Reviews For Suzy's Sleepover
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2023 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good erotic story with a good level of sexual tension and angst between the boys and girls. Not sure what type of liquid in the refrigerator would actually shrink the boys (and not the girls) - some better verbiage was needed on that front. Would have preferred Caleb to get orally vored since Adam got the butt treatment later, just to balance things out a bit. I like how Adam's friends desire to spy on the girls worked against them.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2020 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I read both short stories the last hour and this also was incredible. Totally what I enjoy a lot the ass vore part was my favorite. also the ending with the bathroom and the half unaware concept.

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

great job

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

great job

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2020 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Even I am not that much into giantess plots I enjoyed some parts of this a lot. So totally a vote from me. My favorite was the I have a killer butt quote. And the ass part obviously.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dildo play not going the way you thought it would eeehe. Or should I say into the wrong hole? ^^

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2020 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

hot!! wander what will happen to Adam. very good idea relly hot story.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

crazy and hot as usual :p I liked the most how the two boys just thinking with their penis totally were even pleading to get punished totally not realizing whats ahead. the ass insertion was so hot with how the horror was written in adams face starring into the dildo plot out with a wet plop and the anus closing slowly, with no friend attached anymore to the dildo.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2020 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

A classic shrinking story going horrible wrong. I see you have more time to write again which is fantastic. Really loved the story, would had even enjoyed it more with some scat part, I cant imgine how the bathroom part would be for the boy inside. Also the ending for Adam was a bit too mild I enjoy it being dark. BUT the story was fantastic in its whole. I really like stories like this with some boys sleep over and then stuff goes wrong. Didnt see any mistakes really. Amazing as usual.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible hot. Thank you so much fir sharing. I love your ass plots the most. Awesome story!

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