Robyn uses a skyscraper as a dildo and inserts it into cleo ;)
Maybe Cindy joins the fun as well! Goddess threesome!
Cleo could force the people to clean her and Robyns feet after the destruction.
Great chapter! Can’t wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
Heya Reclaimer,
I got busy with work and then inspired to rage write a narrative context chapter, Ill get back to the powerplay soon.
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 11 2020 1:15 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
i like the dudes idea below me
Author's Response:
Done.
Date: April 11 2020 11:18 AM Title: Cleo’s Domination
This brings up an interesting issue. The sick and the infirm. Something Cleo as a member of a race of divine beings would not have any knowledge or understanding of. Cleo said show up or get fucked, but Sophia's father might be attached to machines keeping him alive and making the trip would kill him before arriving, dooming his country anyway.
Cleo could set Sophia on her own people with a horny Robyn to watch Sophia, and seek out the king personally and be appalled at what she finds. Not even fully understanding when she has a doctor explain because the concept of sickness is so foreign to her.
Maybe something like that would compel her to spare the rest of the country and appologize to Sophia and do something Gods rarely do, reevaluate who should personally submit based on physical condition.
Author's Response:
Heya Panzer,
I loved your idea but applied Cleo logic to it. I hope you enjoy my twisted version of your altruism.
Careful what you wish for.
JFT
Date: April 10 2020 6:58 PM Title: Cleo's Judgement
Privileged beyond measure, lacking the human perspective and emotionally explosive. Yep, that's Cleo.
"Olympian dudes are all pricks...I’m hoping to bring a couple here once I have established my control, Just so I can break them under my heel…" Aww, she just never found a nice guy. Also, Yes Please!
“It’s Me, You, Your Family,” Cleo admitted, “Then, the rest of them” Yesss. Sorry Earth.
“Because humans are dirty creatures, they will make a mess…” Cleo replied as she turned the page in the clothes catalogue, looking for inspiration. Laptop or tablet, Cleo. Save the trees!
”CLEOPATRA AURELIAN!” OH SHIT.
“WELL? LEAH CAME OVER AND TOLD ME EVERYTHING! A MORTAL CLEO? A MORTAL!!” Smart Leah. Let the mother goddess have time to simmer down before coming to Earth and causing a civilization ending argument.
“I am not a child anymore, I am my own woman, with my own world, You ruined yours, I will not let you ruin mine!” Thems fighting words.
‘Fucking Leah,’ she thought, ‘Didn’t even tell her the whole truth’ she realised with minor alarm. OH SHIT.
“Did you feed your lobsterman?” Cleo is just the worst pet owner.
“Furthermore, It has been decided that every world leader, monarch and commander will attend my temple, this weekend, and kiss the ground at my feet.” Well deserved including the punishment for not attending.
Cleo’s mind raced as she considered yanking her tiny girlfriend into her bikini, she felt the need for that release but knew she shouldn't abuse Robyn like that. Aww, she's learning. And Robyn did it anyway. Good things come to goddesses who treat their girlfriends right.
So how much more is 'Setup' of the world?
She could invite male gods she knows to not follow rules so she has an excuse to toy with them. Simple rule, no sexing priestesses without consent. Rule breaker becomes a toy in Cleo and Robyn's sex. etc
I'm currently imagining the father as just a proud papa with the attitude of 'let the neighbors talk, our daughter's better than theirs' to offset the anger of the mother. I'm also imagining the mother sneaking onto Earth anyway despite Cleo not welcoming her. She goes exploring learning about the subjugation of billions of mortals by her daughter, Hijinks ensue and Cleo and her mother eventually patching things up over a plate of mortals. And no one talks about the town or small city that got destroyed by her mother because a mortal grabbed her butt on the sidewalk.
Needs more giant smex and boobs and more power variation. Cleo seems to favor stopping time, telekinesis, teleportation, and of course our favorite, size manipulation. Maybe her friends and her mother have other favorite powers for subjugating mortals in addition to size manipulation. Fire, ice, electricity, lasers, sound, explosions, popping them like balloons, mind control, driving them insane, driving them to hurt or kill themselves, suffocation, melting, disintigration, transformation into a lesser animal. One friend could be the most polite goddess possible... to other gods, but make Cleo seem like a saint to mortals.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the great feedback!
"So how much more is 'Setup' of the world? " - When the temples are built, Shes gaming the system by using the crystals directly and the humans are slowly building the temples around them, shes not in any hurry.
"She could invite male gods" - Cleo has some men from her past she would like to deal with.
Her mother is certainly not going to drop the issue, I have a plan for it I just need time.
This is a fetish story, I often ignore narrative or completly subvert it for a bit of a rub out, I'll see about messing with the powers some more. Cleo's time stop is a mindfuck for humanity as they are all left aware, its actually very dark.
Many thanks again!
JFT
Date: April 10 2020 3:52 PM Title: Cleo's Judgement
Interesting.. it appears cleos parents aren’t fans of homosexual relations given how she constantly assumes Robyn is a guy and how there are plenty of Olympian men that would satisfy her better.
Cleo needs to be careful now, pretty sure her mom can find some loophole to come visit earth and if she does then she better hope robyn is not in her sight of vision.
Great chapter as usual. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response:
Cleo was careful not to let any information about Robyn out. Her mind has turned to trying to find a way out for Robyn.
Thanks for the support!
JFT
Date: April 09 2020 10:41 AM Title: Cleo's Frustration
Hiya! Great to see you back!
This was a nice chapter to fix the issues between Robyn and Cleo. Cleo was being a bitch recently.
Makes sense why she doesn’t want to give Robyn too much power. She fears Robyn would overthrow and betray her. It all depends on trust the further the story progresses.
Robyn should be worried for when cleos parents come visit... they would make cleo seem like a gentle giantess in comparison.
Author's Response:
Heya, Latest chapter was to start the ball rolling on Cleo's family getting curious!
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 09 2020 9:25 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
Since time stopping powers seem to exsist, or some form of time manipulation, maybe Robyn could make mini worlds with more surface aria than earth in petri dishes, full oceons and mountains and continents (with apriopriat resources made at that scale). Than out in each a few thousend loyalist from random places, implnst the knoladge of how to survive snd make civilisation, enshur that they have a orb and some lower scaled but immortal pristess, than time acselerate the petri dish so it grows to billions in a matter if days due to it experienceing so mich more time, have several hundred yeas pass, and Cleo can have many hundreds if bilions to add power to. Make a few hundred petri dishes like this, some maube even larger to the inhabitances, and everything is fine.
Could even apply this to the wedge boots, being haveing many many levels inside it with on orb in each heel to absorb the energy, than make is so so the people and environmens inside can only shrink, being that more room is made every time Cleo or Robyn grows and than shrink appropriately when they decrease themselves in size , then when they arent whearing it or have it in the closet or show storage, time accelerate and get the population insid the heels up.
Or making the sole of a flat this environment.
Author's Response:
I am trying to parse your ideas but they all seem totally seperate to what is currently happening. Have you seen my Charlotte's Universe story? its many chapters and Ive been through alot of this kind of stuff!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 09 2020 7:23 AM Title: Cleo's Divinity
wait..so robyns parents are going to get killed? even if they arent thats your won godamn girlfriends parents! damn i hate her. i havent read a story that made me feel this much rage towards a character. this is a really good story for that
Author's Response:
They are locked away in Robyn's ring for aslong as Cleo decides. They are not going to die though, They have an agreement.
Date: April 08 2020 10:31 PM Title: Cleo's Visit
Wow. Robyn's parents were super dumb. They deserved that, as unfortunate as it is. As many times as Cleo's face and body would have been on tv and the internet, they really had no excuse for not recognizing that she'd changed her appearance. They must have failed all their tests in school.
Good to see that their daughters have much higher survival instincts. Although reluctantly in Janna's case. I bet she's more depraved than Robyn. She'll be squishing people with the best of them soon.
Good to see that Cleo recognizes Robyn as a risk factor and raising anyone up too high would cause issues. Keep the worship power keyed to Cleo only and punish enemies with furious anger. Similarly its good that she's got a handle on her expenditures vs her surplus. Dilligence is the halmark of an eternally healthy reign and she understands that as her rule number 1.
The way I see Cleo is as the validictorian girl who doesn't really have an idea of what a healthy relationship looks like and struggles with empathy due to spending her teen years focused on academics. If males don't have divine magic(contradicts chapter 1?), then she's probably never seen anything other than her magically dominant mother doing similar things to her father. Add in the disconnect between mortal and goddess and she probably has difficulty dissociating Robyn as a girlfriend/lover from Robyn as a mortal/toy which just compounds the problem. And judging from Janna's choice in men, Robyn probably has the same issue but in the reverse. An abusive relationship where neither actually intends for it to be abusive, but they just need a little guidance to be better. Maybe when Leah comes back, she'll spend time with both of them, recongnize the unhealthyness and sit them down for some couples counseling.
Maybe shopping and spending some time among humans with Robyn and Janna can give Cleo more of an appreciation for human culture, if only to give her ideas on how humans can better serve. Her knowledge of earth is really lacking, she definitely needs to get out more.
Author's Response:
Cleo was really setting up Robyns parents to fail.
The worship power will always focus on Cleo, I think the latest chapter touches on that.
"The way I see Cleo is as the validictorian girl who doesn't really have an idea of what a healthy relationship looks like" - This is a good take away, I'm glad you got that from this.
"If males don't have divine magic(contradicts chapter 1?)" <- Review replies are not Canon.
Also Shopping got sidetracked as the characters had some venting to do. Fetish story.
Many thanks again for your feedback!
Kind regards
JFT
Date: April 08 2020 2:53 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
i forgot to add this but are the olyimpians all women? this is a really good story. makes me incredibly sad for the humans and what they have to go through. it makes it infinitly worse that there is a whole race of these gods so fighting back is hopless. the human races suffering will seem to never end unfortunatly.
Author's Response:
Okay so, this is not something I've gone into with too much detail. The Olympian race in this universe are the same size as humans in their own realm, hence why Cleo originally came through at normal height. Also it will be written soon that only the women have apptiitude for divine magic, because this is a fetish story and Goddesses are awesome.
Date: April 08 2020 2:08 PM Title: Cleo's Divinity
damn cleos a real asshole
Author's Response:
She likes to make sure people know who is in control.
Date: April 08 2020 11:41 AM Title: Cleo's Visit
Wow Cleo was a lot bitchier than usual this chapter. Seeing Robyns reactions, I think it’s safe to say what robyn has for cleo isn’t true love it’s fear. She’s officially suffering from Stockholm’s syndrome.
It was a big risk bringing her sister to tag along as she may end up losing her with her parents if she happens to step out of line.
I’m guessing those pictures from Devianart are going to come true later on in the story? ;)
I’m surprised the world leaders haven’t tried to nuke Cleo or at least destroy the main temple wherever it is. I find it hard to believe that EVERYONE is accepting of cleos rule. Surely There should be some sort of resistance. Maybe an army tries to fight them but giant Cleo and Robyn crush them with their bare feet, since cleo enjoys it but Robyn is disgusted hearing the army crunch like pieces of grapes under hers. Or who knows maybe she crossed that line and enjoys it as well...
AND her sis has to watch her do that, adding to shock at what robyn has turned into.
Author's Response:
I think Robyn keeps having her thoughts pushed into doubt, Not sure its Stockholm just yet.
Janna is on pretty thin ice with Cleo so you'll have to see how that plays out.
So I meant to include an off-hand comment about the resistance a while back but it was lost in the shuffle. The short answer is they have been, shes just no paid them any mind. The long answer is, I will address this in a future chapter. She does mention briefly that she thinks the remaining red zones are organised efforts during Cleo's Priestess.
Thanks for the feedback
JFT
Date: April 07 2020 8:01 PM Title: Cleo's Priestess
Heh I like how you capitalized Robyn and Cleos dialogue when it was Josephinas POV to show how huge and powerful they both are.
Cleos now granting power to some humans ;) despite Cleo’s hesitation. It’s going to take a long time and trust if Cleo’s going to see Robyn as more than just a slave and more as a lover or another goddess..
Great chapter! Sucks for the other tiny girl though now her fellow escapee is now 50 feet tall and powerful.
So Robyn is a priestess too right? Since she also has the wings and is huge? I guess this is like an intermediate stage between human and goddess.
Author's Response:
Robyn was Cleo's template for the priestesses, She does consider Robyn a girlfriend at the moment just one with limited power.
Cleo is being frugal with how many humans she elavates, its always been something shes been against.
Expect more bonding in the next chapter!
Many thanks for the feedback.
JFT