Reviewer: TheTinyJosh Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2021 1:42 PM Title: The beginning

 

OMG I love this story so much! I have been a huge fan of Inconvenient Coincidence for a few years and this one equals its greatness!

It's such an incredibly arousing piece of writing. I love the personalities of the three girls, especially Melody! She's probably my fav! And I love seeing how every little thing lines up for John's domination by these mighty goddesses!

And the foot stuff. Oh god, I'm in heaven.

I cannot wait for more!!!

 

Reviewer: dwarves_rule Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 10:22 AM Title: The beginning

So as someone who likes humiliation, this feels incedibally gaslighty and cruel. Please tell me at the end they can form actual consenual humiliation play?

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2020 1:30 AM Title: The beginning

Just binged the few chapters that came out since my last review, still going great I see!

The atmosphere box has so much potential, very very very excited to see what you do with it.

Something I spotted on chapter 4, 'John looked at Sarah, perplexed.' I believe that's supposed to be Alison there. Other than that, not noticed anything.

Thanks for posting this, can't wait for the next part. :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2020 7:59 AM Title: The device

You missed a "his coach" here :)

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 10:29 AM Title: The beginning

I love your stories! It’s awesome to see the contrast between the playful nonchalant attitude of the giantess (when he shrinks) and the mind- numbing panic and brokenness of the tiny. To his sister and friends, it’s just simple feminine foot stink. To the tiny, it’s a true life-or-death threat that breaks him physically, emotionally, and psychologically. I’d love to see a nightmare scene where he slowly keeps shrinking from the foot stink and have him just waste away at one of their feet!

Author's Response:

Hehe, yep. It's not the same to be the tiny as it is to be the giantess! For the giantesses, it's a playful game. They're having tons of fun! The tiny on the other hand... Oops. 

Maybe I'll include such nightmares in a future story, but as it is now, John has no reason to have them! He doesn't even know about shrinking so far... Hehe

Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 9:23 AM Title: Alison's lie

I love your writing style and the devious scenarios you set up are simply amazing. I can't begin to express my appreciation for the way you create a true sense of inevitability and how futile it will be to resist.  And the mind games used to convince the victim that it's due to a misunderstanding or miscommunication is sublime.

However, and this is just personal preference and not a criticism of your stories, I am not a fan of the emphasis on the revolting stenches and gross odors/residues.

When the shrinkee fears feet or has no attraction to feet, and thus mere exposure creates the "torture", then that's fantastic. Sweaty soles and other  types of humiliation and domination are such an entrancing read. That reverie is broken (for me) when the narrative switches from the characters actions and desires into a detailed list of terrible smells and disgusting sensations.

Again, 10/10 for the story itself. I'm just mentioning why I would applaud your writing while not favoriting your tales.

Thanks =)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the kind review! If I understood you correctly, you're not a huge fan of the description of the smells themselves? 

Hope you'll like what's coming nonetheless! Lots of actions and desires are planned already :D

Reviewer: FTFeet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2020 6:54 AM Title: The beginning

Yesssssssss!! This is going to be great, can't wait!

Author's Response:

I hope it is! :D