Date: August 11 2021 12:33 PM Title: Nightly rendevous
This story is great.! I wish more authors would combine TG with size
Content like you did.
Date: March 06 2021 10:52 AM Title: Shopping trip
Mini Extra: Why is there a crossed texted option in the writing system when that doesn't show up in the review text -> concerning the quote with the finger length/height comparison.
Date: March 06 2021 10:49 AM Title: Shopping trip
First up: I am really glad this story is back, I will give you a perfect rating for that alone, but there is also some immediate critisism before I started reading. The text is very small. Especially as it wasn't the case in the previous chapters that isn't great. Sure, I just zoomed it bigger, but given how this site reacts to zooming that wasn't ideal either.
"That, and how hot he looked like this." Don't praise yourself, Carl. Also I don't think at "he" was meant in the first place here. ;)
[...]"but like everyone now, she was impossibly huge to him."
That comment reminded Carl of his earlier thought[...]
[...],she teased as Rachel placed each finger beside him, which showed that he was taller shorter than all but her ring finger.
I am sorry in case you don't like me pointing out mistakes - it's a reviewing quirk of me - and not meant in an insultive matter. (A few dasys ago someone got angry hence I am pointing it out here.
How you are developing the characters seems natural but a bit too smooth at this point, the three act like they knew each other for years which obviously isn't the case.
Date: February 26 2021 1:09 PM Title: Shopping trip
Love this chapter and where the story is going! Hoping for more intimate interactions with the three characters. Happy to see this story back!
Date: August 17 2020 8:59 PM Title: Nightly rendevous
Hope this story continues sometime. Loved the direction it was going in.
Date: May 03 2020 9:48 PM Title: Nightly rendevous
Nice story. I like how the Cassy and Carl (Daisy) have this relation that's been stood on it's head. It's going to be hard for each of them to cope with their new situation, but as long as they have each other I'm sure they'll do fine.
BTW, I'd love to hear more of the fairy village and have other fairies in the story. Thanks for the story so far.
Date: May 03 2020 3:49 AM Title: Quick thinking
Really liking where the story is going! Hoping for some action with all three of them!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I do plan to do that
Date: April 27 2020 10:21 AM Title: Saved but at a cost
Awesome. A permanent role reversal. I really like this. Can you add a chapter after they get use to it where they have fun in their new forms?
Author's Response:
Thanks. And I have good news, the rest of the story is going to be them adjusting to their new situation.
Date: March 23 2020 1:55 PM Title: Changes
Nice. I enjoy stories where males become shrunken girls. They are far to rare though. Becoming a fairy is also a nice touch. It gives a way to both protect herself, and get around. Although is it bad that before they get to the fairy village that I hope that they have some unaware adventures with a normal sized human.
Date: March 22 2020 2:30 AM Title: A visit to a fairy's bedroom
An enjoyable story in a fun world. I like that there’s a story here that I want to see expanded.
Date: March 21 2020 10:01 AM Title: Nightly rendevous
This looks like a great start! I hope to see it continue. Maybe after sex he shrinks even more? I'd love to see him end up smaller than an inch to her and exploring her tiny body. I get the feeling she'd like the power reversal.
Date: March 21 2020 8:20 AM Title: Careful what you promise
Wow this is great! Hope to read more. Thanks for sharing!
Date: March 19 2020 11:57 PM Title: Nightly rendevous
This is really cute so far! I’m eager to see what comes next!